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dripik 10-03-2002 04:55 PM

Work at Rupture Farms
 
The story begins: Rupture Farms has been re-opened!
And you are the workers. If you like the idea, take a character with this form. (Remember! Make new characters, not the offical ones! But if you realy want to be Molluck, then... allright! :fuzsmile: )

Name:
Species:
Age:
Personality:
Appearance (meaning on clothes and stuff) :

Have a good time in Rupture Farms! :D

salty pretzils 10-03-2002 05:02 PM

Sounds cool! If the mod and mini mod (See, I don't forget everything!) approve then I'll join...

ryu 10-03-2002 05:31 PM

well i dont kno who will be openin ruptur farms again......?

Rex Tirano 10-03-2002 05:43 PM

hehe! This sounds gret! I'm gona join...*writes profile*

dripik 10-04-2002 07:30 AM

This is just a game, ryu, with other characters, not Molluck and Abe etc. By the way, can I be the boss in Rupture Farms RPG?

EDIT: I changed my mind. I'll be:

Name: #7 Slig
Species: Slig
Age: 20
Personality: Boss of Rupture Farms Security Dept., good-working employee
Appearance: new and shiny mechanical pants, green-glowing eyes, carries shotgun.

Drogo 10-04-2002 05:32 PM

This sounds cool
Name:Bob
Species:ratz species
Age:5
Personality:loyal servant of the Raisin, on duty to scout the re-open factory and to sabotage it if necessary
Appearance:small, shrimpy and a little fuzzy

sligster 10-04-2002 10:20 PM

Name: Obi

Species: Slig

Age: 15

Personality: Really bad attitude, encourages slaves to mess up so he can shoot them.

Appearence: Darker green than most sligs, scar across eye, and pants are scratched up from a time where he got caught in a meat grinder while chasing a scrub......... but thats a different story.

Past: Former worker of Rupturfarms before it shut down.

dripik 10-05-2002 07:23 AM

Okay, we got some security both from industrial and native sides. :D

We need a boss and some mudokon workers.

ryu 10-05-2002 03:26 PM

right then........:

name:raizo

spiecies:mud ninja

age:17

personality:qiuet...........

appearence:5,8 and never laughs

dripik 10-05-2002 03:31 PM

you can have more than one characters...

hmmm... maybe I'll be the boss... I need to do the announcements, board meetings, think on new products... is that OK?

ryu 10-05-2002 03:39 PM

whens my first mission sir

dripik 10-05-2002 03:45 PM

From now on write if you speak: -the character
-yourself.

Like this:

#7 Slig: "Your first mission will be taken if the boss arrives. And that mission is... WORK!"

Not bad huh? :D

So can I be the boss?

tybie_odd 10-05-2002 10:45 PM

Yay, just what I wanted!
 
Dripik, since you started this topic I think you have the right to be whoever you want. You'd make a good boss besides.

---my first character------

Name: Smudge

Species: slig, worker class

Age: er, like 22 if he was human. I'm not good with slig years.

Personality: Smudge is lazy at work, and he daydreams a lot. He's too curious for his own good and likes to get into trouble. He has a pretty low self-esteem due to an unfortunate experience while he was at the Barracks...he doesn't like to talk about it.

Appearance: he's pretty basic...although his eyes are a little big and bright, being so young. Looks innocent and naive...which is not neccesarily true of him.

Other: Smudge was hatched from a clutch of Skillya's eggs that were malnourished, and therefore he is a bit smaller than most of his kind. His bones are thin and snap easy, so he has to be careful of himself. He was too weak and little to qualify for a Flying Licence, so he can only wear pants. He's very quick though, and makes good use of his baton.

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-------My second character-----------

Name: Jayne (pronounced Jane)

Species: Mudokon, worker class

Gender: I will refer to her like a female, but she is not fertile.

Age: 18

Personality: Jayne...well....she has problems. When she was first sold into slavery by the Cartel, she was placed under a particularly mean slig who beat her much more than is typical, and did other inapropriate things besides. She developed a few mental problems as a natural result, but she is still very sweet and kind to her friends. She sometimes thinks she can sense things before they happen...is she in touch with her psychic powers like Abe was, or is she just crazy? Get to know her and find out...

