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04-10-2006, 07:58 AM
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Ahem, thank you, Lobo.
Truely, people, who still come to this thread...it has been hectic.
This laptop died on me, my computer died on me, the one at school has DAMN websense crap to block certain categories, and...well, things have gotten ugly without the forums to get my attention...
Anyways, that doesn't mean the story's gonna die.
It's just gonna be...well...slow...until our computer is living, which we got a hard drive just yesterday, and awaiting its installation.
Thank you fer bein' patient with me, whoever you are. I assure you, I shall post up more later on.
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04-11-2006, 08:36 AM
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Thus, my perils gone fer now, the story shall continue!

PERILOUS JOURNEY
The journey to Boontown (cont.)


Umi groaned at the very peak of dawn, grunting irritatedly at the sawing Stranger, snoring under the shade of his broad hat.
She lifted off his chest, carefully placing his arm over his stomach, and wandering away, leaving a passing glance to him.
The sun barely opened over the jagged flat-top mountain border.
She stretched widely over the tall grass, letting out a tired groan that would soon wake her up.
Ezums slowly rose to the early-morning dew-soakened grass they ate upon, raising their heads and trilling contentedly at the coolness of the chirping morning.
She avoided irritating the Ezums in their graze, but one couldn't help to tramp up to the familiar human, lowering its head for the same head rub it got yesterday from the human.
Umi smiled at the Ezum, gently patting it on the flats of its head, indulging its smooth scales on her callous hand.
"Hey," she whispered.
"I remember you,"
The Ezum's eyes closed in sweet indulgance, haunching down on its knees, and curling its arms under its chest.
Umi did the same, sitting on her knees, while rubbing in a circle on its head gently.
She felt the coolness of the crisp air dissolve in to a great unnatural warmth, so quick it came over, she felt suspicion crawl over her skin.
She spun around, putting her back on the Ezum's snout, her eyes wide in shock.
The Knifal stood there, straight, only cranking its neck down to her.
Umi sighed, her fear shrinking in her chest.
"Don't do 'dat!" she scolded quietly, relieving off the Ezum's snout.
The Ezum snorted at the human, lifting off the ground, and slowly treaded off in to the grass.
The Knifal stepped up to her, kneeling on the ground, and lowering its head to her arm, closing its eyes thoughtfully.
Umi's lips scrunched up in a curve, knowing what it wanted.
"Alright..." she nodded, lifting a hesitant arm up to its smooth forehead.
Her hand touched openly, and immediately, a hot sensation shot through her arm, and pierced right in to her mind.
Her eyes fell blank, suddenly falling in to a black cloud once more.
She opened her eyes, gasping from the quick transformation, from light to darkness.
The Knifal suddenly dissolved from the darkness, right in front of her.
She took a step back, looking down from its bright red eyes.
"Sorry. I did not mean to scare you," he spoke gently.
His grandiloquent tone made her feel confident to speak to him, or to anyone, without fearing of her shyness to hold her down.
Her head perked up back to him, and shrugged easily.
"I hope you had a well night's rest?" he questioned.
"Yeh. 'less you like to put up with a chainsaw cutting on steel, then yeah," she nodded.
"Good. There wasn't a problem with the Hunters last night," he reported.
"Whence discovered their triplets, they retreated back to the Swamp,"
Umi gave a rough sigh, nodding at his announcement, then looked back to him.
"We...take off to Boontown today...if the Hunters don't bother us, we'll be there within a day,"
"I bet you will," he nodded.
"Because I shall assist you in your travel,"
Umi shot up to him, then chuckled enlightened.
"Sorry. But, I don't think you'd be wantin' to help us with Stranger awake and alert,"
The Knifal's head cocked a side.
"Why's that?" he questioned.
"Don't take this wrong, but...yer somewhat lookin' of a Hunter. I don't think he'll hesitate to attack you this time," she told.
"'sides. You get caught, he'll rip yeh to shreds,"
"That won't be such a problem, child," he grinned.
"I'm tellin' you. Don't bother helpin' us," she lowered her tone.
"You don't need to tell me. I volunteer to help,"
"Don't make me plead to you. I 'ppreciate you savin' me, but this time, it's best if we do this solo,"
The Knifal frowned in near-defeat.
"I know that you're trying to protect me..." he stepped up.
"...but...it'd be better, if you'd accept my assistance. Just this time. I could keep the Hunters off of you, without being seen,"
Umi kept her head down from him, her eyes falling worried.
The Knifal's tail gently rung around her legs, a comfortingly warmth singing her skin.
"Look," he spoke so gently.
"I have been the guardian of these fields for five hundred years, young and mortal, I am. My gratitude lies with you, and I shall help you in any way, to get you two through this field of peril. So please..."
Umi shook her head doubtfully.
"I...I don't know..."
He knelt on one knee, his head down, but his eyes glued on her, sparkling a brilliant orange.
"Child...please?" he sounded pleadingly.
Her eyes shook in fear, her mouth slightly open to speak.
Only two together against a pack of Hunters would be game over for them, and only the Knifal was wise to know of the field.
His help would be a great jump forward to their destiny.
"If you get caught-"
"I will be fine," he caught attentively, his voice sounding calm and assertful.
She felt herself flourish in doubt again, but her mind was made.
"Very well," she quietly said, keeping her head down.
The Knifal stood straight, overshadowing the human under his great length.
"I will not let you down, child. I promise," he sounded sincere.
But roughness still grinded in her mind, and he could feel it.
His tail wrapped tighter around her ankles, a gentle heat calming her mind.
She slowly looked back up, his eyes locked upon her dampened face.
"Trust me..."
She swallowed her thought, nodding quickly in her decision.
His tail lightened, and unraveled around her ankles.
"Thank you,"
His voice echoed, he dissolving in to the darkness.
Her eyes flooded back outside her conscious, the sky bright of golden sunlight.
Umi held a hand over her head, sighing from the quick pain that pierced her mind from the sudden change again.
She looked back up, the Knifal standing determined in front of her, intentive of an order from her.
She grinned with it, giving it a quick nod.
"Alright then," she said, showing off her teeth.
"It's Boontown, or bust, from 'ere,"

Stranger shuffled tiredly on the tree trunk. stretching his legs out from the soar tired muscles irritating him.
Umi shot through the grass, and bent down to his arm, shaking him gently to wake him from his slight-awake state.
"Stranger!" Umi whispered loudly in his ear.
He growled a sleepy grumble, turning away from her.
She growled sterssfully, jumping over his stomach, and hunched down to his face.
"Stranger!" she told loudly.
He snorted, fluttering his eyes tiredly.
"What is it?" he tried sounding alert, sliding up the trunk on his back.
"C'mon! It's time to leave, 'fore the Hunters come out fer breakfast!" she told urgently.
Stranger grumbled.
"Honey, it's early in the mornin'. Rather not worry 'bout leavin' when I'm tired," he pinched the rim of his hat, and placed it over his eyes, shading from the warming sun.
Umi stood up over him, placing her hands on her hips.
"Fine...But I won't be 'ere when the Ezums stampede from the Hunters," she grinned, knowing what she said would soon bring him to his senses.
He cocked his head up, a grieving scowl looked at her first, then groaned.
"A'ight, kid..." he stretched his arms up over his head.
"You win..."
Her manipulation skills were getting better, sooner, she'd become quick to think by Stranger when he was asleep, or busy from something unimportant.
He brushed off the wet drops of dew on his poncho and arms, straightening his hat and dressing, and stamped out the rest of the living embers crackling within the fire.
"Ok, kid," he slipped his fingers over the brim of his hat.
"Let's git movin' from the hell hole,"
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PERILOUS JOURNEY
The journey to Boontown (cont.)

