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The Slig Chronicles

Hi Everyone

As some of you may know, i made a fanfic called MILITARY MATTERS. the fanfic has been finished but i am working on a new fanfic that carries on from MILITARY MATTERS. The new fanfic is called CRUEL DEPTHS and i have just finished the first chapter. firstly however i will post all of MILITARY MATTERS in one post and the post will also include the first chapter of CRUEL DEPTHS. ENJOY!
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Military Matters

Chapter 1
Wasteland arrival

It was 7 hours before midnight, Scrabs were dancing on the scorching sand, rare Meech roars were echoing from distant lands. This wasteland was Scrabania.

Male Scrabs were starting their mating rituals and females bowing with caution, and then came the click and bang of a weapon. The Scrabs fled as a merciless outsider stepped out from the dark shadows. This outsider had metal, shiny legs, this outsider had green, rough skin, and this outsider was rare of his kind. This outsider was a Slig outlander.

With the click of a button on the outlander’s weapon, a grey, rusty barrel unloaded its cargo, 6 silver bullets clattered on the dusty rocks. 6 more silver bullets were loaded, eager to fly into any innocent animal's flesh. This weapon was also scoped with a lens barrel with a diameter of 4 centi-metres. The scope was off scale, so it was made it equal with a target. This weapon was a Secreder 357. Magnum.

In the blazing heat, the outlander thought to himself "better make a kill for tonight's feast". He hastily made his way through the desert in search of a herd. Hours went past and when he finally found a family of Scrabs feasting on a dead Elum. He hid behind some shrubs and took aim at the sub-dominant male. Scope lined, barrel loaded, Scrab in range, BANG! The bullet carved a deep hole in the Scrab's head, its head was crippled, but it wasn't fully dead. The outlander took aim again, BANG! The bullet carved another deep hole in the Scrab's head, but this time, the ferocious animal went down.

The Scrab's face was in ruins. The outlander burrowed deep into the 2 holes to take out the scarlet smitten bullets that killed the mighty beast. The magnum was put away in a brown pocket knotted on the outlander’s left leg. “Yet another satisfying catch” He thought to himself. The 2 scarlet bullets were also put away in the pocket to be used later.

As the sun started to slip away over the horizon, the outlander decided to find a suitable cover for the night. Eventually, when the slit of the sun slowly disappeared, he found himself a patch of shade covered by a huge boulder firmly held in a cliff face and some shrubs. The orange of the rock and desert slowly started to fade away as a dark blue started to appear on the rock face. The day finally came to a close and the ancient statues which belonged to an ancient civilization disappeared in the darkness. Unaware of the things happening around him, the outlander went into a light sleep.

Chapter 2
Military offence

Midnight, the cloud-free sky was shining with hundreds of bright stars. Not a sound was to be heard. The outlander silently slept through the dark night unaware of the silence around him. The moon shun with a dazzling light so bright that it was blinding to look at. The ancient statues were lit up by this dazzling spectacle. For the outlander however, times were going to get serious.

The outlander woke up. He found himself in a grey hanger. Unaware that long barrels were pointed towards him, he lifted himself of the floor. The long barrels came closer to him; he knew he was trapped; at gunpoint.

He looked around; other Sligs similar to him were pointing SMGs at him. They took aim, took hold of their triggers but they were silenced by a tall, slim figure shadowed by the hanger wall. He stepped out; he had a badge on his black suit saying “No-man’s land is my land”. He puffed away at a lit cigar. He shuffled over to the outlander. He leant over and he spoke in a muffled voice “you are not alone here”. He slowly walked off to a reinforced door and the outlander was suddenly darted in the neck. His vision began to get blurry as the Sligs walked over to him. He finally crashed to the floor, unconscious. Only the metal legs of the Sligs could be heard.

All was dark, blankness filled the air, and the outlander woke with a hazy vision. Then in a blinding display, 4 lamps shone brightly around the room. He gazed around the room, looking for a possible exit. Unfortunately, none were to be found. He stood up, wandering what was going on. His magnum had disappeared, bullets and everything. He was defenceless.

He was lying on a very scruffy bed covered with dirt and dust. He sat up and saw he was in his own private room, complete with desk, door and furniture. It was unfortunate that his magnum wasn’t here; it would have completed the whole collection. He just sat there, confused and drowsy. “Wonder what this place will do to me”.

Chapter 3
Straight into battle

The door opened, a Slig called for him “General Sleg has scheduled you for a fight in the battle grounds, follow me”. He hastily followed the Slig. He was lead to a rusty blast door. “Through here” the Slig said. The outlander saw open land and it was pure desert. Only a few barrels and boxes lay beside the dusty brown rocks. “Here’s your magnum” said the Slig giving the magnum back to the outlander. The Slig walked back into the corridor with his legs acting like pistons to support his body. The blast door closed.

The outlander was all alone. Then the screeching of a loudspeaker revealed it’s self to be the muffled voice. “Testing, testing” the voice said out of the loud speaker. “Welcome to the Slig barracks, my name is General Sleg and you will be now known as Admeet Slig Number 75”. The newly named outlander was confused on what was going on. “This will be your first training program; basically you’ll shoot at anything in your path, Scrabs, obstacles blocking your path and get to the end of the circuit” Said General Sleg. Admeet’s confusion was starting to fade away. “I think I’m going to like it here” he thought to himself. He instantly loaded his magnum with the silver bullets the Slig gave to him. Magnum loaded, confidence rising, “lets rock”.

Admeet instantly went for it; he saw the first Scrab and took aim. BANG! The first bullet went straight into one of the Scrab’s legs. The Scrab, crippled and confused, fell to the floor with one of its legs bleeding out scarlet blood. Yanking out the scarlet smitten bullet out of the Scrab’s leg, he carried on to find his goal.

The heat from the sun was unbearable for most creatures out in the desert, but Admeet carried on with haste. This time, 2 Scrabs were in the way. He took aim, pulled the trigger. BANG! The first Scrab went down but the second was coming right for him. He took aim again, pulled the trigger. BANG! The second Scrab went down and slid against the floor with the Scrab’s head right at Admeet’s legs. Admeet pushed on.

This time, it was 2 Sligs who were going to shoot at Admeet. They took aim with lightning reactions. Luckily, a steel box was beside Admeet and he rolled behind the box and took cover. Bullets were ricocheting everywhere, of rocks, barrels but mostly the box. The box was dented and marked with bullet holes. The 2 Sligs had to reload their weapons, so this was Admeet’s chance to shoot back. BANG! BANG! BANG! 2 bullets went through one Slig but the other one missed the other Slig. So he went for it. The Slig was still reloading at the time; So Admeet bashed the Slig with the butt of the magnum. The Slig went down unconscious and Admeet carried on to the finishing point. “Very good Admeet” said General Sleg’s voice from the loud speaker. “You are well trained in combat”. “You may go back to your quarters”. Admeet looked confused again. “I’ll need somebody to show me to it” he said. “Off course, I’ll get somebody to show you”. Admeet felt great, this wouldn’t be a bad place after all. An escort came out of the blast door and Admeet was on his way back to his quarters.

