Work at Rupture Farms

[tybie_odd]

Vince: *to Ammy* Right! Good idea. *walks over to Cael*

Vince: Hey um--Cael, was it?--wanna come to the Rest Room with Amy and me? We're gonna kick back awhile, it's been a long day. Probably a long trip here for you too, huh? We can all relax and get to know each other. Whaddaya say?

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Meanwhile, in the Storage Room....

Jayne: *yelling at no one* There's gotta be one somewhere! All these boxes and not a single---Aha! Here we go! *pulls a Blitzpacker out of one of the crates* Well, it's a little bigger than I was looking for, but that doesn't bother me! *chuckles insanely through her pain* Well bubba, ya mess with my Muse you mess with me! Ready or not, here I come! *loads the Blitzpacker and runs wildly for the Stockyards, entirely berserk*

[The Red Muse]

Jammer:*backs a few steps further away from Shadow* What the-? *turns to see Harc, only to find him gone* ...tch, wuss.
*turns back to Shadow* So , you're the critter that the vykker was looking for. A lot of noise for nothing, eh?
Hehheh-*snort*-heh-*snort*-hehheh!
And now, you're telling me what to do, right? ...right... Why don't you, just run along now, before I get mad!
I have some Weeds that need to be plucked...and - huh? *hears incoming footsteps*
Awww, don't tell me that idiot #7 slug is coming back for more orders?

RM: *sees Jammer's figure up ahead* Jammer! You pr*ck!

Jammer: *clearly surprised* What's this? If it isn't Muse boy, the talking Weed. He seems mighty upset about something... Wonder what I did now. *sniggers and glares at Shadow* See? Weed-boy here doesn't need your protection... It seems that he is almost keen to start the duel.

RM: *runs up to Jammer, his eyes full of anger* What did you do to her?!

Jammer: To who? Ya mean your girl, that Jayne? Tsk, tsk, tsk... I would never touch her, not even with a six feet pole! *laughs vigorously* ...no, but seriously, Muse, why'd ya come here? Plead for mercy?

RM: *growling*...never!

Jammer: *with sarcastic voice* Ooh! Stop it, you're scaring me! Weed-boy is mad at me, won't somebody help me?!

RM: Shut up!

Jammer: Be careful Muse, you might hurt yourself with all that yelling...

RM: Grrrr....!!

Jammer: Oh, I'm sorry! Am I annoying you?

RM: That's it! *plunges himself at Jammer*

Jammer: *smiles viciously* ...now we're talking... *steps out of RM's way and took a hold of his arm, when he stubled past him*
So! *pulls RM up and rams him against a wall, squeezing RM between himself and the solid wall*
You though that you could defeat me just like that, hmmm?
You defeat me? A trained guard, no a soldier!

RM: *gasping for air* ...Y-you! I'm not...--afraid of you! *bites Jammer to the shoulder*

Jammer: AaHH! *tosses RM aside, holding his bleeding shoulder* You little piece of sh*t! Consider yourself as dead!

RM: *quickly runs to Shadow* Listen carefully my friend! Go and find me a gun! It doesn't matter what you bring,just please, go and bring me a weapon! Can you do it?

Jammer: *yelling to RM, totally berserked* Come 'ere you creep and let's settle this once and for all!!

RM: *glares at Shadow, before going to Jammer* Please, be quick!

Jammer: *pulls out his BlitzPacker and points it at Muse* ...time to die!

RM: *runs towards Jammer, still yelling to Shadow* Go and get me a gun, dammit!

Jammer: *places his finger to the trigger*

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Ammy: *to Vince* Hey, do you mind if me and Adrian go before you guys? I'm tired... *hungs her head down, pretending sleepy*

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[Latamire_Munch]

Shadow- No Muse don't fight. (listens to Muse's command) (nods and jumps into shadow as if it were a swimming pool and disappears) (a few seconds later he returns with two blitzpackers) One for you, (he throws Muse the gun as his eyes go red again and points the other blitzpacker at Jammer) One for me!

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Cael- Alright Vince. (follows Vince to the rest room) So, got any tips about working at this place?

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Drogin- (is struggling with the boxes because he's too short and the boxes are a bit big)

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Harc- (runs in where Trask is playing his guitar) Trask! Shadow and Jammer are fighting I think! Jayne and Muse wants to fight him too!