They followed west passed their campout, both keeping pace to not tire themselves out.
Ezums roamed more densely, as the morning heated up to their cold-blooded hides.
Umi looked over her shoulder, smiling confidentally at the Knifal, standing upon the tree branches, its eyes locked on her, with a glitter of readiness.
She nodded to it, following back with Stranger.
The Knifal snorted away from their path, gazing ahead, among the quiet field, the Ezums groaning contently.
Its eyes scanned the grasses flowing gently in a repeating pattern against the cool breeze.
A distressed groan flurried up over the grass.
The Knifal's eyes locked on the Ezum that snorted, its head snapped up, and mouth open.
It snapped to the violent, swift rustling passing through, ignoring the brushing of the Ezums' legs, and the terrified groans they cawed loudly.
Three large snouts popped over the grass, glaring ahead to the wanderes taking leave from the tree.
The Knifal's eyes widened, and spun around to the human, quickly transferring a heat to catch the human's attention.
The heat sprung on her arm, almost spinning her around.
She stopped, and turned to the Knifal.
Its head pointed distressed, oppositely of the tree.
She tried looking out further, but nodded up to the Knifal, and turned back to Stranger, urgent eyes locked on his back.
"Uh...I think we'd better move faster," Umi sped up, wringing an arm around his elbow, and forcing him faster ahead.
The Knifal darted back to the place where the Hunters surfaced, only to see their snouts submerge back in to the grass.
Their eyes glimmered of a scheme being plotted, leaving the Knifal in a nervous wreck.
It watched the Hunters, they purposely tackling themselves in to the Ezums' legs.
The Ezum's head popped up, its mouth wide open, and teetering uneasily by the Hunters squawking intimidatingly to it.
The Ezum stamped, as the Hunters began to snap at its heels.
It nervously snorted, beginning to rush away from the Hunters, and letting out a distressed bellow to the others.
The Knifal watched, as all the Ezums' heads popped up, staring at the sprinting Ezum fleeing from the Hunters.
They saw the swift rustling of the Hunters approach them, and whipped their heads forward, forcing an alarming roar out to their kind further ahead, and followed along with the fleeing Ezum.
It snapped back ahead, the other Ezums' head popping up immediately.
As the runners passed them, they joined in with the rush, creating a sudden quake of a stampede.
The Knifal grunted in disbelief, the Hunters' machination actually working.
It darted ahead to Umi, not knowing of the brewing stampede just bound to come right to them.
It leaped off the tree, and carefully followed along with the stampede forming greater, as the Ezums grew oblivious to the forwarding calls.
-**-
Stranger stopped immediately, staring at the Ezums' heads popping up urgently.
They bellowed a fearful cry ahead, running forward by the smaller beings.
"What in odd's name-"
He spun around, feeling the earth quake below his feet.
A cloud of dust and mud formed over the grass, ahead of it, a mass of Ezums fleeing away.
His mouth dropped open.
Umi stared at him, then turned to where he looked.
The trail of pressed grass revealed the top of the dust cloud, then immediately felt the ground tremble.
"W-what's goin' on?" Umi asked quiverly.
"No way..." he shook his head.
They stood there, each second passing, the Ezum herd crawling closer.
"Stranger!" Umi shouted nervously, tugging at his arm.
"What is going on!?"
"STAMPEDE!" he roared, snatching Umi's arm tightly, and quickly ran away.
Umi, being dragged behind him, drove her legs her best to not trip down from the wrapping grass cutting her down.
But even at a full sprint, Stranger couldn't beat the speed of the Ezums.
After moments of the heart-pounding chase, Stranger was overrun by Ezums at his every side.
The Ezums splitted from the smaller beings fleeing as well, but blocking their way ahead with them cutting in front.
But what made the entire populace more urgent to escape, was the piercing shriek that flurried just behind them.
Three of them.
Stranger growled hatefully.
"Hunters! They started 'dis!" Stranger roared.
He snapped over his shoulder, the triplets hissing right behind them, while stirring up the brewing stampede by snapping at the Ezums' ankles.
"Odd-damn bastards..." he growled.
But even though the stampede would slow them down, the Hunters were running at full pace, their mouths wide open, with their extra mandibles hanging down threateningly.
Running would do them no godd if they continued like this.
Something had to be done, quick.
Stranger gazed upon the Ezums right next to him, them not paying any attention to him, but staring straight ahead.
His lips curled down skeptically, but it would probably save their life.
"Hold tight, Umi!" Stranger yelled, moving closer to the Ezum.
He held up an arm over its neck, bringing Umi closer to his hip.
He slung his arm over the back of its neck, and swumg around in front of it.
He lifted a leg over its shoulder blades, and scooted up on its back, securing Umi right behind him.
She hugged tightly around his stomach, burrying her face in his back.
The Ezum groaned of the new weight sitting upon its back, but continued to run and not bother to wrangle with it.
Its back was wide to ride on, but very sharp, its scales poking up with its spine.
It wasn't simple like riding on horse-back to Umi, but nearly similar.
The Hunters gathered around the Ezum's sides, two going left and right, and the last going in front.
Umi stared down at the Hunters hissing ominously, their mandibles hanging low.
She quivered fearfully, looking away from the Hunter, and next to the Ezum right next to them.
She heard the Ezum groan painfully, feeling its pace lack down quickly.
The weight of her and Stranger was too much for the Ezum to handle, which would cause it to slow down greatly.
Her idea was foiling, but the hardest part was to announce it to Stranger.
She knew what the answer was going to be, but it would probably help them greatly if she brought it up, quick.
"Stranger!" she shouted.
"Our weight combined is too much for it! Both of us should take our own, for our own sake!"
"Are you out of yer mind!?" Stranger bellowed.
"I ain't separatin' from yeh!"
"But we're tiring out the Ezum! If we do that, the Hunters'll get us!"
Stranger kept silent, staring at the Ezum's eyes.
It flapped its eyelids tiredly, its tongue peeping out from under its lip.
He groaned ruefully, glancing back to Umi.
"Fine!" he shouted, slowly rising off its shoulders.
He placed his hand on its head, keeping balance while staring over to the Ezum of choice.
He crouched slightly, then leaped off the Ezum's back. He landed upon the second Ezum's back, almost losing balance with his leg wrapped around its belly.
It snorted irritant, shaking its head of the being holding a hand on its neck.
"Keep together!" Stranger shouted to Umi.
The persue continued, the Hunters still going along with the human's Ezum.
They began to pressure the Ezum, flashing intimidating glares in to its eyes.