Chapter 4
Meeting place

As night fell, Admeet lied on his bed and thought to himself. He wouldn’t bother escaping. Not when he has all of this.
The door opened again. The Slig who escorted him to the battle grounds said “you have been invited to the general’s watch tower; I’ll show you how to get there”. Admeet stood up and followed the Slig. “By the way, my name is Zaypher; I will be escorting you wherever you like now and if you are ordered to go visit someone or some place”. “Thanks” said Admeet. As the two wandered down to the watch tower, the other Sligs snoozed on their beds through the cold night. Strangely, every Slig was snoozing out little Z’s out of their mouth, and then they would pop in the air. “It’s a bit strange that” said Zaypher “no one really knows why that happens”. Zaypher showed Admeet the lift to the other levels of the complex and of course, the watch tower. “You’ll want the top floor to the watch tower” said Zaypher. “Thanks see you around” said Admeet “see you” replied Zaypher as he disappeared through the corridor.

The glass lift went at a steady, upwards pace and Admeet waited for a bit until the lift came to a steady stop at the top floor. There waiting for him in his black suit complete with badge and cigar was General Sleg himself.

“It has come to my attention that you don’t belong in the military complex” said the general, “Your records indicate that you were once an outsider, it is pretty rare when an outsider is captured for military use”. “Well my abilities in the military are at use” said Admeet, “Even when certain death is near but yet somehow, I always seem to get away from it”. “You are pretty tough and skilled for an outsider who hasn’t been had proper military training” said the general, “and we can help you succeed with your goals and aims when you’ve got this whole H.Q. to play with; literally. You have two choices. You can properly join us in our fight for survival against the terrorists and savage creatures, or you can be released into the desert wastelands when death’s door is right in front of you”. Admeet definitely knew what answer he was going to choose. “I will join you” Admeet replied in a short answer. “Very good” said the general and with that, he gave Admeet a badge saying “fight for your friends, fight for your life”. “You are now part of the Slig Military Garrison, SMG for short” said the general, “you are dismissed”. “Thank you” said Admeet and with that, he stepped onto the lift and pushed the button. “I look forward to see you in action” said the general before the lift started its journey down to ground level.

Chapter 5
Wasteland battle

Admeet was back in his room again. It was still the middle of the night when he reached the door to his room. All was very quiet, even the snoozing of the other Sligs in their rooms couldn’t be heard. Admeet lay on his bed and slowly closed his eyes. The corridors were soundless; no one was making a noise. Only a few Ratz scurried around looking for anything interesting.

Suddenly, the ear-splitting noise of the alarms went off. The Ratz, caught by surprise, sped off down the corridors. Admeet sat up and he saw out of the door window an exodus of Sligs rushing towards something. Then Zaypher rushed into Admeet’s room and yelled “come on Admeet, we’ve got hostiles attempting to invade the complex”. Admeet immediately followed Zaypher into the corridors and into the exodus. While running, he saw many Sligs stationed around the battle ground and some near the Hanger. He was led to the entrance to the complex which was a huge metal door with the outside surrounded with barbed wire. He saw some manned turrets posted by the door and some remote turrets by the barricades. He also saw some rigged shotguns and SMG’s with the triggers attached to string and to pressure pads. He took out his revolver, checked the barrel and waited for the hostiles to come within range. The other Sligs waited patiently with SMG’s in their hands, some even had hand grenades attached to their legs. “Now we wait” whispered Zaypher. “Now we wait” replied Admeet with a quiet laugh.

Minutes went past, still nothing in sight. The Sligs waited and waited and still nothing came. Then out in the distance, came an almighty roar which was absolutely deafening. Then on the horizon, appeared at least 100 Scrabs running straight at the complex. “Scrabs” yelled a Slig commander. “Take your places”. Immediately, every gun was cocked and ready to fire. The Scrabs came closer and the Sligs took aim. “Aim” yelled the Slig commander. The Scrabs came ever closer looking to strike. The Sligs became nervous and took hold of their triggers. “Fire” shouted the Slig commander and the weapons unleashed their power on the Scrabs.

Only a few of the Scrabs went down when the Sligs had to reload and that’s when the Scrabs formed their attack. Their sharp beaks went straight through the Sligs’ flesh and a mass of scarlet blood was flying everywhere. The rigged shotguns and SMG’s fired madly when the Scrabs stepped on the pressure pads. Admeet ran for a barricade to reload as the Scrabs advanced. Zaypher was nowhere to be seen. General Sleg watched anxiously in the watch tower to see if the Sligs would turn the tides of the battle.

At least an hour and a half past before the Sligs gained an upper foot hold of the battle. The Scrabs went down one by one until the last of them shrieked in terror and fell to the ground. Victory was in the Sligs’ hands. But it wasn’t over yet.

The loud roar was heard again and out in the distance, a huge Scrab with armour plating came running straight towards the few remaining Sligs. Admeet shook in terror as this would be a challenge. The Sligs fired without warning with the bullets hitting the Scrabs armour like if they were made of plastic. The Scrab lunged at the Sligs and tore them apart. The only ones left now were Admeet and Zaypher. Admeet immediately aimed and fired. The bullet pierced one of the Scrab’s patches of skin between the legs. The Scrab shrieked in pain as blood poured out of the wound. The Scrab’s leg was crippled and Admeet aimed again. The loud bang came out of his magnum again. The bullet pierced the armour and went straight through the Scrab’s torso. Shrieking in pain, the Scrab went down and the blood from its wounds surrounded Admeet’s legs.

The battle was won and Admeet could finally rest through the harsh night. Zaypher immediately joined him. “How did your bullets pierce through that armour?” said Zaypher. “Well it’s a very powerful magnum. The bullet flies very fast through the air and is able to pierce very thick armour” replied Admeet. “General Sleg will probably award you for your bravery” said Zaypher. The two went down the corridors and to Admeet’s room and with that, Zaypher went to his room and Admeet lied on his bed and closed his eyes.

Chapter 6
Unexpected Arrival

As the sun rose over the horizon, Admeet slowly opened his eyes and slowly lifted his head. The room was brightly lit by the four lights on the ceiling. Many of the Sligs were still snoozing away. Admeet slowly stood up and picked up his magnum which was lying on the desk. He walked to the door and quietly opened it. He saw nothing down the corridors except the few Ratz bouncing into the cracks in the walls.

