Oddworld Forums > Zulag Three > Fan Corner


 
Thread Tools
 
  #241  
01-26-2006, 10:42 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

I thoug you'd realize 'dat, Lobo!
It brought back the memories of the COVENANT doing torcherous things!
It did make Umi uneasy!
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #242  
01-27-2006, 11:31 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

Oo, update! Yay! That one was especially on-the-edge-of-yore-seat action-crammed. Good job! *bounces up and down* C'mon, c'mon get to that thar Sekto scrap...

o.O Two words... Timed Run...

How you gonna tackle that?
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #243  
01-27-2006, 12:02 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

JEEZ!
I'm supposed ter leave cliffy's (Which yer hate me fer, don't'cha? ) THEN get ter Sekto and Stranger's battle.
'Ey...it's what I do. Business calls.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #244  
01-27-2006, 02:24 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

Update all done!
Sorry, but I left it at a cliffy again.
But hey...it's business. :speaks mafia-style:
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #245  
01-28-2006, 10:48 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

THE ATTACK OF SEKTO
-----------------------

The elevator shaft exploded behind Stranger. His reflex exploded in his legs, starting him down the zig-zag ramps. He leaped over the flat base over two Wolvark guards screaming murder of the bubbling rock that splattered upon their faces.
Large pillars of stone holding the roof from imploding crumbled upon the base, crushing the standing Wolvarks underneath with a quick bone-crushing scream.
Stranger sharply curved around the pillar, and dodged the Wolvarks running around behind the fallen pillar.
Umi burried her face in Stranger's back, her muscles tiring quickly as Stranger raced in to the unstable metal-framed facility.
The catapults were coming too close. Rocks exploded in to hot fragments through the open roof of the building.
But even if it hurted him, Stranger would get up to Sekto's office, and end his tyrant death spree of his kind.
Stranger panted, grousing through blocking Shock tanks and shooting Wolvarks. Bullets pinged off by his legs, pelting rocks in to his skin.
He cringed, but didn't stop charging up the ramp to the last level.
The floor was caved in itself.
Stranger slid down the broken rubble, skidding to stop when he leaped out of the broken hole to the flat base again.
Two Shock tanks and a mass of Wolvark guards whipped out their weapons.
Stranger growled. He didn't have time to stop and meddle with the bastards. But if it stopped him from getting Sekto, he had to stop them.
"Hold tight, kid!"
Rabid Fuzzles were flung to the Wolvarks, diverting their attention to the nipping fur balls.
Stranger focused on the Shock tanks.
The Shock tanks rumbled up closer to the Steef, holding its arm out to them.
"Hurry up! Those river-huggin' jackasses are movin' in!"
Static gathered in their poles sticking far out from their circular tanks.
Boom-bat Seekers flew in to the eye of one tank, disabling it from locking on its target.
The last tank moved in front of the swearing Wolvark, and exploded of purple electricity.
The bolts raised hairs on Stranger's arm. He moved back from the tank, but it moving with the Steef retreating.
"Damn it," Stranger growled, his hind legs touching the base of the hole he had fallen out of.
The tank rumbled of a cruel laugh.
Bolts struck across Stranger's chest, leaving a black smokey mark across his armor covering his chest.
Close call, but he probably wouldn't be lucky next time.
A whistle called through the air. Two bubbling rocks thrown through a breached hole in the roof struck upon the flat base Stranger stood upon. Dribbles of molten rock splashed among the tank's hull.
The Wolvark screamed inside the tank, frantically ripping out behind the tank's emergency exit.
Stranger watched the catapults shower over through the torn hole. The attack was becoming even more brutal.
Soon, the entire heart of the dam would be overrun by the molten rock.
Stranger rushed by the tank melting by the sobbing Wolvark.
The facility ahead was crumbling under the weight of the shattered roof falling upon it.
Stranger dodged the falling chunks of cement crashing in front of him. Deeper as he went, the tunnels grew thicker, making them safe upon attack of the Grubbs. But it wouldn't keep them safe for long.
"Close the doors! Keep that Steef away!"
Wolvarks behind closing doors grinned devilishly.
Stranger returned the scowl, accelerating his speed straight through the horizontal crease, and blowing away the Wolvarks with a dumbstricken frown.
Conveyer belts spiraled around a curling hallway up to the walkway to Sekto's office.
Deployed Wolvark Sleg holders stood vertically along the spiraling hallway. The Steef circled around to their sight. They grinned, as they opened their sacks above their heads. In their clenched hands were writhing Slegs, barking viciously at their trainer holding them uncomfortably.
"Go git 'em, boy!" they barked.
The Slegs fell to the ground. They growled hungrily at their prey stampeding by their masters. The trio of Slegs pounced as the Steef rushed by, missing by only inches by their tusks.
They accelerated after the Steef.
Stranger's legs strained with all their might that was left in his muscles. He could hear the Slegs actually catching up to him.
Then a bone-clamping crunch slammed down on his right hind ankle.
Stranger roared in excrusiating pain.
One Sleg was clamped on his leg, knawing fiercely deeper in his thick cartledge and bone.
Umi slapped the Sleg, pulling its ears up from his leg.
The Sleg whined angrily, its jaw muscles weakening from the human's jerking.
"Umi! ...Stop!" Stranger shutted his eyes tightly, a tear rolling down his cheek.
"If I don't get it off, you'll slow down, and you'll get caught by the wolves! Keep running! Ignore the pain!" Umi squawked.
She ripped the Sleg off his ankle, it opening its mouth like a fish out of water. It snapped its jowls at her face.
She only sneered at its invisible eyes.
"Nasty lil' beast..." she threw down the Sleg to its followers.
Stranger opened his eyes again, feeling the burden off his leg at last.
The end of the hall came to him quickly. Now all it was, was a curving path up to Sekto's office, then he'd exact revenge in the most excrusiating exorcise he'd ever dealt out.
He ignored the pain surging through his tired muscles in his legs. He had to run up a security beltway that was out of order, only to find more Wolvarks and a Shock tank.
Further out from the beltway was the molten base of the dam, the catapulting still continuing deeper to where Stranger ran.
Umi's eyes were locked on an incoming pulted fiery rock, headed right for their direction.
"Stranger!" she screamed.
The rock tore through the beltway behind Stranger, the remaining part of it swirving unstably from the uneven weight.
The Wolvarks turned to the entrance to the office of their boss, waving their arms to the guards nearby.
"CLOSE THAT DAMN DOOR! THE STEEF'S UP 'ERE!"
Stranger saw the guards near the door switch down the lever to close the door. He growled fiercely. He wouldn't give up from how far he came to just to get revenge.
The Shock tank came in to play. Bolts shot out the poles on its purple hull.
A jolt sheered by Umi's arm painfully.
She felt the burning pain explode in her mind. Her eyes fell dark, almost hitting her head on Stranger's shoulder blade.
"Don't yer fall unconscious with me again, Umi. Don't yer dare!" Stranger growled.
Umi took control of her conscious. Her eyes returned to normal, staring ahead, as Stranger sped passed by the tank and its attack.
The doors still closed slowly.
Stranger's muscles flexed harder. Only inches before he reached Sekto's office.
Catapults tore down the beltway closely behind Stranger.
His muscles felt as if they would implode through his leg, and the pain was irritable.
The guards near the door grinned successively. The Steef wouldn't make it through the doors in time.
Stranger grunted as he flapped his arms with his hooves running to their potential.
He got to the end of the beltway.
the doors were almost passed the size of himself.
He leaped through the crease, moving himself vertically with the crease, so he would fit in without losing one of his limbs.
Stranger tripped on the ground, and the doors slammed shut.
The Wolvarks sweared loudly, banging on the doors frantically.
Stranger heaved on the floor. He could hear the catapults take over the outside of the dam. He was safe from the catapults, for now, until he got Sekto.
Umi crawled to Stranger, his face touching the ground.
She patted his back.
"Good work, Stranger. That was too close," Umi wrapped her arm around his neck gently.
Stranger mumbled an affirmative through his exhausted breathing. He looked down the carpeted hallway decorated with stands of exotic plants and broken portraits of some unknown person.
He sighed through his nose, standing back up wobbly.
Umi hefted him up under his arm, holding him in balance.
Stranger glared down the hallway, his challenge awaiting his presense.
The fight for revenge was on. And Stranger was more than ready.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^


