Syrom's Retribution

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Here it is, the third of the four Odd stories.
This is when, the story of betrail, grousome and funny story begins...

The birds whistled, and the sun was shining. All was going well in the monosaic lines.
There, near the temple, was a rather posh-looking mudokon.
There was a flash of light, and birds fluttered away, revealing a Steef, with a cowboy hat and a shotgun.
This steef had no legs, and was barking something to a fat Mudokon.
"Gander! We hate Industrials! We do not worship them!" The steef shouted.
The mudokon named Gander was struggling to fit a tee-shirt saying 'I Luv Sligs!'
Gander looked at the steef, shrugged, and started chewing it.
The posh looking Mudokon stepped forward.
"Syrom, you are back! Do you want to go to your hut?" The mudokon asked.
"No. I want to see The Guru." Syrom said.
"I'm sorry sir, I'm afraid the Guru is dead."

I walked around Splinterz, thinking about what Splinterz had said to me earlier.
"Syrom? Who the hell is Syrom?" I wondered.
A slig called Travis walked up to me.
"Syrom? Why don't you ask your friend Monty?" Travis said.
Travis always wanted to be one of my friends, but his latest attempt to become a friend of mine failed...miserably.
"Travis! Thanks! Your the best!" I said, running towards the doors.
Travis watched me like I was some type of god.
"He said I was the best!" Travis muttered under his breath.
I ran out the door.
I ran down the road to Monty's & Richy's
I walked into the store.
There were Sligs walking about the place picking up boxes, with little white hats saying 'REPO' on them.
I saw Monty sitting on his counter, crying.
"What happend here?" I asked Monty.
Monty's tears dried away.
"Some little rat said a shelf fell on a customer and now the inspector his turning me out!" Monty Bellowed.
"Who was it?" I asked.
"Some slig shooter, about 3ft" Monty replied with a sniffle.
"All sligs are 3ft." I told him.
Monty started walking back into his office.
Something caught my Eye.
Richey was waiting for a Repo slig to move away so he could steel the slig's little blue lunch box.
I turned to Monty.
"Since when has Richy turned clever?" I asked.
"I've been sending him to vykker school. Couldn't stand the drooling. Already got three detentions and a warning." He answered.
"But where am I going to live now?" He cried.
"I know! You could sleep in Mine, Slug's, Grunt's and Ziggies!" I said.
Monty nodded.
We walked out the door.
Monty tapped Richy on the shoulder, and he followed.
"Better get inside quick. Storm's coming." I said.
But we had no idea that this storm was not a natural storm.
This one was from Syrom.

[odd chick]

Yay!! Another story! Nice first chapter, BBS! I actually laughed out loud at parts (I'm easily amused!) .

The mudokon named Gander was struggling to fit a tee-shirt saying 'I Luv Sligs!'

I don't know why, but that part really cracked me up! Keep the story goin'!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

The Monosaic Council sat around a table.
Syrom slammed his fist against the table.
"Damn it! We will have to get our Revenge somehow! Where do these sligs work?" Syrom bellowed.
"Splinterz, I think." Replied a Mudokon by the name of Big-Face.
"We will crush Splinterz with an Army so hard, they'll be Nobody left!" Syrom screamed.
A Shyrkull replied next.
"Syrom, You can not overwhelm the Industrials, your plan is useless. They've already beat us twice and they'll beat us again!" The Shyrkull barked.
"Shut your mouth or I will crush you like a paramite being stuffed into a pie!" Syrom shouted.
The Shrykull stared at him.
"Now, if you would be kind enough to listen to me, I will say this." Syrom smiled.
"The reason we have beaten us is because they always sneek up on our armies when we're not ready. But if we give'em a taste of there own Medicine...we will win." Syrom said.
"Impossible! We would have to get half the Mudokons in Oddworld to get over Splinterz!" The Shrykull shouted. "We don't have enough people."
"Tyronus, my friend. That is when you will come in handy." Syrom said in a smooth voice.
"What are you doing?" He asked.
Syrom pulled out a Syringe.
"I thought you might want an army of your own? Perhaps? A simple dab of blood will make enough of them." Syrom said, walking up to Tyronus, the Shrykull.
"What are you talking about?" He asked.
"Simple." Syrom replied. "I'm cloning you."

