ya better don't look...

[scipionyx]

I think if her back leg was further back it would have made it look more... dynamic. And his face is slightly messed up. But otherwise it's good. I really like the way her feather trails back, and the spear is cool, and so is his leg. Apparently she has some reason for wanting him dead, or at the very least immobile

yup you're right i accidentally took the wrong frame and made a real drawing out of it.. when i remarked it i was too lazy to do something about it xD I'm not sure what you mean with his face being messed up though xD

anyways thanks this helps me to improve!

It looks like she's stealing his soul.

haha lol no she isn't but now that you mention it it really looks a little bit like that

Been off for quite sometime, with schoolwork and such.
Very sorry scipionyx. D: Missed OWF and your thread very much~

Beautiful, beautiful style as always, awesome too.
The sketchy, nameless Slig is beautiful. I love her feet and her eyes are <3! Love how you draw/color the eyes~ The colors in the other pic are stunningly beautiful~ Amazing and again, I'm in love with her eyes~

Loving those spider-like legs on Ramón. The pic is so smoothing yet messy looking, yes, but that just makes it even more beautiful! I've certainly missed a lot.


Crappy sketch? I think not! C:
Epic picture is epic~ Love the blue coloring and of course, the sketchy look~

Nicely done, scipionyx.

Youko welcome back!! have you left dA again? i hope not i miss your cute Oddworld art <3

hey by the way are you interrested in an art collab? If not it's ok... just wanted to ask since I'm doing some art trades at dA _{(when my art block is over)} 8D

thank you for the nice comment! I'm happy you dropped by ^__^

and sorry for the late reply lol even i don't visit my own thread so often xD





sorry everyone no art for now ^^; i have art block and after that i have to finnish some awesome art trades (yay :3) (one of them is even OW related so i might upload it here or post a link to it when it's finnished!! ^^)

[OddYouko]

I haven't left it completely, nope. =) Just kinda taking a break.
If my twin would put her tablet back in our room I'd get more art done.. >_>

o.o I've never done an art trade before. And boo art blocks. Dx /shoos it away
I'll have to get my twin's tablet back in here and soon. Not sure if I'll be able to do an art trade with ya right away, but I'm gonna keep that in mind.

And you're very welcome. :3
Yay for scipionyx art~

[scipionyx]

thanks Youko!
it seems I don't have time for more trades right now anyways... but I'll keep it in mind too xD

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ladies and gentlemen, enjoy:








- out of cigarettes, out in the rain. -
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*the animation is quite big so it might take a while till it runs fluently xD and it works best with firefox*

this was a sketch trade on deviantart betweeen me and riftryu.
however i felt like animating my part
edit: (since people on dA asked me how i did this... the animation was done with photoshop elements 2.0 since I still can't handle Flash or photoshop CS5 100% when it comes to animating ^^U it's a 12 frame animation)

riftryu's part of the trade http://riftryu.deviantart.com/art/no...cion-191625659 (she drew my Slig character Ramón)


Ralph the Slig belongs to riftryu _{you can read a comic about him here: http://riftryu.deviantart.com/art/A-...omic-114327219 (this is the beginning there are 9 parts)}

the art and animation is by me!


hope everyone likes it

[Dynamithix]

Looks good!

[MeechMunchie]

That's really nice, actually. It's been a long time since I've seen Oddworld in motion.

[Splat]

Wow, you're getting better and better at this! This image looks so true-to-source. I love his pants especially, and his mask. His chest appears a bit flat and I think his fingers need to be slimmer. But it's great; you really feel for him!

[Crashpunk]

I LOVE the Slig Animation.

[Steamer_KING]

The animated Slig, is just a nice piece of art.It's really, really good. Carry on with the fantastic work.

[THE ALMIGHTY RAISEN]

wow that slig is just amazing! Keep it up

[kapteeni13]

Huh, i almost scared that animated Slig, Its really amazingly made! =)

[scipionyx]

thanks everyone!!!

I'm glad you like it so much!

drop by when I start uploading my OW fancomic (it will take me a long time though... cuz right now I don't have time for it xD )

[Hulaabeo]

Wow... Just wow...

