My Poem

[dark_xinos]

Ha ha, time for some rivalry sligface202 ...

I was working late one night...
And thats when they came...
With machineguns and rockets....
now thats shame...

They told me i was lunch...
They told me i was brunch...
Whatever they told me...
They told me a bunch...

They said i was tasty...
How could they know?
They said it quite hastly...
Then I took a blow...

I woke up in a yard...
Surounded by fence...
They wouldent let me out...
Not even for a pence...

Then came saint nick...
And said yo ho ho...
He oferd a lift...
And i said: "lets go!"

After three feet of flying...
The shoot us untill...
We started crying...
And pore old nick... almost was diyng

They catched me again...
Gave me a hen...
Told me to eat...
But i went to sleep...

Then they took out the saw...
And cuted me raw...
I dont remember anything at all...
SENCE IM DEAD

[Gluk Schmuck]

That's quite good, the first four stanzas are the best, in my opinion.

[sligface202]

yes,your poem is...good!,let me write a little poem on how good it is!
That was a great poem!
You are a great poet!
That was a good poem!
You are a poet...and ya didn't even know it!
BTW:Rivalry eh?...,Ha don't make me laugh!

[dark_xinos]

lol