[odd chick]

Great chapter, BBS! So the Muds are going to clone another one, huh? And I'm glad you put Big Face in that chapter. Keep the story going! The plot sounds very interesting so far.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

It's alive!" Syrom screamed, pointing at the bed with a Shrykull/clone on it.
"No it's not! You just killed it by screaming!" Tyronus said.
Syrom mumbled something out of his mouth.
There was a clatter of guards outside, and Kakulana smashed through the wall of the tiny hut.
"You know, Kakulana...You could of used the door." Syrom said, pointing to the door.
"Too small." Kakulana said.
"Anyway, Welcome home, Kakulana!" Syrom shouted. "Feel free to ask questions about our Evil plan!"
"What plan?" Kakulana asked.
"We are throwing the Best army ever created right on top of Splinterz! Then attacking everyone in it and kill any survivors!" Syrom Screamed.
After all the years of being imprisoned in a cage by a man called Mr. Sekto Syrom had become a bit mental and once thought he was a Thudslug and jumped off a cliff.
"That won't work." Kakulana said.
"Don't answer back to me, Boy!" Syrom Barked.
"Sorry! Nobody wants to upset mr big shot, Do they?" Kakulana said sarcastically.
"That's it!" Syrom screamed.
Syrom lunged for his Shot gun, and loaded it up.
The first time he missed, but the second time...he hit him.
Kakulana gave a yelp, and ran out the hole in the wall.
Tyronus found this very amusing, and burst out laughing.
Syrom turned towards him.
"If you don't shut up you'll be next!" Syrom said.

[odd chick]

That was so funny, BBS! I love the off-beat humor in this story-this is definitely the funniest one you've written! Good job!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

The hills that surrounded Splinterz were dark.
This time, It was Mine and Slug's turn to be in the look-out tower.
I clicked a button on the side of the tower.
A pair of Binoculars popped down, and Slug put his eyes to them.
"What's that?" Slug asked.
"Yeah! What the Hell is that?" I said.
A Shrykull popped up from behind the hill, and then a Steef.
Then our Jaws dropped as the terror came.
Slug lunged for the P.A System.
He flicked the switch to On.
"Hello, Private Slug reporting from tower...Five huge armies heading straight for Splinterz- so get ready for battle.
The five armies were:
1. Mudokons
2. Grubs
3. Steefs
4. Gabbits
And the final one was as big as Vykkers labs...Shrykulls.
Slug switched it on again.
"We've got Shrykulls everybody! We've got Shrykulls!" Slug shouted down the Microphone.
Suddenly, Kakulana sprinted down the hill.
He stopped.
Tyronus shouted something to the other Shrykulls, and they unleashed their power.
At least 50,000 sparks of Energy sparked towards the tower.
Suddenly, the Tower went crashing down...with us in it!

[odd chick]

Great chapter, BBS. Yet another great action-packed chapter! I'm especially glad that you put the shrykulls in there-they're cool. Keep your great story goin'!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Sligs marched out of Splinterz, Loaded with weapons.
I removed some rubble, and crawled out, along with Slug.
There was a loud screech...and The army ran.
The two armies collided leading to Slaughter.
I saw Monty rushing with a Sub-machine gun, along with Richy, with his Ripper.
I saw Ziggy and the Steef Battling.
"Syrom." I whispered.
Ziggy fired his gun at Syrom.
Syrom grabbed the bullet, and dropped it to the floor.
He grabbed Ziggy by the Neck, and through him to the floor.
He then had a fire-lighter, and lit the floor around Ziggy.
"Goodbye, Zigget!" Syrom said. "Au revoir!" "Bomb Voyage!"
"Au Revoir? What the hell does that mean?" Ziggy said.
"I don't know! Now shut up and die!" Syrom said.
The fire closed in on Ziggy, and then...Death.
I swore, and ran towards the fire.
The fire burned out, and there lay the smoking Carcas.
I swore again, and turned to Syrom.
"I'll kill you!" I screamed.
"And who the hell are you?" Syrom said.
"Biggy Bro Slig!" I yelled.
"Yes...your the Bastard who killed Scrutter." Syrom said.
"Scrutter?" I said.
"The Guru! Now shut your Pie Hole so I can kill you in peace!" Syrom shouted.
He looked at me, with a big grin.
"What?" I asked.
"Nothing. Just thinking how much fun this will be."

