The World of Oddworld

[Havoc]

Welcome to the introduction to The World of Oddworld! Im taking the heavy task to convert the story from the oddworld quintoligy games to a tekst story with some additional things added ofcourse.

Keep in mind before reading:
Im not English, Im Dutch so there may be some grammer errors.
I don't have a lot of internet time on my hands so there will be a few days between chapters.

Chapter 1 - Introduction

Somewhere on the planet of Oddworld, somewhere south in Modo's lies a huge factory. A factory with tons of pipe lines, smoke stacks and endless corridors. A huge stockyard with wildlife surrounding it. Being one of the four structures on Oddworld that an be seen from outerspace, Rupture Farms is believed to be the biggest meet proccesing plant on Oddworld.
Inside are working 100 modukon slaves, captured as natives and put to work by the evil Magog Cartel. Pulling levers, cleaning bathrooms, transforming creatures of the wild into teasty treats and cleaning up blood from those half beaten to death by slig security forces guarding the plant.
The enslaved mudokons have no other choice the just to work as a camera or a slig is always near.
Sleep, eat, work, sleep is the ever lasting cycle of an enslaved mud. For some variation you might get lucky if your beat up and get to rest on the health section. On the other hand, they might just as easely kill you.
Deep in the factory in a room only lightend by some orange lights in the floor powerd by the nly generator still working, is a lonely mud. A blue skinned mud and also the verry last one being present in the plant as we speak.
His name is Abe, promoted to waxing the CEO corridors without guarding. Now he hangs there all alone, his wrists tied up to ropes in the ceiling standing in a strange circler platform.
On the wall he reads things like: Molluck sucks! **** Rupture Farms! Rather dead then a slave!
He came to realize he was in death row... and was just a few minutes away to standing face to face with his boss: Molluck, the Glukkon.
While thinking back to that dreadfull night three days ago when he first started out his new job.

He was happy, he was waxing the floors just outside the CEO confrence room! And best of all, he had no slig guards around to beat him up. Completing a full month of not having beat made him a trustfull and loyal mud. Getting him the promotion every slave at Rupture Farms dreams about. Besides, the sligs felt relieved as well. They handle a gun much better then a mob.
While mumbeling and pushing the waxer Abe looked at the posters of the three man products thay made at the factory. Scar Cakes, Paramite Pies... meech munchies came to extinction, unfortunatly. He shook his head in grief.
Suddenly his eye cought attention to a new add, one he never saw before.

SOMETHING NEW AND TASTY! COMING SOON!

Abe was confused. A new kind of meat? Where would they get that from? Did they discover a new species in this area? He did'nt think so. Although he know Oddworld had way more spiecies then just Mudokons, sligs, slogs, Glukkons, scrabs and Paramites. But all those other species did not live close enough to Rupture Farms to be used as a meat host.
While watching the add he suddenly stood in the shadows of a stroke of light. Coming from straigt behind him. It was the door to the confrence room, it was opend just enough to see what was happaning.
Abe shifferd, he would want to take a peek. But if he got cought... that would be a disaster! They probably wont let him get away with just 50 beat ups. They also won't but hm back in his old position of cleaning the stockyards for scrab poo. They would most likely have him shot.
But dispite that, he took a look anyway.
Inside he saw Molluck, and he scared when he saw two other gluks just a few fet away from him on both sides of the door. Luckely they did'nt see him as they where watching the presentation of Molluck.
Abe watched along with them.
On the big screen accros from the door Abe saw the saiiling records from the scrab cakes and the Paramite pies. They where falling to an abnormal depth becouse of the close extinction of the animals.
The other gluks started to react to it.
'Here ya go!' said one, a few platforms away from the door.
'He did it!' said another next to him.
Another closed his eyes and shook his head.
'Oh no, we're going down...'
A glukkon on the far right in a green outfit with spikkes stikking out of his neck was the only one daring to confront Molluck with the disaster.
'Oh my god Mullock! What are ya doin huh?!'
Molluck turned around, for a minute there Abe thought he would see him and looked for cover.
'Watch,' Molluck said then talked to the slig next to him, 'show em.'
A new chart apearded on the big screen. With flashing colours and a sales record going trough the roof.
'But how!' the green gluk yelled. The screen changed again and at that moment Abe almost had a heart attack. The new meat! It where mudokons!
The gluks started laughing, being happy with the sollution to the problem. Meanwhile Abe was backing up looking around if he saw a slig that happand to be wandering around. He did'nt have to think twice before knowing he had to get out a there.
When he was sure the coust was clear he made a run for it, knowing the corridors. He made a run for the stockyards, knowing that was the only escape route there was.
But what Abe did'nt know was that the CEO door is guarded, not by sligs, but by a camera. And when he spotted Abe, all add's turned into a wanted poster with Abe on it. On top of that, it did'nt took loong for a slig to get in hot pursuit of him.