Then, Admeet heard a loud banging noise coming from one of the blast doors. He rushed to the door and put his head against the door. He heard the muffled voice of another Slig shouting “help me, for god sakes help me”! Admeet rushed to the blast door emergency release panel and the blast door opened violently. The Slig collapsed into Admeet’s arms, exhausted and badly injured. “Help, we need a medic here” yelled Admeet. Instantly, a whole parade of Sligs, including 4 medics, came rushing down the corridor and stopped immediately in front of Admeet. One medic came and took the injured Slig off Admeet’s arms and carried him towards the medical centre. The parade of Sligs followed the medic.

Admeet just stood there, staring at the door. “Where did that Slig come from” he wondered; Zaypher joined Admeet as he stood there. “5 years ago exactly, one of our soldiers went of into the wasteland in search of a rare liquid that was crucial for our survival, he never came back. A possibility was that he was captured by rouge Sligs like you but much worse. 5 months later, a group of Slig scouts found a source of this rare liquid that wasn’t far from the complex, we continued to survive through the harshest parts of our lives” said Zaypher while looking at Admeet. “What was the Slig’s name and what was this liquid he was looking for?” asked Admeet anxiously. “His name was Vankor, one of the best elite soldiers in the whole battalion. The liquid he was looking for was water” said Zaypher. “Water!” said Admeet confusingly, “why is water rare now?” “8 years ago, The Slig Battalion fought against the Legion of Scrabs, a powerful force destroying anything in their way. The battle ended in the battalion being nearly destroyed, and then our top scientists back at the complex devised a way to destroy all the water around the wasteland. By making a virus which destroyed the fabric of water, the Scrabs and all the other animals around the area started too died out, only we Sligs were hardy enough to survive massive dehydration and drought. Thankfully, we unexpectedly found a fresh water source in one of the underground caves nearby. Somehow, that source of water wasn’t destroyed” Zaypher explained to Admeet. “I might want to look at this water source and find out where it had come from” said Admeet. “If you say so, but I must warn you, the place is crawling with lab grown Paramites. Find one and you are fine, but find a whole pack and your part of their main meal” said Zaypher cautiously, “we’d better head to the medical centre quickly to see how Vankor is”. Admeet nodded his head and the two headed towards the medical centre with immediate haste.

Chapter 7
Rough Words

Admeet and Zaypher finally arrived at the medical centre. The two peered through one of the windows in a clinic; Vankor struggled and moaned on the operating theatre. Deep wounds in Vankor’s skin oozed out crimson blood; soon the table was covered with the thick liquid. “Keep the blood from pouring out of the wounds” shouted one of the medics. A few Interns plodded over towards Vankor and placed some translucent pipes in the wounds. The blood drained through the pipes and into a large metal canister. One of the medics came out of the infirmary door and stood beside Admeet and Zaypher.

“He’s in a terrible condition” said the medic quietly, “though he will recover”. “Do you think he may be pulled out from action for life?” asked Admeet anxiously. “There is a possibility that he may heal enough to fight another day, but I doubt if that would happen” replied the medic. “I need to go in the infirmary and see if I can speak to him” said Admeet. “Ok but you need to be aware of Vankor’s condition, any slight pressure on those wounds could cause a huge internal spasm; the pain would be unbearable” said the medic as he opened the door into the infirmary. Admeet stepped into the infirmary and the Interns stepped away from the table and controlled the various apparatus surrounding the table. Admeet Stood beside Vankor and peered into the struggling Slig’s eyes. Vankor looked back in agony, his eyes barely opening; just narrow slits could be seen.
“What happened out there” asked Admeet very softly. Vankor began to breathe heavily; a sign that he was about to say something. “Scrabs, water, couldn’t save myself” Whispered Vankor coughing out small lumps of flesh in the middle of every word. His breathing was terrible; he couldn’t cough without spilling blood onto the table. “He’s bleeding internally” said Admeet to one of the Interns. The other Interns quickly gathered around Vankor and quickly sedated him. “Hopefully with Vankor sedated, he shouldn’t cough out any blood and the drug should heal the wounds in his organs and vessels” said the medic outside to Zaypher. Admeet soon came through the door and joined Zaypher and the medic. “Some conversation” said Zaypher with a quiet chuckle. Admeet looked through the window. He was determined to find that water source and save the complex from mass dehydration. “I must set up an expedition to find this water source” said Admeet. “Are you crazy” yelled Zaypher, “you can’t just walk into those caves without suitable protection; you’ll be eviscerated by the Paramites if you don’t”. “I know” said Admeet, “but for some reason, I’m not scared of them, even if they will hunt me down”. “Well okay but you’ll have to be very careful in those caves, you may never know what your up against” said Zaypher. “I always know what I’m up against, you just have to look closely” said Admeet. And with that, Admeet and Zaypher walked out of the infirmary and down to the armoury. Admeet would know that he would be doing a huge favour; a favour that would save the inhabitants of the military complex.

Chapter 8
Different Journey

Inside the Armoury, Admeet chose his weapons and armour and prepared to set of to find the water source. The two hurried on down to the main entrance to the complex. “I’ll hurry on back immediately once I’ve found this water source” said Admeet, I’ll use this map containing the directions to the source and if any problems occur, I’ll use this radio to report back”. “Okay, good luck out there, you’re going to need it” said Zaypher. “Thanks” replied Admeet as he pushed the button to open the blast door. The endless expanse of open wasteland was in view now, with the blazing sun to complete the picture. Admeet set of into the wasteland and the blast door closed with a loud crash.

As Admeet walked on towards the source, the military complex began to get blurry due to the heat haze. A circle of tall rock columns came into view and the barren expanse of the wasteland carried on and on. He soon reached the location of the source which was inside the circle of rock columns. However, there was no spring or oasis in sight. He soon found out (with a bit of searching) that the exact location of the source was inside a cave. However, he didn’t notice the many see-through webs and silk-like ropes around the columns. Admeet picked up the radio from the brown pocket knotted onto his leg. “Zaypher, are you there” Admeet said down the radio. “Yeah I’m here” replied Zaypher on the other side. “I’ve found the location of the source” said Admeet down the radio, “it’s in a cave directly in the middle of a circle of rock columns”. “Okay, we will mark the location on the digital map” replied Zaypher with some interference from the radio. However, his luck was about to change. Just as Admeet put the radio back in the pocket, a pack of Paramites came out from the entrance to the cave. They eyed Admeet down and immediately found that Admeet was a hostile. They all hissed at the same time and started running towards Admeet. Admeet started to run to but away from the Paramites.

After at least 2 minutes, the Paramites started to slow down but as soon as they stopped, Admeet heard a deafening roar. A pack of Scrabs, led by an alpha Scrab, started running towards Admeet. They weren’t after Admeet however, they were after the Paramites. The Scrabs and the Paramites soon started to fight and Admeet slipped away into the cave unharmed.

