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Fan Corner Fan Art Competition 2010: the Results

Huzzah and/or jubilations! They're here at last! Callooh! Callay! Oh, frabjous day! Finally, after over a month of waiting, the results (ish) are in! Scores have been counted and recounted! Maths has been done and numbers have been... looked at...

Anyway, enough of this inane banter, it is time to find out who has won what and where and when and possibly even why! Seven glorious people sent entries to our very first Fan Art competition. These beautiful people are...

AlexFili, Enchilado, Slig #5719, Ridg3, Dryadri, MeechMunchie and Grieva!

Of the five judges I asked to... judge, only two got back to me! These equally beautiful people are...

Dripik and T-Nex!

The judges gave each piece a score out of ten on five different categories, making a potential total of 50 points. So added together, each entry was marked out of 100!

So here they are in order, from last to first.

In seventh place was...
MEECHMUNCHIE
With 50 points.

In sixth was...
ALEXFILI
With 56 points.

In fifth was...
ENCHILADO
With 59 points.

In fourth was...
SLIG #5719
With 62 points.

In third place was...
RIDG3
With 66 points.

In second was...
GRIEVA
With 72 points

But just four points ahead of Grieva,
IN FIRST PLACE WAS
DRYADRI
With 76 out of 100!


Congratulations Dryadri, as well as everyone else who entered. Below are the entries, along with the comments made by the judges.


By MeechMunchie:
http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/1472/scannity2.jpg
Quality 8/20
Oddness 11/20
Originality 11/20
Use of theme 12/20
Enjoyment 8/20

Dripik said:
Notebook paper does not make a good impression. It says "I was at school and I was bored, so I drew this" (this might not be the case, but still...). Otherwise, good job with the Glukkon and the logo on the floor.

T-Nex said:
Ok this one, at first, I could not see what was going on at all. I'm sorry. I cheated and asked Splat, who told me that it was the scene from AO, where the glukkons get zapped.
First of all, the background looks like there are people, an audience or some thing like that. So my first guess was that it was an arena type of thing. But then it didn't make sense, because why would Shrykull and a glukkon be there?
There is also no contrast in the tones and colors at all... Which is important whether it's a sketch or a colored drawing. Contrasting is what brings it life. it also helps separating the elements so it's easier to tell what's going on.
It uses the theme rather well though. I can imagine the glukkon was terribly frightened few seconds before his death.


By AlexFili:
http://img13.imageshack.us/i/sligfears.png/
Quality 13/20
Oddness 10/20
Originality 14/20
Use of theme 8/20
Enjoyment 11/20

Dripik said:
A rather unique approach. More iconic than representative of a Slig, but well recognisable. I'm unsure whether a proper Slig would care about such thoughts, so I'd wager this is not your average Slig here.

T-Nex said:
I dunno if there's a lot to say about this. If you were going for the vector style picture, it would have done so much more if you had tried to make it look like a poster that came from Oddworld. The one's that you see during the games and stuff.
It maybe also would have helped if you used a logo type similar to the slig logo. In this piece, the lines aren't straight at all, which to me, seems like a sign of being rushed. I also don't know if the picture uses the theme that well. It seems it would have fit more under "personal insecurities" or something.
I also think that sligs are generally not that emotional. But on the other hand, the piece was rather original. It was very different from the other entries, and it's nice to see people going in other directions.


By Enchilado:
http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/401...10fearmudo.png
Quality 12/20
Oddness 12/20
Originality 13/20
Use of theme 11/20
Enjoyment 11/20

Dripik said:
It took me a while to realise what it is exactly I'm seeing here. Adding a bit more darkness to the ground under/around the Mudokon would tackle this problem and add a bit more sense of depht/height, I think.

T-Nex said:
Not a bad piece. It took me a while to see what's going on, but It fits the theme. I just wish things were a bit more clear. And maybe that the mudokons expression would be more desperate.


By Slig #5719:
http://www.glowfoto.com/viewimage.ph...=2010&srv=img4
Quality 12/20
Oddness 14/20
Originality 12/20
Use of theme 13/20
Enjoyment 11/20

Dripik said:
Good work, though the Mudokon's expresion is a tad comical to me - not my idea of fear. The background is quite good, but the window with the moon and the night sky kind of spoils the dense atmosphere of a Vykker laboratory.

T-Nex said:
Interesting concept. Though I don't know if there is much to say about it. I wish the expression would have been a bit more real and tangible. As I've said before, it would have helped if you used more contrast. Specially between the background and the mudokon and Vykker. It could have made the picture a little bit more dynamic.


By Ridg3:
http://yfrog.com/evfearxj
Quality 11/20
Oddness 14/20
Originality 14/20
Use of theme 16/20
Enjoyment 11/20

Dripik said:
This one's alright. Perhaps not the quality I'd submit for an art contest, but since I didn't submit anything, I guess I should remain silent. Ink is a good choice, but once you go with it, I think the whole picture should be in ink, not just the characters.

