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12-20-2003, 09:34 PM
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'Making amends'

*Setting: Slowly the Sun sauntered towards the horizon as Dusk set in. And as the sky cast its orange glow down onto the ground, the younger inhabitants of Liel left their homes to go out clubbing. But as a short stream of 16+ year olds started milling through the alleyways to the back of all the derelict buildings, it became clear they didn’t just want to party. As they passed bins and disturbed stray Cats their excited talking came to a stop. As they passed the final old, falling apart structure they came into an opening, and in this opening stood a dome-like building, no more than two-three storeys high, but unlike the surrounding old, internally destroyed buildings this one was flowing with life. A queue was forming outside the entrances of the large, pale blue doors, which were guarded by the Bouncers, their breed being Refelx'. Quickly the new arrivals rushed to the end of the queue, hoping to get in a decent enough place before any other being. As they did this though, creatures began to emerge from the insides of the buildings. Clambering out of the glassless windows or stepping out of the doorless doorways. These creatures were pure white, their bodies like a bag of bones and their eyes totally black. But the most disturbing thing was that they didn't have a set race. As three emerged, it was clear they were from Orkhid race, then as the fourth and fifth came out into the light it was clear they were Mudokon. All their nails were long and brittle and their faces wrinkled with age or worry. As they dragged their aged selves towards the queue they moaned, like beggars. Their clothes as white as their bodies they held out their hands in desperation and tried to muster the strength to speak.*

White being: "Spare any essence? Please...I beg of you. An ounce? Please."

This once-Orkhid creature looked the clubbers in the eyes, begging softly. Shaking their heads the teenagers turned away from the creatures, disgusted by what the beings had become. For these creatures were addicted to magick. And through their addiction had become crippled of any power they once had. Their colour drained of them as did anything that came into contact with them for a long period of time, they were nothing. A shell of their former selves. Only happy once they had been filled with another being’s magick and thus clutched onto what they once was. As they, one by one, moved up the queue to beg for their next high, the Bouncers became aware. Stepping away from the door, one of the 7ft beings gnarled at its inferior, pointing to one of the buildings it came from. Hissing, one of the addicted beings disobeyed this command and continued to ask for help with its addiction, but doing so was a grave mistake and as the Refelx held out its webbed hand, it formed a ball of pure white energy. A grunt came from the beast as it notified the addict it was prepared to kill it, if needs be. This was warning enough, and in a quick gulp the creature began to limp-run away from the queue, closely followed by the others. But as they neared the nearest building the form of a sleek, dark, feminine figure greeted them. Her hair was black as the night itself as was her black jeans and sleeveless vest top. As she stepped out of the masking shadows she was quickly approached by the once-Orkhid addict that had, had to be threatened to be deterred. Its eyes seemingly lit up as it approached her, sensing the females overwhelming power.

White being: "Essence to spare? Please. Any essence at all. Big or small..."

The females grey eyes scanned the pathetic little creature and then flicked to the other four quickly following it. Smiling she held her hand out, her palm facing its chest and unleashed a surge of red energy into it. The creatures black eyes glowed red as its mouth widened into an ecstasy induced smile. Letting her hand fall she then stepped around it, ignoring the other four creatures that then began to pester and beg her. But all was not well, for the creature she had graced with abit of her essence began to feel the true nature of the female develop inside of it. Red electricity sparked and twirled around its body and in a squealing fit of terror the thing tried to scratch the essence out from its chest. Hearing the terrified noises the others turned to it, looking on in curiosity as the beings blood boiled and in a couple of seconds later, was engulfed by black and dark purple flame. Its voice screeched out like a Cat being tortured until finally the fire had done its work and the entire body of the thing collapsed in a pile of smoking ash. Turning to look at the female walking away the other four whimpered lowly and then quickly hurtled away to the safety of the building, still desperate for a beings magick but wanting to keep their lives, as pathetic as they currently was. The female smiled, walking towards the queue with her hips swaying from side to side. The beings queuing turned to her, some knowing who she was and others just in awe of her power. Walking alongside the queue she studied the teens and adults waiting to get into the club, as if looking for someone specific. Nearing the front of the line, she stopped, studied one female’s face and allowed herself to sense the females presence and power.