It snorted off their glare, but it wouldn't last for long.
One of the triplets accelerated forward, keeping a glowering red eye stuck on the Ezum's face.
Umi watched the Hunter, initiating its plan in an awkward way.
It suddenly stopped, jumping around, and showing off its mouthful of teeth, shaking its mandibles violently.
The Ezum bellowed, uphelding its back straight up, skidding to a stop from the Hunter.
Umi's ring around the Ezum's neck slid off quickly, knocking her down within the mass of the stampede.
Her Ezum took different directions, flooding in to the hoard of Ezums away from her sight.
The Hunters, however, stood there within a pack, all three of their eyes locked on her fearing eyes.
She began to scramble in to the stampede, the Ezums leaping over the body scooting in their path.
The Hunters closed in on the human, their arms up, and their jaws down.
So...this is how it's gonna end
The Hunters boxed her in, beginning to run closer to the human.
She lifted her arms over her head, awaiting the stinging feeling of death take over.
A brush of wind passed in front of her, feeling the cool shadow of a tall figure overshadow her.
The Knifal stood in front of the human, its eyes a deep scarlet, locked upon the Hunter ahead of it.
The Hunters stopped in their tracks, gagging from their breathing being cut off of the choke hold the Knifal had on them.
Its eyes closed, and its rage built up.
The Hunters levitated off the ground, hovering high above the stampede.
Its eyes tightened, then suddenly shot open, a quick golden flash pierced upon its eyes.
The Hunters were thrown out among the fields, scattering them within the rush of Ezums.
That would give them some time to escape.
The Knifal ignored the pounding in its head, and shook off the dizziness lingering.
It turned its back to Umi, staring at her, and darting its snout upon its back.
She nodded, grabbing ahold of its shoulders, and wrapping her arms around its neck.
She placed her legs easily on its hips, then nodded to it that she was secure.
The Knifal snorted, staring ahead to the flat top mountain border.
It seemed miles away, veiled within the fog of dust clouding over the sun.
Hold tight
Umi nodded, pressing her forehead on its neck, its scales pressed down to not poke her uncomfortably.
Its legs tensed, kneeling down to a running poise.
Its nostrils flared, suddenly taking off to such a great speed, it compared Ezums to sloths.
Catching up to the Steef was its main plan that would save the human's life, rather than its.
But it wouldn't be a sacrifice.
It would be an honor.
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Oh wow. So much action and so well written I was practically there! Was like I was riding an Ezum right next to Stranger and Umi, all the jogging around and the dust irritating the eyes. Fantasitc, wonderful work as always Darky.
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The Knifal snorted irritatingly, the Ezums slowing it down from seeking out the Steef that the human belonged to.
It ducked under the Ezums' legs, creating a pattern, as it weaved through the stampede one at a time.
But just as things seemed to get better, three furious roars bellowed right behind it.
The Hunters were regrouped, and now on to persue the Knifal for revenge.
It grunted, its eyes flashing a bright red, then darted back forward.
The Knifal took the Hunters' challenge, beginning to make it a challenge to get to it, by weaving more furiously through and under.
The Hunters squawked, but hunched down their bodies straight, to slide through the pattern it created.
Its plot was running out.
The only thing it could do was return the human to the Steef, and take out the Hunters, permanently.
Its head fell wearily. a pounding pain rattling in its head.
But it perked its head up, concentrating hard ahead to not keep from passing out.
Umi shot her head up over the Knifal's head, suddenly blinking at the figure riding high upon the Ezum's shoulders.
"There he is!" Umi shot an arm right by the Knifal's eye.
It looked over diagonal to the sitting body upon the Ezum.
Right
It took a hard right under the Ezums, avoiding from tripping it, as it passed under.
When you are safely reunited, you must ride to the border. Do not stop for anything. I shall take off the Hunters for you
The Knifal began to decrease its speed, slowly coming by the Ezum the Steef sat upon.
It grunted loudly, sending a quick hot flash to the stranger.
Stranger spun down to it, a bewildered look suddenly came across.
"Stranger!" Umi called, holding out both her arms.
He quickly snapped to attention, reaching out under her arms, and hoisting her upon his lap.
The Knifal nodded to him, suddenly decelerating back from their Ezum.
Umi watched back to the Knifal, wondering why it had suddenly fell back so quickly.
Stranger hugged tightly around her stomach, securing her near his chest.
"Tell me we'll ne'er do that again!" Stranger shouted over the rush.
"You bet!" Umi panted.
The three hisses came back again, and the Hunters accelerated up with the ridden Ezum, baring their jaws scornfully at the human.
They became tricky and forceful, ramming themselves in to the Ezum's leg to knock it off course, or to scare it, and drop both off.
Stranger took hold of the Ezum's neck, pulling it back with the flow of raging Ezums.
"Clever bastards..." he griped, glancing quickly down at all three the Hunters, sounding to be chuckling in their demise.
"We're almost there!" Umi shot out an arm.
The foothills of the border were coming in to view, rolling up to the rocky flat-top mountain.
But another unexpected occurance came upon them, just when things seemed to get worse.
The Ezum groaned, both suddenly feeling the decrease in speed of the Ezum.
Umi stared at the Ezum, its mouth open, loping its tongue out with heavy pants.
"It's fatigued! We'll never make it in time now!"
The Hunters chirped at the sudden remark, taking advantage of the Ezum's condition at best.
Violent they got, leaping upon the Ezum's leg, and digging their loose claw on their foot, in to the Ezum's rugged skin.
The Ezum roared infuriatingly, carrying its hurt leg behind it.
Its wounded leg caught behind its running foot, causing it to trip down on to its belly.
Stranger jumped off the hurt Ezum, spinning around to the three Hunters taking off passed it.
He sprinted away, holding Umi still in one arm.
Knowing that the Hunters' speed was greater than his, it was the only thing he could do to get to the border now.
He squinted up ahead, seeing the Ezums split away from the foothills blocking their way.
A golden light felt like it was hitting him with a blessing.
But while the Hunters persued, it wouldn't be an omen if they didn't make it.
The Knifal reappeared by Stranger, glancing at Umi, but keeping constant eye contact with the triplets behind.
She blinked at it, seeing it nod to her finally, and suddenly stop behind them.
Umi frowned at the Knifal, blinking back ahead to the splitting herd.
What are you gonna do, Knifal? she asked herself.