Trask- Psha! Let's go big guy, they might need our help.

Harc- Sh-should I tell the boss?

Trask- Heck no! If he finds out, we'll all get in trouble! Hurry, let's go (they both run out)

[slogster]

*frank is going to the rest room when he turns the courner to find jammer,rm and shadow*

frank:woh wat the hells going on here

*frank is looking at the 3 of them with a puzzled face*

meanwhile at the rest room

climer:ah peace at last phew ZZZzzzzzzzZZZZZZZZZZzz

slier:yep ill do that aswell how about u cruncher??????

cruncher:howls and falls asleep

[tybie_odd]

Vince: Tips? Yeah. Stay away from a certain jerk named Smudge. And Jammer. But the rest of us are pretty decent. But watch out for two certain mushy-heads named Red Muse and Jayne--they're strange. I mean, a slig with one of our kind? Just doesn't seem too natural if you ask me. --Ain't that right gramps?

Correl: *after sleepily following the four of them to the Rest Room, he collapses on a bedroll and falls asleep*

Vince: Oh great. --*to Cael* Yeah, and watch out for Gramps here; he's always falling asleep, even if he hasn't been lifting boxes!

Adrian: *still dreaming peacefully in Ammy's arms*

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Smudge: *walking on an overhead metal-grid platform above the stockyards. Looks down, sees RM and Jammer fighting* Alright! I didn't miss anything. *sits and hangs his mechanical legs over the edge to watch the fight*

Jayne: *running up behind him, still lugging the Blitzpacker with her* Get out of my way! Outta my way!

Smudge: Huh?---WAAAH!

Jayne: *shoves Smudge violently aside, leaps off the platform and falls magnificently on top of Jammer*

Smudge: What the heck--?!

Jayne: JAMMER! *climbs quickly off of him and aims and readies her gun* SAY YOUR PRAYERS!

Smudge: --what the...?

Jayne: YOU'RE NOT GOING TO HURT MUSE ANYMORE! *closes her eyes tight like she can't watch, then squeezes the rapid-fire trigger*

Smudge: OH MY ODD! *jumps down off the metal-grid platform* HELP! TRASK! DROGIN! --somebody!!!

[The Red Muse]

Jammer: *eyes widen with terror as he sees Jayne with the gun* What- the-hell...
*hears the gun go off, soon feels as the bullets tore through the flesh beneath his chest.Howling in pain tryng not to collapse on the floor*

RM: *Watching all this, mouth wide open*...Wha------? ....Jayne?...
JAYNE!!?? *drops his own Blitz Packer and runs to Jayne, squeezing the gun out of her hands* Calm down, Jayne!
*his voice turns angry, for the first time in his life*
Good Odd, Jayne, what's wrong with you?! You could've got yourself killed !! Did you even think about that, huh?

Jammer: ---Ah...-ha-ha... *with deep, growling voice*how cute... Muse boy... Your girl... has got some...talent... She would've killed me, if she only had her eyes open...Haha-ha...ha...
*starts shaking* So... *with thundering voice* YOU TWO LITTLE BRATS THOUGHT YOU COULD KILL ME??!! You even had to bring back-up, Shadow-boy here...right? Just to take care of me...? You three are all so pathetic! Especially you Muse, you just didn't have to guts to come here alone! No wonder you didn't get a flying license... Mark my words, Weed-boy... You will never, ever become nothing more than a filthy floor-waxer! You are bottom filth! Mother Skillya will have your head!
You are a shame to all the sligs on Oddworld!! You are a shame to your own kind Muse!

RM: ...at least I have my sanity left...

Jammer:... What were you planning to do now...? Leave RuptureFarms, move to a forest, start a family? Is that what you were planning?
...You know what Mother thinks about sligs who accompany mudokon scrubs, don't you?

RM: *closes his eyes, when he realized that Jammer was speaking the truth* ...Yes, I do. They're sent before Mother and never to be returned...