Powerful female: "Margaret, right?"

She smiled softly, her pale pink lips parting briefly and thus revealing a set of pearly white teeth. The female queuing nodded slowly, wondering how this mysterious, yet highly powerful, female knew her name.

Powerful female: "Good. My names Amber, i was just wondering if i could speak to you in private for a minute. Its quite urgent and it would be immensely appreciated if you could spare some of your time."

Blinking softly the Bouncers studied Amber, knowing who she was and how dangerous she could be. The latter reason being why they didn't confront her. Nodding slowly Margaret stepped forwards, asking one of her friends to save her place for her if they hadn't gone in already. But as her right foot made its way to step out of the queue a sparkling of whitey-blue particles [like how Leo and Paige Orb in 'Charmed'] began to appear a couple of feet away. In seconds the sparkling had subdued, leaving a black suited female standing were they once were, her arms crossed and her black wavy hair running down her back. Her brown eyes looked at Amber in a menacing way, wondering why she was pestering her customers right outside her club.

Owner: "Why are you here?"

Amber smiled and brushed a strand of black hair from out of her face.

Amber: "Just to inform Margaret here of something that is important. To her."

The owner of the club smiled and stepped forwards, nodding sarcastically as she studied Amber's body language.

Owner: "Sure, sure(!) Of course. Couldn't be anything sinister or twisted, could it(!)"

Sighing Amber positioned herself so that she was facing the owner properly and not having to turn her head to speak to her.

Amber: "Look, i don't want any trouble okay, Charity. I just want to sort my business out, go home and rest. Knowing that everything is sorted. Please don't try and be all heroic...please?"

Charity smiled and chuckled, looking away briefly as she did so.

Charity: "No, you look. I told you once, i don't want you anywhere near my club OR my customers. They don't need to be part of your sick little cult, nor do they need to be approached by you. Understood?"

Amber: "You know under any normal circumstances i wouldn't come here, you know that, right? Its just that Madge, well, she's a Pre-cog. A powerful one at that. I need a new one, i need...well...her. I develop her power, make her powerful. Its nothing bad, its all good. I promise."

As she said the last part of her sentence she turned to the female she had approached and waved her right hand over her chest in a cross formation.

Charity: "Go, Amber. I don't want any of your pathetic excuses or stupid lies, okay? You obviously found out about her through your own Pre-cog, so he or she can't be that bad..."

Amber: "She isn't. She's quite good really. Accurate most of the time. Its just that she mis-interpreted this big dealio about the future. Told Leonard someone had to be killed when really they need to survive. And you know what Leonard’s like, if i don't get her, he will..."

She then glanced over to Margaret.

Amber: "And believe me, with this way...nobody else gets hurt."

In saying this a surge of bright blue electricity leapt from the fingertips of Charity and hit Amber in the chest, the female staggered backwards - shocked.

Charity: "Save your manipulation for another night, Amber. And get the Hell away from my club...now."

Charity growled lowly, blue electricity arching and weaving in-between her fingers. Amber, however, kept her place and didn’t move.

Amber: "Why do you insist on behaving so, so...awkwardly? When Nickolas was alive you were quite happy to be diplomatic but now, now you just want to..."

As she approached the end of her sentence a flurry of fierce strands of lightening escaped Charity's right palm. Hitting Amber in the chest and abdomen they sent the startled being staggering backwards highly bemused.

Charity: "DON'T...ever say his name again. Don't ever bring him in to our conflict. Or i swear to every known God on this damned world i will end your life."

Rubbing her stomach whilst looking down Amber chuckled softly. Her hair draped infront of her face as she did so. But as Charity's sentence came to an end the female slowly looked up, her eyes a searing, bright red.

Amber: "Do not make promises you cannot keep, Charity. They'll only make you look a fool."

