Exalmex

Seargentbig · #1 05-07-2003, 08:32 AM

My first Fan fic. I know it well.
And you're looking at it.
This will be my first fan fic. Feel free to point out my mistaces (Exept spelling mistakes, like that one) but no totaly negartive things, ok?
I hope you like it.

Exalmex

Mayllar

I looked at the data. It indicated that everything was going as planed. I brought up a display of the project. It looked pink, clear and soft. But it was progressing. I smiled. It had fingers now. I frowned at the pointed arms, but at least it could cary something. The data had earlier told me that it could spin webs. It appeared that once fully grown, it wouldnt be able to climb them though. Thinking of the two creatures that "had" to be de-materialised cheared me up. Pain is good in any project, unless its my own pain. Yes, the soldier was turning out perfectly.
My thoughts were interupted when someone came in.
"Who is it?" I asked angrily. A muffled reply came to me.
"Ah. Fred" Fred was my intern. He was carrying a data disk. I snatched it off of him and put it in the computer.
"Good. The M-C chip info is in here." I looked at fred. "You may go now."
I looked at the data again. Yes, the Mayllar 153 project was going perfectly. The mix of scrab and paramite DNA was going to be a great soldier.

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Hobo · #2 05-07-2003, 01:14 PM

OOOOOOOOH

MORE!

Seargentbig · #3 05-08-2003, 07:34 AM

Ok, ok...
You would think no one here has an ocupation...

(Several months later)

Mayllar

It was nearly ready to hatch. It was clear what 153 would look like when fully grown. It had the body of a paramite with paramite legs, but that body had no head. Instead, the top part became a scrab torso, with arms like scrab legs. It had a scrabs neck, and then a paramites head. With no eyes (That he could see. They do have eyes, but even he wouldn't dare damage this specimin. He would have to make another one later.),I had decided to give it a modified slig mask and atatch it to its brain. It was scrab red. Good, really. What was the use of a soldier that was green? Green! Anyway, it had turned out red. It had a web making organ, as I had thought, but couldnt use the scrab shred power.
A big problem was where it was to hatch. Would it be in the scarabanian desert? Or the paramonian jungle? It was a difficult choise. The mind control chip couldn't be inserted until it was at least adolesent, and until then, the baby's mental condition would decide how effective the chip was. Scince the head was paramite, I decided on a replica of the jungle.
I was getting bored. As great as this experment was, I was longing to test some more fuzzles. When the creature is complete, I will have all the fuzzles I would ever want!
I laughed, and woke up a fuzzle, who squeaked in alarm. I turned to it, a grin on my face...

Me

It is good that i got a reply. Thanks, Hobo!
To write longer chapters, I need more time, though. wait a bit for the next one.

The Red Muse · #4 05-08-2003, 03:28 PM

Wheee!! That was good!
That was really good indeed!
More!

Seargentbig · #5 05-09-2003, 06:52 AM

Read the last bit of my post. You'll get it soon.

Seargentbig · #6 05-10-2003, 03:40 AM

Forget what I said in my last two posts.

Several years later (Don't worry, this is where it slows down. You havent missed too much. The fuzzle exploded, and Mayllar 153 hatched.) This is about where Abe's Exodus Begins.

Mayllar

The subject is old enough for the chip now. It is a fearsom beast, and the size of a scrab. It uses the extra legs to help with walking, as well as... other things. Lets just say that the interns that went in to feed it suceeded. Probably not in a way they liked, but no-one could ask them now.
Right now it is asleep. Funding had boosted now, due to a need of several gluckons for them. Um, there was... There was General Dripik, Vice-President Aslik, Director Phleg, and that Brewmaster among others. Ever since that Abe guy destroyed Rupturefarms, there has been a need for more security. If i suceeded with the progect, I would be very rich. If I failed... I don't want to think about it. I began the operation, that would give it sight, and give me riches and fuzzles for testing.

(Hours later)

Mayllar 153

It is terribe! It is torchure! It is painful to an extent no other creature has experienced before. Not without going insane, anyway. Funny. Just hours ago, I didn't know the meaning of insane, and now I felt myself about to fall into the void that was it. I just want it to stop! Make it stop! Make it stop!

