A few complaints;
1) The voices are played before the text is shown (and both voices are played at the same time, not line per line as the text is)
2) The character repeats "Time for a cig" almost constantly, quite an annoying bug
3) The stealth mission is really hard, I'm not even sure if I can beat it... but i'll try again soon.
4) The text box still looks white to me. Please try to make it dark and give it an oddworldy theme to it.
I really like the game so far and I like the attention to details. Some gun SFX would be good too