The cave was lit up by strange lights coming from the numerous webs created by the Paramites. Admeet instantly found the water source which was only a couple of yards away from the entrance. This source wasn’t shallow however, it was very deep; deeper then one would expect. He immediately walked beside the source and peered through the crystal-clear water. He saw a large tunnel stretching downwards. The only way to see where this tunnel led to was by diving into the water. So Admeet left his magnum and the radio on the ground and immediately dived down into the water. The water seemed fine until a minute later. Admeet realised that his skin was starting to burn. By 30 seconds, the pain was unbearable. He swam to the surface and leapt out just in time. It was lucky that Admeet didn’t swallow any of the water. Admeet coughed and spluttered and immediately picked up the radio.

“Zaypher”, “yeah” replied Zaypher with a hazy signal. “We can’t use this water” said Admeet down the radio. “What?” yelled Zaypher on the other end of the radio “I know, but it’s been contaminated with some sort of radiation which can burn the skin and the insides of your body”. “Well head back to the complex and we will devise a plan to find the source of this radiation” said Zaypher. “Ok, how’s Vankor doing” asked Admeet. “He’s feeling better but his condition is still grave” replied Zaypher, “we are still trying to make him speak but we have no success”. “Ok, I’ll head on back” said Admeet. As he came out of the cave, the Scrabs and Paramites were still fighting for the source; “what a waste of time” Admeet thought to himself with a quiet chuckle. He was confident to venture into the abyss and find that radiation source and destroy it for good. However, what he didn’t know was that this was going to be trickier than it looked. Admeet had to be prepared for the worst.


Chapter 9
Plan of Attack

Admeet soon arrived back at the complex; Zaypher was waiting beside the blast door to welcome Admeet back. “It is good that you are back” said Zaypher as he opened the blast door, “We’ve figured out a way to combat the effects of this radiation. When we fought against the Legion of Scrabs, our top scientists designed a special type of suit which would be able to withstand the pressure in the deepest depths and withstand the effects of radiation. Now that you say that this deep water source is contaminated with radiation, this is a good time to use this suit”. The two walked towards military briefing room.

The briefing room was like any room in the complex except this one had a massive digital map on a metal table in the middle of the room. There were data machines, giant calculators and more science equipment then you could shake a stick at; the room was large too. “Now, down to business” said a dark figure standing in a shadow created by the one of the giant calculators. The figure was General Sleg smoking a cigar as usual. He started to walk towards the map. Another Slig also started walking towards the map with a strange baton in his hand.

“We shall now plan our plan of attack” said the Slig with the baton held over the map. The baton touched the map and it started to show vast data (ones and zeros mostly) and two revolving pictures of the cave in the rock column circle and the special suit Zaypher talked about. “From what I saw of the water source, there was a very deep tunnel stretching downwards” said Admeet, “when I dived into the radiated water, I started to realize that my skin was starting to burn, that’s why we need that special suit. I never saw the source of the radiation when I was in the water, so my suggestion is that the radiation source is located at the other end of the tunnel”. “Then we need some sort of special vehicle to venture down into those depths, we can’t just swim down there, it would take at least a day to reach the other end” said Zaypher. “Aha” said the Slig with the baton with a slight chuckle, “we’ve got that covered. Again during the battle against the Legion of Scrabs, we designed a special vehicle to combat the Harshness of land, the pressure of water and the lethalness of radiation; it’s almost like the suit except it can hold as much as 10 Sligs in one trip. We call the vehicle the All-Terrain Transport; A.T.T for short”. “What equipment does it have” asked Admeet. “It has the latest in Slig technology” replied the Slig with the baton, “Retractable legs that adapt to land or water, a pressure hatch for underwater missions, an advanced command centre to record the missions and equip the Sligs with the equipment needed, and remote control turrets that focus on any enemy that comes to close; its just small enough to fit down the underwater tunnel in the cave”. “Great, as soon as we get the equipment loaded onto the A.T.T and gather all the Sligs we need, we will set of tomorrow morning” said Admeet, “Agreed?” “AGREED” they said all together.

As the meeting came to a close, Admeet and Zaypher started to head towards their rooms. As Admeet reached his room, Zaypher turned right towards his room. Admeet opened the door to his room and sat down on his bed. He had to know what he was up against, know one knows what would be waiting at the other end of that tunnel. Admeet started to close his eyes and started to fall asleep. Tomorrow would be the finest hour of his life.
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right, now for the first chapter of CRUEL DEPTHS

Cruel depths

Chapter 1
Journey’s beginning

As the moon shun brightly over the wasteland, hundreds of Sligs slept silently in their beds. However, one Slig was up on his feet and looking for someone. The Slig opened the door to another Slig’s bedroom. “Admeet” the Slig said quietly. The Slig on the bed started to open his eyes. “Admeet” said the Slig again. “What’s going on” said Admeet sitting up on his bed. Looking at the Slig, he saw that the Slig was masked “Change of plan” whispered the Slig, “we are heading out now”. A group of Sligs were standing outside waiting for Admeet to come with them. “Why can’t we go in the morning?” asked Admeet looking very tired. “Orders” replied the Slig waiting for Admeet to get up, “I give the orders on this mission now”.

Admeet hastily got up and picked up his Magnum on the brown desk next to the door and a few extra bullets. He joined the group of Sligs and saw that Zaypher was with them too. “What are you doing here?” said Admeet. “I was woken up by this masked Slig; he won’t even reveal his name” replied Zaypher. The group, led by the masked Slig, made their way down through the rusty, brown corridors until they reached the main blast door. It was only then that Admeet noticed two very small SMGs in Zaypher’s leather pockets on each side of his legs. “I see you’ve noticed them too” said Zaypher, “the masked Slig gave me these two SMGs because he sees me as a good soldier. I have been in a few battles, including the one with you, but I’m not exactly a legendary soldier”. Admeet nodded his head as the Blast door was opened. The A.T.T stood outside, loaded and ready. The masked Slig walked across the sand and dirt but the group just stood there, not knowing what to do. “Well, you coming?” said the masked Slig to the group. Admeet stepped forward and Zaypher did as well. Then the others stepped forward and followed the masked Slig. They climbed into the A.T.T and took their positions. The masked Slig climbed up into the command centre. “Strap in people, this is going to be a bumpy ride” shouted the mask Slig down to the group. The group started to strap into their seats as the A.T.T started to set off for the cave.

The A.T.T was moving at such a speed and force that the whole ground was shaking. Admeet looked out of the cargo door to see the dark landscape of the wasteland. It wouldn’t be to long before they reached the cave, so Admeet had a short time to think. “You’ll definitely be the hero” said Zaypher towards Admeet, “you’ll put an end to this drought and create life in this wasteland”. “I only hope the plan works or the whole of the wasteland will be doomed forever” said Admeet worryingly. “Don’t worry, this plan will work; trust me” said Zaypher encouragingly.