Its eyes closed gently, feeling a powerful surge send it from concentration, and in to dizziness.
The Knifal shook its head, the pounding of its head growing powerful.
Just one final attack...please...
Its mind grew solemn, still a pinch of dizziness affecting it.
Its focus concentrated directly on the triplet Hunters, it suddenly levitating off the ground.
The Hunters skidded to a stop, staring at the Knifal, as it rose higher above them.
Its body glowed a silvery aura, fascinating the Hunters, and paralyzing them in awe.
But, the Knifal's eyes reopened, glowing a deep purple pulsating painfully in to its skull.
Its glowing body grew brighter, the Hunters feeling themselves freeze all of a sudden.
They squealed in pain, feeling their ribs cave in on their stomach.
The Knifal felt itself fall in to an eternal darkness, feeling itself grow weak.
But it fought back the darkness its mind almost fell in to, crossing its arms over its face.
Its eyes closed again, tweaking its mind in to using its final attack, so it could be sent in to submission.
It snapped its eyes open, falshing a quick white, and opened its arms out behind it.
A pulse flew across the field to the Hunters, rolling them far out back to the swamps where they first spawned from.
The Knifal's eyes grew black, falling limp back on the ground, and not reemerging from the fields it sought to defend.

Stranger jumped on to the first slope of the foothills, not looking back to see if the Hunters were still chasing him.
He grappled tightly on the rocks, scrambling frantically up the mountain.
He slowed down, as they reached the top, panting tiredly, and crawling over the ridge to lay flat on his back.
Umi crawled on her knees passed Stranger, panting down under her arms, and blinking disbelievingly.
Had the Knifal done something she'd regret?
The look it gave her almost seemed at if it was final, going to do something suicidal.
She regained most of her energy to stand upon the ridge, looking over the fields, slowly coming back calmly.
The Ezums spreaded out from the recent event, feeling their insecurity deminish with the Hunters that had mysteriously vanished.
And so did the Knifal.
Even scanning the fields again, she could find a trace of the Knifal beneath the tall grass.
She knew it wasn't like it to suddenly disappear without seeing if they had gotten to the mountain border safely.
But whatever that had made the Knifal disappear, she felt it wasn't going to come see her, probably not ever.
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Gah, I really should try and read all of this. I've read the first few chapters but never got that far, even though this is a really good fic from what I've read. Note to self: Must read this story eventually.
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Oh! Howdy, and welcome, Munch's Master!
Glad you like's it! I'm actually revamping the entire story.
What you've read from the first part to like...Boilz Booty is part of the changed part.
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As much tired as they were, they had to continue on to their next desination.
They rested upon the ridge of the flat-top mountains, gazing upon the calmer Chixapox field.
Umi, however, rested fully on her back, ignoring the extreme uncomfyness of the rocks ridging her spine and neck.
She was too tired to experiance the pain, let alone to even move from it.
Her eyelids dropped heavily on her eyes, falling lost in to translation.
The sun burnt a hot orange in to the lavender evening sky, creating a pattern of mesmorizing colors that hypnotized him in to looking at it.
Stranger laid his legs flat out, while propping himself up by his arms, staring out beyond the jagged peaks, where the sun was hiding its bright face.
His fur went against the sunlight, changing in to a rich light brown down his jaw, and hidden under the brim of his hat.
He gazed back down to the Ezums, calmly grazing their meal for the night, and settling down easily from the recent event started up.
The Ezums didn't act worrysome no more.
In fact, they showed triumph, proud, and grateful.
They saw what the Knifal had done, to sacrifice itself, to rid of the Hunters that preyed on them at night, keeping them uptight and nervous around the fields.
But since the Hunters scurried away, the Ezums could finally rest in peace, and so would the Knifal, which would be dearly kept in remembrance.
Stranger smiled to himself, scratching his jaw, and turning his head over to Umi.
He crawled quietly over to her, sitting beside her shoulder, and placing a hand gently on her forehead.
"Tired..." she mumbled.
"I know," he purred.
"I am, too..."
He gazed back out to the peaks again, his lips falling down to a slight frown.
"But, we's still got'a, move on,"
Umi groaned, opening an eye to him.
"Why today?" she mumbled.
"Why not tomorrow?"
He shrugged.
"I...can't, guarantee the Hunters're gonna be, gone tonight," he told.
"They might just, stroll on out ter the fields, 'n, figure a way up to us,"
Her brow raised skeptically.
"'ey," he said.
"They might act stupid, but they're, really a bright bunch o' pecker heads,"
She scoffed, placing her hands on her head, and stretching widely out.
"How far is it?" she asked, while yawning.
He looked back behind him, the road they prepared to walk on a wide, dusty, and rocky trail out to nothing.
"I...dunno," he admitted, turning back down to her.
She sighed, slightly closing her eyes again.
"I don't think I have the energy to walk, if it's far away..."
"Then I can carry you," Stranger said.
She chuckled softly.
"Don't even bother with my extra weight," she said.
"It'll only make you tired along wiht me,"
"Oh really?" he grinned.
"You think a small-fry like yeh can, weigh down ol' Stranger in 'is boots?"
"Who you callin' small-fry?" she tiredly told.
Stranger chuckled, moving overhead of her, and slowly moving down.
She felt his presense come closer to her face, suddenly springing awake.
Her arms flung around his hat, tightly hugging it to her chest, and rolled away from his face.
Stranger held still, grinning at her cunning to take his prized posession.
"A'ight, kid," he smiled.
"Gimme my hat back,"
His hand unrolled out by her shoulder.
Her head turned to him, she smiling under her heavy eyes.
"Eh...no,"
"C'mon, Umi," he told.
"I know you long 'nuff that I know yer weak spots,"
Umi only shook her head, hugging his hat even tighter to make him avoid capturing it.
"Oh...ok," he got on his knees.
"That's how you wanna play, 'ey?"
His fingers wrenched under her arms, attempting to pry her arms apart.
Her muscles flared, pushing against Stranger's force to open her arms.
He grunted in impressment, opening her arms partly to see the peak of his hat.
Her strength was incredible, but it was no match to a fully-grown Steef's.
"Damn..." he grunted.
"You's, a lot stronger than when I first met you,"
He chuckled, pinching his hat, and slipped it from under her arms.
"but...you's can't compare to me," he chuckled, placing his hat perfectly back on his head.
"Nice try, you lil'-"
Umi jumped him, the force knocking him flat on his back.
Her arms spread out upon his, locking him down with her frail body.
Stranger only smiled craftily.
"You...have a lot'a guts...ter do somethin', like this, my child,"
He slapped his arms together, locking Umi's hands between his arms, and rolled on to her back, now spreading her arms out under him large palms, and tucking his legs upon hers.
She writhed under his weight under her legs, wiggling her legs free.
She tucked her legs tightly near her chest, and sprung her muscles under his belly.
Her legs lifted him off over her, and throwing him down on his back.
He grunted, immediately snapping his head up to her.
She was already stood up, and ready to do another attack.
She jumped to him, her arms and legs out over him.
His arms snapped up, catching her under the arms in a perfect glide poise over him.
She snorted ruefully, her extremitites dropping limp by his arms.
He frowned at her, disappointed of her suddenly attacks on him.
"I...think yer done..." he said, and dropped her on the ground.
He stood up, wiping off the dust that covered his jade-green tank top.
Umi spat on the ground from the dirt that stuck to her tongue, suddenly feeling the brush of Stranger's shadow eclipse the sun.
"Well, I can say..." he placed his hands under her arms, and lifted her on her feet.
"Yer, combat skill've, improved,"
Umi nodded at his slight extol, patting off the light-brown dirt that covered her knees and back.
Stranger glanced back out to the teeth of the mountain peaks once more, the sun now appearing shattered below its bright scarlet-orange face.
He slipped his fingers over the brim of his hat, and turned back down to Umi.
"Best we, get movin', 'fore nighttime delays us more,"
He turned out to the rocky road, treading forward through the sharp rocks cutting at his boots.
Umi took a step forward to follow him, when a cool brush of crisp air whipped gently across her arm, turning her around immediately.
She stared out to the peaceful fields, the wind she felt vanished.
But she still held still, now staring at a spiral of white wind, winding around a forming body inside the vortex.
Umi blinked cautiously at this unexpected omen, feeling a familiar presense stand just in front of her, within that spiral.
The head formed first, Umi suddenly realizing what the wind was winding around.
A faint copy of the Knifal's body formed in the cyclone, its bright mystic eyes locked upon her.
Its spirit returned, only in the form of a white wind.
Her lips forcefully curled in to a joyous, tearful smile, tears springing to her eyes.
Its spirit bowed respectfully to her, its eyes not moving from her face.
Her mouth opened, but the words choked in her throat.
"Thank...you," she quivered.
"...for everything,"
The Knifal blinked at her, a smile creeping upon its mouth at the human's grateful reply.
It bowed its head once more, and the white wind spiraled around it, taking away its body first.
Its eyes reopened to her, gently staring at her, before its was engulfed back in to the white mist.
The wind winded around once more, then took off from the Knifal's stand, gently brushing across her face before departing away in to the sun.
Its spirit had returned, only to check on the human before they took off.
The pressure contained in her chest depleted, staring back upon the allayed field once more.
Without the Hunters to ever bother the Ezums again, the Knifal could rest in peace.
The Ezums trilled happily for the Knifal's reappearance upon the mountain ridge, their savior.
Umi nodded to herself once more, then spun around to Stranger, running to catch pace with him.
Even though the Knifal was gone, it would always watch over her high above, until death would do part to her, and from this strange world she stood upon.
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Awwwwwww, the Knifal is sho shweet! Great part matie, and I loved the Umi and Stranger tussel, very amusin'. I'll try, try mind you, anyway, I'll try to get something up...even if the writer's block kills me!
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Oh yeah? Well, prepare for some fluffiness, comin' soon to this part.
Get yer Kleenex handy, Lobo.