Last edited by Dark Elite_H2; 01-28-2006 at 03:53 PM..
Reply With Quote
  #246  
01-28-2006, 11:12 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

Oooo, cliffhanger... I remember doin' this bit of the game, was a absolute nightmare. Good job matie and lookin' forward to the next bit!
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #247  
01-28-2006, 02:25 PM
HobbitNinj's Avatar
HobbitNinj
Stingbee
 
: Oct 2005
: under your bed
: 82
Rep Power: 20
HobbitNinj  (10)

Dang! I hated those tanks! I was soo tempted to use a cheat code to get past them. I can't wait till the final showdown.
__________________
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/5...oolcopy2lq.jpg
Truth is stranger than fan fiction.

Reply With Quote
  #248  
01-28-2006, 03:54 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

Ahh...I'm all over my writer's block.
Enjoy.
I shall write, supposedly, the ending tomorrow.
I shall keep you in suspence...O.O

BTW: when this story is FIANLLY completed...(yes, I want to move on to the next story) I shall repost the revamped story in its actual chapters.
ect.
ENCOUNTER, MEMORIES, AND MEETING--Umi meets the Stranger
SHORTLY THEREAFTER, A STRANGER ARRIVES IN TOWN...
SURGERIES, LIES, AND OUTLAWS--The hunt for 20,000$
THICKETS, MASKS, AND TREACHERY--The Shadow of the Steef
SECRETS, CLAWS, AND ENEMIES--A Stranger's demise
THE MASK REMOVED. A NEMESIS REVEALED
GUARDIANS, THIEVES, AND INDUSTRY--The battle for Last Legs
FIENDS, BEASTS, AND MORTAR--The siege of Sekto's lair

Hopefully I didn't ferget's anything.
But yeh. Those 'r the chapters.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^


Last edited by Dark Elite_H2; 01-28-2006 at 04:06 PM..
Reply With Quote
  #249  
01-29-2006, 02:57 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

WUHOO! *waves flag and honks klaxon* Go Stranger! YAY!