Appearance: light green skin like most mudokons, but has a bit of a bruised look around the eyes from years of hard crying. Wears her feather in a ponytail like most muds, but hers is a little messy, and not slick and clean like you normally see.
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--------My Third Character-----------------------

Name: Vince

Species: Mudokon, worker class

Age: 17

Personality: Vince is Jayne's best friend, even though she scares him sometimes. He's young and impatient, and he gets radical ideas to escape all the time. He talks very fast, but listens well, too. Vince is very indignant of sligs and loves to tease them to their face, which brings me to his....

Appearance: He has a scar on his left cheek from a meatsaw he almost got pushed under for teasing a slig, and has a large, ugly burn on his abdomen from a slig's taser (another case of open rebellion). Other than those and other smaller mementoes, Vince has rounded cheeks and incredibly flexible eyebrows.
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-------My Fourth Character------------------

Name: Correl

Species: Mudokon, worker class

Age: 43, really pushing it for a mudokon

Personality: Correl is a very old, wise mudokon. Unlike most slaves, he was not born into captivity. Correl was once a Native mudokon lad, who lived in a natural villiage herding Meep and small domesticized birds. Then, the Magog Cartel seiged the villiage, and he saw most of his friends killed before they locked him in a cage to be shipped to Rupture Farms. He doesn't talk much about his past now, but some of the slaves at RF know him to be a wise old Mud who will always lend an ear, and give council to the young.

Appearance: Old and wrinkly, Correl's gray feather hangs limp on his head, bound with clay beads from his villiage. His loincloth is a little nicer than the standard-issue things given to slaves, but of course it is very old, and tattered. He has a fading tattoo on his left shoulder of a Mudokon chanting, for he used to be the best chanter in his small villiage.
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Well, how's that? I put in some mudokons for ya. This sounds like it will be a fun rpg!

dripik 10-06-2002 06:20 AM

Very good! We have the main staff for Rupture Farms.

#7 Slig: "Smudge, you're hired for Security Dept. But due to the laziness, do you want to work in Stockyards? It's empty now, but when the boss arrives, it will be filled with Paramites and Scrabs
(and bad-guy mudokon employees :D ). Do you accept?"

tybie_odd 10-06-2002 12:03 PM

Smudge: Sir, yes sir! Right away sir! ....*scratches under his arm lazily*...

dripik 10-06-2002 04:22 PM

The new boss of Rupture Farms

Name: Arnie
Species: Glukkon
Age: 32
Personality: Big Cheese, new boss of Rupture Farms, very quick at job, has his own train in Feeco Depot
Appearance: wears green suit, has a cigar, and a suit-badge with Rupture Farms-logo on it.

*Arnie walks in front of the Mudokons and starts reading*

Arnie: "Hi! Welcome to Rupture Farms! I hope you Mudokons are going to work good and feel good in the factory. Now, I'll sort you to your working areas. 10 Mudokons to Packaging, 20 Mudokons to producton lines, and 30 Mudokons are going to start cleaning the factory."

*Arnie looks up from the paper and spots Jayne, Vince, Correl*

Arnie: "Uhm... but due to lack of workers, just a little rest before work until some workers arrive."

*#7 Slig starts clapping*

tybie_odd 10-07-2002 05:36 PM

*Janye leans over to Vince and whispers...:*

Janye: Tsh! Pretty pathetic! We're the only ones here...

Vince: Shh! That's good, it might mean we can escape more easily.

Jayne: Vince....we just got here. You already want to escape? I'd think you'd be glad not to be in Glubber Co. anymore. I think this place looks nice.

Vince: Freedom, Jayney, freedom! that's what we need, just ask Old gramps... *waves arm at Correl*

Correl: ......zzz......

Jayne: He looks like he likes it here to me. *grins*

dripik 10-08-2002 02:15 PM

#7 Slig: "What the... That old Mudokon has started to rest in this minute! Wait 'til I get there..."