[paramiteabe]

Wow great rendition you got going here spite of the errors which are very minor because I understood everything, your doing a superb job. Kind of brings a whole new side on the quintology which I like. Keep up the good work! Your going to do this for every game as each comes out? What an ambitious project indeed! Well all power to ya! Well I own my own creative studio as a small business and well you would be the kind of person I would be looking for certain writeing positions as I would go in and illustrate your writeing. But thats just an observation on my part.

Paramiteabe...

[Havoc]

Ah Heck to it, il just write another piece. Thanks for the kind comments BTW.
Noticed a lot of missing letters in the first iece BTW...

Chapter 2 - Stockyard Escape
While Abe was on the run making his way to the stockyard exit, Molluck and the other CEO's started wondering what the hell was going on. Molluck orderd the slig to call up the security cams on the main screen and a few sec later the red light alert struck the screen and they saw Abe running past a camera with a slig in hot pursuite.
'Whats going on!' Molluck yelled at the slig next to him.
'Gonna check it right away sir,' said the slig and turned on his built-in radio.
'Slig 7-49 at corridor 72 Confrence! Report in! What the hell is going on?!'
The radio crackt a little, then the voice on the ohter end came trough, still being disrupted becouse of his running.
'Worker 46, Abe is making a run for it. Camera's saw him peeking at the Confrence room,'
'Shoot him!' Molluck yelled knowing the importance of keeping his plans secret.
'I Can't sir! He jumped onto a ledge, he's out of my sight!'
The slig transferd the connection.
'Calling all sligs on duty in Zulag one, Calling al sligs on duty in Zulag one! Be on the lookout for Abe, worker 46. Terminate on sight!'
'And kill slig 7-49 while your at it,' mumbled Molluck.
The slig looked up to him and sighted.

With all the breath knocked out of him, Abe rested on the ledge he jumped on. Peeking underneath the ledge he saw the slig and was just able to dodge the gunfire.
'Your dead meat!' the slig yelled.
'Well at least im not allone,' he said knowing Molluck well enough to know he is gonna have this slig shot, 'see ya!'
While he walked away he heard two other sligs underneath him, followed by a few short shots and a slimy exploding sound.
That takes care of one slig, he thought.
With every step he took he came closer to the stockyard exit. He had to jump some mines and dodge falling meat in the grinding area before he reached a corridor where he saw a slig on duty but sleeping.
In all the silence it suprised him that the slig did'nt wake up from the endless redio anouncements: 'To all sligs on duty in Zulag one! Be on the lookout for worker 46, Abe. Terminate on sight!'
He sneaked past, dropped down to a main coridor and saw one of his buddy's working there.
'Hey,' Abe whisperd.
The mud looked.
'Hey Abe, what in Oddname did you do? These red light alarms are driving me crazy!'
'Im getting out a here, Molluck wants to turn us into food products!'
He ran off.
'What?!' the mud yelled waking up the slig above him.
Abe quikely told him to come along and the both of them made a run for it while the slig realized what was going on and came after them.
Abe and the mud jumped over a gap in the floor and while the mud landed on its feet Abe grabed a rope opening a trapdoor in the floor. The slig fell trough it.
They heard him scream and fire his gun.
'Hey! Get away! Get away you scrubby scrab! Get lost! Whaa!!'
Abe looked down and saw the slig hanging on the bottom jaw of a musclar scrab.
'Ew...' he mentioned. But this also meant he was close to stockyard... or right above it for that matter. He looked at the mud and said: 'Come on,'
But the mud did'nt move and looked at him.
'I thought you where escaping?'
Abe nodded.
'Yea ofcourse I am,'
'But...' the mud stutterd, 'the front door is that way.'
'Im going trough the stockyard, do you have any idea how guarded the front door is?'
The mud walked over to the trap door and watched how the scrab ate his slig.
'I think il pass...' he said, trying not to trow up.
'Whatever you say,' he heard Abe say, quite happy, but when he turned around he was already gone.
While hiding in shadows and after having killed two more sligs Abe finaly made it to the stockyard exit. He had to go up with an elevator past a sleeping slig to get there but he had sneaked past some before.

Meanwhile Molluck, the CEO executives and the slig where searching the sucrity cams trying to help the sligs kill Abe. They found him.
'Slig 78 - 32! He's near you! Kill him you bonehead! Wake up!'