And now....*ominous music*....Sekto! Dur nuh dur nuh. Hee hee. Stranger'll kick his butt! Great chapter DE, oh an' I saved ya revamped chappie.
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #250  
01-29-2006, 09:43 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

Right. This is the moment we've all been waiting fer, folks!

SHOWDOWN--Attack of Sekto

Even though they weren't in their prime condition, Stranger and Umi would still get Sekto, even with a limb cut off, and their arms and legs tied behind their backs.
Streams of light cutting through the broken jagged holes above in the roof shone down upon the dusty field of suspense.
Behind the tall desk where Sekto stared up at his prized trophies hung on the base of his wall, and the curling horns from an unknown creature.
Sekto stood up by his desk, staring with splendor at his trpohies, while thinking of the Steef he would add to his collection, and get something more rare that would satisfy his craving of his game.
He let out a hazy chuckle.
"The Steef's here," he said slowly, blinking his golden eyes down to his pets, upgraded and armored.
The Gloktigi's arms were mechanical, horns sticking out of its wide squid-shaped forehead.
Sekto then stared down the office walls untouched of damage.
"I can feel it,"
The Gloktigi snorted in agreement, standing closer to its master, and having a ready glare ahead of the entrance to his office.
"But, it won't get away from me this time. Not even the human,"
Sekto turned to the Gloktigis, they turning to him.
"Deal with them, but be careful with its head,"
Sekto then looked up to a head plate empty by the Steef head preserved perfectly in their raging form.
"I have a special place for it,"
The Gloktigis were to set off around the library, until Sekto raised an arm.
"And, another thing," he said.
The Gloktigis turned back to its master.
Sekto's eyes grinned down deviously.
"Give me the human,"
He turned his head to each of them.
"...Alive,"
The squeal of the Gloktigis came over the thin office walls. Stranger was walking on his own now, keeping umi behind him for any surprise attacks. He knew Sekto would want her almost as bad as Sekto wanted his head.
And he wouldn't let him even lay a finger on her as long as he was still alive.
Artifacts behind glass showcases stood in perfect balance with their stands. Grubb cultural were more behind the showcased glass, bones of decrypted Grubb ancients and masks of perfect shape to the Grubb's heads.
Stranger slowly approached the entrance to Sekto's office, shelves acting as a jungle sprouted around the bottom base of his desk.
And there he stood. Sekto, with his arms behind his back, staring brightly with large golden-yellow eyes.
"Steef," Sekto called.
Stranger snarled fiercely.
"Sekto,"
Remembering how Sekto almost took his and Umi's life made him explode with rage.
"I'm-a kill you, you filthy bastard!"
Stranger stampeded up to the base to Sekto's desk. But a forceful push knocked him aside from his desk. Green gel tackled him aside from a vertical shelf, the tapping Gloktigis chuckling successively.
Sekto ratted his fingers together.
"So glad of you to join us..." Sekto chuckled, slowly looking to the human standing defensively, and glaring at him fiercely.
"and letting us to the human,"
Sekto snapped his fingers authoratively to the Gloktigis, pointing a finger to her.
The Gloktigis darted out from the forested shelves, holding down a familiar stance that meant they would attack.
Umi gasped, blinking quickly.
Green blobs shot around her arms, quickly collecting around her, until she was wrapped in the gel as well, writhing helplessly, as the Gloktigi rapped closer with their sharp talons.
Stranger's eyes shot out a furious stare at the backs of the Gloktigi.
"DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH 'ER!"
Stranger flexed his arms outward from the ensnare, ripping his elbows out of the glop, and ripping it off as if it were a torn blanket.
Umi scrambled with her legs backwards to the office wall.
The Gloktigi circled around her, boxing her in with their mechanized arms and writhing mouth tentacles.
Until a barrage of sharp stinging bugs ripped the back of their heads in large clusters.
The Gloktigi cowled angrily, spinning around to the Steef, already free of its trap, and its arm with a weapon holstered on its arm.
Stranger panted, sneering of his sharp stained teeth out the side of his mouth.
"I said don't, touch, her," Stranger scowled heinously.
The Gloktigi chuckled, turning their backs on the human tucked near the wall. They squawked to each other of a machination unknown to Stranger. They then stared back to the Steef, one stepping up to it, and the other turning back to the human.
Stranger nodded to the Gloktigi's challenge, immediately jumping back, while shooting back Boom-bat Seekers.
The Gloktigi challenging dodged a cluster of Seekers, imploding on the weakened walls.
The second cluster tackled in to an arm of the Gloktigi.
The arm zapped of electricity, breaking off from its foot and arm in a large section.
It wobbled on its only free arm, its sapped arm writhing around bionically, the Gloktigi roaring furiously at the Steef.
Stranger knew it wouldn't be able to attack on only one arm, so now focused on in on the Gloktigi nearby Umi.
It caged in the human under one set of claws. The Gloktigi turned back to the Steef, noticing that its brother was somewhat already defeated.
It snorted, blinking skeptically at its fallen brother balancing on only one arm.
Stranger nodded at it.
"Move away...Yer gonna die anyhow," Stranger whispered ominously.
The Gloktigi moved its talons from over Umi, stepping up to the plate this time. It squawked to its brother concernly.
The other shook its head, flexing its bionic claws out further apart.
Whilst the Gloktigi kept Stranger under their wing, Sekto, far behind, watched intentionally how the Steef fought. Its reflexes were lightning-fast, and its speed was top-notch. But its weakness was only one thing; its human.
The human was the link to his weakness. Somehow, he'd have to plan to get the human and the Steef together. But it would be tough. That Steef's intention was to protect the human from him.
Shrapnel of Riot slugs tore through the Gloktigi's ghostly-purple hide. Stranger circled around the Gloktigi, as its attack was spinning around on one claw, and acting the rest as a shredder fan, drawing closer to the Steef.
Stranger kept his distance from its attack, while forwarding his attack of Super Stingbees and Riot slugs to the spinning Gloktigi.
