Thanks for the comments, I'll be posting another thing shortly... it's going to be an industrial thing, but I'm not going to tell you until you see it!
By the way, has anyone seen the fan fiction I posted here yesterday? It's got hardly any views and I'm wanting to receive comments on it as it's only my first one.
EDIT: Okay, here's the next (not very good) one:
I think I need to practice a bit more...