My Poem
Ha ha, time for some rivalry sligface202;) ...
I was working late one night... And thats when they came... With machineguns and rockets.... now thats shame... They told me i was lunch... They told me i was brunch... Whatever they told me... They told me a bunch...:D They said i was tasty... How could they know? They said it quite hastly... Then I took a blow... I woke up in a yard... Surounded by fence... They wouldent let me out... Not even for a pence... Then came saint nick... And said yo ho ho... He oferd a lift... And i said: "lets go!" After three feet of flying... The shoot us untill... We started crying... And pore old nick... almost was diyng They catched me again... Gave me a hen... Told me to eat... But i went to sleep... Then they took out the saw... And cuted me raw... I dont remember anything at all... SENCE IM DEAD:fuzconf: |
That's quite good, the first four stanzas are the best, in my opinion.
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yes,your poem is...good!,let me write a little poem on how good it is!
That was a great poem! You are a great poet! That was a good poem! You are a poet...and ya didn't even know it! BTW:Rivalry eh?...,Ha:lol: don't make me laugh! |
lol
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