The A.T.T finally reached the rock column circle and started to crawl down into the cave. This was it. The whole team was going to dive down into deep and cruel depths. Admeet’s finest hour has begun.
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Nice to see Admeet in this again. I wonder if Zaypher will have a bigger role in this
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Very well done, I must say, I cant wait for the next Chapter. I'm liking the story line so far.

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Zaypher probrably will play a big part in this... What for, I can't imagine. That's why I can't wait to see.
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Hi again, Sorry for the huge delay, Summer holidays and GCSE exams getting in the way. But Chapter 2 is finally here.
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Chapter 2
Dark Realm (part 1)

Splash! The A.T.T started its deep sea descent down the tunnel. The pressure was starting to build as the A.T.T descended down. “We are entering a depth of 5,000 metres” said the masked Slig down the radio to the group of Sligs in the cargo bay. The A.T.T was going at such a speed that the rocks surrounding the tunnel were just black blurs in the blurry waters. “10,000 metres” said the masked Slig down the radio. He pushed a button on the console and down in the cargo bay, the diving suit was automatically equipped to the Sligs; breathing masks as well. “Oxygen flow on, approaching 15,000 metres” said Vankor down the radio. The tunnel stretched for another 100 miles but the A.T.T was going at such a speed that it didn’t take too long to reach 90 miles. “Prepare for impact” said the masked Slig down the radio. As the A.T.T reached 99 miles, it started to slow down. “3, 2, 1, destination reached” said the masked Slig, “Disarm hatch”. The vibrating in the cargo bay stopped suddenly as a gun rack detached from the ceiling. “Release automatic harpoon launchers and melee daggers” said the masked Slig. The Sligs in the cargo bay each grabbed a harpoon gun and a knife. “Mission objective destroy radiation source” said the masked Slig. “We are ready” said Admeet on his radio. The Sligs made their way to the airlock. The lights attached to the outside of the A.T.T blackened to camouflage it. Then the Airlock door opened and the group of Sligs started to step onto the sandy seabed.

The Sligs saw an endless expanse of sand and silt. “Wow” said Zaypher in astonishment, “this is unbelievable”. The group started to walk further away from the A.T.T. “Now, where to start” said Admeet looking around. “I think it has started” said another Slig close to Zaypher and looking at his underwater radar attached to his left arm, “we are picking up some life forms heading straight towards us”. The group looked at the direction where the creatures were coming from. They couldn’t see anything for a while. Then suddenly, two white creatures came out of the darkness; they didn’t look friendly however. “Ready your weapons” said Admeet. The harpoon guns were cocked and ready to fire. “Aim” said Admeet. The creatures came ever closer towards their possible prey. “Fire!” yelled Admeet. The harpoons flew out of their guns towards the creatures but all of them missed; the creatures were intelligent and agile.

The creatures suddenly swam upward and started to circle their prey. The group was still shooting at the creatures but every harpoon missed. One Slig however was not shooting at all; the Slig just stood there looking at the creatures. The creatures were just too fast for the group. Even the turrets attached to the A.T.T were not fast enough to make a direct hit. “We are wasting ammo” said Admeet ceasing fire, “we’ll have to resort to our knives”. Everyone on the group agreed and drew out their knives. The creatures stopped in mid air and eyed the group. The group and the creatures stared at each other, waiting for the opposition to strike. The creatures were bearing razor sharp teeth and claws. The masked Slig looked out of the command centre window and waited anxiously. Suddenly, one of the Sligs quickly drew out a harpoon gun and fired twice. One harpoon pierced one of the creature’s skins and the other sank deep into the other creature’s flesh. Blood started to pour out of the creatures as they swam away with fright in their eyes. Admeet just stared at the Slig in confusion.

“What the!” yelled Admeet confusingly, “how in mudo’s name did you do that”. “Well a girl needs to know a few tricks” replied the Slig putting her harpoon gun away. “A girl!” shouted Zaypher, “how long have you been with us”. “Longer then you, brother” replied the Slig. “Hmm, the girl has wisdom” said Admeet, “what’s your name”. “There will be time for that” replied the Slig, “for now, we must carry on”. The Slig walked on towards were the creatures went while the group looked confused. “Well” Asked one of the Sligs in the group. “We follow her; she may lead us to something” replied Admeet. The group rejoined the female Slig and carried on through the dark depths.
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Interesting... Girl sligs never seem to get any stories. Except maybe the 50% slig ones.
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Yeah, I was really surprised to see a female Slig there. That's really going to change the way the story develops. Will she get along with Admeet? Will they fall in love? etc...

At first I didn't have any female characters, the exception being the Pack series that I created, which was inspired by Teal's stories and Sl'askia's Spider series. While I was writing the Four Dominions series, I thought about both Dynasty Warriors and Romeo and Juliet. This made me want to create some female characters, so I did . I'm planning the next in the Pack series from Tulia's perspective, just to see how it'll turn out.

Great work with this so far, can't wait to see what's in the water!
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Dark Realm (part 2)

As the group carried on, the water slowly became murky. “What’s with the murkiness” asked Zaypher. “We are getting closer” said the female Slig mysteriously. “Getting close to what” asked Admeet suspiciously. “We’ll soon find out” said Zaypher. Just as the waters started to clear, a vast structure came into view. “Is everybody seeing this” asked Zaypher in astonishment. “Yeah, everyone’s seeing this” replied Admeet in astonishment as well. They made their way down a sandy bank towards the structure.

The structure was built into the ground and was protected by an extremely thick grey metal wall. “Wonder what’s inside” wondered Zaypher. “There must be some sort of entrance” said the Slig with the radar. “And I think I’ve just found one” said Admeet with confidence. They saw some sort of service hatch attached to the wall. “I’ll go in” said the female Slig. “You’re quite the adventurous one aren’t you” said Zaypher. “Admeet can come with me” said the female Slig. “Why me” asked Admeet. “You are a good soldier and I will need the extra fire power” replied the female Slig. “So be it” said Admeet. “I’ll cover you since you know what you are doing”. The two walked towards the security hatch and inspected the opening mechanism. The mechanism consisted of a water proof, two-way button made to open the hatch. Just as Admeet pressed the button to open the hatch, two remote turrets shot out of the ground and locked onto the two Sligs. “Looks like we’ve been spotted, RUN” shouted Admeet to the female Slig.

