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01-18-2006, 11:48 PM
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Ten page report and you lost it? Awww man that sucks... I remember once when I was going to do an essay on five pages in swedish and when I almost was done with it, something happend to computer, I don't know what is was but I had still had to write it all over again *sigh*...

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01-19-2006, 02:17 AM
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Eh...things happened to me as well.
I was workin' on word on my story waaaaaay back when Packrat was on, and I think I cutted the entire chapter, and had to restart all-ll-ll-ll over again.
I was hittin' my head on the desk, sayin'g "WHY DID YA DO THAT!? WHY WHY WHY!? You stupid pecker head..."
I still have the scar fer it, too.
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01-19-2006, 05:26 AM
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Yeh, I remember yer tellin' me that.

And, and just so you know why I ain't updated in so long...you is lookin' at the proud owner of an X-Box and Stranger's Wrath! *does happy dance* YAY! So, I'll be playin' that fer a while... Go Stranger! YeeeeeeHAR!
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01-19-2006, 10:50 AM
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OMG!
YER ON!
HOLY CRAP!
Is it my birthday 'r somethin'? 'Cause...yer finally on! ^.^
SWEET! You's got's Stranger's Wrath! HUZZAH TO THE PLAYERS THAT HAVE STRANGER'S WRATH!
I still play it today, even though I've beaten it. I just can't help it. Stranger's sooo cool, and...that's why. He's so damn cool.
But yay, Lobo's on! And have fun on the game...(Hope you realize, my entire story's a spoiler)
In fact, I'm-a finish up my update, and go play it s'more!
It'd be cool if we could meet up in the game...that'd be sweet...ah well!
And you better update soon, Lobo. Or no more spoiler bits fer you! Not even the next story! That's yer punishment. (Joking. I'm-a lil' hyper today. And I'm so damn glad ter see you on)
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GREAT Lobo! I've also finished the game a lots of times I guess 'bout 8 or 9 times by now (yeah, I know I'm part of a "Gamefreak") but who cares

anyway glad to see ya Lobo enjoying the game Good Luck

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01-19-2006, 12:00 PM
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GAH! NOOOO!!!
All my work...DELETED BY THE DUMB INTERNET! GRRRRRR.....
Somebody help me with this!
HERE WE GO AGAIN!
I'm pissed off to tears now...that wasn't cool how this damn laptop went back to the page I was recently on, and deleted my bit that I was almost done with...God, I'm so pissed...
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01-19-2006, 01:08 PM
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Here we go...AGAIN, with trying to post up the update...god, I'm-a beg my parents fer a new hard drive if it happens again...

FIENDS, BEASTS, AND MORTAR--The siege of Sekto's lair (cont.)