[OddYouko]

Alrighty then. =)

What a stunning piece this one is! Wow. Outstanding, scipionyx.
Poor Ralph.. I'd certainly go out and give him an umbrella, I love the rain after all, and so wouldn't mind if I got all wet. It's so realistic, love it~ =P

Keep up the lovely work!

[Paul]

thanks.





update:

lol not very original ^^; and a bad quality too! xD




right now I can't work on this comic, because right now I'm not interrested in developping new stories writing or reading (ok with a few exceptions!) xD

but no worries my interrest in working at my stories, gaming and watching anime alternates every half a year or so anyway ^^
I'll be continuing this in winter 8D

My brain is on vacation and I fill it with fresh stories ... the problem is just that they're way to depressing (Darker than Black ) baww but the stories are awesome <3


however, I'm still going to draw all the time of course =)



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i posted this at dA a while ago, it's a journal entry with 8 facts about Ramón,
i thought i could post a link here aswell:

http://bluebluish.deviantart.com/journal/34698139/


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I instantly thought of the Simpsons song when I saw this. the one called "spider pig" but I was imagining homer singing "spider slig"

It would be cool if these where actually in a game.

[Splat]

I just realised that since you've shut down your old DA account almost every picture in this thread has been deleted

[scipionyx]

I just realised that since you've shut down your old DA account almost every picture in this thread has been deleted

oh. Actually it would be nice if the whole thread would have disappeared along with them... though I know it would never happen.... OTL

well I guess it's time for a new Art thread with new drawings then!

If I just could draw again I could forget about everything else xD

* I uploaded my signature with a link to my new dA account, even though nothing much is uploaded xD

[Splat]

But loved loads of your old art! I'mma gonna miss perusing your gallery from time to time.

[Gwan-Thwei]

Baw, well, I'm glad I got some pics while I could. Your art really inspired me to draw my own slig. Thanks!

[scipionyx]

But loved loads of your old art! I'mma gonna miss perusing your gallery from time to time.

thanks :3 oh in case the fanart of TD is gone aswell, it has been in my new dA account in the Scraps section along with a few other old drawings already ^^
and i got someone to read TD and a few other stories a while ago xD but I dunno if he finnished reading it xD (yeah i know it's a bad habit of mine I always make other people read or watch things I like xD)

btw: whoa I never noticed before! ...but you have a Portal related signature!!!! 8D

Baw, well, I'm glad I got some pics while I could. Your art really inspired me to draw my own slig. Thanks!

daww thanks I'm glad if i could inspire you, you should check the OW groups on dA, there is lots of great art from various artists ... I'm sure you can learn a lot from their art too :3 some of my art appears there aswell xD

[GlacierDragon]

I already told you how much I love the way you animated Ralph 8D
Although I'm kinda disappointed with DA, the mods completely ignored my DD suggestion even though it clearly said on their page that they reply to ALL suggestions >.>

[Splat]

I downloaded all the TD fanart I've received, so I still have that. i'll have a poke around in your scraps, and look forward to more art from you

[Fiction Skull]

Cool

[scipionyx]

thanks ^-^





haha so here I am with a crappy sketch...

shameless upload of a sketchy draft after that cool animation?!

heheee yeah exactly!



don't baww at me... I'll make a real drawing out of this (though i can't start with it till september xD ) if Splat uploads more than 1 new chapter of The Despicable
[and sorry the alien species isn't done yet... i know i said I would upload the sketches... but they don't look good, i don't even like my idea anymore.... RL is very chaotic this year.. i can't believe it's already june, i still haven't finnished my portfolio and i have to apply to uni now... that's why i didn't do much art except for the art for my portfolio... ]



anyway do you remember that scene in the story?

in the story it's a little different... but Stivik is carving his name in wood xD i wanted to draw this since i first read it... but never found the time...

so i had to make this craptastic thing to remind me of it xD

don't be too disappointed.... this was created a few minutes ago xD

Stivik is still the best Slig character ever!!!

[Splat]

Wow! Awesome to see you posting again, and extra awesome 'cus it's Stivik!
I guess this would be from back when he was still a scout? It's cool. I like it. Hope it gets finished, but you have a rather valid reason for not having time (unlike myself).

