I was thinking of something more like...
It was dark in the pens. There was a faint smell of mildew in the air as Abe, careful not to wake the quietly sleeping Slig, snuck by into a shadow. He looks ahead, silently gestures behind him, and out come 9 Mudokon scrubs from whence he descended. He watches them all go past and whispers to the last one, "Wheres Joey?". He shugs, "He was right behind me." "Ok, tell everyone to wait here, Ill have to go look." He goes past the Slig again, trying his best not to wake him. As he passes, the Slig jolts and mumbles, "I wanna ride the pony..."......A little confused, Abe continues sneaking. He spots Joey idly standing and staring at something with his mouth wide open, drool dripping from from it. As he gets closer he realises hes staring at a light. "Joey! Common!" ".........Looket da purdy lyt, Abe." "No, we gotta move..now!" He finally gets him to move and they head back towards the others. Past the Slig again. Except this time, Joey trips and lands on the Slig. Abes heart jumps up into his throat as he hears the crash, and slowly turns to see Joey goofily laughing at the still sleeping Slig. He pickes him up and runs towards the others. They escape, and the Slig wakes to alarms. He looks around cluelessly as a few BigBros walk up to him, pick him up, and drag him into a large, round room. He looks around, dazed and confused, then looks up to see a large, forbidding, shadowy figure hovering above him. Fear starts to set in as he hears a low, mancaing growl. His heart stops as he realises its his mother. He desperately scampers back into the corner as her large shadow slowly descends upon him. The screen pushes into a close up on his face as the shadow engulfs him further, and further. The screen finally closes in on his quivering eye as the shadow finally covers him, and the screen goes black..... Skillya lets out a short, ominous laugh....
Something like that, but thats just me.
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