Umi jumped from behind Stranger, randomly firing bullets from the rifle's barrel to the floor, to startle the unnerved Wolvarks.
The bullets pelted the ensnared Wolvarks through the sticky white web. The pure white material suddenly was soaked in a dark red, where the bullets struck.
The wrapped Wolvaraks howled out terrifyed cries.
Scarlet whisps shot through the spotted uniforms of the Wolvarks. They cringed with every shot taken through their rough skin.
The trapped Wolvarks, however, didn't bother to wrangle out of their traps. They knew it was futile, as each Wolvark security guard fell by their feet, one by one. It was happening so fast, they didn't realize that the Steef was fixed upon them now.
As the Steef approached, their eyes were locked on the ominous green jeweled eyes of it. Their extremeties fell limp from their endless struggle to escape their fate. Its bow opened up to a circular portal, sucking in their tattered bodies.
The webbing eroded from their limbs, as the suction grew stronger and stronger. Their legs fluttered near the green ominous eye of the portal in to its bow. Even clawing at the ground wouldn't stop nor change the Steef's decision of how they were going to end up.
The vacuum popped, as one entered the breeding sack of his bow. The other two continued to fight to be free from their misleading fate. But even thinking of escaping was hopeless for the poor creatures.
The last two popped in to the bow, and the vacuum closed up. He folded his bow back on his large forearm, then got back to his one and only mission he planned to finish.
Stranger and Umi ran up the series of scafolds, until a glass door embraced their path to the entry way of the top of the building.
A stacked barrier of metal boxes also blocked their way. But it was a damn good thing, too.
A heinous, ear-piercing cowl screech pinched fear to Stranger. He grunted at the newfound sound, knowing immediately what it was. He hated the creature ever since he encountered it. The cursed battle cry of it shattered his concentration. He was furious about it, too. Sekto had released another of its damned pets to eliminate the game. Another Gloktigi.
Stranger pushed down Umi behind the crates again, quickly glancing at the Gloktigi that had spun around its pores, and spewing out its green glob of ensnare. The glop pinged off the rusted metal as if they were speeding bullets. The Gloktigi squawked an annoyed tone, ratting its shoed claws on the smooth cement closer to the barricade.
Umi looked despirately to Stranger when she heard another screech from the Gloktigi.
"Not another one!" she whispered.
Stranger popped his eyes over the crates, watching as the creature slowly got closer. He looked down to Umi with seldom eyes.
"I want yer to stay down here, and don't move," he told authoratively.
Umi blinked at him.
"Yer not gonna go at it all alone! It'll mutalate you!" Umi protested.
"And so it to you, if you go with me,"
As he was about to go over the crates, Umi jerked back his arm stiffly. She looked deeply in to Stranger's eyes with solemn melancholny.
Stranger saw the shalowness of his command sparkle in Umi's deep blue eyes. He could tell she really wanted him to take another thought of his decision.
He let out a rash sigh, then smoothed her hair upon her scalp.
"You worry too much about me, Umi," he spoke gently.
"Aren't I not supposed to?"
Stranger quickly let out a quiet chuckle.
"I already told yer," he grinned. "I'm supposed ter worry 'bout you,"
The Gloktigi's cowls were close enough to rattle Stranger and Umi's attention. His bow quickly unlocked, and Umi held her rifle in her hands.
"I'll go first. Wait 'til I say to come out," Stranger nodded.
He jumped over the crates, two rounds of Boom-bat Seekers imploding on the Gloktigi's protective skin. Only a burn mark was seered on its ghostly purple scales.
Umi felt the rifle's weight, it being a little lighter than usual, which meant it needed to be reloaded.
She reached behind her back on her belt, patting only the soft material of her red shirt. She gave a relaxed huff, sliding her hand over her belt all the way. But only the slickness of her rough belt was felt.
"Uh oh..."
Stranger pressed his weight on the back of the crates, the Gloktigi squawking as it ratted closer.
"Stranger!" Umi cried over the boxes.
He grunted concernly, and leaped behind the crates to Umi's eyes.
"What is it? What's wrong?" he asked quickly.
Umi whipped out her belt, her empty Needler and dead Plasma Rifle still straddled on.
"I have no ammo,"
Stranger growled irritatingly.
"Yer call me just ter tell me you have no ammo?" Stranger blinked to her.
Umi looked down with shame. She knew she had done something wrong for a matter of change.
Stranger smoothed the back of his head, looking over the crates.
The Gloktigi still came closer with its claws tapping on the smooth ground.
