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03-27-2006, 02:22 AM
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Anni looked at the Delivery Boy in pity.

"Man, this place is crazy. Does this sort of stuff always happen when you come down here Anni?"



She thought back... Did this seems like anything out of the ordinary? Not really.

"Well uh yea-" She was gonna respond but was shoved away by Jim as the Slog attacked.

"Wow!" She said as she almost lost her balance. At this time Somi had arrived at the place.

She quickly ran towards Anni.

"Somi help!" Anni yelled, as she looked at the angry Slog.

Somi quickly ran towards the Slog and shot a few web strings at it.

"Now stay calm, you wouldn't wanna hurt my friend. We are plenty of paramites who would get angry then..." She said in animal language.


Anni calmed down, and hoped the slog would leave them alone.

"Hello Somi!" Anni said happily, "Have you met that scrab?"

"Yes... He wanted to help his buddies... Scrabs are really weird." Somi said, as Anni picked her up and hugged her.

"Have you seen Freak around?" Anni asked.

"Nah... He ran off somewhere. I hope he's alright. What happened between you and that slig?" Somi asked.

"I'd rather not talk about it." Anni said and then turned to Jim, "Should we get away from here? We could go explore the meat farm... Also, i found something funny in the girls bathroom."

She turned to leave but then faced the Delivery Boy.

"Wanna come with us?? Where are your friends?" Anni asked.
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Razer thought it a bit through... If he didn't pay he probably wouldn't get a cigarette, but the lazyness kicked in, and found 5 moolah in his pocket.

"I'll give you 5 bucks..." He said indiferently and shrugged.


Sure it didn't have any weed in it, but... Who cared?
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03-27-2006, 06:36 AM
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OOC: I was thinking about drawing a map myself. I would like to hear how you all imagine the map of the factory sometimes, in a way T-nex described it.

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Arnie was a bit taken aback from Dionysia's outburst. "Damn, keep your loincloth on, I'm not an unreasonable Glukkon, I'm just in a bad mood." He took a few seconds to chill down, then continued. "OK, as far as I know, there haven't been many work-related accidents amongst the workers lately, so I think you should be fine here. Most of the injuries come from... personal causes, so if you're not bashing someone's head with a pipe, you should be fine. Now, where should I send you to work?" He said, looking at Dionysia. "Say, what differences have you got compared to normal Mudokons? Any special abilities?" he asked.

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RG-49 arrived with Molt and Srag to the Labs. They found the door open, so they went inside. RG-49 noticed the discussion between the Sligs and the Intern.

"Intern organic, I believe you are somehow related to the Medical Labs and the Vykker Dek. I have an injured Slig here, half mechanical." He placed Molt on a table. "Are you and the Vykker able to help him? I have to go back to the grinders and help with the repairs there. This Slig organic..." he motioned at Srag. "...can stay with him if necessary."

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03-27-2006, 06:54 AM
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The arrival

The ballcart arrived at Rupture Farms and slid to a hault.
A slig valet stepped up, and opened the door.
Biggy Bro Slig stepped out, along with his second in command; Cpt. Sorph, with three more sligs. The Valet patted Biggy Bro Slig on the back.
"I haven't seen you since you worked here. And the master is waiting in his office."
The Commando team, known as Alpha Squad, walked along the platform, and a door slid open, and they walked up, the long, twisted spiral staircase. They reached a large steel door, and they pushed it open.
A glukkon sat there, staring at the group coming in.
"I have summoned your group, Master Slig, to take control and be my Marshal of Rupture Farms. I fear a plot to break out of Rupture Farms is going to take place. I need you to keep an eye on Zulag 13, which has some unsual twist about it. Mudokons don't seem to work there. They seem to whisper a lot, which is making me suspicious." He said.
Biggy Bro Slig nodded.
"I will transfer $2000 into your accounts." The Security Glukkon said. "Take the right corrdoor and turn left on the 13th door to get to the Zulag. Your bunks will be arranged shortly."
"Yes, sir. Me and my group will take special interest on your task you have assigned us to. Goodbye, sir." Biggy Bro Slig said.
The five of them walked down the corrdoor, with the curious Mudokons staring at these strangers. They quickly went back to their work.
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ooc: Biggy Bro Slig, you might want to do some back- reading before you join. 3 to 5 pages should fine, just so you get the feel of the RPG.
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03-27-2006, 07:18 AM
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Sorry, it's just I've been writing stories for a long time, and now I've just joined an RPG. Sorry, Splat.
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03-27-2006, 07:38 AM
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Goresplatter was confused with the goings on in the lab. Several people had walked in at once; he was beginning to feel claustrophobic. He listened as the intern spoke to him, and acknowledged the question.
Goresplatter: "Sure, ya' can test 'em... but, I... don't hurt them, these things feel pain. Guess he's made himself social now, so may aswell - Vykker X forced me to inject a drug into my legs, and these things came out... I don't know where X is at the moment, though..."
He thought hard. He attempted to remember everything at once. He finally pieced two and two together.
Goresplatter: "Vykker X is somewhere in Rupture Farms, I'll go and look for him after the tests, if you don't mind, of course."

