The slizzle factor (Or something like that.)

Abe16 · #1 04-16-2005, 02:13 PM

Here's another story by me.
Chapter 1:Experimenting too far
From the diary of Hudson Gore.

Dear diary,
We have been working on experiment X577HFN9 for quite a long time now. We have planned to morph a buff bigbro slig and a fuzzle to make a slizzle, but.. I don't think that name is satisfying. We have kept it in a cage for sometime now. It is a ferice and untamed beast. it could break out any minute now. It reacts to paramite meat. So it eats paramite meat, raw paramite meat. It is only a matter of time before...

"Run!" Yelled eddie. Eddie and his two friends Jacob and Jeremiah were despretly running for their lives from the beast. "Quick! Duck in here!" Jeremiah said. they hid under a desk. "that was close." Jacob said. "Who do you think let it out?" Eddie asked. "I don't know, but we have to stop it before it eats the other guys!" Jeremiah said. "So, that monster is one tough thing I've heard." A slig said. "No way, I can beat him!" A big bro said. "Bah, you cna't even maneuver the copter in the right direction!" The slig yelled. "Shhh! Duck down again!" Jacob whisperd. "Anyway, I'm off to my shift. See ya." the slig said followed by a blood curdling scream! "Ahhhhh!!!" The slig had gotten killed. "What the hell just happend!? What! AHHHHHHH!!!!" the big bro had died also! "RuN!!" Eddie screamed.

There is my first chapter. Tell me if you like it.

Fuzzleman54321 · #2 04-16-2005, 02:37 PM

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOvE IT!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!

Abe16 · #3 04-16-2005, 03:11 PM

Thanks!
Chapter2:Floodnation
CRASH!!! The beast had crashed into the indoor water tower which is holding millions of gallons of water, causing the factory to flood soon. "uhoh, that can't be good!" Jacob said. "We have to make it to higher ground!" Jeremiah said. "AHHHGGG!" a slig yelled scraeming. "RUN AWAY!!!!" the slig screamed. The beast had been chasing 20 sligs down the narrow corridor that Jeremiah andjacob and eddie were in.' "ACk!" Jacob said running away. They both ran for their lives!. "Guys, the water's getting higher!" Jeremiah said.

they all climbed a desk and threw stuff at the monster. Unfortunatly for them,the monster has a short temper, and when it gets angry, it tends to through a tantrum! "RRRRRROOOOOOOOAAARRR!!!!!" The monster yelled. "What the..., Uhoh, code black, code black!!! A mutant monster has been located at sector 6-8, i repeat,Amonster has been located at sector 6-8!" A glukkon manager said. When the sligs opened the doors to sector 6-8, they were drowned in water! "aHH! HELP!" A slig yelled. "Oh crud, Send out flying sligs!"the glukkon screamed into his micro phone. "okay, calm down. Everythings gonna be fine. OH crud! Water's leaking in!" the glukkon said again.
there is chapter 2.
Tell if ya like it!

Fuzzleman54321 · #4 04-16-2005, 03:20 PM

It is cool! Please continue!

Abe16 · #5 04-16-2005, 06:22 PM

okay!
Here's chapter 3!
Chapter3:Risking a life

The glukkon,(named Arnold,) jumped on his desk trying to stay above the water. "The water's getting closer! AHH!" jeremiah accedently slipped and fell in the water! Eddie jumped in the water and threw Jeremiah back to the surface! But Eddie remained in the water yelling for help, "ROAR!!!" the monster roared. "Ack! get me....out of here!!...." eddie sreamed trying to stay afloat. Meanwhile, Arnold is yelling for help from his microphone, but All the sligs have drowned!! "Ohno, this not good," Arnold yelled. Arnold notices A desk that is wide enough and tall enough for him to stand on. "Uhh, i have no choice, Ahhh!" Arnold landed on the desk.

jeremiah and Jacob climbed to a platform near a window. "Quick, climb out!" Jacob told Jeremiah. It was pouring rain outside. Half the ground was filled with water! they despretly made to Alf's Rehab and tea. "Phew! that was close." Jacob. Alf wasn't there, he had a card on the table saying he was vacationing. "where is Alf? Asked Jacob. "Look, this card says he's on vacation." Said Jeremiah.

Abe16 · #6 04-17-2005, 01:43 PM

Okay, i'll be waiting for replys.
Chapter 4: Big trouble

Suddenly, the door flew and tons of water flew in! "Ahh!" jeremiah yelled. Jacob turned the T.V. on, "AND IF YOU'LL OVER HERE, YOU'LL SEE THAT A TORNADO IS COMING DOWN TOWARD THE NEWS STATION!Uhoh, AHHHH!SHHHH" the T.V. went. "A tornado!?" Jeremiah screamed. the roof suddenly flew off! "You are dead meat slaves!" Arnold yelled out from his blimp! "i may have lost my factory, but I can always build A new one! I'm, rich!" Arnold yelled again.

jeremiah and jacob ran to the storage room in Alf's building. Luckily they found an emergancy boat. "Quick! paddle faster!!!" Jeremiah told Jacob."Okay boys! leta rip!" Arnold told his sligs. BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! The sligs were shooting bombs! "ROAR!!!!!!!" The monster was back! Back with a vengance! "Ahh!! the monster!" Jacob screamed. "Uhoh! Shoot the freak!" Arnold yelled. "No! If you keep shooting you'll get even madder!" Jeremiah said. The sligs shot him with a sleep bullet. The monster fell down and was fast asleep. The sligs shopt one bomb at jeremiah's and Jacob's boat, then everything went dark for them.

