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Vanilla ✜ 04-08-2008 06:55 AM
My strange poems
 
I thought of this poem on the way home from school i walked because i got attacked on the bus.

Aged by night me and my friends grow but as the years go the unsepected ones will never know, there going to pay for every soul they slay.


As i back into the darkness my claws shine with sharpness, geting ready to cut you open however there is a conclushon, this you will never know but all i know is by the end of this hour your ashs will fall like snow.

Enjoy.:fuzgrin:

Wings of Fire 04-08-2008 06:58 AM
/Fan Corner.

Havoc 04-08-2008 07:24 AM
/Fail for wrong forum

GlacierDragon 04-08-2008 07:37 AM
This is how I feel sometimes!

Hobo 04-08-2008 08:10 AM
conclushon

sounds like good stuff.

Leto 04-08-2008 08:51 PM
It's really good! Just one suggestion: take out the words.

Vanilla ✜ 04-09-2008 08:54 AM
I may be 12 but im not dumm!

Wings of Fire 04-09-2008 08:56 AM
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I may be 12 but im not dumm!
+10 Chars.

AND SIGGED!

Vanilla ✜ 04-09-2008 08:58 AM
Lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Strike Witch 04-09-2008 05:24 PM
Needs more cowbell.

Vanilla ✜ 04-10-2008 04:53 AM
What?????????!!!!!!!!!

OddjobAbe 04-10-2008 06:55 AM
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I may be 12 but im not dumm!
It's spelt 'dumb'.

The poem is rather morbid. I like to feel happy. But I also like to watch Jason kill people, and the films he is in are morbid, so I have contradicted myself, and as a result feel rather foolish.

Wings of Fire 04-10-2008 06:58 AM
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedi...59/Cowbell.gif

It now has the required amount of Cowbell.

Needs moar desu.

Hobo 04-13-2008 07:18 AM
Right, thread closed for spam.