[odd chick]

Awww, poor Ziggy. That was a great chapter, BBS. I hope Syrom gets what he deserves!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

I walked up to Syrom.
"How about you die quickly, like no bullets or guns." Syrom said first.
Syrom pulled out a sword, and another.
He passed one to me.
"On gaurd!" Srom yelled, and lunged.
I wasn't that good at sword fighting or Fencing, but I new how to defend myself with a sword.
I blocked the attack with my sword.
"Very well, Biggy bro slig, but can you do this?" Syrom said.
He did a back-flip, and head-butted a slig, and then stabbed his sword into the slig.
"No." I said under my breath.
I took my opertunity to lunge while Syrom was walking towards me.
He defended it off, but I then kicked him in the stomach.
He fell into the muddy and Grassy floor, and I pulled his sword of him.
"Surrender or die!" I said.
Syrom stood up, and pulled out a little dagger.
I had two swords now, so it was clear I could win.
I lunged with two swords at once.
Syrom fended off one sword, but the other dug in to his arm.
He screamed, and he dropped his dagger.
I pulled the sword down, and chopped his arm off.
The hairy, brownish-blond arm fell to the ground.
While screaming, Syrom jumped forward.
I stumbled bacwards, tripping over Ziggy's bones.
Syrom stumbled back into a Horse-like creature.
Wait a minute...that's The Guru's Horse! I thought.
Syrom jumped on it, and rode off.
General Tyronus saw Syrom riding away to Kakulana, and Turned towards me.
The Blue uniformed General walked towards me, loading up a strange gun.
"That's Richies gun!" I said.
"Slice, dice, and do it twice!" Tyronus said, pointing his arm from the side of him.
I turned my head towards were he was pointing.
There lay Richy in a puddle with plood dripping from him, facing his back to the sky.
"You can save your friend, or you can confront me and I will order my army off your sligs." The General said.
I ran towards Richy.
Somehow, Tyronus knew I would choose my friend.
I turned over Richy.
It wasn't Richy, or Monty either. It was an ordinary Vykker.
I turned around, to see Tyronus firing his gun.
I ran away, and realised I had just ran into a Minefield...

[odd chick]

Oooh, it's getting so intense! And bloody, too! Just what I like! This has got to be the best action-scene you've ever written! Keep it up because it's great!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

I read a sign nearby, which read, 'landmines'.
I walked forward, and stood in something squishy.
Landmines. I thought.
"Meeps" I said.
I turned around, and saw Tyronus launching about five razor sharp boomerangs at once.
I dodged one, two, three and four.
Five cut one of of my Metal legs.
I tripped up, landing in a ditch.
Suddenly, a slig beside me was shot, and I grabbed his pants.
Tyronus yelled one word, and only one word.
"STOP!" He yelled at the top of his voice.
Everyone loocked at Tyronus.
He pulled out a little device.
He pressed a little button on it.
Suddenly, Splinterz crashed down on top of itself, sending tooth-picks flying everywhere.
I grabbed a Steef beside me, and The Steef kicked me right in my...ittie-bitties.
I let the Steef go, and Grabbed a Squeeling Grub.
I held the Grubb infront of me, and Tooth-Picks went flying into the Squeeling Grub.
I dropped the Grub.
I walked towards the General of the army.
He waved goodbye, and Syrom came rushing past Tyronus, and he jumped on the Guru's horse.
I stared back at Splinterz, and pointed towards Splinterz.
I ran towards the wreck, with 10,000 sligs behind me.
We started rummiging around the wreck.
I pulled out a half destroyed round device.
"Thermal bomb." I said.
"A what?" Asked Grunt from behind me.
"A Thermal Bomb. Hot air and Cold air rubbing together. Like Thunder and Lighting." I replied.
I dug further underneath.
I found a Glukkon named Splinterz.
He had is eyes closed, but he was alive and well.
I said his name, and his eyes opened.
"My god! How am I going to pay all this?" The first think the Glukkon screamed.
I looked behind me.
The army had retreated, but there lay Kakulana struggling to get up.
"Simple," I said. "War crimes and Court."