-=-=-=-

The Delivery Boy jumped back as he felt the gust of wind from the slog. He screeched and slammed into the wall, and fell forwards. He hit the floor hard, and made short hisses whilst writhing and squirming. When things had calmed down, he got up and shuffled after Anni, very slowly.

-=-=-=-

Vykker X eventually stopped weeping. He sneaked, carefully now, around the facility. He opened his satchel and brought out a black cloak and a small periscope. He looked around every corner, until he eventually found the lab. He needed another way around. Suddenly, he saw a vent. He jumped up and pulled the cover from it, and it landed with a bang. He squeaked and swiftly crawled up into the vent, not forgetting to pull up and replace the cover so as not to be found. He crawled around in the vents until he found the one overlooking the labs. He used his periscope to watch, impossible to see.

OOC: I did my draft version of the map, the way I see it. Sorry, it went bitty when I coverted it from bmp to jpeg to reduce size, but I think it's still readable. Need constructive criticism on layout to improve, though, when it's complete, I can try and give it a better appearance. ^_^
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03-27-2006, 10:23 AM
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OOC: Don't worry Biggy, you'll get the hang of it. Oh and try to avoid random characters eg. the Glukkon, as they can muddle things up a bit. Not to worry thuogh, you'r still new, you'll get used to it. Oh and what are Molt's injuries again? Is it him with the eye injury or Kilsa?
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Dek was at first taken aback by seeing a Slig with organic legs, but he shook off the surprise. "Another Vykker here? Interesting." He thuoght aloud.
"Well, better lie on one of these benches, there's no telling what the drug did apart fro mthis. You'll be telling me you're fertile next!" He laughed to himself, thinking 'stupid sterile worker Sligs'.
He then looked at Molt, briefly inspecting the injuries.
ooc: I'l ldescribe my vision of the factory later, gotta go now.
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03-27-2006, 11:19 AM
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OOC: Molt has a missing arm, has a damaged eye, and his arteries are inffected.

IC: Max squirmed at the the webbings that was around him. He didn't like it one bit to see that he hasn't caught anything. Once he heard what the paramite had said, he responded in his animal language, "Well, shaddup! I'm fully aware that you have amazing strength, and so do I! I'm part Sleg, and there'll be one nasty bite in you if I bite! And I won't disappear, according to my part slog!"

He used the musules in his legs to tear the webbings around his legs, and in a flash, he was standing on his two feet. He howled to the moon, and unaware of the paramite's pack, charged at Somi and lept at her.
OOC: T-Nex, its up to you what Somi to be pinned down or not.
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Gappiqu was astoinished at how many people arrived. He was glad to see Molt was in the lab, but he rather felt angry at him. All Molt did was cause trouble into this factory. Gappiqu felt like that Molt must die, but the other part of him felt like that Molt didn't mean to harm others. Maybe he was just in a bad mood. Gappiqu felt like he didn't need be in the lab and left.
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Slap saw that Dek had everything under control with the deshaped slig, so he focused his attenion on Goresplatter. But he realized the condition Molt was in, so he decided to give Gore a few pointers in what will happen to him. He typed on his keyboard, saying, "Not yet, you can't. As I heard from you, you've been given a drug to enhance growth. Yet, in such drugs, such as yours, it seems like your bone and tissue grew too fast, not making enough time to devolpe. Like yourself, you are an adult, so you do not grow anymore, making it impossible to devolpe any more with your legs. I'm afraid if the sitution is as dangerous as it seems, we may need to saw off your legs. Just after a X-ray."
He went to Dek and typed, "Sir, may I assist you in your work?"
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03-27-2006, 04:38 PM
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The gate creaked open slowly and ten sligs sneaked in quietly one by one.