BANDITS, THIEVES, AND OUTLAWS
The notorious Boontown


Light became a crucial source to Umi and her terrible nightvision.
The sun was set, and only the pitch black sky held high above, not even the moon showing itself yet.
She held out her arms, hoping to feel something that she could touch, and that would rail her back to Stranger.
He, however, held far ahead, his neon-green eyes beaming around the rocky path, and avoiding the tripstones that Umi had to endure.
Luckily for him, his nightvision was almost perfect, which left Umi in the dust.
He slowed his pace, sticking his head up in the air, a waft of musty air swirling around his head.
His nostrils engulfed the smokey smell, wafting down on his tongue nastily.
He snorted, wiping his nose down from the smokey air, and continued forward.
His eyes caught a golden light streaming down below the jagged rocks, almost making it invisible with the smog that spiraled overhead.
He hummed interested, moving faster ahead towards the faint glinting light.
Umi grunted over the tripstones taking over her feet and making her hobble around near to the ground.
"Stranger?" she called.
"I can't see. Where are you?"
His ears flicked up, and spun around to her.
Oh, I almost fergot's 'bout you...
He held out a hand towards her, slightly wandering off his course.
"Over 'ere," he said, taking a few steps back to try and reach for her arm.
She followed immediately to his voice, almost passing his open hand.
He wrapped his fingers around her arm, pulling her gently up behind him, and headed forward to the slight golden aura.
As they moved forward, the air tasted dirtier, and the smell became smogier.
Stranger had a growing idea of what they were heading to, almost a city-like atmosphere.
He quickened his pace, holding his hand tighter around Umi's arm, while tugging her behind him.
She jumped around the rocks she kicked in to, grunting loudly at Stranger's impatients.
"Hey, Stranger!" she growled.
"Ever though that I don't have good sight like you do?"
Stranger ignored her, now running up to the ridge of where the golden light spiked out.
He stopped immediately, pulling Umi beside him, and staring down at a deep gorge that cut down in to the flat-top mountain.
Umi blinked disbelievingly up to him, but snapped down to the visible light she could see.
The smog parted over the gorge, waving up to the sparkling night sky.
Below the gorge revealed a run-down, shanty-type town; many buildings leaning awkward angles upon their last rotted wooden planks.
Many various speckles of creatures inhabited the small town.
What Stranger thought to be more...glorious, suddenly tramped upon his thoughts.
They made it.
They had finally found the notorious Boontown.


The sky exploded in to many stars when they finally reached the very outskirts of Boontown, making their way in to.
Drunken bustlers hung wearily by old bent-down bars and Saloons, theire heavy heads holding up to the newcomers moseying in to their territory.
Species that even Stranger didn't know of wandered in small groups around the ghostly, yet threatening town.
Umi glanced just briefly at familiar creatures she sweared to see somewhere; their long green-tassled mouths moving with their speech, and their red-orange devious eyes locked on to the passing newbies ignoring their stare.
Green-skinned, human-like figures hung around the dark alleyways, between unstable buildings leaning ominously over their heads, snapping their heads in attention of the passing presenses that gave off a tense force.
As Stranger's head gave tense stares back to the industrialites, Umi fell closer to his hand, her arms holding shakily to his.
"Stranger..." she quivered.
"I don't...I don't like this place,"
As much as she was a city person, the creatures around didn't make the atmosphere her ideal feeling.
"Stay close," Stranger told quietly.
"Places like these can be, the most dangerous to a person like you,"
The town walked an endless path down between the broken homes, many weaker industrialites taking shelter within hotel Saloons from the evils of night.
Junkies and sellers wandered the dark alleyways, holding their hands deep down in their Burely trenchcoats, watching through their glowering eyes for a helpless prey to mosey by their turf.
Just as they passed by two rickety bars, one jumped out to them, the human-like figure.
Stranger halted immediately, its arms wide open, opening its coat to large pockets inside, various packages stuffed deep down under its arms.
"Wanna buy some Meech munchies? Paramite pies, hell, or even Fuzzle pies?" it spoke in a hazey tone masking its high-pitched voice.
Its eyes were blood-shot drugged, staring heavily at the larger of the couple.
Stranger growled defensively, his hair standing up on his arms.
"Git lost," he grunted, turning Umi in front of him, and moving forward away from it.
The seller's lip quivered disappointedly, beginning to follow slowly behind them.
"What?" it called to him in a sincere gangster tone.
"You don't like my merchendise?"
Stranger sneered back to the seller.
"I said beat it, vermin,"
The seller sneered back, offended by the stranger's ignorant self.
Its arm extended out to his shoulder, grappling tightly around.
"Yo, buddy!" its tone got louder and meaner.
"I asked you a question, and it'd be nice to get an answer!"
Stranger wiped off its hand, moving foward with a heinous sneer ahead.
The seller clenched its teeth tighty, grinding against anger of the stranger, shuffling a hand deep in to its pocket.
"I said I asked you a question, you shmuck!"
A loud click popped in its coat.
It whipped out a silvery-grey pistol out to the ignorant wanderer, its eyes burning furiously.
Stranger's ears flicked at the audible click within the Mudokon's coat pocket, and spun to it slowly, an ominous face scrunched to it.
His bow unlocked at the Mudokon's challenge, placed upon the dual-launchers, Rabid Fuzzles and Super Stingbees.
He moved a wandering arm back to Umi, keeping her close behind him, while he held out his arm to the seller.
Stranger's face darkened under the shadow of his hat, his appearance veiling more ominous to the Mudokon with his gleaming eyes and fiercsome baring teeth.
The Mudokon was unaffected by the stranger's darkened face.
"I ain't gonna tell yer again..." Stranger spoke so low, it vibrated in the seller's pint-sized ears.
"Leave,"
The Mudokon's arm began to quiver from the stranger's deep tone, sweat dribbling down its grey-green skin, but kept a rock-hard determined stare upon the stranger.
But it wasn't appearing determined to Stranger with its quivering arm holding the pistol.
Its hand shook the pistol loosely out of its hands, dropping on to the black dirt, along with itself.
"Ok..." it raised its paws to him.
"You win..."
Stranger lowered his arm at the pitiful expense of the seller, and scraped its gun to him by his boot.
He plucked it off the ground, inspecting it up from the rusted tip of the barrel, all the way back down to the bumpy ridges of the butt.
He sneered rashly at the Mudokon, taking his other hand upon the butt of the pistol, and snapping the pistol in to two.
He threw down the pistol in front of the Mudokon, it staring heart-broken at its only weapon that was in two pieces.
Stranger tipped his hat sarcastically at the seller, taking a step back.
"Pleasure doin' business with yer,"
He spun around to Umi, wrapping an arm around her shoulders, and walked back down through the town, ignoring the seller's distraughted self.

As he watched the stranger walk away from him, a cruel grin crept along his chapped lips.
An evil chuckle wafted in his voice.
"There's gonna be some hell to pay tonight, punk," he spat to himself, standing up, and merging back in to the dark alleys of Boontown.
He followed the system of paths behind the shanty homes, stopping halfway down back between the town, and stepping to a huddle of three more Mudokons, leaning against the creaking planks, twittling toothpicks between their misshapen teeth.
The seller approached a taller figure, hidden under the brim of its round-cap hat.
"A pair of newcomer punks turned me down, boss,"
The Mudokon leader plucked his toothpcik from its mouth, and flicked it on to the dusty ground.
"Really," he said apathetically, his voice hazy and deep in an italian slang.
His hat tipped up from over its dark eyes, staring down at the seller's seldom tone.
"Yeah. That furry punk snapped my pistol in to two. These guys mean business, Ken,"
The leader chuckled dryly.
"Well then," he said in a sincere tone, slipping his hands in to his side pockets.
"'Dis town ain't big enough for two punks,"
The seller's eyes grew bright of a machination.
"We's gonna do it?"
Ken nodded his head.
"Yeah..." he nodded, merging in to the dark crooked shadows behind the town.
"We's gonna do it..."
A crackly laugh came out last, "Tonight,"
The crooks laughed as well, as they followed along with their devious plot.
Something devilish filled the air, waving above the only two whom wandered the street, at this very moment.
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Hoo-aw! This is a long one!
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BANDITS, THIEVES, AND OUTLAWS
The notorious Boontown


