Oddworld Forums > Zulag Three > Fan Corner > Non-Oddworld Art & Literature
My strange poems


 
Thread Tools
 
  #1  
04-08-2008, 06:55 AM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
  
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜ (153)Vanilla ✜ (153)
Dead My strange poems
I thought of this poem on the way home from school i walked because i got attacked on the bus.

Aged by night me and my friends grow but as the years go the unsepected ones will never know, there going to pay for every soul they slay.


As i back into the darkness my claws shine with sharpness, geting ready to cut you open however there is a conclushon, this you will never know but all i know is by the end of this hour your ashs will fall like snow.

Enjoy.
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.
  #2  
04-08-2008, 06:58 AM
Wings of Fire's Avatar
Wings of Fire
Beautiful Bastard
  
: Dec 2007
: Stafford
: 9,537
Blog Entries: 143
Rep Power: 32
Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)
/Fan Corner.
__________________
:
“I always believe the movies I've made are smarter than the way they are perceived by sort of mass culture and by the critics,” Snyder said, a statement he immediately followed by saying, “Also, ‘It looks like a video game.’

  #3  
04-08-2008, 07:24 AM
Havoc's Avatar
Havoc
Cheesecake Apocalypse
  
: May 2003
: Netherlands
: 9,976
Blog Entries: 71
Rep Power: 30
Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)Havoc (4126)
/Fail for wrong forum
__________________
The Oddworld Wiki

When one person suffers from a delusion it is called insanity. When many people suffer from a delusion it is called religion.

  #4  
04-08-2008, 07:37 AM
GlacierDragon's Avatar
GlacierDragon
Super Stingbee
  
: Apr 2008
: England
: 489
Rep Power: 17
GlacierDragon (114)GlacierDragon (114)
This is how I feel sometimes!
__________________

.:FanFictions:.
~The Madness Of Life - On hiatus~
~Shrown - Edited and completed~
  #5  
04-08-2008, 08:10 AM
Hobo's Avatar
Hobo
Honorary Smod
Chronically Awesome
  
: Feb 2003
: London
: 6,741
Blog Entries: 1
Rep Power: 28
Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)
conclushon

sounds like good stuff.
  #6  
04-08-2008, 08:51 PM
Leto's Avatar
Leto
Not Leto
  
: Dec 2002
: up
: 4,866
Blog Entries: 57
Rep Power: 27
Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)Leto (3745)
It's really good! Just one suggestion: take out the words.
__________________
~MY ART THREAD~ (NO DICKS)

  #7  
04-09-2008, 08:54 AM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
  
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜ (153)Vanilla ✜ (153)
I may be 12 but im not dumm!
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.
  #8  
04-09-2008, 08:56 AM
Wings of Fire's Avatar
Wings of Fire
Beautiful Bastard
  
: Dec 2007
: Stafford
: 9,537
Blog Entries: 143
Rep Power: 32
Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)
:
I may be 12 but im not dumm!
+10 Chars.

AND SIGGED!
__________________
:
“I always believe the movies I've made are smarter than the way they are perceived by sort of mass culture and by the critics,” Snyder said, a statement he immediately followed by saying, “Also, ‘It looks like a video game.’

  #9  
04-09-2008, 08:58 AM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
  
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜ (153)Vanilla ✜ (153)
Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.
  #10  
04-09-2008, 05:24 PM
Strike Witch's Avatar
Strike Witch
Laserguns!
  
: Jan 2003
: 気持ちপ
: 4,311
Blog Entries: 246
Rep Power: 27
Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)Strike Witch (4900)
Needs more cowbell.
__________________
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.

  #11  
04-10-2008, 04:53 AM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
  
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜ (153)Vanilla ✜ (153)
What?????????!!!!!!!!!
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.
  #12  
04-10-2008, 06:55 AM
OddjobAbe's Avatar
OddjobAbe
National Treasure
  
: Feb 2007
: England
: 3,121
Blog Entries: 100
Rep Power: 23
OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)OddjobAbe (5874)
:
I may be 12 but im not dumm!
It's spelt 'dumb'.

The poem is rather morbid. I like to feel happy. But I also like to watch Jason kill people, and the films he is in are morbid, so I have contradicted myself, and as a result feel rather foolish.
__________________
A man walks into a zoo. There's nothing there but one dog. It was a shih-tzu.

  #13  
04-10-2008, 06:58 AM
Wings of Fire's Avatar
Wings of Fire
Beautiful Bastard
  
: Dec 2007
: Stafford
: 9,537
Blog Entries: 143
Rep Power: 32
Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)Wings of Fire (13656)


It now has the required amount of Cowbell.

Needs moar desu.
__________________
:
“I always believe the movies I've made are smarter than the way they are perceived by sort of mass culture and by the critics,” Snyder said, a statement he immediately followed by saying, “Also, ‘It looks like a video game.’

  #14  
04-13-2008, 07:18 AM
Hobo's Avatar
Hobo
Honorary Smod
Chronically Awesome
  
: Feb 2003
: London
: 6,741
Blog Entries: 1
Rep Power: 28
Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)Hobo (3434)
Right, thread closed for spam.

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 







 
 
- Oddworld Forums - -