Mayllar

I don't know what had happened. The creature had gone crazy when it woke up. I hope that it would pass. If it didn't, I might be killed. Or worse, I might be torchered while being killed. I haven't tried to control it yet, as I am afraid it will fail. I hope it will stop.

Me

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Find out what happened in the next part of the story!

Seargentbig · #7 05-11-2003, 09:15 AM

Uh, as much as I like writing this, I need SOME motivation. 1 reply for the next chapter.

Sekto Springs · #8 05-11-2003, 01:33 PM

not bad at all.......keep it up

Seargentbig · #9 05-12-2003, 08:05 AM

Ok, the next part:

Mayllar 153

I had gotten over the immediate shock, but now there was the problem of eating.
They had stoped pushing those interns through the door, and now they send in brown furry things that say "meep!" and bounce around, one at a time I noticed. They were called fuzzles.
But i couldnt eat them. Before I would tear them up without a second thought. But now something stops me. It isn't solid, like a wall, it is inside. It seems better to just let them bounce around and squeak all the time, even if it is annoying. But I have nothing to eat. Luckily the scrab side of me is used to long periods without food.
And there is that. I know things that I shouldn't... nay, couldn't possibly know. I know that a scrab is a tall red thing with very sharp jaws, four legs, no arms, a muscled torso, colloured red and is very territorial, I know that a paramite is a short, four legged thing with no arms, a complicated mouth that can pick things up, colloured green and is rarely seen alone and I know that I am a cross of the two, even though I had never seen them before in my life.
I also know that I am a test subject, created by a vykker named Mayllar, am supposed to be a soldier, have a modified "Slig" mask on my face and have a mind control chip in my brain. Which is weird, because I don't feel controled. I seem to get new infomation from nowhere, however. There was a whole universe of it when I woke up, and now it just came every now and then.
What comes from me, is that I know I have to escape. Yes. Next time the cage is opened, in about an hour, I'll be ready.

Mayllar

There was some good news and some bad news. The good news was that the creature had calmed down. The bad news is that the chip didn't work. I need to start over. I will destroy the progect if no sign of improvement comes tommorow

There. Chapter 4. 1 reply for the next chapter.

Seargentbig · #10 05-15-2003, 08:09 AM

Ok, you will get a new chapter every 2 days, or if you reply, you get it sooner. OK?
Scince I diddn't get a reply, I will go with the former.

45 min's later

Mayllar 153

I was in position. When the cage door opens, I would escape!
I made a sack of web, containing the fuzzles that were in the cage. I had it in my mouth, slung over my shoulder.
The problem of eating would be nothing if I escaped, at least for a few weeks. I would just eat whoever made me.
The cage will open in a few seconds...
I charged!
The cage was not open, but it would be when I got there.
Sure enough, it opened.
When the intern saw me it had a look of pure terror on it's face. The door suddenly began to close.
It was getting too low! In a last destperate leap, I reached it, and shoved my hands under. It stopped, but wasn't getting higher.
When I stopped, the bag of fuzzles slipped and fell, and the occupnts bounced out. They looked at the doorway and bounced through. I heard a muffled cry, and then the door whent up.
I saw the fuzzles, but no intern. It doesn't take a genious to figure out what happened to him.
I looked at the doorway, and walked through.
I saw a room full with computers. and some doors. One had a sign with strange symbols on in, and another above it. At the computers was a single vykker.
He noticed me, and began to back away.
I hissed and charged.
The Vykker cried out "Aaaaahhhhhhhhh

Splat · #11 05-15-2003, 04:17 PM

Cool...
I like it, now theres your reply, so talk!

I'm gonna make a point about reading this. It's cool!

Seargentbig · #12 05-16-2003, 08:59 AM

Me

*Bows towards a croud*
"Thank you, thank you!"
*A rose gets thrown, and gets stuck in Seargentbig's eye*
"Ahhhhhhh! Get it out! Get it out! Get it out! "

Mayllar 153

My creator was dead. The lab was exploded.
My sentience stayed.
That might be a good thing, I wouldn't know. But what I did know wat that I didn't know what do do next. And I had a fan club of fuzzles. And a name. I named myself as something other than "Mayllar 153". I named my self Exalmex.
But still, I did'nt know what to do next.
I don't know how the awnser came to me, but it did.
So now I am at the monsaic lines. It is a calming place. It is also where I saw my first Mudokon.
I was walking along when a mudokon apeared. It just came in a flash of blue light. It had a bow, aimed at me. But when it saw me, it didn't know what to do. It stared for a moment, chanted, and then dissapeared again. It was very confusing.
But now I was standing in front of two wells. One has a scrab above it, the other has a paramite above it. I don't know which one to jump in.
Something came to me then. It was blury, but it was telling me something. It was telling me to jump in the well that had the...