"woh!" Exclaimed Cruk, "you wern't kidding he is a big one!"

"keep it down!" hissed Spray, "hurry up and hook this thing up, the drug aint gonna last forever!"

Five sligs then proceeded to wrap chains around the scrab, while the rest stood guard. Normally they would have had no problem with this but the terrifying size of it caused nervousness amongst them. It took them nearly 40 minutes to finish the job.

"ok let's wake him up!" smirked Spray. He then raised his left arm to reveal a metal bracelet and put the lever up to full.

A huge electrical current went through the Scrab and he immediatly jumped up in pain screaming. At least he would have done had the muzzle not prevented him.

The sligs jumped back in fright but then laughed as they realised the scrab could not hurt them.

"Ok" said Spray, "lead him out". The sligs then proceeded to pull on the chains to drag the scrab out of the cage. But the scrab refused to budge. "damn!" one of the sligs cried, "he's rock solid!".

"this'll get him moving." said Spray and he gave the scrab another electrical shock. But the scrab held his ground. "What's wrong with that thing?" said Cruk and he took out his brace and zapped the scrab. The scrab still would not move despite the huge electrical fields circulating his body. He then let out an almighty shriek and snapped the muzzle clean off. All the electrical fields had now zapped the chains clean off. His shriek generated himself with a massive surge of energy.

"HELP!" yelled a slig but the scrab was too quick and scooped him up with his beak and threw him away. The other scrabs frantically took out their guns and began firing in panic. But the scrabs hard outshell just made most of the bullets richochet off and hit several of them. Spray and Cruk then ran to the back of the firing sligs and switched their levers up to full and the bug on the back of the scrabs head continued to shock him. But the energy field circling the scrab was too great and it had little effect. The scrab leapt and pounced on three sligs and stabbed left to right taking out another two. Spray and Cruk had got away by this stage and the scrab stabbed at the last two sligs impaling them on his might beak. The scrab could now think to sense where the electrical shock was coming from. He ducked his head and rammed himself into a wall shattering the bug to pieces.

Spray and Cruk went into the Stockyards security, hit the alarm button and the stockyards sirens blared. The noise infuriated the scrab and he let out a shriek of anger. He then cantered out of his cage looking to kill anything in his way!
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03-27-2006, 11:13 PM
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ooc: Welcome Slig_cake. A couple of pointers. Random characters are ok for your intro but don't overdo it later on. Your two sligs can't just have appeared in Rupture Farms, they must have entered at some point, say they came in with the scrab and were the only two of the slig pack to survive or something.
Most importantly, try to avoid God-Modding (making a character that can do anything to anyobody, such as random destruction being totaly indestructible or hurting/killing another person's character without their player's permission) and siezing control of the RPG. It's pretty irritating for just about everyone when a new player joins and immediately starts trying to control all the events. Do it slowly and subtley!

Goresplatter, not bad but it has some faults. There's only one rec room for all the mudokons and sligs together. There is a seperate one for glukkons. Rupture Farms has always had several floors, lifts stairs and lots of problems when they break. You've missed some things off from recent chapters like the armoury, kitchen and security office and some older locations like conference room, production lines and storehouses. I made a map as well but as I finished at almost 11:00 last night I haven't had a chance to post it. Please stand by.
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03-28-2006, 08:57 AM
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RG-49 looked at Dek enquiringly, but he was busy with his new patients. "Take good care of them, then. I'm off to the grinders." He turned around and ran out of the room to get to the Grinding Station.

He ran past the Storage Room and arrived to the Production Lines. He went over a bridge which was over the production lines. He looked down at the barrels, standing half empty and motionless. This made him walk faster to the Grinding Station.

There, he found Floyd and #7 Slig. He went to #7 Slig first. "I've taken the Slig organic to the medical labs. The Vykker is taking care of him." he said.

"Ah, you mean Dek? That's good." said #7 Slig. "Now, let's get started with the grinders."

They walked to Floyd. "Hey Floyd. Mind if we help you? Suppose not..."

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OOC: I've finished with my simple RF map. Thanks for the help and descriptions!