Blood spurted out in entrails, leaving a dashy ring of blood around the Gloktigi's arms, its skin weeping blood out from its pores. The Gloktigi whined exhausted, stumbling closer to the Steef standing before it.
It was weak. Almost too weak to continue fighting. Stranger could sense that, bringing up his last Boom-bat Seeker to its forehead.
It snorted in failure, standing weakly on its last.
Sekto watched his pets fall to this bumbler. He almost shouted in anger, when he realized it was only a test. He knew somewhat that the Steef was tired from trying to reach his office. That would give him a home-field advantage to it, and the human.
The human, on the other hand, was still stuck by the office walls, tearing off the glop flaking off its arms.
Sekto sneered. The Steef would be after him in seconds. That meant he'd have to start with his plan to take them down.
One Gloktigi down, and one last straggler to go. The last was jumping on its arm, frantically to reach its master's desk, and hide before it could get caught.
Stranger opened his bow up to fast-firing Stingbees that tore through its last arm.
Wires sprawled lively around its attached nerves. The Gloktigi tripped down from its broken arm, bawling around on the floor with its stubby arms whirring helplessly around to crawl away from the Steef.
Stranger dug his claws in to the back of the Gloktigi, turning it around with its face up to him.
The Gloktigi's eyes shone fearfully up to the Steef's bright devious eyes. It shook its head, knowing that it has also failed its master to bring it down.
Sekto heard the loud shriek of its last pet. He sneered to himself, pushing a button under his desk.
The base suddenly transformed in to a cirular control panel Sekto sat in. Trap doors beside the control panel seat snapped open to a sprouting machine with two prongs physically attached to large circualr barbs.
Two circular panels popped up under the base of his transformed desk, glowing as bright as the bionic eyes of the Shock tanks. Dashes blinked circularly as a halo around the eyes. The circular control panel began to hover off above the desk he sat in. Ahead of his stern hands were two long handles. A ringing hum grew louder to life.
Stranger heard the humming of an awkward machine. He turned back to Sekto, now noticing that his entire base had transformed to a strange weapon darting right to him.
He glared up to Sekto, his hands wrapped around the two handles.
"Now, as like your ancestors, Steef, you will die by my hands,"
Sekto pulled the levers in unison down to him. A blue-silver sphere shrouded around Sekto and the control panel.
"The hell is that?" Umi rubbed her head.
Stranger snarled.
Loud buzzing grew higher-pitched. The panels below Sekto were flashing up to the twin cannons, wires glowing a dark purple.
He gave a hum of suspicion, locking down Riot slugs and rounds of Super Stingbees.
As his cannons grew more powerful with the unknown attack, a rumble and crash of cement chunks from the roof came barreling down in front of Stranger.
He was fazed a bit, but blinked back to the flashing panels.
And the barrage started.
Super Stingbees and the shards of Riot slugs pricked at the panels. His attack wasn't strong enough to figure his suspicion.
He dug around his ammo sack as he continued to fire at the first panel. Just as he thought.
Not enough Boom-bat Seekers. He only had two left. But he would have to use them wisely on both panels.
As he weakened the first panel starting to flash weakly, the cannons made a loud click. Two beams of black-purple laser fire shot out of the barbs in the cannons. The beams disinegrated the chunk of cement roof Stranger kept behind. Stranger kept in suspense, keeping calm by the chunk of roof, and watching the cannon's stream grow weak.
The two beams died out, and the chunk of cement exploded in to shards of metal and rock.
Sekto grunted angrily, restarting the engines on the narrow beam cannons.
Stranger backed away in to the forest of library shelves, a steady stream of Super Stingbees chipping away at the weak panel by Sekto's right cannon.
He noticed that his shields flickered as every Stingbee stuck to the panel. He now figured that the panels fed in to his control panel and affected his shields.
Now Stranger's plan changed entirely.
He used is first Boom-bat out of two, hoping that the panel he kept attacking would be weak enough to blow out a part of Sekto's shield.
His heart pounded, as the Boom-bat fluttered from his bow, and directly to the extorted panel chipped away of its color.
The Seekers pummelled the panel.
And the eye blew out in a quick jolt of fire.
Sekto's shields dimmed on and off. He blinked at the red flashing words on his green wireframe keypad:
RIGHT CANNON SECTION- DISABLED
"Damn you, Steef!" Sekto yelled wildy, slamming his fists on his controls.
But the left cannon was still intact.
Sekto still had a chance.
Stranger kept near in the library, noticing now black ghostly laser pellets snapping off the wood of the shelves.
Sekto let a rough chuckle out.
"Where are you, Steef?" he called.
Sekto then darted to the human, its back against the wall, and staring at him fearfully.
"I suggest you come out now, or the human dies," Sekto threatened.
The cannon whirred to Umi, the two claws around the powering barb opening with its energy gathered.
'He's about as worse as X'Plosives,' Umi thought.
The pellets stopped, and the hum reached maximum.
Stranger heard Sekto's threat, snapping his direction over to Umi.
"Oh no you don't!" he ran out.
Sekto caught the Steef charging to the human.
"Got'cha," Sekto grinned.
Stranger wrapped his arm under Umi's arms, turning back around to see the panel staying a solid orange.
That meant the cannon was charged.
The cannon's beam shot out from the barb again, melting the book shelves with the shape of the beam down where the Steef was.
Where the Steef was
The cannon died out again.
Sekto leaned over his controls, staring only at the black spot seered in to the floor.
"Huh?" Sekto grumbled loudly.
Stranger hunched down low behind rows of shuffled shelves, covering most of him with books alligned.
Umi sat low on the ground under Stranger's neck.
"You stay 'ere, and don't even think of moving," Stranger told quietly.
Umi nodded, her eyes shining wetly of tense tears.
The buzz of the cannons were delayed.
Sekto still looked around wildly for any sign of the Steef. He was beginning to think the cannon had killed the Steef, but it was impossible.
He would've seen it happen.
"Steef!" Sekto roared.
"I know you're out there! I'll blow this entire dam out if I have to!"
Stranger kept low under the shadows of the shelves, caerful not to knock down the books hanging loosely over his hunched back.