Light became a crucial source to Umi and her terrible nightvision.
The sun was set, and only the pitch black sky held high above, not even the moon showing itself yet.
She held out her arms, hoping to feel something that she could touch, and that would rail her back to Stranger.
He, however, held far ahead, his neon-green eyes beaming around the rocky path, and avoiding the tripstones that Umi had to endure.
Luckily for him, his nightvision was almost perfect, which left Umi in the dust.
He slowed his pace, sticking his head up in the air, a waft of musty air swirling around his head.
His nostrils engulfed the smokey smell, wafting down on his tongue nastily.
He snorted, wiping his nose down from the smokey air, and continued forward.
His eyes caught a golden light streaming down below the jagged rocks, almost making it invisible with the smog that spiraled overhead.
He hummed interested, moving faster ahead towards the faint glinting light.
Umi grunted over the tripstones taking over her feet and making her hobble around near to the ground.
"Stranger?" she called.
"I can't see. Where are you?"
His ears flicked up, and spun around to her.
Oh, I almost fergot's 'bout you...
He held out a hand towards her, slightly wandering off his course.
"Over 'ere," he said, taking a few steps back to try and reach for her arm.
She followed immediately to his voice, almost passing his open hand.
He wrapped his fingers around her arm, pulling her gently up behind him, and headed forward to the slight golden aura.
As they moved forward, the air tasted dirtier, and the smell became smogier.
Stranger had a growing idea of what they were heading to, almost a city-like atmosphere.
He quickened his pace, holding his hand tighter around Umi's arm, while tugging her behind him.
She jumped around the rocks she kicked in to, grunting loudly at Stranger's impatients.
"Hey, Stranger!" she growled.
"Ever though that I don't have good sight like you do?"
Stranger ignored her, now running up to the ridge of where the golden light spiked out.
He stopped immediately, pulling Umi beside him, and staring down at a deep gorge that cut down in to the flat-top mountain.
Umi blinked disbelievingly up to him, but snapped down to the visible light she could see.
The smog parted over the gorge, waving up to the sparkling night sky.
Below the gorge revealed a run-down, shanty-type town; many buildings leaning awkward angles upon their last rotted wooden planks.
Many various speckles of creatures inhabited the small town.
What Stranger thought to be more...glorious, suddenly tramped upon his thoughts.
They made it.
They had finally found the notorious Boontown.


The sky exploded in to many stars when they finally reached the very outskirts of Boontown, making their way in to.
Drunken bustlers hung wearily by old bent-down bars and Saloons, theire heavy heads holding up to the newcomers moseying in to their territory.
Species that even Stranger didn't know of wandered in small groups around the ghostly, yet threatening town.
Umi glanced just briefly at familiar creatures she sweared to see somewhere; their long green-tassled mouths moving with their speech, and their red-orange devious eyes locked on to the passing newbies ignoring their stare.
Green-skinned, human-like figures hung around the dark alleyways, between unstable buildings leaning ominously over their heads, snapping their heads in attention of the passing presenses that gave off a tense force.
As Stranger's head gave tense stares back to the industrialites, Umi fell closer to his hand, her arms holding shakily to his.
"Stranger..." she quivered.
"I don't...I don't like this place,"
As much as she was a city person, the creatures around didn't make the atmosphere her ideal feeling.
"Stay close," Stranger told quietly.
"Places like these can be, the most dangerous to a person like you,"
The town walked an endless path down between the broken homes, many weaker industrialites taking shelter within hotel Saloons from the evils of night.
Junkies and sellers wandered the dark alleyways, holding their hands deep down in their Burely trenchcoats, watching through their glowering eyes for a helpless prey to mosey by their turf.
Just as they passed by two rickety bars, one jumped out to them, the human-like figure.
Stranger halted immediately, its arms wide open, opening its coat to large pockets inside, various packages stuffed deep down under its arms.
"Wanna buy some Meech munchies? Paramite pies, hell, or even Fuzzle pies?" it spoke in a hazey tone masking its high-pitched voice.
Its eyes were blood-shot drugged, staring heavily at the larger of the couple.
Stranger growled defensively, his hair standing up on his arms.
"Git lost," he grunted, turning Umi in front of him, and moving forward away from it.
The seller's lip quivered disappointedly, beginning to follow slowly behind them.
"What?" it called to him in a sincere gangster tone.
"You don't like my merchendise?"
Stranger sneered back to the seller.
"I said beat it, vermin,"
The seller sneered back, offended by the stranger's ignorant self.
Its arm extended out to his shoulder, grappling tightly around.
"Yo, buddy!" its tone got louder and meaner.
"I asked you a question, and it'd be nice to get an answer!"
Stranger wiped off its hand, moving foward with a heinous sneer ahead.
The seller clenched its teeth tighty, grinding against anger of the stranger, shuffling a hand deep in to its pocket.
"I said I asked you a question, you shmuck!"
A loud click popped in its coat.
It whipped out a silvery-grey pistol out to the ignorant wanderer, its eyes burning furiously.
Stranger's ears flicked at the audible click within the Mudokon's coat pocket, and spun to it slowly, an ominous face scrunched to it.
His bow unlocked at the Mudokon's challenge, placed upon the dual-launchers, Rabid Fuzzles and Super Stingbees.
He moved a wandering arm back to Umi, keeping her close behind him, while he held out his arm to the seller.
Stranger's face darkened under the shadow of his hat, his appearance veiling more ominous to the Mudokon with his gleaming eyes and fiercsome baring teeth.
The Mudokon was unaffected by the stranger's darkened face.
"I ain't gonna tell yer again..." Stranger spoke so low, it vibrated in the seller's pint-sized ears.
"Leave,"
The Mudokon's arm began to quiver from the stranger's deep tone, sweat dribbling down its grey-green skin, but kept a rock-hard determined stare upon the stranger.
But it wasn't appearing determined to Stranger with its quivering arm holding the pistol.
Its hand shook the pistol loosely out of its hands, dropping on to the black dirt, along with itself.
"Ok..." it raised its paws to him.
"You win..."
Stranger lowered his arm at the pitiful expense of the seller, and scraped its gun to him by his boot.
He plucked it off the ground, inspecting it up from the rusted tip of the barrel, all the way back down to the bumpy ridges of the butt.
He sneered rashly at the Mudokon, taking his other hand upon the butt of the pistol, and snapping the pistol in to two.
He threw down the pistol in front of the Mudokon, it staring heart-broken at its only weapon that was in two pieces.
Stranger tipped his hat sarcastically at the seller, taking a step back.
"Pleasure doin' business with yer,"
He spun around to Umi, wrapping an arm around her shoulders, and walked back down through the town, ignoring the seller's distraughted self.

As he watched the stranger walk away from him, a cruel grin crept along his chapped lips.
An evil chuckle wafted in his voice.
"There's gonna be some hell to pay tonight, punk," he spat to himself, standing up, and merging back in to the dark alleys of Boontown.
He followed the system of paths behind the shanty homes, stopping halfway down back between the town, and stepping to a huddle of three more Mudokons, leaning against the creaking planks, twittling toothpicks between their misshapen teeth.
The seller approached a taller figure, hidden under the brim of its round-cap hat.
"A pair of newcomer punks turned me down, boss,"
The Mudokon leader plucked his toothpcik from its mouth, and flicked it on to the dusty ground.
"Really," he said apathetically, his voice hazy and deep in an italian slang.
His hat tipped up from over its dark eyes, staring down at the seller's seldom tone.
"Yeah. That furry punk snapped my pistol in to two. These guys mean business, Ken,"
The leader chuckled dryly.
"Well then," he said in a sincere tone, slipping his hands in to his side pockets.
"'Dis town ain't big enough for two punks,"
The seller's eyes grew bright of a machination.
"We's gonna do it?"
Ken nodded his head.
"Yeah..." he nodded, merging in to the dark crooked shadows behind the town.
"We's gonna do it..."
A crackly laugh came out last, "Tonight,"
The crooks laughed as well, as they followed along with their devious plot.
Something devilish filled the air, waving above the only two whom wandered the street, at this very moment.