Actually I recently got into TD again, just the other day I was really in the mood for it. I started rereading it from the beginning (there are bits of part one, especially the prologue, that make me cringe at how bad it is).
Actually I started reading the Rupture Farms chapters, but then I decided to go back and read the bit in Dion and Stivik's part where Stivik remembers a misadventure where one of his pack got hurt. And that made me want to read the beginning, so I've decided to read it all the way through. I might get round to installing AE on my laptop soon, and have a go at that, too. Might restore my interest in Oddworld.

If I do get back into it, and I'd really like to, I'll probably delete all the chapters of the latest 'part' and start that bit afresh; I really don't like them, and if I was really in the mood for writing I know I could do better.

You've complained about me over-analysing my own writing before, but in part one... There was an atmosphere of... well, sligs in the wild, industrials out of industrialism... brotherhood and survival... something I wish I'd spent more time working to capture when I was writing part one, but there are so few really significant moments for Stivik in that time, apart from Stack's death and Tilic's betrayal, which was why only they got written in any detail. It's why I grabbed the opportunity to mention one of his jobs later on when he was watching over Dionysia. I wish he was open enough to discuss them more with her, so we could have heard of more But then he wouldn't be who he is.

Thanks for this art. I still want to tell the stories of these four, so I hope I get the chance. I could tell you right now some major events in Stivik's life after he leaves Rupture Farms, but... well, I'd rather tell the story as it should be told. Hopefully I'll get into it again soon, and work out how things should go.

It's hard working out how the Arnie of the story would react to the rebellious Dionysia, and there's a slig, Gappiqu, who I had trouble forming a personality for (his player was rather nooby at first, but he's so important to the story). But I think I'm getting there on both issues. The other thing is the short time Stivik and Dionysia have in Rupture Farms. How short can I make it, and yet keep it relevant (needs to be longer than just a day), and how will they react in that time?
Stivik's such a coward... Dionysia...

[abe is now!]

Cool pics scipionyx you're a very fine artist!

[scipionyx]

@Splat:

thank you! ^___^

...then you can also play all the new OW remakes and Slig Storm and Hand of Odd... ^^ there are rumors that they will even make a HD remake of AE and that they will complete the OW quintology finally but everyone probably knows that already xD ... still it's cool *.*

You've complained about me over-analysing my own writing before, but in part one... There was an atmosphere of... well, sligs in the wild, industrials out of industrialism... brotherhood and survival... something I wish I'd spent more time working to capture when I was writing part one, but there are so few really significant moments for Stivik in that time, apart from Stack's death and Tilic's betrayal, which was why only they got written in any detail. It's why I grabbed the opportunity to mention one of his jobs later on when he was watching over Dionysia. I wish he was open enough to discuss them more with her, so we could have heard of more But then he wouldn't be who he is.

lol xD ...everyone is over-analysing his own art constantly, too much certainly isn't good.
but the right amount makes us improve ....

you're right about the atmosphere in part one... it was and still is very inspiring, if it wouldn't be for that first part of TD i guess i would've never become such a huge fan of Sligs xD
(-the only game i had already played at that time was SW, and i didn't know much about the other games )
it might not be as well written as the latest chapters but despite everything i like them the most ^__^

weird question: if Stivik has a really bad day and Dion is in a temporary coma and it's his fault ... would he start to talk to her / or blame her while she sleeps or isn't he that kind of character? -Stivik is not easy to see through while it has been always very easy to see through Dion xD ...this btw, is no critique, it's fascinating



i would give them a week or even a little more... a week seems long but it seems short aswell depending on what happens... a single day is too short xD

btw: ...I'm sure Arnie has more than enough sectrets that could ruin his reputation if they end up in the wrong persons hands - things that could make him go to prison...
you could create a situation in which Arnie Dion and Stivik are in a pinch, because each has hold of secret informations about the other 2, and if they do a wrong move the other one will sell them out,
maybe someone else comes to rupture farms and the situation gets even worse because noone knows on which side that one is... never mind i watched too much Code Geass and Death Note xD xD

btw: the time of the story and the time in which you read it can be very different... moments can be stretched out endlessly... or be very short.. what is it called in english? I can't find it anywhere xD )


...ha I've been the same with my art since... a year? xD I know i could do it better if i were in the mood for it, and i don't get anything done, but as you said it's the best to just erase what you don't like and start anew instead of trying to change it partly... hehe I'm looking forward to read again