He looked back to Umi with a skeptical frown. His eyes softened, as he opened his mouth to speak.
"Ok. Just, stay 'ere. Wait 'til it's safe ter come out," he said, then pointed a finger.
"No exceptions,"
Umi nodded understanding.
Stranger also nodded, then leaped over the crate.
His heart almost stopped when he landed.
The Gloktigi was right at his doorstep. It stared deeply in to Stranger's pools of bright lumious eyes, almost piercing his mind with fear.
The Gloktigi seemed to grin with its tentacles dangling loosely over its invisible mouth, as its quick reflexes brought up its large slender arm, and brought it down over Stranger.
It caged him in with its three large claws, as it attacked harder with its second arm over his head.
Stranger stopped the two talons hovering over his head, and almost brought down on his skinned nose.
Umi heard the struggle and tension in Stranger's voice. It almost made her jump over.
Then the cowl of the Gloktigi came just behind her.
Umi jumped up, and climbed over the crates.
The squid-like head of the Gloktigi peered to her face, and its eyes were only at the rebelling Stranger underneath.
"Stranger!" Umi cried.
She looked at the Gloktigi, her eyes frowning down death-defyingly.
Stranger wrangled to look up to Umi. He could see was she was planning by the motions she made.
"Umi..." he grunted.
"Don't do it..."
Umi didn't listen. She crouched down, her muscles in her legs flexed out to her maximum.
She scowled fiercely at the Gloktigi.
Stranger's eyes grew brighter.
"NO!"
Umi leaped off to the Gloktigi's forehead, and wrapped her arms around its smooth head.
The Gloktigi shrieked loudly, stumbling off of Stranger.
Stranger regained his balance. He spun to the Gloktigi that was scrambling everywhere, bumping itself in to every object it could to lose the human off its forehead.
"Jist hold on, Umi!" Stranger shouted.
'Why did yer do it, kid?'
The Gloktigi stopped in its tracks. Its left foot was right by a glass door on the other end near a stacking cart.
Its eye glowed to Stranger, its machinations beginning.
It howled a signal cry, side-stepping from the glass door.
Umi kept wrapped around the Gloktigi, while listening closely near the exit of the inside building.
Thundering footsteps clopped in perfect unison, almost in a straight line as an earthquake.
The glass doors exploded open, and two staight long lines of Wolvark security guards came marching out, with their guns glued in their hands.
Their eyes scowled to the Steef, nodding in appreciation to the Gloktigi and its plan.
Stranger's head shook skeptically again.
"No way..." he growled.
The Gloktigi made a throaty chuckle to Stranger, as the rows of Wolvarks stopped ahead of it.
Umi nearly leaped off the Gloktigi.
The green ensnare seeped out of its pores, coating around Umi's skin.
She was attached to the Gloktigi. Umi growled angrily.
"You filthy bastards," she sneered.
The Wolvarks cackled in her demise.
"Git on goin' ter boss thar," a Grunt nodded.
The Gloktigi didn't take any hesitation, as it passed by the Wolvarks swiftly, and crashing through the windows in to the building.
Stranger snorted furiously, but stood apathetically.
The Wolvarks watched carefully, not noticing that the Steef's rage was building again.
Stranger kept his eyes straight forwards where the Gloktigi escaped with Umi. His lip twitched uncontrollably, showing his stained sharp teeth.
The Wolvarks scratched their bald heads confusidely. Some just looked amusedly at the Steef.
"Aww...did the wittle Steef lose 'is baby?"
Some taunted.
That only made him more aggitated.
"'ey look. Steef's pissed," they cackled.
Stranger breathed heavily, growling noises coming from his throat when he exhaled.
Finally, his anger exploded.
An explosive bellowing roar quaked the officer's insides to a liquified guilt.
The Wolvarks cowered back from the Steef, holding their weapons up to their faces as a defense.
Stranger raised his fists, his head cringing down.
"Sekto you skanky lil'...(censored). I'm-a murder you! YOU HEAR ME!?" Stranger bellowed up in the air.
"I'M-A KILL YOU!"
The Wolvarks gathered their courage, every strand of what was left of it. They slapped down their helmets, and collected their weapons in to their hands again.
"You know boss's orders after the human's caught! Git that Steef!"
Stranger's head smoothly came back down with eyes closed.
He listened to the Wolvark's rhythmitic footsteps.
His eyes snapped open, a bright green with red bloodshot eyes.
The Wolvarks skidded to a stop. They squawked of fear, dropping their weapons again.
Stranger wasn't interested in the cowering Wolvarks.
He wanted that Gloktigi.
And to murder Sekto, with every strand of his strength that wanted to rip him limb from limb.
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01-19-2006, 01:55 PM
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Eek... RUN FER YA LIVES!

