escape from necrum mines (chapter book)

mad bull · #1 10-18-2001, 06:24 AM

chapter 1 about me
well i'm in a little trouble here i'm trapped in a realy protected place! sligs, slogs, zaps, grinding thingies, plus lots of other stuff. i've got to escape now before i get killed! ok here we go wait i all most forgot hi im rell i am a slave i mine for bones all day my arm is brocken oh no eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh i was just getting bashed by a slig not again eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh i beter get outa here

[ October 18, 2001: Message edited by: vice president aslik ]

Gluk Schmuck · #2 10-18-2001, 05:20 PM

exellent fic

Abe's son · #3 10-18-2001, 07:20 PM

that SUCKED

Cool Paramite · #4 10-19-2001, 11:08 AM

Intelligent text....

mad bull · #5 10-20-2001, 01:37 AM

chapter 2
now that its the sligs lunch brack i can excape so i run over to a zap and turn it off then a slog chacing after me i run as fast as i call i fell down a holl i was knocked out!!!!!!

mad bull · #6 10-20-2001, 01:39 AM

thi s is a short chapter book

Cool Paramite · #7 11-01-2001, 01:11 PM

GREAT STORY! (Ironic)

Robbo · #8 11-01-2001, 03:50 PM

I'm amazed at the subtleness in your plot!

Cool Paramite · #9 11-04-2001, 12:39 PM

IT'S THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!! (200000% ironic)

***Xavier*** · #10 11-04-2001, 12:51 PM

It's special, very nice

General Drippik · #11 11-18-2001, 02:05 AM

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Originally posted by Abe's son:
that SUCKED

Give him a break! He's only 9 years old!!!

Elum · #12 11-20-2001, 12:41 AM

I could put together a sentence when I was 9.