In ending this sentence the female raised her left arm, clenching her hand into a fist. She then smirked, sinisterness gripping the already tense atmosphere. In reaction to the fist clenching Charity seemed to start to choke, she felt her airway close up and as her face turned from a pale peach to soft red she realised that she could not, or wasn't being allowed to, breathe. Raising her clenched fist in the air, Amber then smiled. Charity was slowly raised off the ground and in seconds their was a commotion behind her. The clubbers were slowly beginning to back away, not wanting to face this immensely powerful Orkhid. Even the Bouncers dared not intervene incase they too were dealt with in such a harsh manner. Feeling her captive trying to muster all the strength she had to teleport, Amber then formed a black ball of fire in her free hand. Aimed for Charity's stomach and hurled it towards her, watching it impact and scorch a vicious black and red mark into her but also sending a wave of red electricity through her body - immediately weakening her. Charity dropped to the ground, coughing harshly as she felt her power drain from her.

Amber: "If only you knew what was coming. If only you had an inkling of what forces were behind the ever-nearing future...heh, you may even change sides."

Charity: "I...*Cough*...find that....doubtful."

She looked up at her enemy, her brown eyes burning into Amber's.

Amber: "So do i, that’s why, when the end does come i’m gonna make sure i have claim to your Soul..."

She winked, her eyes restoring to their normal grey colour as she slowly backed away and then turned to face the queue…or lack of. Due to the little ruckus the clubbers had all fled, leaving only her, Charity and the Bouncers stood infront of the bass pumping club. Turning her head, Amber snarled, sniffing the air. Upon catching the scent of Margaret she then exploded in a mass of black and purple flame, before sizzling into nothingness. Moments later there was the sound of screaming and powers being discharged from a couple of alleys away, the sickening sizzle of burning flesh indicating that Amber had got what she had came for - and that Charity's efforts had all been in vain.

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(OOC: If there are any mistakes in this, please feel free to point them out. Thankles. Whoop, haven't done one of these [a fic] in like...CENTURIES!!)
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01-26-2004, 10:59 AM
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Part 2

*Setting: The cold wind of the night blew through the small, rickety, two storey house. Whistling gently as the dust and old cobwebs were blown faintly. Flames from scattered candles swayed rythmicly, some going out in a whisp of grey smoke as the wind picked up. Stepping out from the darkness of the shadows, Leonard sneered. Waving his right hand in the direction of the outted candles and thus re-lighting them.*

Leonard: "We're so going to have to get this place renovated. Or move..."

He looked around the room he was in, sighing and speaking to himself as he noticed crack after crack in the ceiling and walls. Even the furniture was worn and torn. As an Orkhid-like figure emerged from one of the other rooms he turned to it, growling in frustration.

Leonard: "Well, do you know where she is yet?"

The creature was a female Orkhid, oldish. Her hair was grey and scraggly and her face haggard and weary. The beings eyes were a dark brown and she walked with a hunch, whilst clothed in a black, dirty gown. She was a Witch. Old yet experienced in making Potions of Darkness. Like her three "sisters" she had been "recruited" by either Amber or Leonard and taught well in the arts of pain and suffering.

Witch: "Mary said that she had asked about the whereabouts of another Pre-cog. Margaret, i think she said her name was."

Growling Leonard looked to one of the glassless windows that graced the small room and stepped towards it.

Leonard: "She's a waste. We already have an exellent Pre-cognitive and what does she go and do - goes and looks for more. As if that'll help me get a grasp on this realm...GrrrRAAARRR!!"

Frustration took ahold of his emotions for a brief moment and he sharply span around, hurling a ball of red fire at the otherside of the room. The ball soared quickly, leaving a trail of sparks and smoke before hitting the wall and exploding in a mass of fire and smoldering wood.

Leonard: "I am sick to death of having to go back to that wasteland of misfits and damnations. Where the world is governed by a hierarchy of creatures that have been born into their roles...i want THIS world. I want the luxuries this place has to offer...where i will only have to answer to one person - myself."

Allowing his head to hang he shook it from side to side gently, feeling the soft wind blow his fur ever-so-softly. Sighing he opened his mouth to carry on speaking, stopping when an eruption of black fire enveloped the middle of the room. As he watched the feminine figure of Amber materialise from the flame and smoke, he also noticed she was holding somebody. A single line of red electricity darted from the top of Ambers body to the bottom of her feet, instantly solidifying the being and her prisoner who was quickly thrown to the floor...unconcious.