PS. Jist saw the de-pantsin' scene...man did I feel sorry fer Stranger or what...poor fuzzface...
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01-20-2006, 02:28 AM
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Wow. I was gonna ask how far yer were, but I guess i jist figured it out.
MAN! Sometimes, I wish I could lose my memory of the entire gameplay of OSW, and play from a fresh start. The first time I played, I was all excited and giddy. Now it jist plain sucks that I know everything of the game.
Eh...well...seems every time I go after Boilz Booty, Meagley McGraw, and Packrat Palooka, hell! Sometimes Fatty! I die...maybe 2 'r 3 times. I guess I've played so much, maybe the levels of some Outlaws increased. 'R it may be my imagination...Ah well! Have fun fer the rest of the game, Lobo! It'll be a hoot!
(I STILL hope you realize...my entire story is a spoiler, kid...) Reply through hotmail, 'k Lobo?
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01-21-2006, 04:05 PM
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Ok, Dancin'. Lemme show yer how bad I draw compared to yers.


An ugly Intern


A messed-up Steef


Ugly Slig...


This is a spoiler to the next, so I won't tell you what it is. Although, Lobo should be familiar to what it is. 'Member through the PM's?


Another Spoily...


Paramite...


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01-21-2006, 05:19 PM
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Whoa, good pics! Much better than my own. Mine look like I tried to draw a monkey using MS Paint with my feet!

p.s. It's not that late for me. I live in the US. Florida to be exact.
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01-21-2006, 06:37 PM
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Oh. Here's one last one I'm still finishing. I can't seem to get the feet and hand right though...

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01-22-2006, 06:36 AM
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WHADDA YA TALKIN' ABOUT!? Those are freakin' fantastic! Love the Shredder and the Steef...man, now I'm jealous... An' you were sayin' you can't draw!? You liar! () You so can!

Now see, when I say I can't draw, I can't draw point blank, no um'mings or ar'rings about it...
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01-22-2006, 06:44 AM
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I can't draw Steef fer nothin'! Maybe Stranger, but not an actual Steef, or how Dancing can do them...
And I didn't mean the style of dancing's. I meant...like...this is hard ter explain...um...gah...I just don't mean the style of DS.
I just can't do Steef fer squat. Period.
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Ok, Dancin'. Lemme show yer how bad I draw compared to yers.


A messed-up Steef

Hrrm... not bad, not bad at all I like it and besides everyone has their own drawing n' writing style, and this pic and the others as well (especially the pic with Stranger) are great

I've drawn the Steefs for a while now (I guess 7 months, yeah I'm extreme) and that's one of the reasons why you think I'm a good artist- you're a beginer and a beginer aren't that skilled if ya know what I mean, no offence... I couldn't draw Steefs that good either, but now I'm almost a proffesional

But as I said before, you're jus a beginer but a GREAT beginer I like the story and the pics


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01-24-2006, 05:27 AM
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Dude I'm waiting for an update here, hey I gave you three chapters! C'mon and write somat!!!

Can we say 'hooked on story'?
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I know you are! I'm workin' on it!
Patients, young lady! Patients!
Yer gettin' a double feature this time!
A spoiler, and an update!
Be happy! Smile!
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I'm smilin', I'm smilin'...course my cheeks hurt now but ah, what the heck...

PS. And it appears that Stranger has infact lost his baby...bet he'll get 'er back though...and extract revenge in the most painful way possible...

Sekto. Run. Now.
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Sekto. Run. Now.

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FIENDS, BEASTS, AND MORTAR--The siege of Sekto's lair (cont.)