Abe heard the radio, and saw the slig woke up about it. He quikely ducked and rolled.
He did'nt even see gunfire he had to dodge, apperently the slig had no idea what was going on.
As he fell into a barrel of chopped op scrab meat (which he was verry happy about since he would'nt want to be in a barrel with a living scrab) he thought of the slig up there who would be killed as well. He dreamed away at the thought of seeing a slig at a wall being shot by Molluck. When he opened his eyes again he saw a pipe coming straight at him. It hit him hard and he got knocked into the barrel. It would save his live as two sligs were discussing the fuzzle trowing chamionships over at vykers lab.
When he passed them he shook the meat of his head and started shaking the barrel. It worked after a few try's and not long after that Abe was out of Rupture Farms.
He sniffed the fresh air and cought. So much for the fresh air... it smelled like dead meat and unwashed sligs over here! Even the bathrooms at the Mud bunks didnt smell so bad!
He looked around to dicide where to go.

'He what!' Molluck yelled to the slig that came to bring report at Mollucks private office.
'He escaped sir...' the slig said as confident as he could. He was so sure Molluck was gonna have him shot! Even if it wasnt his fault that little basterd escaped, Molluck would just kill him for fun, he was just that kind of Glukkon.
'Whats the status?' Molluck asked.
The slig looked at him.
'He was last seen falling down a cliff while holding up his hand, we already contacted the sligs out in the forrest and the desert to be on the lookout. Trough one of the temple's is the only way he can go,'
Molluck made a laugh at the slig.
'We lose a dozen men a day extracting animals from those tempels... he won't ever make it on its own,'

[Havoc]

Chapter 3 - A fate
While Abe fell of the cliff he smashed his head. Then this bigface apeard and said he was dead...
Said the land was changing... was inbalanced... at best. He told Abe his fate, was to resqeu the rest. Cuz Paramites, and Scrabs, had been sacred once. But that was before Rupture Farms, turned em into lunch.
And they lived in the tempels, and thats where they stil nest. And facing these creatures... that was his test.
What followed was Abe going to the sacres tempels of the Paramites and the Scrabs. A long time ago, Mudokon tribes believed these animals where sacred and admired them. Build intire tempels and huge stateu's of the animals.
But that was all over now, with Rupture Farms around the corner of these sarcred lands the only place where Scrabs or Paramites could be wound where the tempels themself. And ofcourse the stockyards...
As he walked trough the forrests of Mudo's he was stunned to see some of the huge stateu's, some almost just as high as the meat factory. It was truly unbelieveble. Then suddenly he stood infront of a well, right infront of him, on the other side of a huge canyon was the temple of Scrabania...

Mullocks office - 12 hours later

'Sir we some strange news...' said the slig who was with Mullock in the confrence room. This slig was head of Slig Security and Mullock right hand man.
'Is Abe reported dead yet?' Mullock asked impatiently.
The slig steped over his nervous act and looked for words how to explain what was told to him.
'The eh, the forces over at Scrabania have seen Abe enter the tempel... they never saw him come out...'
Molluck lauched and enjoyd his sigar. His eye glew with inner happyness.
'Why is that so strange?'
Once again the slig looked for words.
'Around six hours later the forces over at Paramonia saw Abe enter that temple... again, he did'nt come out.'
Molluck jumped up from his seat.
'Thats impossible!' he yelled.
The slig got more nervous by the second knowing the crazyness of the story he just told his boss.
'It gets more weird sir,' the slig mumbled, 'forces at the stockyard, they report having seen Abe make his way back to the factory. They also spoke of some weird creature which already killed over five sligs and ten slogs.'
Mollucks eye's grew and his sigar bangled from his mouth.
'What kind of creature?' he asked mumbling, hoping the anwser would not be what he thought.
'I don't know sir, some say it was a scrab, some say it was a paramite...'
At that moment the sigar dropped from mollucks mouth. His look was fearsom. The slig now had an scary feeling. Never ever had he seen a Gluk so unbelievebly scared! And whatever scared his boss, now scared him as well.