Arnie: "Leave him alone! I said rest! Not beating! If they can rest now, they can work better later."

#7 Slig: "Well... All right. But the security can rest too?"

*Arnie's eyes almost popped out*

Arnie: "What? The security is for guarding! Remember that Abe guy?

#7 Slig: "Yeah, that Mudokon has blowed up General Dripik! But why should he come here if we don't torture Mudokons? Well, not now, but..."

Arnie:"We won't torture them! All of the Glukkons in Magog Cartel are torturing, beating and zapping them, and look what happened! They shut down Rupture Farms, destroyed Soulstorm Brewery and stuff... If we don't hurt them, they won't hurt us too! Is that logical, or what?"

#7 Slig: "Well, If I think on it...

*acts thinking*

...Yes, that's right... I think..."

Arnie: "Never mind. Just keep'em feel good here."

#7 Slig: "Okay, boss.

Not bad, huh?

tybie_odd 10-11-2002 04:30 AM

Perfect, in my opinion. I like #7 Slig already!
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Correl: *opens one eye when he hears the sligs talk, then goes back to sleep when nothing dangerous happens*

Vince: *rolls eyes* "Ugh...why doesn't anyone care about freedom but me?"

Smudge: *makes a face at Vince and snickers*

Vince: "Hey you filthy---"

Jayne: *slaps her arm over Vince's chest to stop him from fighting. *

Vince: *grits his teeth and sits down, trying to stay calm*

Smudge: *grins, being very pleased with himself*

dripik 10-13-2002 04:19 PM

hehe, funny...

#7 Slig: "Obi, you're hired. But just guard those Mudokons and the factory, OK. Don't shot Mudokons. :fuzsmile:"

Arnie: "Raizo, you can join your Mudokon friends now."

tybie_odd 10-14-2002 06:12 PM

*Vince takes one look at Obi and swallows hard*

*Jayne glances up at Raizo, then looks away*

Correl: ...zzzzz.....

Vince(muttering): Odd-dammit, what's he find so relaxing about this place? *looks around at meat-saws and security cameras*

*Just then Vince notices something in the shadows, looks like one of the ratz maybe? But he can't quite tell. He gets up and starts to walk very softly towards it...*

Smudge: *is not paying attention :D *

The Red Muse 10-15-2002 07:43 AM

Can I join too?
 
Ummm... Can I still join?
Anyway here's my char.
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Name: Red Muse
Species: Slig, worker class
Age:12
Personality: He's lazy, he's nice and he likes poems.
Muse befriends easily and is sometimes a bit hypersensitive, meaning that he'll burst into tears if he sees anyone else cry.
Though he might sound like a wuss, he has an inbreakable sense of justice and a strong will. He hardly never gives up.

Red Muse is somewhat against guns and killing. He has seen something, when he was too young to see it, that shocked him. If you ask him what it was that he saw, he most likely doesn't reply.
He does carry a gun himself, but he has never actually fired it. His "weapon of choice" is and old assault rifle, worn-out and rusted.
Not only is his gun rusted, so are his pants. They're probably the first model that came out, so the pants tend to break up and malfunction time to time. He has glued some propaganda stickers to his pants to cover the most biggest rust blotchs.
His slig mask is also old. One eye-piece, ragged and stained, but he doesn't want to give them up.

Muse's most precious belongings are his pencils and pens and he always carries some extra paper with him.
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So, can I join? :fuzblink

dripik 10-15-2002 11:29 AM

Of course, you can! I'm happy for that character.

#7 Slig: "You're hired for Security Dept. But you should entertain Mudokons with your poems in the Empoyee Lounge, okay?"

Arnie: "Hey, Smudge! That Mudokon is trying to escape. Bring him back!"

The Red Muse 10-15-2002 06:00 PM

Red Muse: Yeah, sure thing, boss. *leaves for his post* *takes out a piece of paper and starts writing, not paying attention of his surroundings*

tybie_odd 10-16-2002 09:39 PM

Smudge: I'm on it! *points his gun at Vince* Freeze!!