T-Nex said:
It seems rather unfinished. I have nothing against drawings made by black pens, they can make quite awesome drawings if you learn to take advantage of the pen properly.
The piece is extremely unfinished though, which is also why I scored it low Oddness and Enjoyment grade. The Slig and Musokon is pen, but then you switched to pencil for the background. Again, this may have been able to give and interesting result, but the way it is now, it seems rushed. If you have put details into the walls and the brackground, given in that rupture farms feel(Or whatever other factory it may be), it would have scored a lot higher.
The anatomy of the slig and mudokon aren't terrible so that's a plus. I Also like how the picture is from a scared musokon's point of view. Although a little more movement in the picture would have been better.
So yea, bottom like is it would have been greater if it wasn't so rushed and had more details. I thought the concept was rather original. And it uses the theme well.


By Grieva
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/2054/oac17.jpg
Quality 18/20
Oddness 15/20
Originality 14/20
Use of theme 9/20
Enjoyment 16/20

Dripik said:
Great job on this one. Awesome detail on the Mudokon and the bottle. It doesn't really reflect the concept of fear for me though - it's either 'apprehension' or 'melancholy', probably connected to the bottle 'o' Brew.

T-Nex said:
The premise is that I really like this picture. Lots of color, you also added depth by blurring the background which is a neat trick. The lighting on the mudokon could have been a bit better. He looks a tiny bit flat.
The thing I'm not so crazy about is it's use of the theme. It seems more like it would be "sorrow" or regrets. I'm not sure I understand entirely what's going on, on the picture.
To me it tell a story of a lonely mudokon, hence the very grey and dark background. He also looks extremely depressed and not so much frightened. It as if it's a mudokon who maybe escaped from a tough factory and never got over the horrors going on there.
Or he could have lived in a village, where several of his friends got killed or kidnapped by enslavers.
I also don't get the setting. Is it a mansion, house or a prison?(the windows could signal either, but I'm guessing it's not a prison).
Either way, if it's a house or a mansion, it's quite impossible that he lives in a village, as mudokon houses are a bit more primitive than that. WHich kinda leaves me confused again.
But either way, I like this image.


By Dryadri:
http://i40.tinypic.com/2zea642.jpg
Quality 15/20
Oddness 16/20
Originality 14/20
Use of theme 16/20
Enjoyment 15/20

Dripik said:
Quite good, this one. Captures the theme pretty well. Also, nice attempt at lighting but it's not entirely consistent in this form: the rope is awfully light at the Slog's neck while the Slog is rather dark. The Slig's hand is kinda hidden, I nearly missed it being there.

T-Nex said:
Really cool picture. I find it rather original. Very dark and scary. I think it would have made the picture a lot more dark and scary if the expression on the green mudokon had been different. I feel there could have been put a little bit more fear in his face. Right now he looks a bit too soft, and perhaps not as scared as he should be.
Also the blue mudokon confused me a bit. Is that supposed to be abe? I'm guessing it's not, since his feather is green, but it still lets me confused for a bit.
Either way I think it's a very cool concept and the details on the wall and stuff is pretty nifty.


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And so, ladies and gentlemen, after all these long, arduous days of waiting, it's finally over. Big thanks to the people who entered. Big thanks to judges. And small thanks to people who tried to judge but were too busy with real life things; you guys rock anyway.

So, I hope this experience was enjoyable to artist, judge and observer alike. Next art competition will take place in the first half of next year. There should be a fiction competition starting around August or September. If anyone has any suggestions for themes for either of these competitions, feel free to make them

Anyway, congratulations to all; enjoy perusing the entries and finally being allowed to post your images on deviantArt There Dripik; happy now?! x_x.

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05-20-2010, 07:43 AM
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Eyy, congrats all, I probably shoulda submitted =( Well done Drydari
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Congrats to Dri, well done. I never thought of using first person.

Comments on comments:
Sorry about the lines, I was going to redraw it on plain paper but the deadline crept up on me.
Sorry about the lack of contrast, normally I use the scanner at the library but I had to use my one because the library was being refurbished, and mine aint half as good.
That thing at the back is the presentation screen, knocked out of transmission, so now just showing static.

Thanks for your time everybody, upon seeing the competition it's pretty clear I would have lost anyway.

EDIT: Hey, where did my entry go?


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Congrats Dryadri! and everyone else of course.

Comments on comments:
Yeah, I guess I maybe missed the point of the theme, the 's' in "Fears" threw me off. There's a history of the men in my family having problems with alcohol and its one of those lingering fears in the back of my mind when ever I drink, which is what I was kinda trying to get across.

I'm getting a 404 error for Ench's pic, is that happening to anyone else? and it looks like MMs pic is accidentally credited to Ench.