Amber: "Stupid fu...Leonard!! W-What are you doing here?"

From the corner of her eye she caught the figure of her superior stood to her left, his arms crossed and his eyes burning red with fury.

Leonard: "Where have you been, Amber? I've had Clarice here trying to get a hold of your signal but it seems you have been blocking it somehow as you went along with your time wasting escapades. Care to explain?"

She coughed nervously and stepped towards the powerful Demon, worried about his tone of voice.

Amber: "I-I've been sorting a few things out. Loose ends, if you will. Nothing for you to wor..."

The white, three fingered right hand of the creature lashed out, grasping Ambers vocal cords and giving them a firm squeeze.

Leonard: "Nothing to worry about? You don't seem to realise how much i hate my own world, Amber. How...How desperate i am to escape it. And because of you, because of your USELESS little errands you seem to be making, i am being hindered in my project...i should devour your Soul right now and end your futureless existance."

His posh voice began to crack in places, revealing a sinister growl that hid behind the beings posh exterior. Throwing Amber back he then cast his glowing red eyes down to the female Amber had brought with her.

Leonard: "Well? Care to explain?"

Coughing and rubbing her throat, which now had the indentation marks of her superiors fingertips gracing her soft skin, Amber began to explain.

Amber: "She, she's a new Pre-cognitive. Mary made a mistake...Commandor Iraxx needs to live if our plan is to succeed. And if the silly bint can make such a dramatic error now, with such an important piece of information, she'll more than likely screw it up as our task nears to an end... "

Leonards brow raised slightly as his mind began to work overtime, he already had enough on his plate without this happening.

Leonard: "Are...are you sure?"

Amber nodded her head gently, empathizing with Leonard and the stress he was already under.

Leonard: "If this gets out Basium will make a mockery out of me. Not to mention that we'll have to track Adele down and dispose of her before she even makes an attempt on Iraxx's life."

He caressed his goatee, wrapping it around his index finger as he tried to ponder a way to keep all of this under wraps.

Amber: "If you want, i can make sure that Adele fails in her task. I've already got us a new Pre-cognitive and so it'll only be a matter of minutes before we know when she's going to make an attempt on his life."

Nodding softly he agreed, his facial expression distant as he tried to work out how this would effect the overall plan. After a couple of seconds had passed he realised that it could work out if everything went the way it was supposed to from now on. He nodded more enthusiasticly this time, even managing a faint smile. As he straightened himself up, adjusted his tie and brushed off his shoulders he spoke.

Leonard: "Yes, just make sure everything goes the way its supposed to. I don't think i'll be able to stand another year in that foul, Demonic world."

Amber nodded and turned to the, still unconcious, female on the floor. Turning his head to the left Leonard stared hard at the wall that was seperating him from Mary. This seperation was only physical however and he could still feel the pulsing of her Soul. Holding out his left arm he outstretched his fingers and hand, focusing hard on the pulsating rythm her Soul gave off. Three seconds later there was an agonised scream closely followed by a ghostly whooshing as the females white-ish, humanoid Soul [like the Souls in 'Legacy of Kain: Defiance'] came rippling through the wall and into Leonards hand. Almost immediatly the Soul dispersed into electricity and ran up his arm and into his chest, causing his eyes to glow a bright white as he absorbed it into his essence. He sighed, satisfied as he heard the heavy thump of Mary's corpse hit the floor.

Leonard: "No mistakes, Amber. Not one."

He said this in a menacingly firm tone, staring his inferior in the eyes so that she knew he was deadly serious. He then turned completly black and exploded into small blebs of shadow, these 'shadows' then darted in different directions, disappearing into the natural shadows scattered around the room...