Umi, struggling with all her efforts and strength, tried to break free from the Gloktigi's schemy plan.
'Sekto's all behind 'dis,' Umi thought.
The Gloktigi made a ghostly chuckle to Umi.
She only sneered hatefully at it.
"And yer goin' down with 'im, squid-head," Umi spat.
The Gloktigi snorted a negative. It spun back around, passing between the line of ventalation fans.
Until a furious roar shot behind the Gloktigi's large egg-shaped head.
The Gloktigi's eyes lowered to a callous squint ahead. It turned around to the Steef, its bow unlocked and pointed to it.
The Gloktigi squawked challengingly.
Stranger flared his nostrils, exhausting a slow growl.
"Leg'go the human," he ominously said.
The Gloktigi snorted as well, clapping a claw forward.
"I said LEG'GO!"
The Gloktigi noticed the Steef's challenge to it. Remembering what its master said to it, to have the human alive to him, and the Steef dead.
Getting the Steef dead would leave the human defenseless to it.
The Gloktigi accepted the Steef's request.
The ensnare was absorbed back in to its smooth flesh.
Umi dropped to the ground, close to a ventalation fan. She scrambled up and away from the Gloktigi, beside Stranger.
Stranger checked Umi by a glance, then darted straight back to the Gloktigi.
"So, you want Umi?" he said to it.
The Gloktigi cowled in agreement.
"Then you's got's ter go through me first," he frowned defensively.
"and I ain't no cookie,"
The Gloktigi laughed again, then kicked in its reflexes before the Steef could say any more.
Its ensnare popped out of its pores again whilst it spun. Clusters of the glop sped to Stranger's bow.
He only lowered his arm to his side loosely, standing still and staring at the ensnare.
The glob passed by his furry jaw, just touching the bristle that stood up near his neck.
Stranger grinned as if it were a joke.
"You done?"
The Gloktigi squawked confusidely.
Stranger snapped his arm up again, and before it could blink, two Boom-bat Seekers fluttered passed below the fans, and smacked upon its ghostly-purple flesh. The Seeker's clusters exploded on impact, leaving a large bloody hole on the side of its face, below its left eye.
The Gloktigi stumbled from the excruciating pain thumping below its eye. Its arm extended over the swirling fans shredding below its head.
Stranger watched it catch itself falling near the fan. It wasn't going down yet.
He placed a hand to Umi behind him, trotting up by the Gloktigi's arm that grappled over a weak fence around the fan.
It roared defensively to Stranger, snapping its talons at his feet.
Stranger stepped back, watching the Gloktig as it helplessly hovered over the fan.
Stranger shook his head.
"Oh no you ain't," he grabbed the Gloktigi's wrapped arm.
The Gloktigi's other arm slipped down to the fan. Its fingers were amputated down to nothing but three stubs of bone and blood.
It cried in pain, as Stranger lowered it deeper near the fan.Its arm was becoming gratted as it was slung lower.
The Gloktigi pleaded incoherantly, but Stranger wouldn't show no mercy.
Stranger's lips curled to a cruel smile.
"You wanted to hurt my kid, now did yeh?" Stranger said to its face.
"Well, I'm-a gonna hurt you,"
He shoved the rest of the Gloktigi down to the fan. He backed away from the explosion of flesh and fragment of bone that spurted in the air. Blood spattered in droplettes near his cleaved hoofs. A ghostly scream was all that lingered from the Gloktigi.
Below would be a present for the Wolvarks that still cowered from the Steef, and a message that Stranger would be coming for him faster than before.
Stranger turned back to Umi, she staying hunched on her knees, and staring at the gruesome sight of what Stranger did to the poor creature.
Her eyes shook in wonder. It brought back the horrible memory of the Covenant. It might've not related to the fact that the Gloktigi was shredded to tiny bits, but it was the cruelty, the sheer horror of how it was done.
The Covenant were about as brutal to the humans than the Flood. Especially when she was captured and stripped down of her clothes, and thrown in to a cell with only her bra and pants on, humiliating herself in front of all the young men held prisoner as well.
The Covenant sometimes took some of the marines, and torchered them until they spoke of what they wanted to hear. Then, they'd be put to death, or tortured them until they couldn't breathe no more. And they did it, right in their faces, just for kicks.
But even they did treacherous things to the human race, Umi couldn't resign the fact that the Covenant race didn't understand what the hell they were doing to themselves. Mercy was pulled upon the selected few that decided to stop their Prophets, their holy icons, from doing the most extreme thing that they would resent, to the entire universe.
But their cruelty lived on in Umi's memory, never to be erased from her mankind.
Stranger knelt down to Umi, blinking concernly to her.
"What's wrong?"
Umi gasped loudly, returning to normal conscious. She began to shake her head.
"N-nothing. I'm fine..." she lied.
