Sam's Second Chance
This story is so bad. It's not in anyone's POV. It's about Sam after Vykker Labs blew up. It's not as good as my MO Fanfic. But this is just an attempt. So you can insult it if you want. I know how bad it is. So here it is.
"Sam woke up in Vykker Labs. She felt lighter for an unknown reason. She smelt the smell of burning and rotting. She realised that her chains were broken. So she wasn’t chained to the wall anymore. She heard a loud bang and then falling…then a heavy thud inside the lab. She was alone. She noticed one of the TV monitors; it was smashed and blank. Sam felt scared. She was slightly relieved to have been left alone for once. But the silence was intimidating and the darkness seemed to close in. Sam lifted herself up with little difficulty (much to her surprise) and walked up to the door of her prison. So her surprise, it opened after she touched it. She walked into the hall and saw the hallway. The operating room was on one side while the room to a canteen was on the other. Sam noticed the hallway and was immediately frightened by what she saw. The walls were charred black and only one light was on. And that light was flickering. Sam made her way to the operating room and went in.
The smell of burning was even stronger. She noticed the flickering lights. She felt something wet on her foot and looked down. She saw blood on her foot. She let out a shriek of terror. She then saw where the blood was coming from. She saw two familiar bodies. One was on the floor; the other was impaled on a knife on the wall. Sam looked at them and screamed again. She realised that it was Irwin that was on the floor and Humphrey that was impaled. Irwin’s eyes were filled with tears but they stared blankly. Humphrey had a look of shock on his face yet there was no light in his eyes either. Sam fell onto the floor crying.
“I’m the only one alive,” She sobbed.
“No you’re not,” a male voice said. Sam turned around. A hooded figure stood there. Sam stared at him.
“You’ve alive as well?” She asked, scared and confused. The figure shook his head and pulled his hood down. A very white mudokun stood in front of her. His red eyes had tiny pupils and bags under them, as if he hadn’t slept for days. He stared at her. A pale hand whipped a scythe out of nowhere.
“You were killed in the explosion as well, Queen Sam. Irwin and Humphrey just made me chase them…I was hoping to get you before you awakened” The figure said “My name is Adrian…I am the Grim Reaper for all creatures on Oddworld…it is not a nice job…I can assure you…I do not favour…I do not judge…I just merely take souls to those who do…now let’s go…the sooner the better…” The reaper sighed and cut into something with his scythe, forming a portal. He stepped into it and beckoned Sam. With fear, Sam stepped in after him.
There was a long queue with a podium at the end. A Steef was at the podium. There were two doors either side of him. Sam stood at the back of the line when a familiar person turned around. It was Irwin.
“Well, look who showed up!” He said angrily, his eye was still bleeding. “Little miss late”. A Shrink (Who had taken on a physical form) just looked at Sam, his red eyes fixed on her throat).
“Looks like you didn’t live through that sharp part of a chain stabbing into your throat, Sam” He said quietly. “I had managed to get you to sleep when that happened…who knew you were such a deep sleeper?” Sam wanted to cry when she heard this.
“I say this” Humphrey piped up “Let’s kill her…again!” Sam screamed as Irwin and Humphrey approached.
“ENOUGH!!” A voice yelled. With that, a strange figure appeared. He was also a mudokun. He had dark green skin and spiky brown hair. He looked unusual for a mudokun. He was tall and wore a light blue robe. He approached.
“Queen Sam” He said, his voice sounded comforting when he was calm “Step out of the line for a moment please” He glared at Irwin and Humphrey when they made sounds of disappointment. He walked with Sam until they were out of earshot of the line.
“Dear Sam” He said, smiling “I am Shykrull. I figured my destruction form would distress you more. This is my creation form. I realise that you did not manage to serve your purpose…nor live your life to the full…so I am going to let you have a life back…” He held out his hand “All you have to do is take my hand…close your eyes…and then I can give you a second life as the second Mudokun Queen…you will start as one of the eggs that one of your sons rescued…I promise that you will live life to the full, never to be captured, never to be hurt…I promise” Sam had tears in her eyes. She felt happier than she ever had done while she was alive.
“Really?” She asked
“I promise…really…” Shykrull said. Sam took his hand. She took a deep breath and closed her eyes. Everyone went white.
In the Monsaic Lines, an egg started to hatch. It grabbed the attention of two mudokuns nearby. They watched as a female mudokun face broke out of the shell. The baby mudokun started crying (which was a good sign) as she saw the sun on her young face. Sam was reborn…"
I know it's bad and not as good as my first fic submitted here. But rate and review please.
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can't wait to read more!!!
I want more, I WANT MORE! 
