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Well I like A it has a lot of potential for a logo design maybe add a boarder.
B definetly needs something else to go in the back ground theres just not enough graghical elements in there to make a good and intresting to look at.
And C just needs to be completely refined. Definetly not a good portfolio piece. Take it from me who knows professional designing concepts. C sucks it needs to be refined. The idea is great but the elements within the design are too jagged and messy. You want your viewers to see a nice clean, crisp image. You don't want your viewers to guess at what they are looking at. The white boarders around the characters is too distracting to the eye plus the lettering needs have a little bit of kerning to it. Kerning in an illustrator's vocabulary means the space between letters but thats not truely appropiate seamingly thats the styal of words that describe Oddworld.
Um what else compositionally it works if you add maybe a black frame around the whole image. But the elements is what needs to be refined and cleaned up. And perhaps maybe add sort of a subtle transparent gradient in the background to tie the piece as one thing. But you test it out to see if that works if not don't go with it. If anything all these designs needs is some sort of bar or frame to tie the pieces together to make it as one piece. Something simple like a bar or a frame would work. You want to make it subtle and simple but conveys to people that what it represents is something far more complex which is Oddworld. Remember balance of graghical elements and text is whats important. B the text is too heavy and C well I told what it needs and A is just right. The title is a perfect size and the graphical elements fuse that togetherand its pleaseing to the eye.
Thats my cryteque on this work.
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