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07-16-2003, 07:01 PM
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Oddworld: Abe's Peril.

Well I thought I wold do myself an oddworld story, hope you enjoy it.

CHAPTER ONE: SAVAGE PLOT.

Smoke, nothing but smoke. Ashes, flickering in te air, polluting the air. Paramites and Srabs lay around the dead ship known as Vykkers labs 1001, rotting and attrackting ratz. Just thnk, this scene of mass destructon was caused by a Mudukon and his Gabbit friend.
"it's horrible, absoloutly horrible!" cried a Vykker,"Why did i have to happen to Humphrey and Irwin, why why why..."
"Ooh shudap! Ok Humphrw and I rwin were kiled in th explosion of lab 1001, andI know how sorry you feel soo...I have made a plan to capture that abeguy, get the rewrd money, and buy more research products." Sneered Moe, "And this is it." Moe pulls out a black block with a big bright, red button, and pushes it with excitement. A glass vage oppened infrontofthem,with smoke coming out of it, then a black figure appeared throught the smoke. For this was a figure of a Mudukon, not just a Mudukon, the figure was nne other than...
Hope you enjoyed it, more tommorow.

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