Breakout! -

Fuzzleman54321 · #31 03-16-2005, 10:50 AM

It is time!
Chapter 8 Formula maddness! (By the way, I am now calling my chapters!)

Munch was still running when he saw a ZAP! vender. He quickly drank it and electrocuted the Vyker to death. Meanwhile the Formula was taking more affect. Then the 700 sligs came and Abe and the Fuzzels (being ever so silly:Spin

said they wanted to join them! "oh no!" Munch said as they cornerd him. Then a slig slipped on a slurg and hit a formula which then sprayed all over the sligs and they blew up! Then some of it landed on another Formula and it caused an reaction and there was an explotion of the mixed Formlua. It went on Abe and the Fuzzels. "Huh?" Abe said slapping his head to get his memery back. "Yey we are cured!" Abe said happily! A camera was then lokking at them. Then Stenx told a slig to press a button. Then where Abe,Munch and the fuzzels where standing, the floor opened up underneath them! Before they fell Abe said "Happens everytime!" then shrugged his shoulders. They fell down.....

End of Chapter 8
Good?

Software Bug · #32 03-16-2005, 12:35 PM

haha cool

hope he doesnt hurts him on the fall down

but he is used to it

odd chick · #33 03-16-2005, 10:45 PM

Nice chapter, Fuzzleman.

And like Tim H.C. said, Abe's used to falling because he hits his head so much!

Fuzzleman54321 · #34 03-17-2005, 10:29 AM

Next one is in 3 days!

Software Bug · #35 03-18-2005, 01:30 PM

2 days left

Fuzzleman54321 · #36 03-21-2005, 12:32 PM

Sorry I forgot to write it yesterdsay!
Anyway, Chapter 9 The underground

"AAAGGGghHHH!" Munch was screaming. "relax. We will grab that pole!" Abe said ponting down. but unfortunly for Abe his Lion cloth skimmed aganst the pole and it ripped off! "yikes!" he said quickly putting his hands over his you now whats. "HHHAAAAHHHHAAAHHHAAA!" munch was laughing so hard. "still you now we are gonna die!" Abe said. But luckily they saw some muds chanting and they teleported. The teleported to the underground of Stenx's factory. "cool!" Munch said. Then they heard a faint said and then it became clear. "SSQQQQQQQUUUUEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!" the fuzzle's were saying as they were zomming down. then the muds chanted again and then they were next to Abe and munch. So they started walking off.(With Abe still covering his you now what's!) Then they came across a slig. "Chant Abe!" Munch said. "EEERRRRR I can't!" he said. So munch got the fuzzle to kill him. They then saw a Mud. "Here." He said and oferd Abe a loin cloth he had spare. So he put It on then chanted and rescued him. Then they walked off.
End of Chapter 9

Was it good?

odd chick · #37 03-21-2005, 04:40 PM

Poor Abe always has bad luck, doesn't he?

That was a funny chapter, Fuzzleman! Keep it up!

Fuzzleman54321 · #38 03-22-2005, 09:58 AM

The next chapter is in 3 days!

Software Bug · #39 03-22-2005, 12:42 PM

cool chapter fuzzleman!!
very funny too

ps : isnt youre sig not just a little bit to big?

Fuzzleman54321 · #40 03-23-2005, 11:37 PM

Thanks! Tim H. C.!
P.s I'll shorten it!
I will do it later today!

mudling · #41 03-23-2005, 11:41 PM

this is a great story! i'm looking forth to the next chapter!

Fuzzleman54321 · #42 03-24-2005, 09:02 AM

Chapter 10 Zualg 1

Abe and Munch found Zualg 1. "Finally!" Abe said. The fuzzles hopped in front but then blades came out of the walls and celing and sliced the Fuzzles. Now the trap was done they went (with Munch sobbing quetly because the Fuzzles were dead.) into the Zualg. Then A big bro slig came and got a knife and stabbed Abe and Munch. They fell to the floor and everthing went black..... They woke up at a cell. (Again!) "Well well well it looks like your trapped and this time noone can help you and to prove it DoIT!" The glukkon stenx said to a slig. The slig held up Big faces head! "you...you....you MONSTERS!" Abe said in Fury then Quickly Became Shrycull! He started to destroy everthing. The slig was killed but Stenx got away! "Dammit! Dammit! Dammit!" Abe said. Then they pulled a lever. Zualg 1 has been done.

Fuzzleman54321 · #43 03-24-2005, 09:22 AM

By the way go to the Should they die? Thread! Then I can finsh the fan fic! So when the poll closes, I'll start again!
(Sorry for the double post!)

odd chick · #44 03-24-2005, 04:35 PM

??? What exactly do you mean by that last post, Fuzzleman? That chapter was a bit short, and to be honest, it was probably not one of your best. But it was ok.

It wasn't bad at all, it's just that you've had better chapters. Until the next one, I'll be waiting!

Software Bug · #45 03-30-2005, 08:47 PM

so when is the story going to be continued??

Abe16 · #46 03-30-2005, 09:06 PM

Yeah, I can't wait!

Fuzzleman54321 · #47 03-31-2005, 07:51 AM

I will start at the 3rd of April! But if the should they die poll draws, can anyone think of a plan?