...Gappiqu ...makes me want to go and read through the old w@rf xD


you're very welcome
I'm glad you like it even if it's just the sketch ^_^



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@AIN:

thanks AIN ! I'm glad you like my art

[Splat]

weird question: if Stivik has a really bad day and Dion is in a temporary coma and it's his fault ... would he start to talk to her / or blame her while she sleeps or isn't he that kind of character? -Stivik is not easy to see through while it has been always very easy to see through Dion xD ...this btw, is no critique, it's fascinating

Well... if it had happened before he betrayed her to the Cartel... If Stivik's gotten angry enough to knock her unconscious, he'd feel bad about it. He'd panic a bit and be angry at himself that he'd lost control, but he wouldn't confront it; he'd run off and leave her, maybe make sure she was safe first if it was really bad. After that he'd avoid her until she approached him.
He wouldn't apologise; she'd be the one who'd come and make it up with him. She's good at forgiving people who hurt her and show no remorse. She'd wonder if it was her fault that he'd hit her, though she wouldn't confront that feeling.

If it happened at Rupture Farms now, well... deep down inside he'd feel bad, but on the surface he'd probably gloat about it, and then go away and hope to pretend it had never happened, with himself and with the other sligs; he wouldn't brag about it a second time. Again, he'd avoid meeting or talking to her unless she came to him, but then he wouldn't have forgiven himself for all he's done to her, so he'd get angry immediately. If this happened not at Rupture Farms but somewhere she might be in danger from other sligs, he wouldn't hide her or do anything to protect her while she was unconscious. She makes him feel guilty, and he can't confront that guilt, because he really, really wants to believe that the things he's done are right, that he's right to serve the Cartel. If he was wrong to betray her to the Cartel than he was wrong to betray Tilic, and if he was wrong to betray Tilic, his brother... He'd cope with it worse than if Anni thought she'd killed Kix or Nova. I don't know for certain but it could potentially drive him to suicide if he was faced with knowing he'd been wrong to betray Tilic.
Dionysia would be slower to forgive Stivik for hurting her than she would have been before he betrayed her, but eventually she would, very cautiously, approach him. They'd probably end up having a very loud, very hateful argument, and while he'd be fighting to avoid hitting her again, she'd take him by surprise and smack him. Then she'd run off and hate herself for hurting him.
After he betrayed her as Bescher's factory (was it Bescher?), she told him she hated him; this was as far from the truth as conceivably possible.

btw: the time of the story and the time in which you read it can be very different... moments can be stretched out endlessly... or be very short.. what is it called in english? I can't find it anywhere xD )

I don't think we have a word for it in English. Like, I believe you have a word that translates directly as 'ear-worm' (I think), which means a song that's stuck in your head. I love the phrase 'ear-worm', and am rather chagrined that we have no version of it, and would just say 'a song that's stuck in my head'.

you could create a situation in which Arnie Dion and Stivik are in a pinch, because each has hold of secret informations about the other 2, and if they do a wrong move the other one will sell them out

Could be interesting, but I fear Arnie's a bit too sceptical of these accusations against Stivik, and Stivik's already told the Cartel his secrets. Plus if Arnie found out Dionysia's secret, it'd shake things up too much. So Arnie's is already known, and he wouldn't find out Stivik's or Dionysia's. But they know each other's, and they both know that. If that made sense.



With your picture... I like the idea that he might really be sat at a table in a factory, and he's imagining the tree and sky. I guess if you made Stivik and the table quite dark, and realistic, and the tree and the surroundings much brighter and more impressionistic... I dunno, I can't confess to knowing much about art

[dripik]

That Slig animation is quite cool, nicely done, Sci. Rather noir-ish.

I love the phrase 'ear-worm', and am rather chagrined that we have no version of it, and would just say 'a song that's stuck in my head'.

If it's any comfort, Hungarian has no equivalent either, or at least I don't think there is.

[OddYouko]

What is this craptastic stuff you speak of? I only see beautiful and inspiring artwork here. I'm liking the colors and scribble-ly(That even a word? ouo;; ) look of that pic.

Outstanding as always, scipionyx!
Draw more beautiful eyes. I love the colorful and glowing eyes~

[PixelRocketship]

These drawings are awesome! How long have you been doing stuff like this for?