Stranger grinned skeptically, but stood Umi up on her feet. He wiped off the glop that was stuck on her shoulder, holding down his hands on her shoulders.
"You sure?" he asked more curiously.
Umi kept quiet. Only her eyes looked to him.
She looked back down.
"Yes," she mumbled.
Stranger stared down the path through the rows of ventalation fans. The air began to smell of burned flesh rotting. He wiped his eyes. He never smelled such a disgusting scent, other than a Stunk's cloud of noxious gas.
Stranger galloped out up on the third and last level.
Computer boxes hummed mechanically through its gills. Flashing lights communicated with one another. Static even charged through Stranger's fur.
He passed by the computers, caefully passing through a glass door.
Umi jumped off his back, staring at the other side of the dam.
Stranger gazed down below the building's balcony. A blue foggy mist shrouded twisting clanging pipes. It was one helluva drop if a slip happened to occur.
The only way across was a moderately thin plank, dripping of water from the mist high above the dam.
Stranger gave a growl, frowning that he and his four legs would have to cross the plank without trouble.
"I'll go first," Umi suggested, stopping at the head of the plank.
His lip went askew, as Umi stepped on the plank, balancing herself with her two arms.
She placed foot in front of foot slowly as could be. She wobbled as each step was carefully placed in.
Stranger's mind stressed with the thought of Umi falling, and him not there to catch her. He pressed a palm to his face, wiping the concerned sweat down from his smooth nose. He moved himself sideways to the plank, placing one hoof gently on the plank, then one hind leg, skirting along with his second front leg, and dragging along his last hind. His legs scooted along vertically along the small walkway, holding out his arms to maintain his balance.
Umi was halfway there, when she slowly turned her head to Stranger following sluggishly behind. She blinked back forward, feeling a gut feeling that if she didn't pay attention to her balance, she'd fall to her death.
She skirted more fast-paced, knowing that she was almost at the end. She jumped off the plank, turning back to Stranger, who had just hit the halfway point.
Stranger's mind was completely locked on his balance. He didn't even think about Umi being on the other side. He stared only at the walkway under his feet, trying not to look down at the vast drop that could've been him going down if he didn't pay attention to his steps.
The water dripped vertically in turns. The plank was slick, which was just as bad for Stranger's cleaved hoofs.
The constant buzzing that lofted up from the pipes nearly destroyed his trane of thought, almost making him lose his balance.
He flapped his arms, evening out his weight on each side, and moving quicker to the end.
Umi watched him with suspence. She knew he would need help over, since he was thicker than the plank. She kept a sturdy arm out in front of her, as Stranger inched closer to the end.
"I'll hold out my hand if you need it," Umi said, extending her arm out to him.
Stranger stared at the end of the plank, scootching his front and hind leg lastly. He felt his balance lose again, and snatched up Umi's arm.
She reacted quickly, pulling Stranger over to her, not to fall over and take her with him.
Stranger jumped off the planks finally, holding an open hand to his chest, breathing deeply out of his fear.
"Odd-damn...How do these...these 'varks make it over 'ere without fallin'?" Stranger heaved a sigh.
Umi shrugged.
"Prolly lot's o' bodies down those pipes 'nyways,"
Stranger let out a weak chuckle, straightening back posture. A louder, more electrical hum floated through the cracks of the entry doors.
A spinning core of purple-white bolts of electricity sounded behind weak, granulated glass barriers.
Stranger's fur prickled on his arms and neck.
He growled in irritation.
"Damn static..." he smoothed his hair on his arms.
"This must be the power core central of the dam," Umi said to herself.
She stepped closer to the glass windows, stopping when she heard the growls and mumbles of familiar voices coming from downstairs.
"'Varks," she turned to Stranger.
"I know," Stranger's bow unlocked with a Spark Stunkz already loaded on.
They slowly moved downstairs, avoiding to make clops of Stranger's hooves noticeable. But the hum was so loud, who wouldn't notice the footsteps.
Stranger counted up the Wolvarks below. Too many to take on in one sitting.
He looked at the power core, then grinned a cruel smile.
The glass shattered a sharp brittle behind the Wolvarks. They jumped in suspense, holding their weapons close to their arms.
Then their whole world began to suck dry towards the power core.
The Wolvarks clawed despirately at the laminated cement, feeling the shock bite their metal-tipped boots. They screamed fearfully, as they felt the shocking pulse explode through their veins. The Wolvarks were pulled down in to the power core by some unknown force. They thudded to the plate bottom of the core, the deadly volts of electricity still coarsing through their bodies, until their hearts stopped them from living.