Vince: *hears the warning and stops in his tracks, hits the ground and covers his head*

Jayne: Ha! Get up, Vince. He's not gonna shoot ya. *walks over to Vince and pulls him to his feet, pats his back*

Vince(muttering): Heh, force of habbit I guess... *rubs behind his neck shyly*

Jayne: *smiles softly and leads Vince back closer to Arnie and the others.*

Smudge: *yells slig-noises at Vince, then lowers his gun.*

Correl: *wakes up slowly...looks around...*

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[EDIT:]
Player: How should we write the noises that sligs make (in the games called BS and S'MO BS)?
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sligster 10-16-2002 10:20 PM

* walks around in circles *

Obi: I guard the whole factory? When Mullok was around I only had to guard sector 5 and 6. I also used to guard the grinding station.......but........... * looks at meat grinder * ............ I had trouble.

The Red Muse 10-17-2002 03:47 AM

Red Muse: *bored* Awww, where the heck is everyone? This place should be swarming with mudokons, sligs, security cameras, greeters and... and... stuff! Who's gonna listen to my poems? Who's gonna help me write my biography? These rusty walls? The forsaken corridors?? That old wanted poster or-*continues talking to the walls*


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My second char

Name:Ammy
Species: Mudokon, native
Age: 10
Personality: Silent and fearful. Nothing else is known.
Appearance: Small and fragile looking mud girl. Her skin is turquoise and she has a tattoo of a scrab in her forehead.

dripik 10-17-2002 05:08 PM

#7 Slig: "You guard wherever you want in the factory. But make sure everything work fine. I mean the Mudokons work fine.

*shines his green eyes*

Okay?"

Arnie: "Okay, we have got some Mudokons now. Now I'll sort you to working areas. Jayne, Vince, Correl... Correl... Wake up, please! Ok, you Mudokons are going to production lines. Ammy, you're going to clean the factory. I think you need a little training. Raizo, go to packaging sector, please."

*#7 Slig goes to Arnie and whispers something to him*

Arnie: "Yeah, forgot that... And lunchtime at 12.00. More profit we get, more food you get."

tybie_odd 10-18-2002 04:39 AM

Smudge: Mmmm, lunchtime! Can't wait! *rubs his hands together greedily*

*Correl takes a long look at Ammy, then motions for Vince to come to him*

Vince(walking over): What?

Correl(softly): The small one...you should watch over her, as you did Jayne. She may be frightened and feel alone.

Vince: But... Look, Jayne protected me , not the other way around!

Correl: Sometimes the best protection is the one unseen: protection from one's own fearful thoughts. Jayne protected you from the trouble you liked to get into; but you saved her from her own harsh opinions of herself.

Vince:....alright...*glances quickly up at Ammy, but looks away, as if unsure*

Correl: You will do fine. *smiles slowly, then moves toward Jayne*

Jayne(heading for production lines): Hey Vince! Ya comin'? Let's get goin'! *heads of at a steady pace, letting Correl use her arm for support*

Vince: Coming... *glances at Ammy again and smiles, trying to show friendliness. Then heads off after Jayne and Correl*

----as they're going to the production lines----

Jayne: I hope we see that poet dude around. He seems kinda fun...especially in a place like this!

Correl: Ugh! He is a slig. We should not communicate with him.

*Jayne breaks into the giggles*

Jayne: Oh c'mon, gramps! Just 'cause he's a slig doesn't mean he's cruel !

Correl(sarcastically): Oh, it doesn't?

Vince: I think Correl's right. We should stick with our own kind. Don't forget about that slig you met up with, Jayne. I'd think you'd be more cautious.

Jayne: Cautious, yeah. But not prejudiced! Jeez, you guys are such sissies.

Correl: *sigh*......You will never learn.....

*They arrive at the production lines....*

dripik 10-18-2002 04:36 PM

Arnie's announcement: "Lunchtime! Every hungry Mudokon to cafeteria, please! Not much food now, but later we'll eat Paramite Pies and stuff! Today's menu: 1. "Scrab Legs: Eat before it kicks!" 2. Water: no comment, but it's clean! Good appetite!"