Hey guys, my career dream is to be an author but I am not sure if i'm good enough, so I put one of my stories on here and you guys can add your opinions (Positive or Negative).

Here it is:
Once the village had been raided for the fifth time in just 3 days, the townsfolk had many town meetings about the dangers that lie in the destruction due to these raids. Children played in rubble and the women have been injured by trying to save the foolish children but the raiders didn’t...