[odd chick]

Nice chapter, BBS.
"I grabbed a Steef beside me, and The Steef kicked me right in my...ittie-bitties."
He he, I thought that was rather amusing. Especially the term "ittie-bitties."
Well, keep your great story going! And I really like the thermal bomb idea.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

We sat in a huge court.
"Ladies and Gentlemen of the Jury, please rise for Judge Redrin." A posh looking Vykker said.
A short fat looking tubbiester walked into the court.
The judge shuddered
"Natives! Guilty!" Redrin screamed.
"But sir, you havn't even heard the story!" Kakulana said.
"Still, I sentence you to 300yrs in Solitary confindment!" The judge screamed.
Kakulana lunged forward, pinned the judge to the wall, and the door burst open.
"Stop right there!" Said a person.
More like a Bolamite.
"You have no right to pull my Husband in jail!" Said the oversised red Bolamite.
The only way to tell the difference was Kakulana was green and the Mrs. was Red and purple.
Kakulana kicked the judged once, and stood on him with his oversized legs.
His foot went right through the judge, and Sligs popped out from the jury.
The posh looking vykker picked up his phone.
He dialed a number, and muttered something.
A few moments later, Vykkers came running through the doors, with Syringes, saws and snoozies.
"Freeze, You filthy thing!" Said a Vykker.
Kakulana's wife spat some web, and tied up the Vykkers.
Kakulana ran out the door.
A vykker managed to cut through the webbing, and dug his Drill into Kakulana's wife.
There was a great roar of pain from her, and then she collapsed on the floor.
"Stop Kakulana! Come on then!" I yelled.
A band of Sligs followed me down a corridoor.
Suddenly, Kakulana clicked a button on the wall.
A hatch opened, and Kakulana pulled out a Sub-machine gun.
"Say goodbye!" Kakulana said, aiming for the group.

[odd chick]

Great chapter as usual, BBS. I can't wait to see what happens with Kakulana and the sliggies! Keep up the good work!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Who do you think is the evilest Badguy?
The guru?
Syrom?
Kakulana?
General Tyronus?

Come to think of it, what happened to Ziggy? In TGR He get's stabbed by a wormy creature, and in the next part, he's alive and well!

UPDATE
Squash, the Sumo-mud in TGR, never actually died, but never apeared in the next chapters, but not for long!
If you were wondering were Chunky F has been, he moved away to the Spooce-mines. But if you liked him, he's coming back folks!
Those damn Robo-lice! There coming back too!

Post the next chapter soon!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Sorry about the Double posts.

"Ouch!" Syrom squealed, as a machine was making Syrom a Bionic arm.
The Machine dug in a little more into Syroms skin, and pulled out a peice of stone.
It swirled around to it's workbench, and dropped the stone.
It pulled out five metal Rods, and placed them on the table.
It then swirled around, and pulled out a strand of hair.
It put it in a machine for 10 seconds, and out popped more hair!
It then picked up some gears and plastic, and went to work.
Five minutes later, it pulled out an exact replica of his arm.
The hair was stuck on, but you could barely see the Chrome-like colour.
The droid stopped, and his red eye went dark.
Syrom jumped up of it's bed, and pulled down it's circuit board.
On the screen, it said:
INSERT 10 MULLAH TO RE-ACTIVATE
"I hate robots. No offence Brother but...I hate crappy droids like him." Syrom said.
At the words 'Crappy droids like him,' The droid reactivated.
It reached down with it's hand, and dismantled itself from the floor.
It went swirling out the door muttering "Beep Beep whirrt"
Tyronus walked in the door.
"Need a hand?" Tyronus asked.
"No. But I could use a arm." Syrom laughed.
Tyronus drilled he arm in.
"Have you seen Kakulana?" Tyronus asked.
"No. But I beleive he just escaped with a bomb out of the Court of odd." Syrom replied.

[odd chick]

Cool, a droid robot! I liked this chapter-it was really good. I can't wait to see what else happens!

Who do you think is the evilest Badguy?
The guru?
Syrom?
Kakulana?
General Tyronus?

Come to think of it, what happened to Ziggy? In TGR He get's stabbed by a wormy creature, and in the next part, he's alive and well!