Stranger ran down the levels of landings, passing the twitching, lifeless, bubbling mouths of the Wolvark's bodies laying eagle-spread on the core's electric base.
The outside was dark of blue foggy mist and a cold draft fell upon the dam's facility. Stranger trotted by a built-in ventalation fan grounded in the cement base, stopping behind a corporation box with the insignia of Sekto's Springs, the shape of a Gloktigi.
Stranger peeked around the box crate, two security guards holding shields and bombs standing in front of an open facility door.
He looked at the fan, but frowned. Using a Stunk would be a waste. They were too far from the fan to shred them up. The only alternative was to get rid of them up close.
And he had to hurry quick. The catapults were already barraging the defense of the dam. Chunks of roofing plummetted far down the open pipes transporting water from the Mongo River. Bubbling metal dripped upon the near-rusted pipes, hissing hotly, and melting in the metal, creating small puncture holes. Water sprayed forcefully through the burned holes.
An explosion of white web showered over the Wolvarks, creating a tough ensnare for the Wolvarks to try and tangle through.
Stranger quickly bountied the Grunts up, before the catapult shots breached further near him and his path to Sekto.
Magma from the pulted rocks splashed in to the ventilation fan, shorting out the wires from the bubbling rock, and killing the power to it.
Stranger cringed at the sparks that popped out between the blades of the fan. He pushed himself and Umi urgently through the open facility doors, then walking normally as they safely approached a breached door scattered with Grubb bodies.
Rebel yells called behind a safe-wired window in the corner wall ahead of them. Three Wolvark guards shot at a pair of lone rebel Grubbs attacking the dungeon doors they guarded behind them. Bullets tore directly through the tender skulls of the Grubbs, sending them back on their behinds.
The Wolvarks laughed cruelly, clapping hands together in the air from their success of ridding the annoyance.
Pitter patter of bare feet tapped on the cement in a large unison. Around the corner came an even larger mass of Grubbs, holding up sticks of hissing explosives.
The Wolvarks frowned, turning to each other.
"Well'p," one said, dropping its rifle before it. "that's too much fer me to take on,"
"Yep," the other followed its partner's action.
The Wolvarks cried away from the suicidal Grubbs, latching their backs to the dungeon door, as their oncoming doom came closer with crafty grins.
An elevator shaft layed open to Stranger and Umi. The doors began to close on them.
Stranger squeezed quickly through the slow-closing doors, and Umi easily slipped behind him.
The elevator platform thumped to a start, the wheels grinding scratchily on the cords.
The loudspeakers inside the facility screeched loud of feedback.
"All security personnel! Fall back to the barges! Repeat: Fall ba-Whoa, ARGH! GAAAAAAAH!!"
The Wolvark screamed loudly.
Grubb yells shouted in the background on the microphone, and gunshots rambled distantly.
The elevator jumped to a stop at the top.
The Wolvark's voice came back quickly.
"Alright! We're back in business!"
Then more Grubb cries roared.
"WHAT THE- WHOA!!!"
The microphone squawked of feedback again.
"Steef dude! We know yo can hear us! Hurry! Get up to Sekto's office! Our catapults are moving in! HURRY! KILL SEKTO DEMON!" a Grubb rebel shouted urgently through the speakers.
Stranger growled. He peered through the wire frame enclosed ramps that led off down through two crumbling facilities, that would lead straight up to Sekto's office.
And how quickly the catapults came in, splashing around on the Wolvarks, and scrambling the inside of the facility in to chaos.
It wouldn't be long until the dam would be overrun by the catapults, almost nearly five minutes, as Stranger calculated.
They needed to move to Sekto, and fast.
"Git on! Now!" Stranger barked.
Umi fastened her legs around Stranger's waist, and holding her arms tightly around his chest.
Stranger trotted up to the head of the ramp. This was it.
This was the Race against Time.
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Wait 'til yer see what'll happen ter Sekto, Lobo....
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Oh, I'm already grinnin' eviliy. Heh heh heh, Sekto, Stranger's comin' for ya, punk.
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GAH!
Lobo, I'm havin' complications.
I'm tryin ter save my drawin's to this comp, but it won't appear in paint.
I want to make Stranger's head in to an avatar.
I saved it to photobucket, but it STILL won't let me save.
What do I do? I'm gettin' rather irritated...
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o.O And you expect me to know??? Although, you could try, re-saving it, but where it asks you to name the file, there's a little menu that decides the file type. Save it as a .JPG or .JPEG ...I think it's that anyway, lemme check...