Jammer: ...yeah... you're so right... *secretly picks up his Blitz Packer that he had dropped earlier* So let me do you a favour... and release you from the shame! *fires the gun at RM, hitting him into the abdomen*

RM: ...ugh... *stares at Jayne, before bringing his head down to see his stomach area* ...I'm... I'm bleeding... *puts his finger on the wound* ...I'm...

*brings his head back up, looking at Jayne with his glazed eyes, not saying a thing, just staring at her*

Jammer: *grinning victoriously* You'll thank me... for that... *falls down on his knees, soon dropping limp onto the floor*

RM: *still standing,but swaying threateningly*

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Ammy: *arrives to the rest room* Ahhh... finally... *runs to her bed* Night time- the best time... *places Adrian on her pillow* Wait for me for a sec, okay? I'll have to go and wash my face first!
*walks sleepily into the toilet, letting some warm water to flow into the sink* ...wonder... where Muse and the others are? I haven't seen them in a while... *keeps staring at the water flow, completely forgetting where she was or what she was doing*
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[Latamire_Munch]

Trask- (after seeing Jammer and Muse get shot) Oh no!

Harc- (is speechless)

Shadow- (drops his gun, is silent at first, then in blind rage, jumps onto Jammer, punching his head with unnatural strength)

Trask- Shadow! Stop! You'll kill him!

Shadow- (keeps punching, Jammer's head begins to bleed)

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Drogin- (hears a gunshot, drops a box and it lands on top of him) Ack! I'm stuck!

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Cael- Well, I'm glad to have met you Vince. (sits down in rest room near Ammy) Hello Ammy.

[dripik]

#7 Slig: "What is all that noise? It looks like gunfire. I better check it out."

*runs to the Sligs, Jayne and Shadow and starts shouting loudly*

#7 Slig: "WHAT THE ODD IS GOING ON HERE? I'm working with these primitive creatures? You should sink in the swamp of shame! Jammer is too aggressive, Jayne is getting berserk, Muse wants to take revenge and free Jayne from fear, and Shadow is helping his friend by beating Jammer. But HOW? With guns and fists! If the boss learns this, he will be totaly crazy! Thanks to you all. I'm sorry, but in this case I must tell him about all this disaster."




ooc: this is getting fun! The strong... The weak... The innocent... (oops... Star Wars again. )

[slogster]

frank:well u see #7 slig all i was doing was going to the rest room and i walked into this lot and they were arguing a bout some sort of duel of some sort well i was going to tell the boss any way if it got dangirus but youre coming hey im a eyed wittness and plus im luky i wasent noticed cos if i was i would probbly have being shot by one of them i must be dreaming my first day here and 2 more accedents i must bring bad luck to this place

[The Red Muse]

Ammy: *snaps out of her trance-like stage, and turns to Cael* Oh! Oh-hi, hello. Didn't see you come...*peeks out of the toilet's doorway to see Vince* Ummm... so ,Cael was it? What do you think of RuptureFarms? Pretty cool place, huh? *shuts the water off and yawns*
Anyway,... how about if we go to bed now... it's been a long day...
...Hey! Wanna sleep in the bed next to me?
*eyes all lit up with excitement*
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RM: *still standing and staring at Jayne, blood flowing out of the wound and onto the cold metal floor*

Jammer:*still alive, making low noises*

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((ooc: which one should I let go? Jammer or RM?...help me decide ppl!^____~. BTW, I've posted some new 'art' to the "official art thread"^___^!!))

[slogster]

ok i dont think its clear why my charecter(gofey the glukstar)
got arms well i talked it over with dripik and we decided i should post his dairy here ok

23january1989

gofey:weve almost got the formular ready to creat limbs
slig:boss we are ready to test the potion on the slog
gofey:well do it then
sligk boss
slogw howling
gofey:it needs more added to it
sligk boss
march231990
slig:boss we must test it again on u cos all the slogs are after that abe guy
gofeyk ill take the sample.um.um.um.ah
the next day
argh those stupid sligs have over done it im growing arms wen i wanted to be mussleer those stupid sligs

[Abe's son]

(lookie)

*somewere in the factory...*

Recycler: *CLANK WIRRRRRR POONT!!* *spits AS out*

AS: *flops onto the ground burised and scrached* ....ow...my tail...has...not feeling....ow

*AS crawls along looking for something*

AS:....hmm...i could...make a...YES!!

