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12-19-2015, 08:51 AM
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3D Art: Rupture Farms barrel

It's been a while since I've posted in here. In between university projects I've been slowly building up my portfolio so there's a bit more to show when I start applying for jobs. I thought I'd do a quick personal project based on Oddworld so I remade the Rupture Farms barrel. Didn't get to spend as much time as I'd like on it, but there you go. I plan to create some more Oddworld related assets in the future when I get time.

Beauty shots are below. Some crit would be great!

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Also a link to the Art Station post can be found here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/xOv0Y
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12-19-2015, 08:55 AM
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I'd love to crit it, but the first barrel is still loading...



It's been like that for 4 minutes or so
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12-19-2015, 09:27 AM
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12-19-2015, 09:32 AM
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Yes.
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Hey that's pretty fucking cool. You got it down pretty well, I think. Unfortunately I don't know the first thing about 3D modeling and whatnot so I can't offer any critique, but I know that I think it looks awesome.

Funny enough, I just made an Art Station account this morning.
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12-19-2015, 03:15 PM
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Nice! The web viewer thing is cool too. Are you planning to remake anything like the Greeter or other animated objects?
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12-20-2015, 12:07 AM
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Wow, that's really good Jordan! Well done pal
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That's a really good Jordan indeed.
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Wow! The detail is fantastic! Amazing work on this!
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Thanks for the comments guys.

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Nice! The web viewer thing is cool too. Are you planning to remake anything like the Greeter or other animated objects?
I would consider stuff like Greeters, but I wouldn't be able to animate them. I think they'd need to be able to animate for them to be a finished piece. Maybe something to look into in future.
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I would consider stuff like Greeters, but I wouldn't be able to animate them. I think they'd need to be able to animate for them to be a finished piece. Maybe something to look into in future.
What about one of those chant zappers with the legs?
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Aye that's doable. I'll consider it for my next personal project.
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Nice work dude. I didn't know you did 3D modeling
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Thought it was the real thing at first, scrolled down expecting yours to be underneath it. Well done!
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Good rendition! Here's a little realism tip: the wood below the lowest metal rim looks as if it's separate from the planks that form the barrel. There's no practical way you can make a barrel like that. The planks' butts have to be visible below the metal rim and the wooden bottom is fitted inside the barrel's body like that:
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What crits could be given? Modelling part is very basic and texturing is totally amazing

... wonder how much work dDo did for you though

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What crits could be given? Modelling part is very basic and texturing is totally amazing

... wonder how much work dDo did for you though
I did use Ddo painter so a fair bit of effort was put into the texturing. I try to avoid being labelled as a cheater
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