There Abe was, full of confidence he stood at the stockyard exit rethinking what happaned to him the past day.
First he had enterd Scrabania and completed his journy there, in the process he saw how two sligs - trying to drive the scrabs out of the temples to the stockyards - got eaten by the animals. Same routine happand at Paramonia.
His test was completed, he expected to rest. Then the bigface revealed the intent of his quest. By a magical bold of lighting two scars where placed on the back of his hands, one of the mythical Paramite, and one of the legendary Scrab.
With both scars together on the back of each hand, they could shut down Rupture Farms, and restore the lost land.
He had made use of the scars thankfully troughout his backtracking in the stockyards. Molluck had doubled the security there, only thing was that that security was ment to work inside out, not outside in. What Mud would be foulish enough to try make its way INTO Rupture Farms? Abe would.
His first obstruction soon became known, a minefield strechting over a length of almost ten meters. But that would no longer be a problem.
With both Scars togehter, the spirits took form... the mines blew up and a new hero was born.

[Havoc]

BTW, feel free to comment!

[T-nex]

Wow... That's great, i don't what to say about it, but it's really written good. I admire your writing skills

[Havoc]

Keep checking for the rest of the story . Im thinking of how to contineu right now .
THanks for the compliment n my writing skilz BTW, Im writing a novel at the moment as well but its in Dutch . I actualy wanted to wait with this fan fic till that novel was finnished but I just had to manny fun idea's for the fan fic I just needed to write it. So now im working on it when I dont have nay inspiration for the novel. .

[Havoc]

Chapter 4 - Putting an end to the suffer.

'Did that blue basterd actualy get in here again?!' Molluck yelled at his right hand man.
The slig turned around as he was just viewing security reports from the stockyards, it were only a few since many sligs had not survived Abe's entrance.
'He's not in yet sir, he was last seen wandering around the stockyard exit. Probably looking for a way back in, although I truly don't see why,'
Molluck jumped up (tripping over his own desk and falling face down to the slig). The slig quikely helped him backup.
'Thanks,' Molluck said, 'now tripple the security in every Zulag! Aspecialy Zulag one!'
'Yes sir, il get right on it,' and the slig wanderd of going back to the control post.
When he was gone Molluck walked over to the phone that was standing next to the door. He called in all glukkon CEO's get to the confrence room ASAP. He would soon join the give some info on the situation, but then again... he was scared running into Abe with his new power.

Abe still wandert around the stockyard exit. It was closed of by an electric fence and he had no idea how he had to get in.
'Great, just great! I do all this effort getting a new power and blowing up half the stockyard, and I can't even use that stupid skil to get past an electric fence!'
'Could you keep it down?' a sillent voice from the shaddows asked.
Abe walked over and saw a lonely Mud scrubbing the floor.
Abe scratched his head looking at him.
'Your outside the factory...' he noticed.
'Yes I am,' the friendly Mud said, 'the sligs trew me out, they thought they killed me,'
Abe nodded as he understood the reason.
'Eh... could you help me get back in?' he asked.
The mud looked at him and started to laugh.
'You ill? Could be, your looking a little blue,'
Abe gave an angry look as he always hated it if ppl made fun of his skin colour.
'Can you or what!'
The mud stood up. He looked like a wise one as far as Abe was concerned.
'Do you know what Chanting is?' he asked.
Abe shook is head. Never heard of it.
'Its a way of getting in touch with yur inner soul and stepping out of your body, or you can use it to call ancient birds which form a portal the the native land,'
Abe looked at him with glancing eye's.
'Come again?'
The old mud explained again and showed Abe how it was done.
When Abe got it, they sommond the birds and the old Mud made a run for it.
When Abe got out of his chanting he looked around, wonderd a little...
'HEY! Now im still outside!'
But he soon had an idea. Stepping out of your body, that didnt seem a to bad idea as long as there wernt any sligs around to shoot his body while he left it there.
He started chanting and soon he steped out in the form of an orb. It was nice shiny and blue.
As the orb Abe flew trough the gate to take a look around inside when he bumped into a slig just around the corner. He was pulled into the slig like a magnet.
'What the hell?' he asked himself while being in the slig.
'Whats wrong?' an other slig asked.
It did'nt take long before Abe realised he had the cool ability to take over someones body and made a quike advantage of it.
'I wanna go for some air, can we turn of that fence?'
The slig looked at him.
'Sure, whatever. The lever behind you,'
Abe laught in his slig form and laughed again becouse it sounding so funny.
'Thanks,' then he aimed the gun at the slig and blew him to pieces. Then he pulled the lever and walked into the fance just before it was turned off to kill the slig.
When he got back in his own body he grinned and walked in.