*crawls into the bathroom...*

*CLANK* *SMASH* *crank crank crank* *THUMP*

AS: AT LAST!! *drives out on a Toilet Bowl with wheels on it, a steering wheel, lights, and a rocket pack attached to the back* ....

*drives along until he hears ammys words fading into the darkness around him*

AS: *turns on his lights until he reachs a lit corridor* ... *bripity bripity bripity* *turns Toiletmobile off* *gets out and looks around* .... *looks at his "car"* ....why me...

[Latamire_Munch]

((ooc- Neither! I like RM more, but keep um both!))

Shadow- (growls like a rabid animal, still hitting Jammer) I'LL KILL YOU!!!

(All of the sudden........Jeff walks in with ten Interns!!!)

(Everything in the room seems to stop)

Jeff- Ah ha! I knew it was here! And look, beating up on the employees! Interns....shackle him! (the Interns surround Shadow and wrap him in heavy chains)

Shadow-(in a whimpering tone) No! I want to stay with my friends! NO! please! (is gagged)

Jeff- That will shut him up! Sorry for the trouble he has caused. We will be leaving now. (starts to walk out)

Trask-(tries to run after Shadow, Harc grabs his shoulder)

Harc- Don't Trask, it's not worth it. There's nothing we can do.

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Cael- Sure, um, which is your bed?

[tybie_odd]

*Smudge watches Shadow's capture apathetically, Jayne's attention is completely absorbed by RM's wound*

Smudge: *to #7 Slig* Tell me about it! I'm getting Arnie NOW! *runs off full-speed for Arnie's Office*

Jayne: ....*a moment of horrified disbelief as her tear-filled eyes follow a drop of blood down RM's chest to the floor* ....

Jayne: *SCREAMS and falls to her knees, her clenched fists shaking from her sheer emotion alone, her face gone white with fear as she stares at the fatal-looking wound*

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*Smudge runs up to Arnie, out of breath from all the action even though his mechanical pants did the running*

Smudge: BOSS! ....Quick....Doctor....Jammer bleeeding to death...and Red Muse....big fight down at the Stockyards....Please call for help! We need a doctor. I'll find Rick and the other mudokons. We...*huff*...we gotta stop them from--from killing each other! *runs to the Rest Room*

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Jayne: ODD! NO! MUSE, DON'T DIE! DON'T DIE!!!

*Jayne rips off the hem of her loincloth to bandage RM's wound, but the scrap of cloth is quickly drenched in blood*

Jayne: I'm sorry! I'm sorry Muse, this is all my fault! Don't die! Don't die, I can't make it without you--don't die! *her voice breaks into violent sobs and she can't talk anymore, but kneels there desperately holding the blood-soaked rag against RM's wound, burrying her face into his arm and half-audibly cursing herself between fits of tears*

Jayne: ....I'm sorry Muse....

Jayne's Thoughts: "If he dies...I'll never forgive myself...NEVER!"

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Vince: *pretending to watch his toes as he listens in on Ammy and Cael's conversation*

*The door of the Rest Room is suddenly kicked in with a loud BANG!*

Smudge: SCRUBS! GETCHER LAZY A**ES OUT HERE AND FOLLOW ME!

Vince: --What the?

Adrian: *startled awake* --rrrr...

Smudge: AMMY! VINCE! CORLO-WHATSYAFACE! And uh--YOU! GET OVER HERE! --LIFE AND DEATH SITUATION! PRONTO! LET'S MOVE!

Correl: *wakes up startled* Hum?! Wha?

Vince: C'mon Gramps, let's go...*gets up and runs after Smudge*

Smudge: --Follow me! *takes off toward the Stockyards at full pace*

Correl: --Wait up!

Adrian: ....rrrr?

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Jayne's Thoughts: "Odd....if you're there....save him....save Muse....Don't leave me alone! I'm sorry I shot Jammer.....but don't take Muse from me....Don't!"

Jayne: You're gonna be okay--*sniff*--Muse. See? *not believing herself, she starts bawling again*

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Smudge: Vince, you and the others go on ahead. I gotta look for Rick. Go to the Stockyards!