The two ducked behind some jagged rocks as the turrets open fired. Hundreds of harpoons flew out of the turret barrels and jammed themselves into the rock. “We need to destroy those turrets somehow” said Admeet as the rock they hid behind was slowly disintegrating. “I noticed on each of the turrets a targeting chip on the bulk of the turret” said the female Slig, “if we can destroy those chips, the turrets will lock on to each other and destroy themselves”. Admeet took out his harpoon gun and leapt behind another group of jagged rocks. As the turrets started to reload, Admeet leapt in front of the turrets and fired at the targeting chips. The chips broke of the turrets and sank to the sea bed. The turrets immediately turned on each other. Admeet leapt back as the turrets fired at each other. The harpoons pierced the metal of the turrets and the turrets started to malfunction. Finally, the turrets broke down and stopped firing. “That takes care of that problem” said the female Slig walking towards the hatch. “Yeah” said Admeet while reloading his harpoon gun, “but there are probably many more ahead”. The female Slig pushed the button and the hatch opened. The two went through and closed the hatch behind them.
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I thought I might have missed a few updates, but apparently not. Interesting... But what is inside this big thing?
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Targeting Chip? You've been playing too much Fallout 3 XD

Good, keep going!

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it was the only type of turret i could think of.

Thanks anyway

P.S. septic silo,
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Storage_silo

A septic tank is where human waste is stored lol
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LOL

I never knew that

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I really didn't need to know that.

Except the chapter three bit.
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hmm, didn't take me long to make this chapter.
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Dangerous Territory

“Standby for pressurization and decontamination” said a voice which sounded like a computer. The water in the chamber started to seep down into the grated floor below. “Pressure reaching normal levels” said the voice again. The Sligs sank down to the floor as the water level dropped. “Pressurization complete, decontamination process starting” said the voice as beams of red light moved up and down and shun on the two Sligs. “Decontamination complete” said the voice as the door into the inside of the structure above them opened. “I think it is safe to take these suits off now” said Admeet. The two took of their suits but kept their harpoon guns and melee daggers, they wouldn’t know what they would be up against. They clambered up to the floor above them and looked at the new environment.

“My guess is that the radiation source is in this structure” said the female Slig. “Yeah, but where” said Admeet looking around. “That’s what we need to find out” said the female Slig. Suddenly, the two were knocked out by the butt of a syringe gun. Two figures stepped out of the shadows and dragged the two Sligs towards somewhere unknown. A spindly figure was following them. “Take them to the torture chamber” said the spindly figure.

All was strangely dark when Admeet started to open his eyes. “Admeet” whispered the female Slig who was in the same room as Admeet. “Admeet” whispered the female Slig again, “wake up”. Admeet opened his eyes fully and saw just darkness. “What’s going on” asked Admeet. “I don’t know” replied the female Slig, “all I heard was the butt of the gun hitting my head”. “That’s all I need to know” snapped Admeet quickly, “we need to get out of here”. The two Sligs started wriggling but they noticed that they were strapped into hard, grey chairs. “I’m afraid you can’t do that” said a mysterious voice somewhere in the room. Suddenly, a blinding display of lights appeared in front the Sligs’ eyes. “Who are you?” shouted Admeet. All there was silence. The Sligs just looked around; confused and worried. At least five interns were pointing syringe guns at the Sligs. In Admeet’s eyes, his life was probably about to end. The only thing now was to wait for the final blow.
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Name Reckoning (Part 1)

Just as the Interns were ready to fire, the door to the left of Admeet opened. Standing there was the masked Slig holding a harpoon gun in his hands. “Do you want him or me” shouted the masked Slig standing by a few dead Interns. “Get him” shouted the mysterious voice, “I will deal with these two myself”. The Interns hurried out of the room after the masked Slig.

“Now, where was I” said the mysterious voice. The figure with the voice wondered towards the Sligs, picking up a surgical knife along the way. The figure revealed himself in the light. He was wearing a gold monocle and a black business suit. “A Vykker” said Admeet. “Yes” said the Vykker, “I am the very Vykker which designed this whole base, and you will be the first Slig to die within its walls”. “Wow, what a privilege” said Admeet sarcastically.

The Vykker walked around the two chairs looking at the female Slig. “Such determination to get here” said the Vykker. “Actually, we found this place by accident” replied Admeet. “Really” said the Vykker, “what were you looking for?” “Some sort of radiation source” replied Admeet. “Hmm, I guess were looking for the same thing” said the Vykker. “Then do you know where we can find the source” asked Admeet. “Yes” replied the Vykker, “there is a map in the main control room and I will show you there”. Just as the Vykker was about to start his next sentence, a harpoon pierced through the Vykker’s torso, spattering blood all over Admeet. Standing behind the crippled Vykker was the masked Slig with the harpoon gun in his hands. “Whoa, what’s wrong with you” shouted Admeet angrily. “What?” said the masked Slig. “That Vykker was about to give me some important information” shouted Admeet. “He was evil wasn’t he” said the masked Slig. “I was reasoning with him” shouted Admeet. “Hey” said the female Slig, “This reunion is very touching, but shouldn’t we get out of here, unless you want more Interns to come to our position”. “Your right” said the Masked Slig, “let me free you”.

The masked Slig broke the locks on the chairs to set the Sligs free. “I think its time we had some names” said Admeet. “Yes I think so to” said the masked Slig as he took of his mask. “Vankor!” said Admeet looking confused. “Yes Admeet it is I” said Vankor. “How did you get back to full health?” asked Admeet, “you were wounded, scared, mauled beyond repair” Admeet hesitated but quickly turned it into a cough. “How?” “Well with the help of the doctors and a bucket full of med-packs, they nursed me back to health very quickly”.

The Three Sligs were about to make their way out of the door when suddenly, Zaypher popped out of nowhere. “Zaypher” said Admeet in surprise, “what are you doing here?” “Hmm, you two have been gone for at least two hours” replied Zaypher holding his two SMGs, “no wonder you two have been captured all this time”. “Anyway, shouldn’t we be getting out of here” asked Vankor. “Yes” replied Admeet, “we have no time. We need to head to the main control room. Let’s go”. “By the way Admeet” said Zaypher, “I think you will need this”. He handed over Admeet’s magnum. The four Sligs started to make their way towards the main control room.
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Name Reckoning (Part 2)

“Hmm, two ways” said Admeet looking at the clearly marked sign post saying Main control centre both going the opposite direction to one another. “I say we split up” said Zaypher looking at the sign post. “Okay” said Admeet, “I’ll go with the female Slig and you will go with Vankor”. “That’s fine by me” said Vankor. Admeet and the female Slig went left and Zaypher and Vankor went Right.

Some time later and Admeet and the female Slig arrived at the main control room first. “I think we’ve had a bit of luck” said Admeet looking at the map that was placed on the metal table in the middle of the room. The two walked over towards the table and took a good look at the map. “I think its time I revealed myself” said the female Slig. “Okay” said Admeet. The two sat down on some stools positioned around the map. “My name is Solister. I was a Rouge-Slig like you, searching the wastelands for anything suitable to eat or drink, but it wasn’t the life I chose. So I travelled to the military complex and joined the Slig Military Garrison. Since then, it’s been a good life”. “I guess we share more then we think” said Admeet. “More then you can imagine” said Solister.