Getting trough the Zulags wasnt that much of a deal. Even though Molluck trippled the security, Abe's new ability to take over other bodies made it almost to easy to get around.
While moving deeper into the factory he resqued hes fellow brothers by calling in the birds. (He did wonder how those birds got into the factory, though).
All the muds thanked him for it before they left and hoped to see him back alive.
When he had checked out almost every Zulag and been to places in the factory he never saw before Abe decided to have some fun. So he possed a slig who was in charge over five others and made them do the most crazy stuff. They danced, they played tag, hide and seek, and finaly: who can knock a slog to death without getting killed?
That game was over rather quike since the slogs had the upper hand. Abe killed them all then climmed down.
He shifferd. He saw the reason this place was so well guarded. Just a few feet away was a control panel, controling the intire power supply to the plant.
He looked at it with a big grin and then started to hit al sorts of bottons transforming Rupture Farms not into the biggest meat proccesing plant on Oddworld, but into the biggest disco on oddworld.
Convair belts started acting weird and accelerated with the dreadfull result of meat flying trough the intire factory.
Camera's started making their routine way to quike making the sligs dizy to the bone.
THen finaly he found the right switch (just the biggest button of them all) and Rupture Farms was shut down for almost 99 %. The remaining 1 % was comming from a generator outside the plant... ah well... what could that do?
A little to much so it seemed.

When Molluck noticed the power shut down he just got outradgues! Called in the slig and orderd him to activate the gass line.
'Sir, there is no-one left to kill, all scrubs are gone. If I trigger it now the only thing it will kill is Abe, me, u and the entire CEO board,' he looked up hoping Molluck would change his mind. But he did'nt. Killing the CEO board wasnt bad at all, they all would want Molluck shot after this. He just was one step ahead of them. And he would be the only one gettng out of there in time. The gas had a timer of one minute, the only way to shut it off was the lever in the Confrence room and Abe could never go there. Nine gluks and two sligs would be to much even for him.

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Feel free to comment!

[Havoc]

And I want some comments now! PLEASE!

[Splat]

I like it. Very cool. A bit rushed in places but still very good. I like your descriptions of events and Abe's powers and even your own little added bits. Keep it up!

[Havoc]

Yea its rushed in some places, I know. Thats just becouse my main work is in the novel so im not putting my back into this as much as I could do. And since we all know the story its not that bad I sometimes rush it .

[Havoc]

Chapter 5 - What a drag!
Abe wanderd around, wondering what to do next. He walked past a status board and looked at it:

Executives: 9 Retired: 0
Security: 154 Retired: 156
Workers: 1 Killed: 0

Abe glunched. Did he kill 156 sligs? Damn that is many... where there 310 sligs employed? That many? That was three sligs for every Mud...
'Acording to the board Im the only one left...' Abe mumbled while he was walking softly trough the large hall. Actualy his work here was done so basicly he could make his way to the front door and walk out. But he feeled like he still had one more thing to do. Revenge on the executives... and revenge on Molluck. Holding that thought he was now on his way to the board room, hoping to fnd everyone ratherd there. But when he just had to climb a few ledges down the get to the trapdoor above the confrence room, the red light alert struck Rupture Farms once again. Abe looked up at the info banners that where spread accross the walls:

Gas line triggerd: 1:00 minute and counting.

'This aint good...' and he quikely started climbing down the ledges. He had to roll under some meat grinders to get to a lift taking him down to the trap door. He looked up at a banner:

Gas line triggerd: 0:16 seconds and counting.

Then he quikely peeked trough the little hole in the trapdoor.
8 gluks, 2 sligs standing at the platform... with the shut off lever. Damnit! He needed his shrykull power, but he had to charge it first. It would take way to long.
Ten seconds to spare when he suddenly saw a single mud working in the shadows. Abe was confused, the only one being here was him, so the status board said.
He looked harder then smiled of confusion. It was the wise mud from the stockyards.
'You look like you need help he said and started chanting as they had no time to lose. Soon the birds flew in and formed the portal.
'Il get you your special power some other way,' he said before jumping into the portal. The portal stayed open.
Abe waited and waited... he would never make this! Suddenly more birds flew through the portal tordwarts Abe and they just got absorbed in his body! The portal closed when at least twelf birds where absorbed by him in jest a mere two seconds.
He looked up, feeling the energy of his power streaming to his body.
0:05 seconds and counting.
He didnt have a doubt. Kicked in the trapdoor and jumped down. The gluks and the sligs where supprised to see him but did'nt hasitate to start firing.
'Kill him!' the gluks yelled. But it was to late.
Abe unleashed his power and tranformed into the mythical Shrykull. A creature with the head of a paramite and the body of a scrab. Of him came strains of lightning stiking all the gluks, killing them and meanwhile the sligs suffert the same fate.
When all was dead, Abe hurryd to to lever on the platform and pulled it. The red light alert died...
The timer being verry cliche by stopping at 0:01 seconds.
'I should stop watching those James Bond movies...' Abe sighted.
He looked over to the pilles of asshes on the little platforms over at the wall and closed his eye's for a second... what a relieve... it was over...
Yea right... for Abe it was...
Without knowing two sligs had enterd and hit Abe to the ground with a single strike of his gun. They drug him accros the ground to the final room hed ever see.