UPDATE
Squash, the Sumo-mud in TGR, never actually died, but never apeared in the next chapters, but not for long!
If you were wondering were Chunky F has been, he moved away to the Spooce-mines. But if you liked him, he's coming back folks!
Those damn Robo-lice! There coming back too!

Post the next chapter soon!

To answer your questions....
1. Syrom is, by far, the evilest of them all, in my opinion-he killed Ziggy. (or did he? Hmm? lol)
2.Hmm...I noticed that as well...he must be close to indestructible...well...until Syrom got ahold of him, anyway.
3.Hmmm...I never noticed the Sumo mud never appearing in the other chapters, for some reason....so is he coming back? If so, then, yay!!
4.Chunky F is coming back? Cool.
5.Robo-lice!!! Yay!!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Kakulana blasted himself out of the wall.
Us sligs went flying down like bowling pins.
Suddenly, Tanks and slig- And wolvarks came rushing around the building.
I opened up the hatch to one of the tanks.
I peered down.
"Anybody in there?" I shouted.
A familliar face popped up.
"How ya doing my friendly slig?"
"Chunky, what is this...crusade for?" I asked the Robot pumping petrol into the air.
"Havn't you seen?" Chunky said.
He pulled down the periscope.
I jumped down the hatch, and peered in the Periscope.
I saw millions of Robolice. And at the back, were four ten stories high Mechs.
I Popped out the hatch, and called Monty, Richy, Slug and grunt to come in.
As they climbed down, Chunky counted them.
"And Ziggy?" He asked.
My smile went away at thinking what had happened.
Chunky new hat had happened just by the face.
"Oh." He said, and his boiler pressure went down.
"Anyway, let's kick some Ass!" Richy drooled.
"Slug, you're in command of the back turret, Grunt, you take the left Turret. Monty, you take command of the Controls, Dribble, you're on the right turret.
I'll control and BBS go in the main turret." Chunky gasped.
I dived into my possition at the bottom of Chunky's Feet, and flicked the veiwing camera on.
Chunky went straight foward to the army.
I got a glimpse of someone I wished I had never seen.
Squash.
He was bouncing on sligs, crippling them, and kicking them.
I aimed, Locked and loaded, and fired.
A tripple balst of complete energy went darting towards the Un-aware Mudokon.
The blasts hit him, and he went running around, jolting everywhere.
That should keep him out of the front lines, I thought.
The four mechs were now at the front, crushing sligs with there huge steel feet.
I aimed, and fired.
A blast of Laser went firing towards the red Mech.
It burst into flames, and crashed down onto 50 sligs.
I zoomed my camera in on a red mech.
It had a plastic screen covering the driver. Tyronus.
I fired multiple shots at this one.
Tyronus spotted them coming. He grabbed the yellow mech, twisted around it, and landed on the other side.
The General ran towards me.
He squashed anything in the way, but when he got there...Wham!
He kicked the tank we were in up in the air, and grabbed us.
He squeased the tank, until something went firing into his arm.
Tyronus dropped the tank, and I turned to Grunt.
Grunt smiled.
Chunky went as fast as he could. He ran over 10 Robolice, and one grabbed on the tank.
Slug turned around, and blasted the electrified droid.
Chunky went heading towards the green and yellow Mechs.
I zoomed my camera into the green Mech.
"Kakulana." I muttered.
I switched to the yellow one.
I zoomed in.
Syrom, who had missiles planed on his wrists, was firing them out mindlessly.
He had a jet-pack on his back, and he spotted us.
He launched himself in the air, and ready to land on us...

[odd chick]

Great chapter, BBS. I liked all of it-it was one of your best ones! Yay, Chunky's in this chapter!! Whee! Anyway, keep up the good work.

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Thanx, Oddchick. But I'm afraid next week I'm camping till Friday.