Admeet looked confused but a few moments later, Zaypher and Vankor showed up. “What took you so long” asked Admeet. “We got stuck in traffic” replied Zaypher, “there were many Interns queuing up at the cafeteria”. “Is it lunchtime already” said Vankor looking at the nearby clock on the wall. “No time for lunch breaks” said Solister, “we have found the exact location of the radiation source. It is located in an underground bunker situated in a large crater. Unfortunately, data reports show that the bunker is heavily guarded by those creatures we fought back ago”. “Well what are they hiding” asked Vankor. “I don’t know, but the whole thing doesn’t sound good” replied Solister, “we’d better head out there now”. “Whoa there sister” said Zaypher, “we need to stock up on supplies first; don’t get to hasty”. “We went past an armoury a while ago” said Vankor. “Right” said Admeet, “we go to the armoury, stock up on supplies, and then we leave. Agreed?” “Agreed” they said all together. The four Sligs started to make their way towards the armoury. In a few hours, the whole thing would soon come to an end.
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Retrieval and Preparing

Getting to the armoury was not difficult since all the interns were on lunch break. It was strange that the Interns didn’t know that their master, the Vykker, was dead.

The Sligs finally reached the armoury that Vankor was talking about. “Yet another preposterous obstacle stands in our way” said Vankor, “How do you think we open it”. “hmm, it looks like we need some sort of key-card” said Solister. “I thought I saw one on the dead Vykker” said Admeet, “Okay” said Solister, “me and Admeet will get the card”. “Okay” said Admeet and the two Sligs walked off into the corridors. Zaypher and Vankor just stood there. “Something tells me that there could be a relationship between those two” said Zaypher rubbing his chin with his right hand. “I think so too” said Vankor inspecting the door and not really paying attention to Zaypher.

Admeet and Solister stood beside the door to the torture chamber. The door opened and the Sligs saw the harpoon pierced Vykker lying on the floor beside a torture chair. The key-card could be clearly seen attached to the Vykker’s suit pocket. The two Sligs walked over to the dead Vykker. Solister picked up the key-card. Strangely, the dead Vykker’s right arm was torn off. “Hmm, either a ravenous creature got his arm off or Vankor is a good shot with the harpoon gun” said Admeet examining the flesh wound. Unfortunately, the two Sligs didn’t notice the four legged, beaked animal that was eating in one of the corners of the room. The creature turned its head to look at the Sligs while an arm hanging out of the creature’s beak spilt blood all over the wall and floor. The creature let out a mighty roar and the arm fell out of the creature’s beak and hit the floor. The Sligs jumped back as the creature stepped out of the shadows. “What the heck is a Scrab doing here” said Solister. “Maybe the interns didn’t keep guard of the possible holding pens” replied Admeet. The Scrab came ever closer to the Sligs. “Damn lunch breaks, RUN!” shouted Admeet.

The Sligs ran out of the room and the Scrab charged at them. The Sligs ran as fast as they could but the Scrab was dangerously catching up with them. Then suddenly, the Scrab tripped up Solister and she fell to the ground. “Admeet!” shouted Solister as the Scrab reared up and pinned her down. Admeet turned around and saw the worst. “No!” shouted Admeet as he leapt at the Scrab and punched it in the head. The Scrab shrieked in pain as it stumbled back, but it quickly regained balance. Admeet drew out his magnum and pointed it at the Scrab. He pulled the trigger and with a bang, a silver bullet flew out of the barrel and penetrated the Scrab’s forehead. Blood was spilling out of the Scrab’s head as it stumbled about. With another mighty roar, it then fell to the ground; dead.

“You okay” asked Admeet as he lifted Solister of the floor. “I’m fine” replied Solister, “few bumps and bruises, but I’m good. But really, you didn’t have to do that”. “I just want to keep you safe from harm’s way” said Admeet calmly. “Well, thanks” said Solister, “we should hurry on back”. “Yes, let’s go” said Admeet. The two Sligs made their way back to the armoury door.

“What took you so long” asked Zaypher tapping his foot on the floor. “We had a bit of an encounter with a Scrab in the torture chamber” replied Admeet, “but everything’s fine”. “Shouldn’t we be opening this door now” said Vankor. “Yes” said Admeet. Admeet inserted the key card into the slot. “Access granted” said the voice which sounded like a computer. Steam shot out of the door gaps as the door opened. “Wow” said Zaypher in astonishment, “look at all these weapons”. There were advanced machine guns, 8-shot magnums, combat shotguns, missile launchers; everything that a gun enthusiast would dream of. “We are not here for the weapons Zaypher” said Admeet looking at the piles of ammo to the far right, “we are here for the harpoon ammo, med-kits and those sea grenades on the shelf on the left”. The four Sligs took whatever they could while Solister was eyeing two very strange pistols. “Hmm” thought Solister as she examined the pistols. “Looks like these duel pistols have been designed for underwater purposes” said Solister holding one of the pistols, “they might come in handy”. “how many pairs are there” asked Admeet”. “Luckily enough, there are 4 pairs” replied Solister. “Good” said Admeet, “we will definitely need them”. They all grabbed a pair of pistols and some extra ammo. Then they made their way towards the air-lock where the security hatch was. “I guess they didn’t find our suits in the hassle” said Solister looking at the suits which were lying on the grated floor. Solister and Admeet ‘zipped up’ their suits and Vankor pushed the button to close the door behind them. “Pressurization process starting” said the voice which sounded like a computer. The water down under the grated floor started to rise. After a few of seconds, the water reached the ceiling of the air lock. “Pressurization complete” said the voice again. The door on the other side opened to reveal the endless expanse of the sea bed. This was it; the finest hour had begun.
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No-one would guess that the female is called Solister. Congratulations for choosing a really unique name.

I think the story is progressing well, I think your fanfic has a good balance of action and narration. Definately one of the best series here.
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Thankyou

I shall continue on
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ERK! very long chapter! but great things happen
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Chapter 6
The Finest Hour

The group of Sligs waiting near the hatch made their way towards the four Sligs. “I’ll send these co-ordinates to your radar ummm, whats your name again” said Admeet cautiously to the Slig with the radar. It only took 5 seconds to get the co-ordinates to the radar. “Okay, I’ve got a position and it’s Tarios” said the Slig with the radar. “Okay Tarios lead the way” said Admeet. Tarios started walking towards the destination point and the rest of the group followed.

15 minutes later, the group came to the edge of the crater. “Hold up” said Tarios pointing his hand up with a flat palm, “I’m picking up movement over the crater edge”. “It could be those creatures again” said Solister. “There’s only one way to find out” said Zaypher walking over to the edge. The group followed Zaypher over to the edge and saw utter chaos.

