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Alector: I have a critique for you to consider. Hope that's alright. 
It's a small thing, but the ends of the arms shorten up too much just before the hands, and the length around the arm is way too thin. My suggestion is to observe Stranger's arms, that way you can get a good feel on how to make them look up to steef standards.
Good job on the colors, though! |
Hi,
I completely accept your critique. That was a point I didn't notice.
Well, I drew this Steef without having a sample of an original one.
That's probably why I did this terrible mistake.
I've got another excuse: in fact the anatomy of Steefs is given, I think every Steef has it's individual body (remember the diversity of our bodies: small, tall, thin, obese....). So, the one I drew has longer upper arms, sporty forearms, a well built chest and muscular legs
But I've got a little annotation to your last drawing: the breasts of the female Steef are a bit too high for that size and the shape of them doesn't look much natural, though. The female Steef has a quite masculine body, thereby the breasts must be smaller because breasts consist of fat tissue, you know
But I'm still impressed of the detail in your pictures, the way you colour them ( from your other picture topic) and the boldness how you work out some topics
I hope that wasn't a harsh critique. We are waiting for new Steef art.
I'm stitting here at school, working with Photoshop and Macromedia, I'm bored and I would love to post my newest drawing of a young offended Steef. But I still need a scanner and Internet at home, hehe.
See you soon.
I hope to find new great art when I'm back
Your Alector
I mean, for all we know OWI may have decided female steefs (if they even exist, in the "real" OWI universe - I can't remember) should be such butch creatures they look mostly masculine anyway. 
I still think it looks a little little bit stuck on 
Awww sweet ^^
STEEF!*TwitchTwitch*
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