My Brand New Fan Fic: The Invasion -

Fuzzleman54321 · #31 03-07-2006, 12:41 PM

Chapter 13

Here we go again. First door.

Straight away paramites chased me, and hissed. I ran for it, but bumped into another paramite. Then i was cornered by paramites. "Poopie Cheese!" I said as i was bitten. I screamed and fell to the floor. My vision started blurring, and i was blacked out. I woke....IN A COBWEB!!! "WAGHGHGHGGHGHG!" I screamed and struggled, trying to break free. But then my heart sank. A GIGANTIC PARAMITE WAS THERE, READY TO EAT ME! "HOLy POOP!" I yelled. Suddenly i heard chanting, and the paramite was lifted into the air, and fell asleep. The paramite then was gentely lay on the fround. The web broke, and i was free. "YES!" I said as i ran up to the ghost trap, slapped it, and ran into the door. Ok, time for the second door.

I walked in to loads of cobwebs. "Ewww." I said as i walked through them. I them climbed up and edge, and fell down a pit. "AGHG!" I screamed, but i saw birds flying around me. I chanted quickly and went into the bird portal before i splatted. I came back up to the edge of the pit, on the other side. "Phew." I said and slapped the ghost trap. Now onto 3.

End of chapter 13

Fuzzleman54321 · #32 03-12-2006, 04:13 AM

No comments? Come on, i need to write a new chapter.

Slaveless · #33 03-18-2006, 03:42 AM

Ohhh, a new adventure. Pretty good.

Fuzzleman54321 · #34 03-29-2006, 08:02 AM

Sorry for not posting a new chapter, i didnt have the time to write a whole chapter.

Chapter 14

That was a horrible experience. Im still shaking from it now. Door number 3, i wonder what could be in there.....

..... i wished i never asked. There was a gigantic pit, but a thin tightrope to walk across. "WTF?" I thought. Then i realised the awful truth. I had to walk across it. I saw a paramite run past me, slip, and fall down the pit. 30 seconds later, there was a massive bone smashing, gut splatting sound. I shuddered. And the ghost trap and door was at the end. I gulped, and streched out my arms, and started walking across the tiprerope. "Whoa...whoa...WHOA!" I screamed as i nearly fell off. I could just see a tiny blimp of splattered paramite. I fell of, but grabbed onto the rope! "AGHGHGHGHGHGHGGHGHGGHGHGH!" I screamed! Fear and terror shot through me. Then i saw a bird who flew past me and said "ZOMG BIBI!" (Sorry, i just needed to inclued that.

) I dangled for me life, and then that huge paramite appered again! "F***!" I screamed. This door is going to take a lot longer.

End of chapter 14.

Slaveless · #35 03-29-2006, 02:41 PM

Hm, this isn't the first time, but you included some pretty colorful language and violence. Carry on. *Continues writing fan fic*

Fuzzleman54321 · #36 03-29-2006, 10:16 PM

Thanks Slaveless.

Chapter 15

"Agh!" I shrieked as the paramites tenticals were touching me. I felt its hot breath. My hand is slipping, im about to be eaten. What could be worse! Then my hand slipped..................................and a fell. Now i was scared. IM ABOUT TO DIE! "Wait a min..." I thought. There was a huge web from the paramite. Ofcourse! That paramite wasent going to eat me, he was trying to help me all along! I grabbed the web and the paramite took me to the ghost trap. Then it hopped off. I slapped the ghost trap. But as i was enterning the door i wondered "Why is that paramite helping me, who is he or she?"

End of chapter 15

Slaveless · #37 03-30-2006, 11:19 AM

Oh no, its the Gloamglozer in diguised! Someone kill that paramite! Or its Big Face in disguised... But this isn't his journey, so why is he helping him?

Fuzzleman54321 · #38 04-05-2006, 08:44 AM

Haha! I can change what the paramite does and why he is here and slaveless cant! HAHAAAHAHAHHAHA.

This chapter is dedicated to my favourite fan, slaveless.

Chapter 16

That paramite left me confused. I went into door 4. Straight away that paramite appered again. It suddenly boomed a voice! "THERE IS ONLY 4 DOORS IN THE MUDOMO TEMPLE! I SAVED YOU SO I CAN KILL YOU MYSELF!" It roared. Poo. I quickly dodged to the side as he swiped his tenticals to me. Then i tripped, and fell on my back. The paramite jumped, ready to pouce on me and eat me, when suddenly BANG BANG! BANG! BANG! Someone was shooting. A Toomhawker! "Horaa......oh crap." I said as the Toomhawker was eaten. SO much for HELP.

"GAAAA!" I shreiked as i fell into a web, trapped and unable to break free. "IT IS TIME I FINISHED YOU!" He screamed. This was it. This was the end. I cant help abe, i cant blow up the factory. It was over......... "RAOOO>.......AOKODJNODGESTJIDGHSJKjjnmhkjhnhKJ! *translated from odd launguge* Crap ive been shot with a explosive! AJGHAJAJH!" It shreiked. It exploded and shattered into a million pieces. Then i saw chant bubbles coming out of it. I saw big face in it. "My child! Are you ok?" He asked. "Yea...but...you killed a paramite!" I said. "Well it wasent a paramite. Long ago, vykkers tested on paramites, one got mutated, and killed some vykkers, it got out, and grew bigger....and bigger....and bigger. Then it got so big, it needed more food. So it hunted down lots of things. Scrabs, other paramites, fleechs, slurgs, ratz, Glukkons, vykkers, sligs, and of course, mudokons." He said. Then he dissappered, and the bubbles faded away. I slapped the ghost trap and went into the door. Its time for the final showdown.

End of chapter 16.

OH BTW Slaveless, its a girl. :P

Slaveless · #39 04-05-2006, 11:56 AM

So it wasn't the gloamglozer. It was an oversized paramite. OK, but don't come crying to me when there really is a gloamglozer attacking a mudokon!

Slig_Cake · #40 04-09-2006, 04:51 PM

nice i like quick reads like these. there's a lot of interest in each short chapter, keep it up!

Fuzzleman54321 · #41 04-22-2006, 05:20 AM

Thanks for the comments. UPDATE TIME!

Chapter 17

Straight away i had to run away from Rabid Paramites, who would not hesitate to eat me. But i tripped over a rock, and landed flat on my face. I turned around and saw the paramites, saliva dripping from their wet tenticals."AHGHGHGHGH! Wait...thats it! Im gonna hit these guys!" I shrieked, and punched both paramites in the face. The shreeched, then got even angrier. "CHHAHAHAH!" The both schreeched and ran after me, faster then ever. Ahhhhhhhhhhh..That relaxing back masarge is nice. Wait a min.,.......back masarge? "AHG! FLEECH!" There was a massive fleech, very hungry indeed.

Slaveless · #42 05-02-2006, 02:41 PM

Well, nice end of attack. I got to say, these seem as if he will be here for some time.