"Uhhhhh, where are we?" jacob asked weakly. They were in Arnold's prison cell. They were one cell away from the monsters cell. Suddenly, their doors flew open!
there is chapter 4!

Abe16 · #7 04-17-2005, 04:28 PM

......Still waiting for replys.

chapter 5:Payback

"Com'on Jeremiah!" jacob said. "Look at him, we need to free him." Jeremiah said. "What!? We can't free that, that canibal!" Jacob yelled. So after awhile of arguements the monster was free. "Com'on, it's payback time!" jeremiah said. "Ahhh, finally,*Yawns* time to relax." Arnold said to himself. "Ahhh!" Arnold heard a far away scream. "What the, *Gasp!* Attention all personel! Destroy that ugly lookin thing!" Arnold yelled. Bam bam bam bam bam bam bam! Sligs where shooting the beast! "ROAR!!!!!" "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!" 20 sligs were smashed under it's big fury bottom! "That ain't righAHHHH!" SQUISH!

"Take this!" A big bro slig yelled. He bumped right into the self destruct sequence. "Who in the right mind! Would put a self destruct sequence!?" jeremiah yelled out. ERRRR,ERRRR,ERRR! "Warning, self-destruct sequence, activated." the factory said. "RUN!!!" A slig screamed. "Wait, self destruct? that's a 10 minute warning...HELP!" Arnold yelled. Suddenly, Arnold's trusty side-kick Edgar the virus hunter popped up! "Yes sir! what the matter?" asked edgar. "Can you stop a self-destruct sequence?" Arnold asked. 'Well, no sir. it is technologecly impossible!" edgar replied.

Wham! wham! The slizzle tried to make a hole, but it was no use!

NOW! REPLY!!!

sligger · #8 04-29-2005, 07:43 AM

i like it. it is really cool you got a great imagination.

Abe16 · #9 04-29-2005, 08:18 AM

Thanks, I'll have a new chapter later.

Abe16 · #10 04-29-2005, 10:49 PM

Okay,*blows dust off keyboard* here we go!
Chapter 6:Lock down

CRASH!BANG!BOOM! Sligs were running, slogs were whimpering, the most toughest bigbros were crying! It was all over for them. The crashing avalanches were hazerdous to the factory's gigantic boiler, unfortunatly for them, it was going top set off a humaungous fire, bigger than any other combined, enough to wipe out that entire state, and they were the going to be the victoms. One of the big structures was about to fall on the boiler, The slizzle had to stop it from crashing into it. "Quick over there!" jeremiah exclaimed. "Grrr, errrr" The slizzle groaned as he tried to stop it.

"But isn't there anyway to over ride it!?" Asked Arnold. "well, I could always use the super emergancy by-pass code, but it's against the rules! It also causes a sudden lock-down in the factory." Edgar explained. "Just do it!" Arnold said. "Alright alright! Uhhh, if the General knew about this, I'd be kicked out of here in no time. Edagar said to himself. "Super Emergancy By-pass code, activated." The factory's main computer said. WHOOSH! WHOOSH WHOOSH! All windows and doors were now perfectly sealed. "Looks like there's now way out now," Jacob said worringly.
There.

sligco · #11 04-30-2005, 07:21 AM

awsum cant wait till next chapter

Abe16 · #12 04-30-2005, 09:50 AM

Chapter 7: The guardian

Suddenly, a bright light had appered at the ceiling. "It can't be!" Jeremiah said. 'But it is!" Jacob told him. "It's, it's, Eddie? What are you doing here?" Asked Jacob. "I'm here to save you, you moron." Eddie said now an angel. Eddie raised both of his hands, killing every slig, even Edgar and the Flying sligs and big bros. He put his hands left, killing every vykker, and put his hands to the right, to kill all slogs. "My beautiful factory, why god why." arnold cried. Eddie raised his right hand over Arnold head and....ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!"EEEEERRRRR!" Whoosh! Everything turned white.

Before Jeremiah and Jacob knew it, they were on a peaceful field with other mudokons. Arnold had been killed and eddie looks down on his friends on Mudos every...single...day, and for the Slizzle, it know has it's own field with other mutated creatures, you might even think I'll say, The End in a diiferent launguages, and that's exactly what I'm going to do.
EL FIN.