First is an outer map, the second is the ground floor. 1st and 2nd floor coming soon!
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03-28-2006, 10:44 AM
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Biggy Bro Slig's group walked on the catwalk, eyeing the mudokons.
One gave him an evil look, but went back to scrubbing.
"Keep an eye on that one, Sorph. He looks like trouble." He quietly said to him.
The troublesom (sp?) mudokon frowned at Sorph, and kicked a slig gaurd down, and grabbed his gun.
Being a mudokon, he struggled to know how to fire an industrialist weapon, but eventually figured out. The bullet skimmed Biggy Bro Slig's shoulder.
Cpt. Sorph pulled out his old-fashioned mini-blitz pack out and fired. The mudokon fell to the floor.
The Alpha Squad stopped crowching, and got up.
"I think we need to have a look at there barracks. They might have something to hide."
The group charged down into Zulag 13's bunk room and a group of Mudokons were sat in a circle.
"Who is the head slave?" Cpt. Sorph asked.
An old mudokon stepped up.
"And you are?" Biggy Bro Slig said.
"Worshawk, at your service." He nodded.
"May we have permission to search your bunk?" Sorph asked.
"Why yes! But don't go in the lavatory. The bucket overflowed again." Worshawk said.
Sorph nodded. "Search the Lavatory."
The sligs poured into the toilet.
The dark grey tiles had been smashed, and an attempt to barke through the wall had been made.
"Guilty as charged, sir." Sorph said.
"Take Warshawk away. Seal the Lavatory door, and bring out the bucket. Let's see them overlow it now." Biggy Bro Slig said.
"It wasn't me! I swear! I've been framed!" Warshawk shouted. He was dragged down the corridoor and towards the Interrigation room.
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03-28-2006, 11:06 AM
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Gore was in a state of shock. He walked over to the table and lied down calmly. After this, he would search for Vykker X and then go and sleep in R and R. He needed it. He lit up a cigar and smoked heavily to calm his nerves. Above him, the smoke went into the vent. A loud, hacking cough was then heard from inside the vent. Gore panicked and jumped off of the table and crouched in the corner. Vykker X fell through the vent and onto the table.
Vykker X: "No, no! You're doing this all wrong you idiot!"
Vykker X runs over to Goresplatter, slaps him in the face and shoves a needle into his leg. He drained some blood, then withdrew the needle and slapped him again. He began to run out, but Gore lept over and grabbed his leg, tripping him over.
Goresplatter: "It's Vykker X! Help me hold him down!"
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03-28-2006, 11:56 AM
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OOC: Hm, interesting maps. But I didn't imagine the cafeteria bigger than the Grinders and I always thought that the Stockyards was close to the Grinding Area. That way, the kill is easier to get to a grinder.

IC: Gappiqu got to a chunk of space, that said it led to the excutive's office. He steeped inside and walked around slowly. There was a lot things on his mind. Thoughts flew into his head of what would happen to Goresplatter if Molt lives. "But what Molt didn't live?" was another question that was in his head. So many thoughts were in his head. Anni was one of them. Where was she? Why is she pinkish-grey? Why was that Jim guy so afraid of him? Those questions were in his head still, by the time he got up to the corrider to Arnie's office. He snapped out of his thought process and Gappiqu moved towards the office.

Gappiqu saw Kilsa on the ground, collasped. He could've gone down to the lab with him, but by the looks of it, he had been there for a while, so he must have been OK. Besides, he knew there was too much chaos in the lab anyway. He opened the rather messy door, and stared at the two fellows. One was Arnie, which he seen before telephone. The other was a black female mudokon. It looked like the two were having an arguement, by the looks of it. This was rare, since glukkons had always been right about everything, according Slig Barracks. Gappiqu was a little quiet when he spoke, since a lot was on his mind, and said, "Um, hey, um, you may have already seen me, yeah, at the telephone, but hey, uh, my name is Gappiqu, and um, I'm looking for a job. My skills are engineering and designing gadgets. So, uh, yeah." He sat down on a chair and waited for a response.
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Slap was amazed to see a Vykker suddenly pop up out of no where, but reacted quickly. He dived for the knock out gas in the corner. He picked it up and rushed to Vykker X and placed the air tube into the Vykker's mouth. He started to turn the wheel that released the gas inside.
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Sev eyed the map closely and looked for the Grinding Area. Apparently he was closer to the Old Rupture Farms than the new one.

Sev:"Would it hurt to have signs on the walls?"