Vince: Alright. *keeps running*

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*Vince arrives at the Stockyards and sees Shadow getting lugged away*

Vince: --wha? ...*notices RM* --WHA? ...*notices Jammer* --WHA?! Okay, well, someone's gotta save Shadow!

Vince: *to Jammer and RM* Hold on guys, the others will be here to help you soon! *grabs a Blitzpacker and runs to the nearest air vent and climbs in, to follow Shadow from above*

Vince's Thoughts: "Death, kidnap, murder...I don't get paid enough to put up with all this!"

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((ooc: TRM, if you kill either one of those charactors, you're in DEEP trouble, you hear me? DEEP trouble! *gets scared* ....This is too much suspense!))

[dripik]

ooc: relax, I will not kill any of the characters


*Rick sits in a corner in the hallway and sleeps*

Rick: "ZZZzzzZZZzzzZZzZZ... Wha... What's that? I hear too many footsteps. More than usual. Whoa, Interns!"

*hides in a shadow and waits until Jeff, Shadow, and the Interns leave*

Rick: "They have captured the Shadow! But wait... I don't think so that this Shadow guy is a ghost-like thing. His voice looks like a... Mudokon! He's a Mudokon! I must help him!"

*starts sneaking after them*

Rick: "Hey! What's that noise from the vents?"

*climbs up into the vents*

Rick: "Is someone there?"

[The Red Muse]

Ammy:*few seconds after Smudge&Co. left the rest room* W-w-w-what's going on? *to Cael* I-...-I think we should go too... C'mon... let's go see what's this all about... Adrian, *looks at Adrian and waves her hand towards the door* let's go boy!

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RM: *all pale and shivering, watching Jayne's every movement*
...J-Jayne,... Don't-...don't blame yourself... Don't you blame yourself about this... Listen, ...*graps Jayne's hand* Jammer...-He needs more help-...than I do... Go, and take care of him first... I'll...-I'll be fine...*tries to smile* Trust me... *slowly turns around to see Shadow, only to find him gone* ...Shadow...-where...- where is ...he? *turns back to Jayne, looking solemn, standing for a few seconds just staring at her and finally falling backwards, landing roughly on the floor. Silent and motionless, but still breathing*

Jammer: *growling and coughing blood*

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((ooc: ...Okay... okay... both Muse and Jammer will be just fine, ya?(Noooo....too much FFX!!!^___~)))

[Latamire_Munch]

((ooc-lol Wakka!!))

Shadow- (still being carried away, and shouting to all the RF workers) Listen! My friends! I can still help! I have control over my energy, and I can help! (Shadow closes his eyes and his body starts to glow with yellow energy. Suddenly two pulsating balls of light emerge from Shadow's body, one goes to RM, one goes to Jammer. In one dying last breath.) I'm...I'm sorry....for what I've done......Thank you......my friends. (And Shadow disappears)

Trask-WHAT?! NO!!!

Harc- No! Where did he go?

Jeff- That little-......Oh well, he was to be terminated anyway. (leaves with interns)

Trask and Harc- (turn to see Jammer and RM's wounds start to heal like magic) Woah!

(Cael and Ammy enter) Cael- Oh my Odd! What happened?!

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Drogin- (still under large box) Ugh! What's going on! I'm still stuck! HELP!!

[Abe's son]

*AS starts up Tolitmobile and drives off and starts to hear yelling*

AS: Huh?? What the heck is that!? *drives twords the noise*

*finds Drogin stuck under box*

Drogin: ahh!! Help!!

AS: ah!! What the heck!? Hold on I'll think of something! Uh...*looks around* Crap!!

(lol..Tolitmobile...)

[dripik]

ooc: Abe's son, I must alert you that you have controlled another member's character. That's againist the rules. And you didn't even asked to join, and I can't see your character's form either. If you don't correct these mistakes, you'll have to leave this RPG. Sorry.



*Rick spots Vince in the air vent*

Rick: "Hey, Vince! What are you doing here? Are you following the Shadow? Come down, we should follow them on floor."

*jumps out from the air vent*

Rick: "Hey, where is Shadow? He was here with the Interns a couple of minutes ago..."