Only one panel left. That would leave Sekto open for the kill.
Stranger moved himself close to the panel to the left last cannon. He locked down his bow again with a fresh round of Riot slugs and Super Stingbees, and keeping his last Boom-bat Seeker close at hand.
Sekto's gut feeling was that the Steef was closeby, but he couldn't put a finger on it. It figured out how to kill his cannon and weaken his shields, so it would go after...
'Aha...' Sekto looked down left by the last panel.
He recharged his cannon's power again.
Sekto had figured where he was.
Stranger began to fire at the last panel, slowly chipping away at the protective covering to the inside of the eye.
He listened to the hum of the cannon grow louder. The covering sprouted out to a small hole exposing the wires that would disable the last cannon.
'C'mon...'
He hosed the Stingbees above the small hole.
Chips of the covering shot out, exposing the eye more.
Stranger's brain impulsed. He quickly switched out to his last Boom-bat Seeker.
Umi moved away books to unveil Stranger and Sekto. She watched him place on a Boom-bat Seeker, almost jumbling it in his hand from his extreme hustle to put it on.
His arm retracted out to the panel, and a grin growing hatefully in to the fiery eye of it.
"Fire it..." Umi's throat almost choked.
The eye blinked to a solid orange again. The cannon stopped humming.
"Fire it..." Umi said louder.
The two claws retracted from the barb, and a black-purple narrow beam exploded out of it.
Umi's eyes contracted suspensefully.
"STRANGER!"
The Boom-bat Seeker fluttered out the launcher of Stranger's bow. Slow motion seemed to take over Stranger's eyes. He watched the arrow of the beam darted right to him.
The Seekers impacted the panel, and the wires exploded from the heat the 'bat gave off.
A quick fiery jolt shot out of the eye. The cannon sparked out of the barb.
The beam produced from the cannon suddenly vanished in to a sprinkle of black dust.
Stranger fell on his back, watching as Sekto beated brutally on his control pad, swearing hatefully at the Steef.
Red flashing words blinked under his flattened hands.
But it wasn't what Sekto expected.
His eyes widened to a brighter golden-yellow, as the red words flashed in his eyes;
SELF-DESTRUCT SEQUENCE- 5
Sekto shook his head.
He noticed his failure to kill the Steef, his dream shattered to the ground. He was defeated by the creature he wanted to wrought from this world.
"No...this can't be..."
A whirring hum sounded from the center of his control panel. The cannons sparked ominously by him, the barbs exploding inside the cannon.
Stranger scrambled away from near the base, laying flat down by Umi, holding her head under his chest.
Vibrations under Sekto's feet suddenly exploded in to a fiery blast. The cannons exploded outwards from its core, a chain reaction beginning next with him, and then the last cannon.
Shockwaves were sent out upward, the base above him with his prizes caving down upon him.
Sekto let out a shrill roar, as the rocks came tumlbing down upon him, crushing the machinery, along with him underneath.
_____
Rubble of Sekto's office settled down, dust scattering high above the grey clouded sky. The echo of Sekto's scream lingered in Stranger's mind, sending chills down his spine each time it echoed.
He lifted his head off over Umi's scalp, blinking through the thin covering of brown dust gliding around.
Only rock and metal were the remanents of where Sekto last stood.
Stranger lifted his body off of Umi, wiping his arm off of the splinters that were prickling irritatingly in his tender skin. He walked over to the rubble that burried Sekto, and a calm silence over took the moment of truth.
Stranger dug through the rocks, a torn arm rolling out when a slab of cement was pulled away. He dug out Sekto's battered body out flat in front of Stranger.
His eyes were beaten closed, his skin bloddied and bruised. His expensive suit was torn and stained of dark red blood.
Umi walked by Stranger, loping her head on his arm, and sighing exhaustedly.
"You did it," she said, moving her head up to his eyes.
Stranger let a heavy sigh through his nostrils, the heavy burden that was weighing down his shoulders finally was thrown off.
Revenge was extracted, and it felt so good.
Rebel yells from far below called out far from the dam.
Umi and Stranger turned to the open window, listening to the concerned voices call out their saviors.
Umi looked up to Stranger.
"Go on, Stranger," she nodded.
Stranger's face straightened. He glanced down to Umi, she giving off a confident smile.
Stranger scruffed the shirt on Sekto's shoulder, and dragged him up to the window.
Umi stayed behind, watching Stranger take his claim up to the Grubbs with a strong sense of pride.
"Show 'em who you are,"
Stranger held Sekto high above his head, then locking his head back, closing his eyes.
He released a successful bellow, echoing down to the Grubbs gathering slowly on the riverside's ledge.
The Grubbs blinked up to the small dot high in the dam holding their mortal enemy above its head.
"What was that?"
The Grubbs began chatting suspiciously.
"It was Steef,"
The Grubbs squawked. Steef actually did it. Their prophecy of a Steef coming to the Grubb's aid was fulfilled, and no more were they to be burdened with the Sekto demon.
Grubbs began to raise fists in the air, chanting loudly, "Steef! Steef! Steef!"
As the chant grew louder, Stranger's pride swelled larger in his chest. Sekto was no more. Stranger dropped his body off his arms down by his own dam.
Umi walked up by him again, touching his arm, and looking up to him.
As she was about to praise him again, the earth shocked below them, thumping down heavily.
Cracks grew about the weak dam wall, spurts of water spraying out of the open wounds.
Stranger jumped down from the sill, staring below.
The dam was weak from the Grubb's attack. The dam would shatter, releasing the water back in to the valley.
Stranger moved back away from the sill, kneeling down on the ground, and hugging Umi tightly to his chest.
Grubbs below began to scramble away from the crumbling dam, waterfalls forming through the opening cracks.
"Don't let go of me, Umi..." Stranger told.
The inside became unstable, and the wall exploded outward. The office pillar also fell along.
Water exploded freely out of its prison, flooding the Mongo River, and giving the Grubbs their most sacred instrument to life.
Even if the water was free, their sacred guardian wasn't expected to live through the destruction of the water's prison. They were brought down by the demon's wrought.
_____