Yeh, save it as a .JPG or .JPEG , could work...other then that, can't think of anything else...
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Y.A.Y Go Stranger, Go Stranger Goooo! Great Chapter DE, still like the story, we wants more see?


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o.O And you expect me to know???
Wewl...youw the genuis 'wound here....
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Anywho...
Ok, just to add another spammified post to MY thread...hence that no moderators 'r in 'ere...
This idea has been killin' my conscious. And I can't stop thinkin' 'bout it, so let's debate.
Do you think that humans can run like Stranger on four limbs (whilst a bounty hunter...)?
I've had dreams about the damn idea, too! It won't leave me alone!

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actually, a human running on all fours is not anywhere a cool as when stranger does it. watch any little kid pretending to be a dog. they either are on their hands and knees( rug burns and lack of speed) or hands and feet ( in which they move simular to chimps). Either way it is not a good idea... it looks stupid. Too bad we can't run like stranger. that would be a lot cooler.
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actually, a human running on all fours is not anywhere a cool as when stranger does it. watch any little kid pretending to be a dog. they either are on their hands and knees( rug burns and lack of speed) or hands and feet ( in which they move simular to chimps). Either way it is not a good idea... it looks stupid. Too bad we can't run like stranger. that would be a lot cooler.
Ah...may have a point.
But I'm askin' if we CAN run like stranger. Not what we'd look like.
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Doubt it...I mean, he's got a coupla extra legs in them boots o' his...I think a human'd strain somat... >.<

On the chapter thing, oooooo, nasty, like how Umi was kinda, well uneasy 'bout Stranger shovin' the Glok through the fan...personally I thought it was called fer...hated when I had to fight 2 at the same time...eeeee....nightmare...
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