Tales of Oddworld: Radiant Mythology

[Zelda--Fan]

This is the first in a 3 part fanfic the first chapter will be done tomorrow hopefully unless something turns up and its not ready. Post what you think its about im curious to see what you all think of it.

[Venks]

Welcome to the forums Zelda fan, you do realize we have a thread for introducing yourself to these forums right?
Nothing personal, but I don't appreciate it when people don't read the rules before posting.
Topics are stickied in threads for a reason, you should check them out.

Oh and I guess this story is about what happens to Abe and Munch after MO.
So you know, seeing from your RPG which you aren't allowed to create, the main races on Oddworld all come from their own Queen, they don't have individual parents.

[Zelda--Fan]

the Rpg was a mistake i should get a lisence soon i accidentily forgot to read the part about the lisence. im sorry

[Zelda--Fan]

Venks your close it goes into munchs story in the second one





sorry for double post

[Zozo the Zrilufet]

Venks your close it goes into munchs story in the second one





sorry for double post

You could of edited that into your other post.

[Zelda--Fan]

I know i know i was in a hurry
This is sorta the back story it explains whats going on


CHAPTER 1: prolouge

Twenty years after the destrution of Vyyker Labs Oddworld basked in peace again. Altough the friendship of the two heros had parted they still rememberd the great risks they took to save the land of Oddworld. Abe was elected cheif by Bigface while munch began rebuilding the gabbit empire. then the two empires began to fight...

With the empires at war each others friendships had crumbled.
Let only fate decide what happens...

Thats what has ended this is what had started...

[Zozo the Zrilufet]

Uhhh.....Gabbits only live for 18 years, and Munch was two to begin with. He'd be dead or really old by then. Can't really see them fighting like that either.

[Zelda--Fan]

Hey it's my story i can have it go any way i want

CHAPTER 2:basic training

''MOVE MOVE MOVE!'' shouted a steamed Abe. ''You soilders are pathetic I will be back soon and i want to see all of you in tip top shape when i get back, understand?'' snarled Abe. ''Yes w-we understand''. squeled frightend muds. ''I can't belive i work with wimps like them, General Kim status report!'' ''Our scouts report no movement around the forest area, checking in with Alpha Company... All clear sir''. ''good good i'd hate to see anything happen to this city''. *Radar alarm-- breach in the forest area unknown entity--Radar alarm* ''General Kim whats wrong''. ''sir it's Munch from the Gabbit empire he wishes to speak with you''. ''Send him away''. ''But sir''...
''I don't need fossils like him in Mudos send him away''! ''Hey let me go''! Raored Munch. "Abe i thought we were friends''? ''Not any more fossil''. snarled Abe.



Well.. do you like it? Oh and i think that because munch was experimented on they gave him a bigger life span. just a thought.