Fierce is the spirit of her waters.
It creates us, binds us, flows in us.
The fool who dare enslave her, beware.
She washed his life away.


The Grubbs gathered by the river's edge, watching the Steef guardian float to the snowy ridge. They assissted their savior up on dry land, calming him of the burden he had to put up with.
"Steef,"
A ring of Grubbs circled around.
Stranger slowly regained his posture, looking back to the broken dam still trickling of the river's water.
Umi stood by his side, touching his arm. She jerked her head back to the ringed rebel Grubbs staring curiously down at an object.
Stranger nodded slowly down to her, resting a hand on her shoulder comfortingly, then walking up behind the Grubbs.
He moved the ring aside with his hands, entering the ring, and staring at the torn body of Sekto laying face-down in the snow.
He sighed rumbly, inspecting upon his body carefully from top. His body was the same way preserved when the base came down upon him. He slowly scanned down, immediately stopping at his legs.
Two scrawny hooves twitched painfully near each other.
Stranger blinked.
"Huh?" he grumbled.
He knelt down to Sekto, blinking again to see if he was imagining things.
He rolled Sekto around upwards.
The Grubbs gasped along with Stranger, his jaw moving crookedly from his eyes.
"Oh no...it's the old Steef!"
He was looking upon a Steef, pale as a ghost with red bumps and blood spatter upon its face. Its eyes stared a pale-blue blankly up to the stone-cold clouds.
Stranger felt himself become defensive for some odd reason, his teeth baring slightly from his chapped lips.
The Steef came to life, releasing a painful cough in a puff of white mist.
Stranger relaxed back, the Steef blinking at Stranger gratefully.
Its mouth opened shakily.
"Is the water...free?"
The Steef spoke weakly in a shaky voice.
Stranger frowned, moving his head away from the Steef. Shame pitted his stomach. If he had known Sekto was actually a Steef...
Stranger's lip curled to a smile.
"Yeah,"
He blinked back down to the Steef.
"All free,"
The Steef blinked, a smile crept upon its bleeding lips.
"It's free..." it hazely said, its head resting back in to the snow.
The eyes of the Steef were fading to a blank white.
"Free..."
The Steef exhaled deeply once more, its head resting lifelessly on the snow.
"Free..."
The life escaped from the Steef's eyes.
Dread showered upon Stranger. A tear began to form in his eye.
But the Grubbs were around. He didn't want to show his emotion around them to give them a false impression.
His eyes stared back down seldomly, bringing his fingers upon the Steef's cold face, and down to its chest.
The Grubbs parted from Umi walking slowly up behind to Stranger. They bowed their heads respectively behind her.
Stranger balled his fists near his ribs. He was angry. Sekto was still out there, probably planning on to still rid the world of every Steef.
Umi slammed down on her knees, tears streaming down her apathetic face.
Stranger wrapped his arm around her, pulling her up on his lap, and laying his jaw over her head.
She tied her arms around his stomach, resting her head on his ribs. She knew how he felt of the elder Steef he had misleadingly killed. It was a terrible loss to his pride.
Stranger wiped her cheek with his thumb gently, cocking his head down vertically to her.
"It's ok..." he purred gently, gathering her head in his palm, and brushing her hair back with his fingers.
The Grubbs stayed quiet, gathering closer to the Steef hugging the human tightly to him.
They patted his arm confortingly, while dragging the Steef away from him so their guardian wouldn't feel any more heartbroken.
"Steef," the rebels knelt down on a knee.
Stranger's head raised to the Grubbs bowing down before him.
"We are forever in your debt. You freed our water, and dwelled the Sekto demon forevermore,"
Stranger grinned, nodding thankfully to the Grubbs, then looking out to the shining water flowing freely once again down the cloudy canyon.