Stranger sighed a tense, but irritated note, looking back down to Umi.
"This is the only place, tha' looks decent, Umi," he said, gazing back up to the sign that read the tavern's name, hanging over a moderately fine-looking bar.
Umi blinked up to the sign, blinking to what it actually read in rotted smudged words.
Stranger moved Umi away from the outside, pushing the double swinging doors apart.
Inside was dull, but bright of chatter from various creature's conversations, leaning back in their chairs upon the squeaky floorboards.
Stranger moved cautiously up to a barstool, placing his arms up on the slick bar, and avoiding direct eye contact to all that sat around him.
But next to him, he couldn't bare to just eye it continuously.
Next to him sat a drunken Vykker, its large head bobbing down from the bar, but snapping back up to attention.
One of its back arms seemed to have been chopped off down to its elbow, healed over the bone with wrinkly skin.
He noticed the Vykker was very slender; much more skinnier than when he saw Doc, its ribs popping from its chest.
Stranger diverted from the Vykker, glancing over to the back of an employee, rubbing a white cloth inside a clear-glass mug.
"Yo', 'tender!" he slapped his hand down demanding.
The bartender turned to Stranger.
It looked ruffly the outline of an outlaw minion Shooter, but loked more civilized, and less barbaric.
It trotted up to him, placing the mug right beside its arm.
"Whut's yer pleasure, sir?" it asked in a deep rumbly tone.
"Tall frosty one," Stranger nodded.
"and a pop fer my kid,"
The bartender nodded, spinning around to a mass of knobs and levers taped together at their rusted ends.
It took the glass mug in its clothed hand, and wrung it under a large bent tube, pulling down the lever tenderful.
Amber-brown liquid spurted in to the glass mug, while in its other hand held a tin mug, with a clear bubbly liquid pouring.
It snapped its arm up with the glass mug, and slid it down to the stranger's open hand.
The bartender then walked slowly down to Umi, and placed her mug by her hand.
"Enjoy," it said snicerely, giving them a toothy smile, then walked on to other demanding customers.
Stranger sipped his beverage through the creamy-white foam that floated atop the mug's rim.
He wiped off the foam mustache on his upper lip with his arm, only now to hear the Vykker next to him chuckle.
"I see you...already met the junkies outside," it said, much deeper and hazier than the surgeon.
"Huh?" he grunted, setting down his mug, staring aside to the Vykker astoundedly.
"You may wanna watch out fer them. They did terrible things to people..." it said again, showing off its cut stubby arm.
Stranger blinked more softly to the Vykker, yet feeling defensive over the sudden conversation.
"So I see..."
The Vykker chuckled again.
"They...call themselves the "Mafia"...never heard such a...ridiculous name 'fore..." it nodded, sipping through a rusted can.
"...but, they's dangerous," it slammed down its can, darting back to Stranger.
"They stalk people at night, to see's if they coo', or they must leave. It's their own way of recruiting bastards in to their group on the streets of this...banged-down junkyard,"
Stranger let out an intrigued chuckled, as he sipped his drink once more, and looked slightly to the drunken Vykker.
Umi tugged at his arm.
"I need to go to the bathroom," she whispered.
He nodded affirmatively.
"Jus', be careful. Come right back when you's done," he told, as she wandered off.
The Vykker grinned at his back.
"Your kid?" it asked.
"My daughter," Stranger turned back to the bar.
The Vykker chuckled.
"Doe'n't look like yer kind..."
"Daughter-in-law," he corrected.
"Oh..." it nodded.
"What is it...exactly..." the Vykker inquiried.
"Never seen such a creature before..."
Stranger looked over to the Vykker, his upper lip parting over his teeth suspiciously to it.
"Human..." he said slowly, blinking at the Vykker.
"Human? The hell kind'a creature is that..." it chuckled, shaking its head over its can.
The Vykker felt the silence waft over it, then feeling the stare of the stranger heating on its eyes.
It darted an eye over to him, blinking defensively at him, sitting straight up in its stool.
"You don't have to get all suspicious over me, man," it raised an arm sincerely.
"I ain't gonna do nuthin' to yer kid,"
Stranger scoffed, only turning back to the bar, and lowering his head back to his mug.
Just moments from their dead conversation, a frightened shriek cawed inside the bar.
A female Clakker pointed out to the window, turning back to all the customers inside.
"Oh! Oh, the Mafia's taken someone out'a the outhouse!" it cried.
Stranger spat back his drink, snapping to the window the Clakker pointed at.
That's where Umi was going to was his first immediate thought.
He ran out of the tavern, knocking his mug behind his swayed arm.
The Vykker hobbled from its barstool, following curiously behind him.
Outside in the middle of the broken streets, two Mudokon crooks held the human under the arms, she spitting and fighting furiously against them.
Stranger skidded to a stop in front of the Mudokons, the customers of the tavern and the Vykker huddling far behind him.
His hair frizzled up on his arms, while his teeth gripped tightly.
He bellowed a furious roar.
"Let 'er go! NOW!" he pointed a finger to the Mudokons.
Both of the crooks laughed at his pitiful request, jerking the human along where they planned to move.
Stranger unlocked his bow, placing on the launchers double Boom-bats, fluttering their ears excitedly.
"I said let go!" he demanded again, lifting his arm up, and aimed directly to the crooks.
The Mudokons stared at the stranger's weapon of choice, only to gufaw mocking laughs.
"What'cha gonna do wit' 'dat pea-shooter, Stranger?" they shouted while laughing.
He growled, holding his fire, and rethinking his plot;
If he shot the Boom-bats, it would rid of the crooks, but harm Umi as well, which he indefinitely didn't want.
Just what he thought; another one of his "taker" plans.
He grunted, frantically thinking of what to do to save Umi.
The Vykker placed a calming hand gently on his shoulder, stepping up in front of him with a stern frown to the crooks.
"Let go o' the kid," it said deeply in a dry rough voice.
The crooks immediately snapped to the Vykker, their lips suddenly quivering fearfully.
"S-sure, Al..." they quivered, slipping their arms from under the human's.
"Just...don't do anythin' to us, ya dig?"
She dropped to the ground, immediately kicking off from the crooks, and hiding behind Stranger.
He stepped back up to the Vykker, his scowl more belittling to the Mudokons than the Vykkers.
"Now..." it spoke again.
"Beat it,"
The crooks nodded, and scrambled back behind the domain of dark alleyways, not even showing the white of their eyes.
The taver customers bursted in to applause for the familiar Vykker, it putting its lower arms on its boney hips.
"'nuther save from Al the Vykker,"
Stranger turned to the Vykker with a gracious grin.
"Thanks," he bowed his head.
"I really do owe you one,"
"Nah. I'm the town's negotiator," it shook its head to him.
"'sides," it leaned closer to him secretively.
"I'm known to take out this entire town with my three scrawny arms,"
It stood back straight, giving a shrug.
"but then...I don't like to fight. So I negotiate, talk some sense in to these odd-damn city-folk,"
Stranger nodded, turning down to Umi, shaking frightened behind his leg.
He bent down to her, pressing his flat nose on her forehead affectionately.
"You ain't never leavin' my sight in this hell-hole. Ever," he told close to her face.
He turned back to the Vykker, a confused grin appearing on his lip.
The Vykker only gave a shallow grin, extending a long boney arm to him.
"The name's Al. Al the Vykker,"
Stranger gripped his hand, shaking it aquaintedly with an accepting smile.
Umi got up on her legs, slowly walking out to the Vykker, her face down in shyness.
"Um..." she scratched the back of her neck.
"I...just wanted to say...thanks,"
Al smiled gently to her.
"T'ain't a problem, kid,"
The customers returned back in to the tavern from whence they spawned from, leaving Stranger and Al in the streets alone.
Al turned to the retreating people, then looked back to Stranger.
"We'd better head in, too, 'fore somethin'-"
A loud crack of a gunshot exploded overhead.
Stranger and Al spun around down the street, a horizontal line of the Mafia gang sneering devilishly at both of them.