[Latamire_Munch]

((ooc- hey everyone, i will be absent for the next 3 to 4 days for my grandmother's funeral, so just keep it going with out me. If you want, you can use my characters while I'm gone))

[tybie_odd]

((ooc: Sorry to hear about your grandma, Lat_Munch . May you find comfort to ease her passing.))


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Vince: Rick! *jumps down to him* Yeah, where did Shadow go? I don't see where he could've got to.... Didn't the vykker say he was an experiment? I hope he didn't....vaporize or something....*begins to fear the worst*.....Shadow! Shadow, where are you~?

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Jayne: *still crying, kneeling by RM where he lay on the floor* B-but I can't l-leave you Muse....I....I....

Jayne's Thoughts: "...haven't I screwed up enough for one day? I ought to just listen to Muse--he probably knows what to do better than me anyway."

Jayne's Counter-Thoughts: "But I can't leave him! Jammer doesn't deserve to live anyway! I have to help Muse!"

Jayne's Thoughts: "But if you love someone you listen to them, right? I have to do what he says."

Jayne: O-Okay......for you.....Muse....*she grudgingly lets go of RM's hand, but kisses his brow before she leaves, dropping a tear on his shoulder*

*Jayne walks warily up to Jammer, half afraid*

Jayne: J-Jammer? ...Um....*kneels beside him, but not too close* ...H-here....l-let me help you....

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Smudge: I give up! Where are these muds when you need 'em? *starts to head back to the accident, but comes across Drogin and AS on the way*

Smudge: Hey, you guys need some help...? *helps AS lift the box off of Drogin* ...There!

Smudge: *to AS, looking him over* ...What the--? Buddy, you okay? What's with the toilet!? Nevermind. I gotta go--*to Drogin* You gonna be okay? I'll come back for you, alright? There's an emergency in the Stockyards. Be right back! *resumes running to the Stockyards*

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Adrian: Arrrrr, rrufff! *runs a little ahead and starts scurrying about, sniffing many different trails as he goes*

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Jayne: *tears off some of the back-tie of her loincloth to make another bandage and, trying to keep her hands from shaking, presses it firmly but gently onto Jammer's wound*

Jayne's Thoughts: "Blood...so much blood.....blood I spilled..... What's scarrier, having to tend Jammer's wounds or knowing I made them? I've become a monster....hurting my own co-workers....even if we didn't get along so well, it's no reason to spill Lifeblood. I was trying to save Muse, but in the end I've done nothing but caused more pain."

*Correl finally arrives and glances quickly over the scene*

Correl: What happened here?!

Jayne: ..... *closes her eyes*

Correl: *sigh* I guess I should get the First Aid kit. *heads back to the Rest Room to fetch it*

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((ooc: *wrings hands* Awwwgh, now Shadow's threatening to die? You guys stop scaring me!! lol ))

[The Red Muse]

((ooc:That's sad to hear Latamire- it always hurts to lose someone you love... Hey, I don't have the time to continue the game/story, but I'll get back to it later.))

[Latamire_Munch]

((ooc- I'm back folks! BTW, Shadow did die. Sorry, it was my plan to have him leave one way or another))

BIC----

Trask- Look! Muse and Jammer, they're getting better! Shadow sacrificed his own life to save them...now he's gone...we have no way to thank him.

Harc- (looks at the ground sadly)

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Cael - (to Ammy) Let's see what's going on! (runs into place where everything's happening) Wow! What'd I miss?!

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Drogin- (finally squeezes himself out of his pants, leaving his pants trapped under the box.) Oh, great. (Starts to crawl, slowly but surely out of the room. Suddenly, he sees someone coming.)



New character (sorry, couldnt help myself)

Name- Crank
Species- Slig
Age- 21
Sex- Male
Personality- Mean, cruel, but smart.
History- He was Drogin's bully where they used to work before he came to work at RF.

Crank- (sees Drogin and walks up) Well, well, if it isn't the little grub. After we ran you out of the last place, I didn't think you had the guts to work again. (sees that he's pantless) Aww, did the little sliggie lose his pants? Want me to carry you? Here you go. (picks up Drogin and throws him into a wall) Oops, sorry didn't realize how light you were. Hey, you work here, where's the boss's office?

Drogin- (lifts his body up) Wh-why do you wanna know?

Crank- Because, grub, not that its any business of yours, I'm getting a job here, heh heh.

