Romantic Poems

[miss oddchick]

Hiya fellow forumers, this is my first post, so I'm sorry if I make an ass of it .
Right, to buisness, Romantic Poems, got any you wanna post? Plz do, here is a poem of my own:

My Love

To my truest darling,
I love thee,
And for a whole eternity,
This is how it shall be.
I know when you touch me,
That your heart is true,
And that you'll always love me,
Whatever I do.
Whenever I look,
Deep into your eyes,
I can always tell,
That they'll tell me no lies.
I only hope, that the day that I fall,
You shall hold me,
Darling, love, one and all...

Lol, pretty stupid, huh? I hope to see you posts soon!

oddchick

[Kaimana]

I've written some love poems of my own...for certain people. Maybe I'll post them here sometime. But about your poem, nicely writen. Good job miss.

[89da11]

Cool poem odd, I dont think I'll send any in, as i cant write poems...

[Glukkon killer]

well done odd!
Keep the good posts coming!
Good work

[Rex Tirano]

wow the chicken has talent! But no poems from snape miss chicken. You know the consiquences. Muhahaha! But kee up with the poems!

[cooldude]

GREAT work odd couldent'ev done it better my self well done

[Abe-gun]

even though I'm a boy...I'll post! Hey! I have a dream-girl, too, you know!!!!!!!


The Way You Look at Me

The way you look at me is so nice,
It reminds me of the smile of Jesus Christ.
It reminds me of how I used to be;
A big jerk, yep, that was me.
It reminds me of all things I don't know,
I hate to see your mouth bend low.
Everything you've done to try and help me,
Always worked...to you to be my being.
The way you look at me fills my spirit with pride,
That's why I want you to be my bride.


Tell me if you like it or not! Make fun of it
if you wish

[miss oddchick]

Wow, we acctually have a poem! Thankyou Abe-gun, that was truely beautiful, really. That's quite something to have come from a nine year old, well done! *claps*

oddchick

[Abe-gun]

you're just sayin' that...shucks! it was nothin'

[89da11]

Cool poem Abe Gun... You have a lot more talent than me, like i said i cant write poems..

[Abe-gun]

C'mon Blue...I want to see ure best poem....give it all ya got....by the way, I'll be writing more poems at a later time

[89da11]

Me? Write a poem?lol! i cant write, okays, I'll write one, next time I post its gonna be the poem..

[Abe-gun]

Here's another one!

My Dream-girl (true story...er....poem)

In her eyes,
All the beuty shines
Into mine.
All the time I can't stop seeing
Her face while I am dreaming.
The way I see her soul
Is so great,
I'd squash someone teasing her,
Like a grape.
She'd have to say I'm hers,
For I know,
That she can't not kiss me
before I go.
Now I'm out and miserable,
'Cause now to me she's not visible.
Now I say goodbye,
And we look each other strait in the eyes....
And now I'm gone,
And mom tells me to mow the lawn.........

Like it?

[Kaimana]

lol bro! Wow..two poems for Ryan...zero for Kai. Well we will see about that. However I like your peoms. It has humor in it. Soon you shall see my works of art, and you will gaze in disbelief that I am the author. But you'll see soon enough

[Abe-gun]

shurrup Kai....I know you might be good...but don't let it get to your friekin' head!

[Kaimana]

Now now bro...tis only a friendly competition. Besides you seem to be good at these peoms

[Stanley]

WoW , thou do some more....

[Abe-gun]

who, me?

[Canned Gabbiar]

Well, I've finally attempted a love poem... I've written fan poems, but never this. Well, here I go:

What's this feeling?
When I'm around you,
My heart beats fast,
My cheeks turn red,
My legs turn to lead,
I can't lift them,
I start to sweat,
My head swims,
With a thousand thoughts,
All of them are of you,
My heart beats faster,
My legs suddenly melt,
Your hand brushed against mine,
I've lost my voice,
I give a smile,
You smile back,
My universe collapses,
What's this feeling,
I get around you?
What is it?
What?

[miss oddchick]

Well done, Canned Gabbiar! It seems that you can write poems as well as draw! Nice work, keep it coming guys. I can't believe that so many ppl reply to a romantic poems thread...thats cool.

oddchick

[89da11]

Ok guys this is the promised poem, that abe gun requested... But not to abe-gun.I personally think it is rubbish.... You will probably think it is too...

You're my guardian angel,
My angel from above,
My heart fills with joy,
And your words fill me with love.

Your love circles around me,
Like nothing before.
I will always be yours,
For eternity and ever more.

When I’m around you,
I feel as if I can fly,
I love you ever so much,
That I'll love you until i die..

I think that was really bad...

[miss oddchick]

Well done, Blue (89da11). That wasn't rubbish at all. Here is another poem:

I Think I Love You

I think I love you,
I really do,
And that love will be
Wholesome and true.
It is when you touch me,
My heart trembles and leaps,
And you stay in my mind,
Even when I sleep.
It is when you hold me,
I know that you care,
It seems that I love you,
Totally unaware.
I really think I love you,
It's in my heart that I do,
Please, please tell me,
That you love me too.

oddchick

[89da11]

Thanx Odd, well that was another good poem... Keep them coming in

[Kaimana]

Love poems...ahhh...so sweet they are. Well I still have yet to post one of my own. But so far nothing but nice poems

[Oddsville]

Really great poems Miss Odd! : P Im sorry I didn't reply earlier but I.....forgot...*runns off for fear of gumpy attack*

[Canned Gabbiar]

Nice poems Blue and Oddchick.

[salty pretzils]

Oh....very good. You obvioisly got some talent there.
And I'm not just saying that. I do actully read some poetry from time to time. *Blushes*

You're as forlorn as...
A lover without a love,
A below without an above.
A heart without a care,
A basalisk without a stare.
Hmm....made it up on the spur of the moment. Heh...oh well.

[Abe-gun]

Good job, Blue! Really! I'm not just saying that!
Here you are!

When Two Hearts Connect

When two hearts connect
Things change.
When two lips connect
Nothing at all is plain.
When two loves connect
Everything is rather rare,
And when two Lives connect
Everything goes smooth and fair.


Together

Together our hearts shine
And everything is fine.
I now shall get you to be mine. Fine.
Now I tell you,
With you there, I'll never whine.



The Love I Used to Have

The love I used to have,
Did all she could for me,
And when I looked deep in her eyes,
I knew she would be completely "lie-free."
She would be free of lies.
And when I figuered out,
That she faked me, now,
It was not pretty.
And now we break our life-promise,
To be together long,
And now that she's gone,
It is the end of my "love-songs."

[Kaimana]

Heres goes nothing...I'm making this up on the spot.
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I Need You...

I toss and turn in my sleep,
thinking of nothing more then you,
loving you is what I do best,
making you smile, making you laugh,
your like a song in my head that I can't get rid of,
your name is the sweet chorus,
and your kiss the memorable verses,
is there anyone sweeter then you?
is there anyone who compares?
I think not,
for you are special,
my play girl,
play toy,
lover,
my friend,
I want to spend eternity with you,
hold me in your arms,
and don't let go...

[Abe-gun]

That was good but I didn't gape in jealousy like you said I would!