He then realised he wasn't even on the right floor. This map was of the old Rupture Farms, not the new one. Sev looked around and found a door which led to a staircase and entered. The stairs stretched high and looked kinda rickety. Sev shrugged and began his ascent.
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1) No random characters! What on Oddworld are you talking about????? How many people must ignore this rule?
2) Limit sidequests! You're running off on your own! If you want to RPG then interact with other characters and you won't need to add random ones.
3) No god-modding, you can't kill or hurt other people's characters, no RANDOM violence or destruction!
4) No controlling other people's characters, you haven't actually done that yet cus you haven't bothered to meet any, but in future, bear it in mind.
5) Read back a little, you clearly have no idea of how this RPG works, so get some back-reading in to give you the idea.

You look like you're a good enough writer and you're grammar is great, but you need to wsort out your RPG rules. Go read the rules thread (it's stickied) abnd then come back. Don't just ignore this cus it won't help you in any way!

I'm sorry but I'm going to double-post now, I don't want this rant in with my post, same reason I didn't post earlier.
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ooc: thanks splat. Just to let u know I had no intention of making the scrab unbeatable, I just said it was going to be pretty pissed so watch out
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Stivik gladly accepted Razer's money and handed him a cigarette.
Stivik: "Anyway, I better go find her before she goes and kills herself. And she would if she thought she could gain from it."

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Jim yelped as the slog dived at Somi. Acting out of refelx, he grabbed a couple of bits of rubble from the ground and threw them at the slog, hitting it once.
Jim: "Anni, run! You don't want to get hurt! Get out of here!"

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Dionysia snorted. "What do you think Arnie? Vykker's spend thousands of moolah getting me out of the egg and you think I'm your average mudokon? You don't need to know what they did to me, but believe me whaen i say I-"

She was interupted by Gappiqu stepping in. She glared at him furiously.
Dionysia: "Go down to the grinders, you think they'll themselves! Odd, are all the workers here that stupid Arnie, or are the good ones just hiding?"



ooc: My turn with the map, spent a couple of hours on it and its got ground floor, 1st and 2nd floor, basement and overview.
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"Look just leave my friend alone. i would normally not interfere in a slogs fight, but those are my friends, so leave them alone." Somi shouted at the slog, while the other paramites shot webstrings at the slog to calm him down.

"Uh I aint leaving Somi..." Anni said stubbornly, and kept dodging the slog, "Damn he's crazy..."

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Razer shrugged.. Kill herself? Would be great if every mudokon did so.

"Want me to help?" he asked as he lit the cigarette.

OOCEDIT: I really think we should use Splat's map, cos it's really detailed, and i think it hass all the room ever used in the history of WARF...
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Max cried out in stranglement. He couldn't get out this time and he screamed vicously out in the area he was in. He bounced up and down, trying to get out. He understood the speech of the paramite, but the word friends stung him the most. He opened enormusly wide, trying to kill Somi and everyone in the nest, but suddenly his groans and barking turned into whimpers. He whimpered in animal language, "Help me Molt.... Where are you" He continued to whimper and stopped struggling to get out.
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Gappiqu narrowed his brows and looked at Dionysia. He had seen her before and she wasn't any different at breakfest. He walked towards her and he said, "Well, shove it, mud. I can do what I want, and no one can tell me stop. And aren't muds suppose to working down there too? Or.." He continued to talk, but in a babish voice, "The liddle' mudok'in scared of teh big bad grinder?" He was starting to like torcuring these mudokons.
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1) No random characters! What on Oddworld are you talking about????? How many people must ignore this rule?
2) Limit sidequests! You're running off on your own! If you want to RPG then interact with other characters and you won't need to add random ones.
3) No god-modding, you can't kill or hurt other people's characters, no RANDOM violence or destruction!
4) No controlling other people's characters, you haven't actually done that yet cus you haven't bothered to meet any, but in future, bear it in mind.
5) Read back a little, you clearly have no idea of how this RPG works, so get some back-reading in to give you the idea.
I'm no good at RPG's. I'll leave. Seeya!
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Arthur grinned "Cafeteria? I...think, I know where it is. Not sure, but i think it's up that way," He points up the corridor, the way Stivik and Dioneysia went "Cause the other way is the stockyards and station. Besides, i guess I am hungry." He waited to see what Groll would do before acting, he could do with some company, as he had no idea where Boogie, Scruben and Floyd were.
OOC: Whoops, sorry MM, I've been having a lot of trouble keeping up with this RPG lately and I didn't realise you were waiting for me

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"Alright," Groll replied, "Well, standing around here isn't going to find it. Let's go."
He started walking up the corridor in the direction Arthur had indicated.