And here he was... he hangs there all alone, his wrists tied up to ropes in the ceiling standing in a strange circler platform.
On the wall he reads things like: Molluck sucks! **** Rupture Farms! Rather dead then a slave!
He once shook his head in grieve.
When the door opend, his heart skipped a beat and he swallowed his fear away... wel at least he tried to.
Along with the slig Molluck walked in stopping only a few inches away from Abe.
The slig had his hands on the lever and asked: 'Now boss?'
Molluck had a laugh and looked at Abe, looked at him so mean Abe could die of fear in this case.
'Yea...' he mumbled, 'kill the basterd.'
'No please no! No No!' Abe begged, which ofcourse had no single effect when shutting down a gluks intire factory.
Underneath him opend a hatch, it revealed a grinder underneath him and Abe just hang right above it.
'Please!' he begged again.
The slig already tensed his muscles to puch the lever when suddenly a lightning bolt struk the guy. Molluck was looking at it totaly confused.
'What the hell?' he siad, quite scared just before also he was struck.
The slig fell uncounsios and Molluck tried to stay up, but failed and s\joined the slig.
Abe looked at the gluks creepy body, he never saw a gluk without his clothes on, let alone being fried.
The glukkens walked on their hands so it seems... making them have realy long arms.
Then the bigface suddenly came out of nowhere and started chanting. Abe felt the energy flowing trough his body as he noticed the bigface was chanting him out of this dreadfull place.
Abe splatted out into birds which flew away, then the bigface also splatted and joined Abe to whereever they where going. Leaving Molluck and the slig all alone in the factory.

[T-nex]

So?? Was this the end??? or is there more?? Will you continue with AO and then MO???

[Havoc]

Of course! The story doesnt end here now does it? And to tell you a little sneek peek: Molluck isnt quite dead yet... but youl soon find out.

[Dave]

Hey hey!
Nicely done, Havoc.
You've got some nice writing skills.
Kudos!

[T-nex]

Of course! The story doesnt end here now does it? And to tell you a little sneek peek: Molluck isnt quite dead yet... but youl soon find out.

Thats great
And about that Moluck thing, i know that he ain't dead!!! And i have prove for that!! he is mentoined In one of the movies of AO. You know the first conversation between the three Gluckons!! One of em says: "Moluck i gonna be pissed!!"...
Or at least i think so

Well, i'll just be waiting here for the next chapter

[Havoc]

You mean AE, and that aint prove... they also say IF he ever come's back.
I dunno if he's dead or not. At least in my story he's not.

[T-nex]

Wel, dead or alive, i still think that he isn't dead...
And speaKing of your story... WHEN DO YOU POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Just kidding

[Havoc]

Wel, dead or alive, i still think that he isn't dead...
And speaKing of your story... WHEN DO YOU POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Just kidding

Don't worry, il have it up soon

[Al the Glukkon]

Sweet I can't wait for the Abe's Exoddus parts

[Havoc]

Chapter 6 - Weirdo's at noon
Miles and miles away from Rupture Farms are acient grounds with a rocky plato. Next to this rocky stage or two higher platforms and two a little lower. Blinking on those four platforms stood two paramites, and two scrabs. Dancing and moving as the tepical acient legends that they are.
Infront of the stage where 99 mudokons, who all used to work at Rupture Farms. They where all there! Exept for one.
Suddenly a whole load of birds came flying in, they split up into two groups and formed two orbs. Abe and the Bigface shaman apeard on the rocky stage! All the muds started cheering for Abe, theire savior! Their hero!
The bigface raised Abe's hand so to tel he was the hero and Abe smiled of goodness.
Unfortunatly for him, al the stress from his escape now came to a burst:

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He farted...
'Oops,' he said and shyly looked at the shaman next to him hoping not to have insulted him.
'Oops?' the shaman asked and then started laughing, 'boy...'
Abe started to laugh along with him and the bigface tapped him over the shoulder... a bit to hard.
Abe tripped of the ledge and fell down at least three stories. No one even tried to catch him...
They just let him fall and smash his head.
Thats when he had his new vision... three spirits floated infront of him looking at them with their fully orange eye's.
'Abe,' one started saying with a high typical ghost voice, 'your the savior of the mudokons, so ya gotta help us!'
An other spirit flew infront.
'The Glukkons are digging up our bones!'
They got back next ot each other and closely came closer...
'You gotta come to Necrum Abe... Quikly!'
Abe woke up by getting kicked and he got up.
'Whats wrong with you guys?' he asked stil dizy from the fall.
'We had to wake you did'nt we?'
Abe scratched himself.
'You could have just got some water,'
The muds apoligised and helped Abe to a seat. Thats when he told the guys what he dreamed. They had to find Necrum, they had to find the sacred burial grounds.