The ravenous creatures were picking of the last scraps of meat of a dead Leviathan on the edge (A type of whale). The Bunker was clearly in sight. “We have to get to the bunker quietly” said Admeet, “follow my lead”. The Sligs Agreed and followed Admeet quietly to the centre of the crater.

It didn’t take that long to reach the centre of the crater, and when they did reach it, they were let down by a difficult obstacle. “How many preposterous obstacles are there in this sea?” said Vankor sarcastically, “the front doors locked!”. “Then we will just have to find a way in” said Admeet looking at the door and thinking. “Found it” said Solister as an answer. Solister had found a box of sea mines with a remote activation device stored with them. “They must be used to defend the bunker” said Zaypher inspecting the mines. “They are definitely going to
grab the attention of the creatures” said Admeet, “so be ready for a fight”.

Vankor, being the strongest of the lot, opened the box and grabbed a sea mine and the remote. He carried them towards a point where he was a few metres away from the door. He gave Admeet the Remote and activated the detonation system on the mine “Ready” asked Admeet. “Ready” replied Vankor. He pushed the mine towards the door and before the mine hit the door, Admeet pushed the button to blow it up. The mine went of with a huge boom. It definitely created a hole in the door, and water was pouring into the entrance. This did inevitably attract the attention of the creatures. The creatures gave out a loud roar and eyed the Sligs. “Get ready, here they come” shouted Admeet as he drew out his duel pistols. Solister, Zaypher and Vankor also drew out their pistols and aimed at the creatures. The other Sligs drew out their harpoon guns. “On my command, we run through the broken door” said Admeet. The creatures came ever closer and they showed their razor sharp teeth to the Sligs. “NOW!” shouted Admeet, “RUN!” The Sligs ran straight through the broken door and the creatures swam violently after them.

The four Sligs fired their pistols and harpoon guns at the creatures that were dangerously catching up. “Just run” shouted Admeet. The entrance to a small corridor came into view. “Quick, in there” shouted Solister. The Sligs turned violently and opened the door. They all went inside and Admeet closed the door just as a creature was halfway through the door way. The door sliced the creature in half and all the Sligs could see was the body and head of it. Blood was spilling out of the flesh of the creature and turning the slightly flooded corridor into a blood bath. “God, disgusting” shouted Zaypher looking at the flesh hanging out of the sliced creature. Some of the creatures started banging at the door. “We’d better move” said Solister, “the source can’t be far”. The Sligs waded through the flooded corridor towards the radiation source.

Eventually, they reached the source. They looked through a door window and couldn’t believe their eyes. “My god” said Vankor, “it’s a nuclear reactor. What is it doing here and why is it still operational”. “Maybe the previous owners of this bunker wanted power, so they built this reactor” said Solister, “and maybe when they decided to move out when the resources were getting low, the radiation mutated the creatures when they took over”. “So how do we deactivate it” said Tarios. “We need to flood the reactor first” said Solister, “then we need to activate the reactor and overload it. Because the entire core will be flooded, it shouldn’t cause a big explosion”. “It looks like there is a water pump room just next to the reactor” said Vankor looking at a reactor status map, “and there should be a small tunnel from the reactor to the pump room. There is also another small tunnel which leads to the sea”. “Right, the radiation levels shouldn’t be too bad in there” said Admeet, “Let’s go”.

The only way towards the pump was to crawl through the small tunnel one by one. When the Sligs finally reached it, they stationed themselves around the pump. “It says on the instructions here “to turn on pump, adjust the pressure to 80%, open the main valves and turn on the two generators at the same time”” said Vankor looking at the instructions. Tarios adjusted the pressure, Zaypher opened the main valves and Admeet and Solister turned on the generators at the same time. Within no time, the pump was up and running. The reactor chamber was slowly flooding with water. This in turn opened the valve which allowed sea water to seep in. “The controls to activate the reactor are situated beside it” said Solister, “we need to get there before the creatures can swim through the sea valve. The Sligs dived into the water and swam through the small tunnel.

The Sligs made it through and Solister positioned herself beside the controls next to the reactor. “Good thing these controls are water proof” said Solister, “I just need to push this button to overload the reactor and we are out of here”. Before she could press the button, the tail of a creature whacked her onto the floor suddenly. “Too late” shouted Admeet, “open fire!” The Sligs with their pistols and harpoon guns fired at the creatures that were coming through the sea valve. “There are too many” shouted Tarios. Admeet quickly helped Solister onto her feet. “Run through the door” shouted Admeet, “it’s our only way out”.

The Sligs ran through the door and quickly closed it but one of the creature’s long hands with razor sharp claws was stuck in the gap of the door. Admeet shot it a couple of times and the creature gave up. Unfortunately, the panel to open the door was shot and burnt out. “Seal the door” shouted Vankor looking at the rushing water coming through the door. The Sligs pushed the door as hard as they could. Zaypher however just stood where he was and thought hard.

“Oh no” shouted Solister looking at the reactor, “that creature must have deactivated the reactor and we need to close this door from the outside. Someone needs to go in there to seal the door and activate the reactor”. “I’ll do it” said Admeet looking at the reactor, “I was supposed to be the one to end this”. Suddenly just as Admeet was about to enter the reactor chamber, Zaypher hit Admeet on the head with the butt of one of his pistols. Zaypher then entered the reactor chamber and closed the door behind him. “What are you doing” Shouted Admeet looking through the window at Zaypher. “I’m sorry Admeet, but it has to be done” replied Zaypher. “Open the door god damn it” shouted Admeet angrily, “you were not supposed to die”. “I can’t do that Admeet” said Zaypher. The creatures were dangerously surrounding Zaypher. “I want the heroism to live on, so I’m doing this for you” said Zaypher. He then started to slowly walk away calmly with the creatures eyeing him. He activated the reactor and pushed the button to overload it. “We’ve got to go now” said Solister looking worried. Admeet took one last look at Zaypher and ran for it. “Farewell cruel world” said Zaypher to himself and then he was sliced and shredded by the creatures’ sharp claws and teeth.

The rest of the Sligs came out of the entrance and ran towards the edge of the crater ignoring the fact that the creatures were eyeing them. Eventually, the Sligs made it back to the A.T.T and strapped in. They heard the reactor blow up just as they strapped in. Vankor took the pilot’s seat and started up the motors. The A.T.T started its 100 mile ascent through the tunnel. It didn’t take that long to reach the surface and the A.T.T shot through the water and shot through the rock of the cave onto dry land. The A.T.T was scratched and scraped and the Sligs lay unconscious in their seats. Admeet was the only one who was conscious. He sat there and looked depressed. Zaypher was gone, either dead or still out there; no one would ever know.
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