The Yellow mech's foot slammed down on the tank.
Sparks went everywhere, and the tank was squashed.
The foot left, and the tank stopped moving.
I thought I was dead for a second, but it was only that I heard Chunky clanking his way out of the tank.
I tried to move, but my arm was broken.
"Help!" I cried.
A little voice popped up.
"BBS? Hang on there buddy!"
Slug lifted the steering wheel of me, and helped me up.
I climbed out of the crushed tank.
I looked foward.
Syrom was launching missiles at a Silver mech.
I new who that was.
"Travis!" I cried.
Travis was the slig in the Silver mech, and was kicking Syrom.
Syrom was kicked up into the air, and landed on the floor head-first.
He stood up, and fired a missle at Travis.
He hit Travis, and he stumbled for a second.
He then through a Thermal bomb at Syrom.
Syrom went flying into the air, and his missile launcher blew up.
He triggered on his jet pack, and went soaring towards Travis.
He bashed into him so hard, Travis could of went to Abe's moon and back.
But luckily, he didn't. Travis went darting backwards, and into The Court.
The building smashed, collapsing on Travis.
I remembered earlier the red mech I knocked down.
I ran towards it, and got in.
I ran towards Syrom in my mech suit.
"I'm sorry, Biggy Bro Slig. That round is over. He is now fighting you." Syrom said, pointing his huge Yellow finger at Kakulana.
Kakulana jumped of at Me, and bashed into me.
If it wasn't for a rock behind me, I would of had the same fate as Travis.
I kicked Kakulana right in the window.
Kakulana fell out, running away from the tumbling mech.
I walked towards Kakulana.
"I've been waiting for this moment for a long time, Kakky." I told him.
Kakulana new what I was going to do. He scrambled away.
I lifted my huge, red foot, and placed it on Kakulana.
There was cracking sound, the a series of screams, and then...silence.
I lifted my foot, to reveal a crushed, body of Kakulana.
The fighting stopped.
A Aqautic blue mech appeared.
"Industrialists will Reign for ever!"
I knew that voice. Splinterz.
He gave a signal, and At least 5 million Gloktigi apeared.
We are going to win this war, I thought

[odd chick]

Great chapter as usual, BBS. Mechs! I love mechs-they're so cool! Well, until next chapter, have fun on your camping trip!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

The gloktigi charged.
The army scattered.
The Gloktigi slaughtered the remaining ones.
And Squash was one.
He ran for his life, until a Gloktigi apeared behind him.
He screamed, and the Gloktigi scraped his claw into his belly.
A, large ping stomach slopped out.
"My stomach!" He screamed.
It wasn't the fact he lost his stomach, due to seven others in his body, the claw had hit an artery.
Squash stumbled towards his side-kick, Gander, who was trying to get a Gloktigi's autograph.
He grabbed Gander, who was now whining like a baby, and pulled him towards Tyronus's mech.
He opened a hatch, and scrambled in.
Meanwhile, I glided over to the Gloktigi, and punched Syrom's mech.
Syrom smashed out, landing on a log.
He stumbled up, and signalled to all his men to get behind the hills.
"Ladies and Gentlemen," Syrom yelled. "The war has ended. And the Guru's Revenge has subsided. Leading towards...Syrom's Retribution!"
He pulled out a button, and a plane came from behind the hills.
Syrom ran towards the horse-creature, and galloped away.
The plane dropped something, called a Nuke.
I only realised how much in danger we were when it hit the floor.
Grunt, Slug, M&R hopped into our mech.
I got a glimpse of Travis's mech running away after Syrom.
Travis was alive!
I turned around, to see the Nuclear bomb hitting us.
We went flying back, and then darkness.

[odd chick]

That was a good chapter-it reminded me of something that would be seen in a war game/movie. And it was so gory and quite disturbing at times! I like it that way!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

Syrom and his companions sat around the conference.
"He's went to far now." Flamed Syrom. "First all my Sumo's, then my brother, then he squashed a friend of the family?! What the hell are we going to do about it?!"
Tyronus stood up.
"What now you mutated mud?" Syrom screamed.
"What if we ambushed them?" Tyronus suggested.
"Again? We've already tried that! We blew up Splinterz- and yet the're re-building it!" Syrom roared.
"No, no. I mean we pretend a slig is in danger, and they come to rescue him! WHAMO! We knock'em down with rocks and bombs from the cliffs!" Tyronus said.
"Only one thing."
"What?"
"How are you going to find a slig?" Syrom asked.
Travis, the slig walked into the hut.
Tyronus turned to Travis.
"That's why this little slig come in handy." Tyronus Smiled.
Syrom swirled around to his desk.
He picked up a phone.
"Do your buisness, kid." Syrom said.
Travis ran towards the phone, and dialled the number.
"Help! HELP! Syrom's torturing me! He's already killed 50 sligs, and he's got another 50 to go! HELP! PLEASE! AGHHHHHH!" Travis slammed the phone down.
Tyronus and Syrom smiled.
"I think we've just made a new member for my gang." Syrom smiled.