Chapter 6 - to be contineud

[T-nex]

Woohaaah!!! Great just great

[Al the Glukkon]

awesome!! Poor Abe no one tried to catch him, I mean he saved them all.

[Havoc]

yea... they arnt thankfull!

[Havoc]

Wow, its been a while. But here is the promissed second part of chapter 6. Feel free to comment!!
Chapter 6 - Weirdo's at noonPart 2

They had to do something, so Abe and some other left to search for Necrum. Their journey started well, they where kind of exited.
'Abe, your just the greatest,' a mud said.
'Okay,' said Abe.
He and Alf go back a long time. They worked at Rupture Farms together in the stockyard before Abe was transferd to the CEO hallways. The transfer that started the entire adventure.
'Necrum... I've hear of it,' said Alf with is slish, 'its where the tribe's of Necrum brought their dead aint it?'
'Thats what the Bigface told me,' Abe replyd.
They walked on and on in the heat of the sun and by lunch, they where getting pretty tired.
'How much longer?' a mud in the back asked.
'I Dunno,' Abe said. They had to go to Necrum, but noone of his crew had ever been there.
The sun started to set, they got thirsty and their feet hurt. By dinner, it was unbareble! The mudokons started to lose there temper and where taking it out on Abe.
'Its cuz of you we are in this mess!' they said.
'Yes bite!' the mud in the back said. And they all snored. Abe sat against a nearby rock and sighted.
'Can I go home?' some other mud asked.
Just when Abe wanted to tell him to shut up and keep walkin, they heard something. A sound like a drill, but diffrent. They looked up, looked behind them and saw huge towers build in the middle of the dessert. On the towers was somekind of line... maybe for the trains.
They walked over to find out, the closer they came, the harder the noise became.
'Where is that coming from?' Abe mumbled and looked over his shoulder. Suddenly he couldnt breath, his heart skipped a beat while he saw the huge face of a glukkon getting closer in high speed. He quikely saw that it was no real glukkon, it was only a train. But still, it was getting close a bit to fast! When the train passed over the wind it pulled along smashed to mudokons on the ground, and Abe was hit with something on the head.
'Aww,' he mutterd while he looked what stroke him.
'Its a bone,' he said, 'I think we're close.'
'Lets go!' Alf said.
'Yea lets go!'
'Yea lets go!'
And so they started to chase the train, and when they couldnt see the train anymore, they just followed the track. Followed it for mile's and mile's.

[Havoc]

Jeez, I keeps taking while's between my chapters, ah well, here is... CHAPTER 7! Hopefully Im gonna be able to write Chapter 8 closely behind it. Enjoy!

Chapter 7 - SoulStorm Mining Company

'Boss! Boss!'
In the distance Mullock could hear the cracky voice of a slig. Though it started to come closer and closer untill he heard it loud and clear. It was a slig shouting in his ear!
'Hey!' he shouted.
'Boss... your still alive... thank Odd!'
With some struggle Mullock managed to get up on his own. Almosts tipping over as he now lost his clothing which helped him balance out.
'Wha happand?' Mullock asked.
The slig was crawling around on the floor.
'What are you doing?!' Mullock yelled, 'Get in your pants!'
'I can't Boss, they mallfunctioned...'
Mullock looked around the room, he saw the opend and still active meat grinder. He also saw Abe was gone.
'Im gonna kill that Abe guy! If its the last thing I do!!!'
Meanwhile the slig finaly managed to open the door.
'I think we have some reserve clothes and sligs pants in the storage room,' the slig said.
'Take me there!' Mullock said. And so the slig guided Mullock to the storage room.

