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mad bull 10-18-2001 06:24 AM
escape from necrum mines (chapter book)
 
chapter 1 about me
well i'm in a little trouble here i'm trapped in a realy protected place! sligs, slogs, zaps, grinding thingies, plus lots of other stuff. i've got to escape now before i get killed! ok here we go wait i all most forgot hi im rell i am a slave i mine for bones all day my arm is brocken oh no eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh i was just getting bashed by a slig not again eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh i beter get outa here

[ October 18, 2001: Message edited by: vice president aslik ]

Gluk Schmuck 10-18-2001 05:20 PM
exellent fic

Abe's son 10-18-2001 07:20 PM
that SUCKED

Cool Paramite 10-19-2001 11:08 AM
Intelligent text....

mad bull 10-20-2001 01:37 AM
chapter 2
now that its the sligs lunch brack i can excape so i run over to a zap and turn it off then a slog chacing after me i run as fast as i call i fell down a holl i was knocked out!!!!!!

mad bull 10-20-2001 01:39 AM
thi s is a short chapter book :p :p :p :D

Cool Paramite 11-01-2001 01:11 PM
GREAT STORY! (Ironic)

Robbo 11-01-2001 03:50 PM
I'm amazed at the subtleness in your plot!

Cool Paramite 11-04-2001 12:39 PM
IT'S THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!! (200000% ironic)

Xavier 11-04-2001 12:51 PM
It's special, very nice

General Drippik 11-18-2001 02:05 AM
:
Originally posted by Abe's son:
that SUCKED
Give him a break! He's only 9 years old!!!

:mad:

Elum 11-20-2001 12:41 AM
I could put together a sentence when I was 9. ;)