Me

Ow. Don't worry, my eye is alright. The fact that it is the only eye I have now is irrelivent.
Now it is time for you to choose which well he jumps in. To Paramonia or Scarabania? The one with the most votes, I will have Exalmex jump in. You will get the next part of the story in 1 week.
See you then.
*Walks into a poll*

Splat · #13 05-18-2003, 03:34 PM

I think you mean pole. Anyway, great chapter, and i vote paramite (if you are refeing to the 2 wells in necrum, i believe paramite has less sligs!)

Seargentbig · #14 05-19-2003, 08:19 AM

Yeah, pole.
Anyway, I am refering to the wells in monsaic lines - you know, in the first game - you know, where Abe gets his shykull power, you kn... yeah. You know.

Splat · #15 05-20-2003, 08:08 AM

Man, I haven't played that one in about 4 years! Oh, well, Scrabs then.

Seargentbig · #16 05-20-2003, 08:14 AM

Ok.
1 Scarabania
0 Paramonia
I would like to point out that in the case of a draw, Paramonia will win, as it is my fave.

Seargentbig · #17 05-23-2003, 09:08 AM

OK, 1 more day. I will reply to this again at about 4 or 5 tommorow.

Seargentbig · #18 05-25-2003, 02:54 AM

Well, it is two days after my last post. The votes are in... the winner is...
Scarabania!

Exalmex

:

It was telling me to jump in the well that had the

picture of a scrab above it
I jumped into the well.
It was a long fall. the thing is, I sometimes felt myself falling up, which was weird. But, eventualy, I came to a stop.
My four toes landed in red dust. It was very hot, and there was little vegitation anywhere. Red plains continued as far as my eye could see. It was a wasteland. The most dominant feature by far would be a stone structure with statues of scrabs surronding it.
I could hear a metalic whiring somewhere. I walked forward a bit, and It became louder. I walked forward further, into some shadows.
A slig turned around a wall of orange rock. It couldnt see me. I decided then to do something thed I had never done.
I began spining a web,using my back legs. I leaned forward on my arms to keep myself balenced. I stoped spining when a single thread was streached over my two back legs, and connected to me.
The slig came closer, and I jumped over his head and threw my back legs backwards. I then began spining again, and wraping the slig in my web. It fell out of it's pants and said "help!" before I covered it almost completely, stoped spining and cut my web.
I looked at the lump of web that was throbing and saying "Mmmph!" every now and then.
Then I stuck one of my arms through it.
The slig stoped strugling immdiately. blood oosed out of the hole. I repaired the web, and put it in my backpack.

Haha! there! now, reply or I won't write for a week. I have a bad case of writers blo

Sekto Springs · #19 05-25-2003, 10:49 AM

I LIKE THIS THREAD! a like it alot!!! it's good! keep it up

TheRaisin · #20 05-25-2003, 05:32 PM

NEED.... MORE.... PLEASE.... CAN'T.... HOLD OUT.... MUCH LONGER! ARR RRG GHH ....

Sekto Springs · #21 05-25-2003, 11:59 PM

my name is Ivanna, but not Ivanna Humpalott, my names Ivanna reedmor fanfic! dont stop!

:

NEED.... MORE.... PLEASE.... CAN'T.... HOLD OUT.... MUCH LONGER! ARR RRG GHH ....

should i go dig a grave for TheRaisin??

Seargentbig · #22 05-26-2003, 07:43 AM

I just wrote some, but it dissaperared, so im not feeling up to it now. You need to wait until tomorrow. Sorry

TheRaisin · #23 05-27-2003, 02:35 AM

C'mon! Post another chapter! I'll be your friend! Don't make me use the sad fuzzle face on you!

"'I see,' said the blind man, as he picked up his hammer and saw."

Seargentbig · #24 05-27-2003, 10:22 AM

Eheh heh heh...
*Backs away from TheRasin*
It's too late now. Im goint ot watch "The Sketch Show" in 15 mins.
I would say that i will do it tommorow, but im not sure, so ill TRY to do it tommorow.