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Part 3

*Setting: A vertical column of black flame seemed to appear from nowhere, whooshing and roaring whilst turning slowly clockwise. Seconds passed and the column quickly shrank, shrank to the size of Amber, before shifting into her form. Three seconds later the towering block of black fire had changed into the powerful female who was wearing a pair of dark jeans with an old white t-shirt and black shoes, her black hair draped over her shoulders as her eyes flicked around the room she had manifested in. It was a large, modern living room. With pale beige walls, a soft carpet and large windows which showed all of the city that being situated on the 88th floor could show. The furniture was black and arty pictures hung on the wall. Turning around to face behind her she studied a door described by Margaret, the Pre-cog who she had kidnapped not long back and who was now, with Ambers coersion, slowly turning her powers to the dark side of magick. Slowly Amber stepped over to the door, hearing music from an unknown artist playing from behind it. As she approached she waved her left hand to the right, in an instant the doors knob turned and swung open, revealing a large bedroom with the bed opposite the doorway. The bed was large, and a dark red colour. And as she slowly made her way towards it, she cast her glance to the left, and saw the corpse of an Orkhid male sat crumpled on the floor. A single stab wound in his chest. Gian. His lifeless eyes open with sheer horror and the top part of his towel dyed a bile black through his blood. Amber smiled softly, closing the door telekineticly.*

Amber: "Gianni, Gianni, Gianni...heh, couldn't even tell the difference between an Assassin and his beloved wife of 11 years."

She purred these words. Glancing between the wall and the bed, Amber noticed a crumpled nightgown which had obviously being flung down by the assailant posing as his lover. Holding her left arm up, she used her mind to lift the Satin green gown and place it in her hand. She then turned to the back of the room where a brown walk in closet was situated and walked upto it, opening the doors with her mind she then grabbed a coat hanger and hung it up, closing the doors once she had done this. She then approached the corpse again and looked at it, amused.

Amber: "Such a shame, your wife will be utterly grief stricken."

A faint smile spread across her face as she stated this to the lifeless being. She then held out her hand, palm up and as she concentrated, caused a small test tube to materialise. A black flame taking the objects shape before the object itself manifested. The testube itself was sealed up with a small cork, and inside it was a strand of dark hair. Adeles hair.

Amber: "...And the Council, well, they'll be seeking out who's responsible with avengence. Heh. Every city will be heaving with Orkhid patrols."

Holding the tube with her second, third and fourth finger. She proceeded to pull the cork off with her index finger and thumb, before making a pair of tweezers appear in the same way she did the tube. Reaching inside the tube with the tweezers, she grasped the hair by the end and slowly pulled it out, looked around for a perfect spot and then dropped it, not too far from the door. Once she had depleted the use of the tube and tweezers, she dropped them, they then burst into black flames on the way down and disappeared into nothingness before hitting the ground. Not even leaving a small amount of ash or dust.

Amber: "There."

She smiled triumphantly before turning her attention to the bed, which was neat aside from a few crinkles on the edge. Holding her right arm up, she shook her hand gently from side to side, ruffling up the bedspread in hopes of making it look like a struggle had taken place. She then crouched down close to the corpse, looking at the undefined body of Gianni. Rubbing her chin in thought, Amber pondered how to make the murder less professional. Slowly raising her left arm, she pointed her index finger at the body and swished it around from side to side. In response small knife-like cuts appeared on the body. She then flicked out her index finger and began making the same vicious digs into the body that the Assassin had done with the murder weapon. She made these markings around where the initial deadly blow was, making it seem as if the perpetrator had struggled with killing Gian before finally penetrating the Heart. Standing up, she took one step back and assessed the final image. Raising her right arm up gently, palm facing upwards, she raised the body off the ground and then flung it on the bed, allowing it to bounce off and then roll back down to the ground.

Amber: "There, i think thats the ladies touch this whole incident needed. Now all i have to do is wait for the Council to do my job...if they're competant enough that is."

As she spoke these words in a gentle tone, the sound of the front door opening could be heard, closely followed by the gentle humming of Gian's wife. Now it was clear that Amber could do no more, smiling at the feeling of her own initiative, Amber consumed herself with black flames, before disappearing in a dispersement of soft black sparks. Leaving no trace that she had been to the scene or interfered...

~End~

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