Drogin- (hangs head in fear)

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((ooc- I had to make a more permanent bad boy character. Jeff and his interns just wasn't doing it for me ))

[tybie_odd]

((ooc: *weeps for Shadow*))

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Vince: No....he can't....he's not---*stops himself from talking so that his shaking voice won't reveal his emotions* .....

Vince's Thoughts: ....Shadow.....no.....

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Correl: *comes back to Jayne* I've brought the--hey, what's happening? It looks like they're getting better fast!

Jayne: *after hearing Trask's explanation* Shadow? He's---dead?

Jayne's Thoughts: This really is all my fault...I was supposed to protect Shadow, and now I've failed him, and not done any good for Muse or--Jammer--anyway...

*Jayne squints back tears and, totally oblivious to her actions, rests her crying head on Jammer's body in dispair*

Correl: *to Cael* You didn't miss nothing, deary. Just a bunch of childish quarrels. But then, that's what you get when you mess with these low-down sligs---

Jayne: Stop it! Stop! I've had enough! If you don't like my friends, then--then-- *she falls back into hushed sobs and, seeing Jammer and RM's wounds healing, pulls herself back against a metal wall and tries in vain to forget her guilt*

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((ooc: at least we have Crank now...he looks cool .... ok, I feel better now))

[The Red Muse]

((ooc:It took me a quite while before I had the time to reply, sorry about that... ;P))

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RM: *groaning* Oh my head... *slowly opens his eyes* ... -.....?
....wh- am I dead? Is this heaven? ...*lifts his upper body* No... Wait-.... *sees Jayne weeping against the wall* ...Jayne... ?

RM: (...If I'm still here... that means I survived...!) *looks at his wound, now reduced only to a mere scar* (No wound... But why is Jayne crying?) *remains still, keeping his eyes on Jayne*

Jammer: Mmmmhhh... yeah... a little lower.... *opens his eyes in a flash* .... What's this...? If this is supposed to be heaven, it sure looks crappy... -Hey! What the hell are all of you doin' in my afterlife!
*glares at Correl, who just happened to be close* Yo, old fart! Get your ass over here and give me a hand! I need to get up!

RM: *silently pulls himself* ...Jayne....? *limps over to Jayne, holding his abdomen* ...Jayne...-? *places his hand on her shoulder*
C-can you hear me...-? Are you-.....okay?

Jammer: *to Muse* Oh shut up Weed!

RM: *ignores Jammer* ... *keeps looking at Jayne, still shaking a bit*

Ammy: *standing next to Cael,with mouth wide-open and tear filled eyes* ........ ...... ...... -no.... Where did he go....-?

RM: *ignoring all the voices around him, he presses his cold body against Jayne's delicate frame, softly wrapping his arms around her* ...Jayne-- please--- please stop crying...


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((ooc: Darn, I'm running low on time,again.... Sorry I left this post rather, unfinished... but I still gotta do my essay about esters... yay... ))

[Latamire_Munch]

Trask- (suddenly loses control of his anger and punches Jammer as hard as he can) YOU! This is all your fault! If you weren't such a jerk, Shadow would still be alive! When are you going to grow up Jammer?!

Harc- Please calm down Trask.

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Cael- Where's Vince, (calls out) Vince!

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Drogin- (after unwillingly shows Crank the direction of the boss's office, crawls slowly to the rest room and curls up in his bed and sobs softly to himself)

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Crank- (knocks on Arnie's door) Yo boss! I need a job!

[tybie_odd]

Vince: *startled out of his silent mourning by Cael's voice* --...Cael? *follows the voice*

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Adrian: *paces in cirlces around Ammy's feet, whining, not understanding why everyone is sad*

*Vince arrives*

Vince: Cael? You okay? *tries to hide the stinging sorrow of Shadow's passing*

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Correl: *to Jammer* Scum belongs on the ground, fool. *walks off a ways angrily, then chuckles when Trask punches Jammer*

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Jayne: *sniff* --I-- *sniff* --this is all my, my fault Muse--If it weren't for me this--this never would have happened... *sniff* ... *her sobbs quiet down as RM holds her. She glances at his scar* ...Are--are you okay? I'm so sorry... *traces the wound delicately with the tip of her finger* ...I always cause you so much trouble.....I'm sorry.....*closes her eyes to think over again what happened* ..... .....I think it's time I faced my own problems for myself for a change. ...Thank you for protecting me. *rising, she brushes his brow with a light kiss* ...I'll be back soon, okay? ...