[odd chick]

Great chapter as usual, BBS. It feels like it's been so long since I've read a chapter of this story! You use a lot of dialogue, which is really cool because for some reason, I think it's a neat style. Anyway, keep it going!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

The sligs marched into the Monosaic lines.
"Were are they?" A slig whispered.
Syrom, Travis and General Tyronus walked up to the cliff's edge.
"Sligs, Slogs and deformed Slegs." Syrom said.
All the sligs turned towards him.
"I would like to introduce you to the masters of my plan- Travis, and General Tyronus."
Travis...where have I seen him before? I said to myself.
Something clicked in my head which told me who he was.
"TRAVIS!" I yelled.
He glared at me.
I spoke. "I am sorry for ignoring you, but-"
"It's to late for that now, Tiny," Travis barked. "It's to late for anything."
He glared at the rocks.
Tyronus stepped forwards.
"You are about to be crushed brutally by a hailfire of boulders." Tyronus laughed.
I ran towards the wall.
I flicked a bomb out of my bag.
I stuck it in the muddy wall.
Syrom stared at the rocks.
The rocks rolled down.
I flicked the button.
The whole ledge crumbled away and Syrom, Travis and Tyronus flew towards the floor.
The stones hammered the floor.
Tyronus limped up, and walked towards me.
Suddenly, a huge boulder went right towards him.
It hit him, making a huge cracking sound.
I saw no blood, due to the boulder being so big covering his whole body.
I couldn't stare at the rock for ages- I had to save myself from ending up like Tyronus!
A huge boulder came crashing onto another, shattering the boulder, and sending stones everywhere.
One hit me on the head, and I went out.

Wonder why he called him Tiny? Go to http://s3.invisionfree.com/Ratchetan...?showtopic=116

[odd chick]

Interesting! So Tiny is his real name! Great!! The gigantic boulder smashing Tyronus was somewhat gross (with the discription and everything), but still cool, nonetheless. Keep your story going!

[Biggy Bro Slig]

I woke up, with a pile of sligs on me.
I shifted them off, and looked around.
The 4th Monosaic war had started again.
Chunky walked past me, and stabbed a slig.
Chunky walked towards me.
"Are you wondering why I switched sides?" Chunky growled.
"No. I'm wondering why you have skin." I said.
It's true- he did have skin. Fur everywhere.
"Syrom changed me back into my normal species." Chunky growled again.
I thought for a second.
"Where's Grunt?" I asked.
"Tyronus did it." Chunky said, looking at the wall.
There, hanging there, was a skeleton.
I yelped, and realised something.
"Tyronus is alive?" I asked, tears in my eyes.
"Yeah, but barely." Chunky growled in his big hairy body.
I looked around.
There were less sligs then Mudokons, and I spotted Richy and Monty running around on Fire with Syrom chasing them.
I got up, and ran for them.
Chunky grabbed me, and squeased me.
I felt something rip, and crack, and my arm went numb.
I looked towards my arm.
A bone stook out, with flesh hanging from it.
I screamed, and grabbed a little bomb.
I shuved it down Chunky's Mouth.
He screamed, and he bit me.
I pulled my arm out of his mouth- well, what was left of it.
Chunky had bitten the whole of my arm of, and eaten it.
I scrambled away, towards what looked like Slug and a small camp.
Chunky suddenly exploded, sending little peices of tin and mush into the air.
I a little medic slig called Mazura fetched a little robotic arm.
He placed it on my arm.
I now had a chrome hand just like the guru's.
"How did you get this?" I asked Mazura.
"I found it lying in the temple." He answered.
My god, I thought. I have the guru's hand!
I walked towards Slug.
I thought about Grunt.
Everytime I thought about him, the more I wanted to Kill Syrom and his Gang.
"What are you doing?" I asked Slug.
"We're digging an escape route. The mudokons are killing our reinforcements, so we're going to run for it." Slug said.
I didn't like the idea of making the enemy think we were weak, but to save myself from ending up like Ziggy, Grunt, and Chunky- yes, I would run.