Me and Stranger were lucky to survive with our very lives

Umi looked back up to Stranger, his eyes closed and his head rested upon her head.
The deed was done, and a bright future was ahead for her, and her newly-found friend.

Who knows when I'll get home. Maybe this is where I belong...
With Stranger and the Grubbs intentionally...
But that doesn't mean my journeys are over.
Oh no...
In fact...
They're beginning...all over again
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^


Last edited by Dark Elite_H2; 01-29-2006 at 02:56 PM..
Reply With Quote
  #251  
01-29-2006, 09:44 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

This is to keep you from suspense, my audience.
I will continue when I eat my lunch.
Don't worry!
The story will be finished today!
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #252  
01-29-2006, 10:05 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)



Ah NO! Another cliffhanger! C'mon DE, how much torture d'yer havta put me through!? Make Stranger beat Sekto's hide already!

By the way, like the chapter, very action packed.
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #253  
01-29-2006, 12:09 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

Sorry 'bout the long wait.
Had ter get off fer a while.
Hate it when it happens, don't'cha?
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #254  
01-29-2006, 12:16 PM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

Yeh, hate it when that happens...now are we gonna get anymore story? *looks hopeful*
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #255  
01-29-2006, 12:18 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

I told yer.
I'm gonna finish this odd-damn story, so's I can move on
And I'm dyin' to move on!
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #256  
01-29-2006, 12:23 PM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

Ok, ok...calm...find your calm center...breath in...breath out...breath in...breath out...breath in...breath out... There, all calm?
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #257  
01-29-2006, 02:56 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

And that, mt friends, is the end of my story.
Stay tuned in on the thread for the continuing story later on in the future.
Enjoy, my friends.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #258  
01-30-2006, 01:40 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

*gapes in silent awe*

.....Wow.....

That was...fantastic...just....really....fantastic....

Well done Darky mate, very well done. You should be very proud.
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #259  
01-30-2006, 02:10 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

:sighs in succession, propping back in relaxation:
Yeah...I am...
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #260  
01-30-2006, 02:16 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

Lol, laugh it up DE...laugh it up.
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #261  
01-30-2006, 02:27 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

What?
I am! Finally done with one, and ready to go on to the next!
I am so proud of myself.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #262  
01-30-2006, 11:00 AM
HobbitNinj's Avatar
HobbitNinj
Stingbee
 
: Oct 2005
: under your bed
: 82
Rep Power: 20
HobbitNinj  (10)

In the words of Keanu Reeves, "Whoa". CONGRADULATIONS D.E.!
__________________
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/5...oolcopy2lq.jpg
Truth is stranger than fan fiction.

Reply With Quote
  #263  
01-30-2006, 11:05 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

:
In the words of Keanu Reeves, "Whoa". CONGRADULATIONS D.E.!

Uh, who's Keanu Reeves? The last name is familiar...
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #264  
01-30-2006, 11:25 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

You don't know who Keanu Reeves is? Aw c'mon, bet'cha do, he's from the Matrix, main guy, called Neo...know who he is now?
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #265  
01-30-2006, 11:27 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

Oh...sorry...I don't watch the Matrix, but I do know who Neo is. The 'one' Neo.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #266  
01-30-2006, 11:29 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

Lol, yeh him. That's Keanu Reeves, he's also in Speed, erm...Adventures of Bill and Ted (damn that's old now...) and I'm sure he's in somat else...but I can't remember...
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #267  
01-30-2006, 11:41 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

I thought Keanu was a girl...at first...then you brought up Neo, and I was like OHHH...
Yeah... well, I'm gathering the imformation I had revamped so far, making sure it's that way I want it.
When it's all done, I'll repost it, then begin on the next story, and we can all live happily ever after...
:sigh: I love a happy ending...
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #268  
01-30-2006, 11:45 AM
LoboDiabloLoneWolf's Avatar
LoboDiabloLoneWolf
Sleg
 
: Aug 2005
: The moist country of the UK
: 695
Rep Power: 20
LoboDiabloLoneWolf  (10)

Har har har. Keanu, a girl. ROTFL! Nice. Don't forget to send me the revamped stuff in PM's, speaking of which, there should be one waitin' fer ya.