Fuzzleman54321 · #48 04-03-2005, 04:15 PM

Final results: No they will NOT die!

Chapter 11 The gift

"Hhhhhhmmmmmm..." abe said. "What's up?" Munch said. "Well how do we get to the lever in this Zualg?" Suddenly a hammer hit abe's head. He got knocked out and fell n the floor. Suddenly the floor opened. "NOT AGAIN!" and they fell down. When they were falling abe woke up and there was a flashing light. They were at the top and Big face was there. "What the... but I thought you... WHERE THE HELL DID YOU COME FROM?" Abe said confused. "Sharmans brought me back to life." he replied. Then he accidently dropped a stick he was carring. So abe bent down to get it and suddenly RRRRIIIIIIIPPPPPPPPPP!!!!! His lion cloth ripped at the back. "Oh poopie cheese!" he said embaresd. he quickly put his paws over hiss butt. "Anyway, I came to give you two your own gifts." Big face said. "Huh?" Munch said but was suddenly zapped by electricty. "Munch!" Abe said. suddenly when it went he had a tatu on his head! "This will give you the power to transforn in to antyhing." "COOL!" "and you" big face looked at abe. "oh no you are not AAAGGGGHHHHH!!!" Abe said and was zapped in the butt. "This will give you the power to summon scrabs and paramites to help you!"Then his lion cloth was fixed. "Thanks big face!" "No problem!" and big face vanished. Munch and abe then walked to Zualg two because big face had transported them there.

End of Chapter 11

So good or bad?

odd chick · #49 04-03-2005, 07:32 PM

I actually laughed out loud when the Bigface put a tattoo on Abe's behind!

That was a very funny chapter, Fuzzleman! Keep it up!

Abe16 · #50 04-04-2005, 12:21 AM

Me too! Very funny Fuzzleguy!

Fuzzleman54321 · #51 04-04-2005, 04:12 AM

Next on tommorow!

mudling · #52 04-04-2005, 04:18 AM

that chapter was very funny! i liked your story!

Fuzzleman54321 · #53 04-08-2005, 04:15 AM

I am really sorry I forgot to do it on the 5th!

Chapter 12 Stenix's Powers

When Abe and Munch went into Zualg two, There were lots of sligs. "FRREZE!" "Stand back!" Abe said and then he farted. "Hahahaha! You think that's going to stop us-" and then suddenly 700 scarbs and 700 paramites came and had a feast. THen stenix came . IV'e HAD IT!" He shouted and became shrycull! "Actully it's sryicull! for us!" Stenix said and zapped everthing! Then Munch dodged one but it got Abe! "HEY - What the?" And Abe was suddenly a flower on the floor! "oops set myself to flower zap! Now to SHOCK TO DEATH ZAP!" "That' it!" Munch said and punched him and he fell to the ground. "You are mean to Abe, YOU KILL FUZZLE'S AND MOST OF ALL YOU ARE A WIMP!!!!!!"""" Munch said in a rage. "Whoa!" Abe said. "I am blooming! Yippee!" THen Munch started beating him up! Then morped into a possesion orb! But stenix manged to be carried away from some flying sligs. "O.k Abe, I willl put you back to normal!" And morped into sryicull and zapped him back to Abe! "Aaawwww I nearly became a daffidill!" Abe said moaning. "Hey look a lever!" Munch said and pulled it. Zualg 2 Had been done.

End of Chapter 12.

Was it good?

odd chick · #54 04-08-2005, 05:22 PM

He he, it was funny when Abe turned into a flower!

Nice job with the humor, Fuzzleman. Keep it going.

Abe16 · #55 04-08-2005, 05:30 PM

Humor:10. I liked that chapter! keep up the good work.

Fuzzleman54321 · #56 04-09-2005, 12:04 PM

Next one in two days!!!!!

big bro slig #1 · #57 04-15-2005, 05:18 PM

Who was the guy who turned into a srycull?

Fuzzleman54321 · #58 04-17-2005, 06:00 AM

I am so sorry! I diden't have enough time to write a chapter!

Chapter 13 The fight

"Hey here's Zualg 3!" Munch said looking at the sign. "let's go!" So abe and Munch wen't inside! "Freeze!" Loads of sligs said. They were surronded by sligs! "Let's kill 'em!" "That's it!" Abs said. He picked up Munch and ran around the room dodgeing bullets. Then abe sneaked up on a slig. "Hey" He said and patted him on the shoulder then ducked. "Who's there?" "Kaya!" Abe said and poked him in the eye! Then he fell down a pit! SPLAT! He ended up in a bloody mess. Then abe threw munch on a platform! Munch pulled a lever! It Zapped Abe and the sligs! Then abe and the sligs walked in the middle of the room and started doing the can can! "Oops, it's on can can mode! I'll change it to james bond mode!" Munch said and zapped Abe. THen abe was suddenly holding a pistel with sunglasses! And took down ever slig! "Hey look a lever!" Abe said and pulled it! Zualg 3 had been done!

end of chapter 13

Do you like it?

Abe16 · #59 04-17-2005, 10:49 AM

LOL! James Bond mode!? That was really funny!

General Dripikk · #60 04-17-2005, 12:46 PM

Yes! LOL! Please finish!