OOC: Short post, because I have no idea what to do with my other two characters right now
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Dionysia's eyes flashed with anger. "I am DS-P.L7 v4, an experiment more valuable than this entire fatory. If I get injured would you pay the repair bill? I think you'll find that if it came to it, the cartel would decide I have a lot more authority than you."

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Jim looked definately relieved when the slog stopped struggling and stopped throwing rocks. "Alright, can we get out of ehre and chuck it in a grinder or something before it tries to kill someone else? It came real close to gutting you Anni, I don't think we should just let it run off. No one would know if we... you know... Maybe the paramites could have it?"

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Stivik: "Yeah, whatever. If we head off now we could probably find her before she gets herself in too much trouble. But look out, she has less respect for sligs than for slurgs..." He smiled, "And less for glukkons than for sligs!"
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Gappiqu laughed in amusement. He then calmed down and said to Dionysia, "So you're an experiment, eh? For a second, I thought you fell in a tar pit. But seriously, I don't care if your Skillya's twin sister, you aren't gonna tell what to do. Besides, what's so special about you? All you do is brag in how great you are, but you aren't special. You are only special because you are a new fasion statement. The Vykkers only told you that you were special, so you could tell everybody and the glukkons would think, 'Geh, if she is so great, the other black muds are just as special!' Don't you see? You're just money to Vykkers."
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Max understood what Jim said and he started to bark again. He barked, "No, don't! I only want to find Molt!" He looked at the paramites and barked, "Please help me! You can't let another animal die! That'll only make you as worse as the people who killed the other paramites!"
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Anni thought a bit.

"Now Jim... One thing you'll never see me do, is hurting an animal." Anni said, and then faced Somi "Why don't you help him find Molt? If... he stops attacking us.

Somi looked at the Slog.

"Don't worry, I wont hurt you if you wont hurt us... I wanna help you find this... Molt, if you can tell me what he looks like and all." Somi said kindly.

"What you are just gonna let him run off?" one of the other paramites asked.

"Well, I'm going with him." somi said.

And so they lived happily ever after... eh well not really...

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Javi was now up, and when to the cafeteria to get eat something.

Kix and Dean where there too.

"Now looka t all this mess... We have cleaned this plac
"I'll help." Kix said.

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"Well.. She sounds nasty. Just the kind of mudokon who needs disciplin." Razer said annoyed, as he followed Stivik, "Why don't ya just beat her up?"
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Jim: "Well, ok, nothing against animals myself, but when they're trying to eat me I'd rather see em dead. But if you think it's safe, just make sure we're a long way off before... Before Somi sets it loose. I value my limbs.

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Stivik: "Uh, uh, well, you know, the glukkons, they don't... and the vykkers, they don't like you beating her up, and the vykkers like to keep an eye on her so she'll tell the next one she sees that you've been beating her and then it'll be trouble for you!" He looked slightly awkward, "Anyway, she actually has some respect for me and I don't want to loose is. We should go and look for her."

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Dionysia laughed coldly. "You think I'm really so useless? well let's put it like this. The terrorists come in here to save the muds, Abe sees me and being who he is, gets me to follow." She put on a fake, sweet-an-innocent voice. "So sure, I follow, but If I accidentally lean on an alarm or push him into a meat-grinder, well, my mistake and I guess the day is saved. Of course, I could first point out a slig called Gappiqu that would be really dangerous if Abe didn't blow him up before he could come after him. I'm sure he'd take my advice, I mean, why wouldn't I want to get out of there, I'm just money to the vykkers, right?" She laughed nastily. "Maybe you might want to get used to this, cus once the vykkers are satisfied there will be plenty of black skins about till Abe is captured or killed."
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Anni looked a bit at somi.

"I'll be fine..." Somi said, and mentally smiled... Cos paramites can't smile.

"Ok thanks Somi." Anni said and ran off, dragging Jim with her.

She ran over to the girl's shower-room( ).

"You know... I found something very unusual in there..." She said and laughed secretly.

She opened the door, still dragging him with her, and felt a bit on the wall. Then she found the cracck, and pushed the wall down. It revealed the tunnel.