*Swallowing back her fear, Jayne cautiously approaches Jammer with quiet composure and determination*

Jayne's Thoughts: What's done is done--I can't change the insane rage I went into, or the danger I put Red Muse in. I can't change the pain he's suffered trying to protect me, or the hurt he's endured because of my fear of Jammer. All I can do now is challenge that fear--maybe overcome it, and then try to set my wrongs right. .....Here goes nothin'...

Jayne: Jammer ---*exteneds her hand to him where he lay, abandoned by Correl*---here, allow me. *looks him directly in the eyes, unblinking*

[Latamire_Munch]

Cael- (to Vince) Oh, Vince... (Takes him in her arms for comfort) I know I've only been here for a little bit, but you knew Shadow. I was thinking , maybe there is something we could all do. Like in memory of him or something.

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Trask- (turns away from Jayne as she attempts to help Jammer. He has so many feelings inside. Sadness, anger, rage, pity, loss, he doesn't know which one to show, so he runs out of the room.)

Harc- (doesn't know what to think. Just stares blankly at Jammer and Muse)

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Trask- (storm into the rest room and hears a slight crying sound) (all his mixed emotions turns to worry when he sees Drogin on his bed) (He calls softly to him) Hey.....small fry? What's wrong?

Drogin- Eh! (realizing that Trask is there and wipes off his tears feeling quite embarrassed) Nothing.

Trask- Why you cryin'? Upset about Shadow?

Drogin- (sits up) Shadow? What happened to Shadow?

Trask- (cocks his head to one side) You mean you don't know?...........Shadow is.......dead...

(in moment that seemed like forever, Drogin just stared into the red eyes of Trask's mask (i rhymed!!!). Suddenly, the little slig jumped out of his bed and ran out of the rest room as fast as his pantess body could go. The next place he found himself was on the roof of Rupture Farms, so high in the air, he almost couldn't breath)

Drogin- (screams at the top of his lungs) ODD!!! Why do you keep doing this to me?! Are you just teasing me?! Is this all a game?! First you torture me by giving me this deformed body, then you put me in hell with my first home, then I guess you had a break when there was a time I actually made friends I could keep! Now! Now look what you've done! Bringing my past here to rehaunt me, and causing the one being on Oddworld I thought could understand me for being different to die! WHY ODD, WHY?!!!!! (steps dangerously closer to the edge)

[Fuzzle Guy]

On the website I am making, you can type in your name & it will come out with your Mudokon name. So I have wrote my mudokon name.


Name: chibble

Species: Scrab (Just because scrabs are my farorite. Not because I like icing)

Age: 4000 000 000 000 (Now thats one mighty old Scrab. I'm supprised that I can still run, let alone walk.)

Personality: Kind ( Because he is too old to fight back & argue),

Fuzzle Guy

[The Red Muse]

((ooc: welcome aboard Fuzzle Guy!! n_n))

Jammer: *is silent after Trask punched him, only waiting him to leave* ....-------
*watches as Jayne walks up to him and extends her hand towards him* .... ....---? *slowly brings his hand up and takes Jayne's hand, squeezing it softly. He let his eyes drift along her frame, finally setting his gaze on her eyes and with that, he carefully pulled his massive body up. As he stood up, he still had his eyes remain incontact with Jayne's*
...Thanks kid... *pats Jayne's back and leaves for the restroom*

RM& Ammy: *both staring at Jayne with their jaws open*

Ammy: ... I think---I need a break....c'mon Adrian... *leaves to the restroom, walking oddly*

RM: *smiles at Jayne, feeling proud about her* .... *realizes something is missing* ...-Hey.... Where is Shadow...? I would like to thank him for standing up to me... *looks around, looking for Shadow,all in vain*

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((ooc: sorry, I left this post short, but I'm suffering from a mighty great fever... So... I'm having some problems thinking clearly... *sneezes loudly* Red Muse signing off!!))