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Commas

Posted 02-23-2013 at 03:39 AM by Phylum
So my English teacher corrected some commas in a piece of work and I don't completely agree with her. What do you guys think?


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Occasionally a street light bled a warm glow into the night, however, mostly these flickered or lay dead.
This one I can live with. I can see why there could be a comma there.


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As the man ran in desperation, he found himself drawing closer and closer to the tall building.
I don't see the point of this...

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