"Look... I don't know where it leads to... But it says you can get around somehow." Anni said.

The tunnel was quite dark, but there was enough light to see where it ende.. Or where it turned direction.

"Wanna come on a bit of exploring with me??" she asked excitedly.

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Somi turned to the slog again.

"Well... Should i release you then?"
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Max grinned and barked, "I promise if you won't keep me here, I won't kill you. And if you leave me here, Molt will come to look for me and once he sees me, let's just say his bite his worse than his anger." He continued in barking language, but was understandable, "Anywho, my owner is metal slig named Molt. And last I saw him, he was missing an arm. Now can I be let go?"
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Gappiqu let no expression enter his face, besides a "you're so stupid" look on his face. He said to Dionysia, "Hey, if I'm so useless as you say, I'm afraid you are as well. Because this smart glukkon here made sure that all mudokon treatment is great. So no terroist is gonna come any time soon. And that makes you useless. Like I said, you're just for the money here. Better start accepting that before you die." He started to put his hand on her face, for some unknown reason. He started to have tears mist his eyes. He thought, "Those Vykkers and sligs have been fulling her with such crazy ideas. Will this realize the errors of her ways?"
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Dionysia whacked his hand way. "Get away from me, pervert!" she moved away from him quickly. "Odd, you are stupid! You think the natives would care or even know how the slaves are treated here? Does someone go out there every month and tell them, "Oh, we're treating the slaves nicely at Rupture Farms so you don't have to come and blow us up." And do you think they don't mind us capturing their animals, taking the land and ripping down their forests? It's not just the slaves their after. You thijnk places like the Slig Barracks that only ever hired a handful of slaves was shut down just for their sake alone? The terrorists will do anything to hurt the industrial world, its about time you figured that out."

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Jim peered nervously down the tunnel, wondering what made that, would it really be safe? then he spotted the paper on the floor that Anni had found earlier and read it.

"Welcome to the tunnel made by five mudokons; Ky, Ovin, Jimmi, Clovey and Dan. This tunnel leads to several places in the meatplant, where you can watch people, without being noticed...

Update:
We found a way out. Just follow the instructions on the backside of the page.
"

Jim looked slightly worried, but the idea of moving around the factory without the fear of running into any sligs was too good to miss. He glanced at the back but, like Anni, couldn't make much sense of thes symbols and pictures. It was the idea of escaping that worried him more, but then if they couldn't understand the message what was there to worry about. He grinned. "Ok, lets go. But make sure we close the passage first, so nothing can follow us. I bet the sligs wouldn't like to see this."

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Stivik left the grinding area with Razer. "I'm trying think of the places she's already seen. She's been to the cafeteria, and she arrived by train, so maybe we should check out round there."



It would be really usedul to have Dripik here now, I'm sure Arnie would have something to say about Gappiqu and Dionysia's conversation. But I think he's on holiday at the moment, so maybe we should stop for a bit and wait until he can post?

EDIT: Sorry, I just noticed Anni put the note into her loin cloth. Can we assume she handed it to Jim when they were there?
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"Ok..." Anni said and as the when inside, she noticed a knob on the inside,so she pulle the wall back up with effort.

Then shee looked around.

"Wow... it's a bit dark but i guess it's best so nobody will find out about us." She whispered and when along the tunnel.

They were inside the walls, where the cables and stuff are. It looked like the mudokons had worked really hard on expanding the space. On the walls were little cracks, in which they could look out from. Anni noticed they were walking past the RestRoom. No one was in there at the moment.

"Heh... I wonder why they made this tunnel in the first place... i think that the old rupture farms would have allowed these mudokons to get killed by doing such a thing." Anni said and smiled as she walked further.

Soon there was a sign telling that there were some stairs if they kept walking on the right.

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Javi was done eating andn when to wash his plate.

"So where's Anni been lately?" He asked.

Both Kix and Dean could imagine how mad he'd get is he knew what happned, so they exchanged a few glances, and then Kix spoke.

"Uh... She's just been aroun with Somi and Freak... I gues..."

Dean nodded in confirmation.

----

The grinding Area looked a bit tidier now, but still a bit messy.

"Well... Why don't you just her get killed by herself? She sounds like a pain in the butt." Razer said, "Well, it doesn't look like she's around here anyways. Maybe she's like Anni and like to run off in the old parts or what..?"
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