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I think it's odd that everyone jumped on the shading here, because the perspective is the first thing that struck me as bad. I can't put my finger on what it is exactly.
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Well the face is at a 1/3 angle, but the rest of the head seems to be in profile. Also, that thing needs some feathers.
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You really need to work on your fundamentals, which is something I see a lot with people who do a lot of the anime stuff.
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This is one of the reasons I don't like most manga. I get the feeling that there are really talented artists who would have developed their own fantastic styles had they not been coerced into drawing manga instead. Let's face it, despite minor variations and occasional exceptions, it does all look pretty much the same.