And another thing. If yer gonna revamp it so all the chapter is in one post, what'cha gonna do about the spare ones?
__________________

Reply With Quote
  #269  
01-30-2006, 11:52 AM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

:hums thoughtfully:
Keep them in 'ere as a token of my success.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote
  #270  
01-31-2006, 01:46 PM
Dark Elite_H2's Avatar
Dark Elite_H2
Outlaw Sniper
 
: Apr 2005
: WYYYARRGwop...Sounds fun, huh?
: 1,625
Rep Power: 22
Dark Elite_H2  (10)

Well, my friends...'tis such a sad, fluffy ending to such a wonderous story, am I right?
Well, sorry to say...it'll take a long time 'fore the next story comes up, which is a shorty story...

I apologize once again...:bows head apologetically:

:A brief silence echoes around the hollow room:

....

:A grin appears back on face, and a crafty smile shines in the eyes:

THE HELL WIT' 'DAT!


Oddworld: Stranger's Wrath
-The aftermath...-




It has been weeks since me and Stranger crawled from the wreckage of Sekto Springs Dam. The Grubbs took us in motherly, allowing us to heal from our physical and mental wounds.
I, however, had the worst mental wounds, mostly from the belief of being so far away from the place I was supposed to live. But now, it seems like an omen that I was intentionally supposed to go to some distant planet to help a complete stranger with his situations. But now, I was happy in my place, with a friend to stay in comfort with.
Days after our recuperation from our wounds.
The Grubb Queen allowed us to move in next to her home, and the Grubb rebels agreed to protect us until we were fully healed.
Stranger...however, has become very...affectionate...to me. It was certainly an odd feeling, but it somewhat felt...good. It has been long ago since I was treated such a way, when my father was still alive...


The Grubb Queen bowed respectfully to Stranger, then trotting off away down the path through the village.
It was late winter, snowy patches blotching the green green grass below, awaiting its time to pop out of its icy barrier.
Stranger smiled to the back of the Queen's head, slowly closing the door on the dark grey evening.
Healing cuts across his face scabbed a darker brown. He licked his bottom lip, covered in small splits, turning his eyes to the front living room.
A small straw-woven couch was folded out to a long bed, a woven tapestry blanket made neatly along the cream sheets. Sitting on top of the blanket was the young human, her hands folded in her lap, and her wide ocean-blue eyes staring stiffly at the flat grass floor.
Umi's hair was scraggly from when she returned from the wreckage of the dam. Her cheeks were blotched with scabs, but her eyes were untouched. Earlier scars blended in with new scars that she could add to her collection of unwanted skin features.
She was changed out of her tattered denim vest and red shirt, and her pants torn with little bite marks. She was dressed in a soft, jade-green long shirt, and short pajama pants matching the shirt, and belted with strings of beads.
Stranger trotted in to the front room, scratching the back of his dry, irritated neck. He sat next to Umi, sighing exhaustedly with her.
He smoothed the back of her head, her frizzy hair blending back in with her golden-blonde hair.
She sniffed, blinking once to stop her eyes drying irritatingly.
"I'm tired..." she said small.
Stranger smiled, stopping his hand gently on the back of her neck.
"You should rest then," he gently said.
Umi didn't look to him. Her eyes shoone holographically under the blanket of night darkening the sky outside.
Stranger pulled over the blanket to the first pillow, patting his hand on the sheet invitingly.
Umi didn't hesitate. She was tired. She didn't get much sleep when she was in rehabilitation. The dreams of Sekto kept bothering her conscious, which kept her up in the middle of the night.
She lay sideways on her ribs, still blinking in blank space.
Stranger tucked the blanket over her, messing around gently with her hair.
Umi sighed, finally blinking away from the spot she stared at endlessly.
"It's been a hell of a week, huh?" Umi spoke.
Stranger nodded, curling a lock of frizzled hair around his finger.
"Yeah..."
Umi looked away for a moment, then looked back up to Stranger.
"I-I can't stop thinkin' 'bout Sekto...I mean-"
Stranger hushed her, putting a finger on her mouth.
"Don't think of that, kid. It'll give yer nightmares again," he said low.
Umi frowned, sitting up on her elbows.
"But, I can't. I mean, if Sekto wasn't the Steef, then where could he be? Could he be still up to his plans? What if he came after you!?" her voice raised.
Stranger frowned at her, blinking his luminous green eyes disappointingly.
"Umi," he brushed the hair from her face.
"I know it bothers yeh, that Sekto is still alive...somewhere recuperating. But, he could've easily given up. He knows he got his ass whuped by me an' you, and he knows we'll be there if he even moves to his plot 'gain,"
Umi's face relaxed from the tension scrunching it up. She blinked hopefully up to Stranger, relaxing back down on her pillow.
Stranger pulled the blanket over her shoulders again.
"I promise yeh. Nothing'll happen ter me," he said.
Umi's heavy eyes began to close, she leaving the real world, and taking up in her conscious of dreams.
Stranger smiled sweetly down to her, leaning down to her cheek. He kissed her gently, lifting back up.
"Sleep now, my little one..." he whispered.
__________________
The Stranger's girl


My arts page...check it out XP

My main page ^^

Reply With Quote


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 








 
 
- Oddworld Forums - -