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  #31  
03-29-2005, 09:04 PM
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"heh heh heh abes not coming back.." brags the big bro
"oh no.." moans a mudukon
"HHAAAAAAAAAAHAAAAAAA.....now im gonna kill you......FIRE!" yells the gluckon
*the big bro,s open fire*
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
*smoke fills the room*
"heh heh heh...that gits rid of those pesky mudukons..." screeched the vyker
"YEAH NOW GET BACK TO WORK.....ALL OF YA....and open a godamn window...it reeks of death in here!!!!" orders the gluckon
"yes sir"
*the big bro opens a window and a whole bunch of birds fly out*
"hmph...that was odd..."

................::::::::::::THE END::::::::::::.............

thank you to all of you who put up with my work...

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  #32  
03-29-2005, 10:22 PM
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Nice chapter! So, the birds were bringing Abe back? Very good ending!
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  #33  
03-29-2005, 11:46 PM
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thank you very much Abe 16

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03-30-2005, 12:18 AM
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this story is great! will there be a sequel?
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03-30-2005, 01:07 AM
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It would be awesome if there was a sequel! You did a great job on the story The big Cheese!
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03-31-2005, 11:13 AM
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Really great story.

but if peoples like havoc dont like it, why do they care to post?
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04-02-2005, 03:49 PM
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yeah that's true sheriff
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