Seargentbig · #25 05-28-2003, 08:00 AM

Chapter 8!

The rest of the journey was quite eventless after that, if you don't count slogs, mines, and more sligs.
Any meat I found I ate on the spot. One slig in my backpack was good enough.
The most exiting thing that hapened was actualy exiting, though. I was nearing the temple, walking up a slope. When I reached the top, I found myself above a pit, containing a well, and a scrab.
It was pacing around near the well. I was sure that if I had jumped in just then, I would have been killed. So, instead I got the slig from my backpack,and cut it into a big piece and a small one. I put the big one in my bag, and tossed the smaller bit down.
The scrab saw it imediately, and began walking towards it. I began spining.
When the Scrab was close enough, I jumped!
The web I was spining caught it.
I then experienced something quite strange.
Scrab!
Face it.
Howl
Wait for reply
Char...
I got a hold of myself in time, but it was very hard to keep it. I continued the webing until the scrab's feet were stuck to the floor and it's jaws stuck together.
I left the slab of meat there, because the scrab would break free eventualy, and I would feel bad if I just left it there with nothing.
I then walked up to, and jumped into, the well.

Reiji Neko Mitsukai · #26 06-02-2003, 01:08 AM

You are finishing this sometime, right? Or at least another chapter? 'Cause it's too good to just let sit here.

Native Poser · #27 06-02-2003, 02:40 AM

This is good Searge, keep it up!

Seargentbig · #28 06-02-2003, 03:08 AM

Yay! A reply!
Ok, next bit.

I came out of another well, in a dark cavern. There were windows around, though, so I could see. I could also hear. The whiring of slig pants in the distance, the beeping of a mine. I could even hear the houling of a scrab, in the far distance. Im sure that no slig would be able to hear it, because even to my very sensitive scrab ears, I could only barely hear it. The slig sounds came from somewhere left of me, but I couldn't see them because of a rock. I walked out of the rock's shadow...
... and quickly jumped back in. Behind me, the clink of bulets on rock told me that I just barely missed death.
I turned and looked further up ahead. There was another rock that would also hide me from the sligs, but I had to get there first. I looked aroud the rock. All the sligs were faceing away from me.
I quickly ran to the next rock.
ClinkClinkClinkPtOWowowClinkClinkclickclickclick.
That was what I heard trailing me. I reached the rock, and thought that there was a long run ahead of me.
After some more Run-Wait-Look-Run-Wait, I came to a line of mines. they were all de-acivated, and looked old, like they had been there for a long time. I ran through them, hearing the familiar clink of bullets after me. I wondered who would turn them off.
After some more rock hoping, I came to a door. It was dark and uninviting, but I also felt a strange attraction to it. Anyway, it was the only exit, so I decided to enter.

1 reply or1 week.
Muahahahaha!
Im so Evil!

Reiji Neko Mitsukai · #29 06-02-2003, 07:54 PM

More? Please? It's really good so far!

Seargentbig · #30 06-03-2003, 08:49 AM

Another reply, another chapter!

I found myself in a chamber of doors. There were about seven, six were open, the seventh was closed. I went in the first one.

Flintlocks: 0

I came out of the door, and heard snoring. It was coming from above me, strangely enough. I looked up, and saw some green worm-like things with two heads, and a toung out of one, sticking it to the celing I remembered that this was something I remembered from my time at the labs. They were fleeches. They were made by vykkers to be pets for glukons, and cleaners for hard to reach places with really long tounges. I don't know if they were dangerous, but knowing vykkers...
Well, I'm dangerous, aren't I?
I looked at the floor, after hearing some slurping noises below me.
They were black and brown slugs. Puny things, how could they be dangerous?
I learnt too late just how dangerous they could be.
I walked on a bit, and heard a high-pitched squeak from below me.
Eww. I had steped in one of them.
I was about to continue, but then heard something.
Actualy, it was more about what I didn't hear.
I turned around.
Three fleches stared back, and they looked like they were inviting me as dinner.
A long toung whiping me assured me that I was correct.
Damn.
I ran in the other direction, as fast as I could to get away. Unfortunately, more were in front of me, Licking their lips with incredibly twisty tounges.
I turned around to see the others aproaching me.