'Do we realy have to go in here?' Alf Asked when they stood infront of the wooden fence sealing of the Mine entrance, 'This place is guarded to the eh... bone... just like Rupture Farms!'
'You knew that from the beginning,' Abe said while he started climbing behind the others, 'Why did you come in the first place?'
Alf stayed quitet and started climbing behind Abe.
This better be worth it... he thought.
Abe looked over his jump the steel platou they where aiming for... 1 2 3... JUMP. He made it! On the edge... and he lost his balance.
'Woo! Abe! Look out!' But it was already to late, Abe tumbeld down the mine's hitting every piece of metal and every piece of rock on the way.
'He's got a problem...' Alf slished when he landed next to others.
When Abe hit the ground, he looked around while his body was filled with pain.
'Ah man... I always have to fall down something...'
Suddenly he heard some noise... out of habbit he crawled behind a rock and took a peek. It was a slig, but not an ordenary one.
'What the Odd!' Abe mumbled, 'Thats a flying one!'
'Something smells!' he heard the slig say.
When the slig was out of sight Abe came out of hiding. Looking around and up to where his friends must be.
'I gotta get back up there...'

The slig got his new pants, and Mullock a new suit. A red one, with cuts and stuff in it. It looked like he was downgraded from a big cheese to a chump... his entire career was over, by a stupid mudokon!
'The Magog Cartel will be looking for you Sir...' the slig said, with a doubt.
'I know,' he was standing infront of a mirror while the slig closed up his suit, 'Is there a way to get out of here?'
The slig took a step back and opend to door for Mullock.
'I will have to call in a FeeCo train for us... I might be able to get it trough a Security slig there. That way no one will know the train was ever here.'
'HMM... Do it.'

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Feel Free to COMMENT!!

[T-nex]

COMMENT: The story is very good and exiting. Even if you add some xtras, that makes it even better. I like the humor in the story, and i havent seen to many grammar errors...

YAY FOR HAVOC

[Havoc]

Chapter 8: Mine Trip

As Abe walked trough the huge mine, he looked around to the mine cars that were being loaded up by sligs in a distance. About four if he saw correctly... five maybe.
'This is like Rupture Farms all over again...'
He kept walking untill he finnaly found an elevator. Hopefully it would take him back to his friends.
As he pulled the elevator up he kept a good eye out. He went by a slig who was napping and past a slog hut which was out of order.
When he reached the top floor, he quikly jumped in the shadows.
'What?' the nearby slig reacted on the sound.
Abe stayed still, the slig came walking to him. Did the shading provide enough cover?
The slig stayed still just infront of him.
'Hm... musta been the wind...' he said and wanted to turn around.
Just at that moment Abe grabbed him, and pulled him out of his pants. He tossed the slig down the elevator ledge, then trew the gun after him. A small 'thud' was heard seconds later.
'Why are those sligs so stupid? Ha!'
He carried on. He reached a second elevator, and went up another level.

'So... now what do we do?' one of the muds asked while they looked down the ledge, looking for Abe.
'I dunno...' Alf replied.
Suddenly, slig voices were heard.
'Well, he sucked anyway, what retard wants to be in chage of a meat factory?'
The slig laughed.
'Its the biggest meat factory on Oddworld... I want to be its CEO anytime, thank you verry much.'
Alf looked around. Not a single way out...
'Dang,' he said. 'Erm... all of you, pretend your working!'
Everyone ducked down, trying to look hard at work. When the sligs past they looked at them.
'Are they supposed to be here?'
'Ah, probably another thing early shift forgot to transfer to us... stupid idiots...'
'Yes... but...'
'No buts... c'mon, we got more work to do.'
As they walked away Alf could hear how the slig mentioned the reward for Abe and he kept a good eye open.
'Abe better watch his back...'
The sligs took an elevator down and appeard to stay where they were now.
'Im gonna take a nap...'
'Yea, il go inspect the mine cars. Il see you later.'

Just a few ledges between being reunited...
'Damn the odd... what happand to stairs!' Abe complained. When he got up the ledge he got a scare of the sleeping slig right infront of him.
'Odd damn it... stupid slig' he mumbled while he snook past.
The slig turned around, giving Abe a second near-heartattack.
'Odd Damn You!' Abe shouted, waking up the slig.
'Wha?'
'Oh shit...'
Abe quikely ran to the nearest ledge and jumped...
'Freeze!'
'Are you crazy! Let me up!'
He pulled himself up the ledge and layed down to rest. He closed his eye's. Thinking of home.
'Wait... I don't have a home... ODD DAMN IT AGAIN!'
'Easy you... glad you made it back,' Alf said.
Abe looked up. In his fast action he failed to notice he reunited with his friends already.
'Yea... lucky me...'


(Comments are more then welcome!)

[Software Bug]

Cool story Havoc!!!
Keep going!!

[T-nex]

Wee! yay for you! I'm so glad you continued with the story.
And it rocks!