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I'm getting a 404 error for Ench's pic, is that happening to anyone else? and it looks like MMs pic is accidentally credited to Ench.
Oh yes, I see.

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Congrats Dyradri, I thought I mentioned not having a chance when you were involved xD.

And as they said...I was extremely lazy about the background...I wasn't even intending on putting a background in but meh...I'm happy enough with third place.
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Man, sorry the thing is so riddled with mistakes. I'll try and fix Ench's link (Odd, I'm sure I checked that one...)

EDIT: Fixed. For some reason beyond my understanding, copy-and-pasting the link directly from the PM Ench sent me wasn't working, even though it worked in the PM.
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This might end up sounding a bit sore but I feel a bit irked at the 'use of theme' catagory.

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The theme for this competition is Fears!
The theme for this competition at the start was Fears - causes of anxiety or dread (a common example may be the fear of growing old).
Now it seems the theme is Fear - an emotional response to a perceived threat. As many people interpreted it as the second it seems fair to say that fear would be ok to include that theme as well but keep the old one also.

I guess I'm just sayin that AlexFili's is the perfect example of fears that most people have, but he got a lowish score for it in the end because the theme had changed.

@Splat: Or did you originally intend it to mean Fear (the emotional response)?

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I meant 'fears', to be interpreted as people saw fit. I'm sorry I only heard from two judges, or I think the theme judgement might have evened out more as more judges gave their translations. Too many people busy at this time of year. I don't really know what to do about that... Maybe I should just make themes less broad in future.
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Well done everyone =)

I'm perfectly happy with my score, I think. Any lower and I would have been a bit dischuffed, I don't mind admitting that, and any higher and I would have been annoyed at it scoring better than it should have... I was never very happy with that drawing.

Anyway, comments on comments:

Yup, it's hard to tell what's going on. In fact, even I'm not sure.

As to the Mudokon's expression, well, I find expressions difficult to begin with, but on Mudokons they're a nightmare...

Well done everyone, again - even if you didn't score highly, you still managed to get your entry in on-time, right?
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Wow, I wasn't expecting my score to be that high.

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At the risk of sounding like Ench's echo I must admit i'm not very good at expressions. Maybe if I actually drew things with expressions in my everyday pictures...nah that would never work

Of course: Well done to everyone and congratulations to Dryadri

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Ooh, wowee I won I actually really wasn't expecting it when I saw Grieva's, really nice work there, great detail!

Thanks for all the congratulations ^^
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Well, I did submit my piece of art quite a long time ago. If the theme changed, then I probably would have scored less... if no-one has been informed that my piece of art was before the theme change.

Anyway, it's probably my fault for not paying closer attention to the art boards. I find it hard to keep track of too many things at once.

I honestly like quite a few of these pictures. I think a lot of you have some really good ideas. I think the next art contest will be good as well.

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The theme never changed. Just people interpreted it differently.
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So, I hope this experience was enjoyable to artist, judge and observer alike. Next art competition will take place in the first half of next year. There should be a fiction competition starting around August or September. If anyone has any suggestions for themes for either of these competitions, feel free to make them
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I would like to conratulate all who took part, and say that I think a fair amount of effort has gone into these pictures, both winners and runner-ups alike. I wish I was as talented as all of you, but alas, we can't all be amazing. I certainly hope to enter once more in the next fan-fiction competition, and hope to see some of you there as well.

I'd also like to suggest two themes for the next art competition, namely "Night" and "Dark".

It seems strange to break off so suddenly, but I have nothing else to say.
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I was waiting for these to come about. My personal favourite was Grievas image, the detail was really good, and i didn't think it deviated too much from the theme. I was contemplating entering this competition but college work started to heat up so i didn't have time, but i had almost exactly the same idea as Ridg3, but not in first person. The theme thing is a bit awkward to be honest, because if people take it literally then you are going to get a lot of similar things - mudokons scared of sligs/slogs/glukkons. It's going to be the same but with different characters, although the images could be different to be fair. I don't know, if you try to push the theme by doing something different you then might get marked down for not sticking to what is usually thought of with fears...maybe i'm just chatting bollocks, its early morning.
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hey why haven't i replied to this before!! xD


congrats to everyone who took part in this 8D 8D 8D, my favorite drawing is Grievas drawing too, i love the perspective and the ammount of detail... maybe it doesn#t show the theme "fear" as clearly as the other drawings but concerning the bottle of brew in the front it gives the observer still an impression of subliminal fear but also worry as a main emotion of the drawing...

But I also like Dryadris drawing it represents the theme "fear" the best... and she worked with light and darkness


when this started i planned to enter aswell xD but my drawing would have been completely different, it would show a Slig in a dark long corridor being afraid of his own oversized shadow on the wall... maybe I'm still going to draw it some day xD
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