Ken held up a smoking pistol to the starry night sky.
His eyes frowned unkindly to Stranger, with one arm in his pocket, and the other holding his pistol.
"You punks don't belong in a town like 'dis," he spoke hazily, jeering with his yellow-stained teeth.
"I suggest you leave...now,"
Stranger gazed about the hateful faces of the Mudokon Mafia, immediately spotting the same seller they encountered before, right next the leader, its obvious attitude flourishing it even more.
He gave a quick sneer to it, snapping back to the leader, slowly lowering his arm back to his side.
"Ken," Al stepped up, his voice sincere.
"Don't do 'dis. Leave 'em alone. They're tired 'n hungry,"
"You ain't savin' their asses this time, ol' timer!" Ken pointed a crooked finger to the slender Vykker.
Al gave a determined look back to Stranger, stepping up closer to the crazed Mudokon.
"I've done it before, and I'll do it again," Al growled.
"'sides..." he showed off his stubbled arm.
"I didn't lose this arm fer nothin',"
Ken chuckled deviously.
"So, yer punishment didn't teach yeh a thing, huh? I suppose...another arm'll do you good?" he crumpled a fist.
Al turned his head back to Stranger.
"Take the back alleyways. Head straigh for the mountains outside the gorge. You'll be safe there,"
Stranger shook his head, showing off a feral grin, while unlocking his bow.
"T'ain't a one-man fight," he growled.
"I still owe you fer savin' Umi,"
The Mafia line spreaded in to a curve around Al and Stranger.
Stranger turned back to Umi.
"Umi. You take the back alleyways. Go up ter the mountains, an' wait fer me," he told quietly.
"If I don't return the next morning at sunrise, go on without me,"
She opened her mouth to protest, but Stranger put a finger on her mouth before she could.
He smoothed her hair down her cheek.
"I'm doin' this fer yer own protection, kid. I ain't doin' it 'cause I don't love you," he said in a gentle tone.
Tears began to form in her eyes.
"I...I don't want anything to happen to you," Umi tearfully said.
"I don't want you ter worry 'bout me, at all," he told firmly.
"You go to the top, and don't look back. Rest up there. I promise you, I'll be there," he wiped a thumb across her tears streaming down her face.
She looked up to him slightly.
"Promise?"
Stranger slipped his arms tightly around her back.
"Yeah..." his throat rumbled on her shoulder.
He pulled away from her, staring back at the Mafia grouped around them.
His eyes glared upon them tightly, growling back to his feet.
"Now go," he nearly barked.
Umi scrambled in to the dark alley, leaving Stranger and Al to their fight.
Ken chuckled to Stranger.
"Sacrificing yourself to save another one's petty life? How touching,"
Stranger scowled hatefully.
"Shut up, dirtbag," he growled.
"You wouldn't know anythin' 'bout what I did,"
The Mafia oohed mockingly, Ken laughing loudly back to his gang.
"We's got's a fiesty scoundrel 'ere, boys!" he cackled, turning back to the stranger, his face darkened in an evil glare.
"Taker yer pick on 'em," he spoke devilishly.
"Then let's git down in the dust,"


Umi ran at top speed through the pitch-black alley.
She could hear a battle already stirring up out on the streets, a gargle of menacingly chuckled echoing through the narrow backways.
Ignoring would be the best to her advantage, rather to listen to her instincts.
Tears streamed down her cheeks, as she sprinted tirelessly, watching the scenes of the Mafia pass by through the narrow corridors.
Foothills of the gorge came behind the ending of the town, nearby a crooked tower leaning overhead of her.
She stepped up on the hills, suddenly lunging to the wall of the gorge, and clawing her way up.
Her muscles strained painfully, as she dragged herself up to the flat plateau.
High above the gorge's flat top, Umi stumbled on her knees.
A swift breeze blew upon the grass, and her pounding face, beating a blood-red heat.
Ahead was the dark valley below the long canyon, and the silvery moon behind the jagged mountains covered in a thick veil of clouds, only leaving herself in the midst of darkness.
Strong to moderate breezes pushed against her back, whisping more clouds in to the dark sky.
Umi kept hunched down, tears rolling down her cheeks, as she stared blankly down on the dark grass.
She regretted, with every thought she had of it, the decision of leaving Stranger behind to fend off the Mafia.
She crumbled down with her chest on her legs, her eyes shut tightly.
"Stranger..." she cried in her arms.
"It's not fair..."
A cool wind brushed upon her as a comforting embrace.
"...you had to do this..."
She was alone...no one to comfort her anxiety.
But even though she listened to his command like a daughter should, she respected his decision.
She fell lop-sided on to the grass, keeping her legs in a bundle, while trying to relax herself to rest, even though she couldn't.
But even thoguh she couldn't, she fell straight in to a deep sleep.
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Ack! So sad! Is Stranger gonna be alright? What'll happen to Umi? ...Why does Al the Vykker sound so familiar?

Tune in next time!

Ahem, anyway, just one thing Dakry buddy, you've repeated the last chapter in this one as well.

Fantastic chapter ma friend, and I'm lookin' forward to more. Bring it on!
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Ack! So sad! Is Stranger gonna be alright? What'll happen to Umi? ...Why does Al the Vykker sound so familiar?

Tune in next time!

Ahem, anyway, just one thing Dakry buddy, you've repeated the last chapter in this one as well.

Fantastic chapter ma friend, and I'm lookin' forward to more. Bring it on!

eww-kay...How did I repeat the chapter?
I'm confuddled...
Anyways, it's gonna be fluff-tastic next time! You's gonna love it!
(BTW-.......How long will you be when you post in yer thread? )
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Sowwy fer the short part, but I have to leave fer the night.
I won't be back 'til Sunday, so you guy's 're gonna have ter survive without me.
But...in this part...will Stranger survive?
Read on! And you'll see



During the night, she had to endure the terrible nightmares of last night's events, remembering the thoughts of leaving back Stranger to fight against the terrible outnumbered Mafia gang.
But what was more worse to a nightmare was she waking up to the feeling of a cold wind brushing against her back.
The sun was blanketed with heavy dark-grey smoggy clouds, and the winds blowing the smog in whisps twirls.
The first feeling she got of when she saw the morning like this, that there was a a loss at hand.
But the question was who lost themselves during the evil night?
She slid up on her knees, wrapping her arms around her chest, while gazing ahead down near the valley, it taking in the suffocating smog cutting through.
The wind blew forcefully on her back, but she kept a sturdy sit upon the grass.
She quivered to herself, rubbing up and down gently on her arm, glancing back to where the deep gorge valley of Boontown held on its last hinges, feeling the sense of despare trodden on her mind.
Where Boontown sat on its crusty planks, only a thick veil of fog covering its very crooked essence from the hermetic outside.
Tears sprung to Umi's eyes.
Sunrise was passed, and yet Stranger wasn't found.
"No..." she croaked tearfully.
She crumbled deeply down in to her arms, sobbing uncontrollably.
"I lost another..."
Umi attempted to stand on her feet, only to feel her legs shake under the inevitable truth that she couldn't bare to stand...
Stranger was gone...and there was nothing left there was that she could do to bring him back.
She turned to the flat plateau stretching along the broad canyon-top, taking a step forward only to stumble back down on her knees.
She jerked forcefully from her sobs, closing her eyes tightly to let the tears roll down her cheek freely, and not bother to stay wetly in her eyes.
Her nervous breakdown held her latched on the ground, paralyzing her not to stand up.
She coughed loudly from the irritating smog whipping in to her throat, and tickling with its particulates down her throat.
Not being able to stand up, she clawed in to the ground, and slid on her knees forward and Boontown, which kept a coarsing pain burning in her stomach.
She stopped, hanging her head low near the grass.
"Why couldn't this be a dream?" she cried loudly.
"WHY!?" she raised her fists to the air, screaming through her scratchy hoarse throat.
She slammed her fists back on the grass, falling on to her stomach, while sobbing in to the grass loudly.
It felt too early, for her, to lose someone so close.
Closer than the Master Chief, and all her friends on Earth.
They probably wouldn't go through the fate Stranger had been put to.
Someone that could actually be a good father to let her have, not replace her original, but have a feeling of being loved and not loneliness.
She lay on her belly, keeping her arms around her face burried in the soft grass tickling her skin irritatingly.
Time went by, as she sulked and sobbed her heart out on the canyon plateau, hearing a faint noise come down the gorge wall.
She ignored the noise, thinking that the best of her imagination was getting her started, by actually hearing something that sounded of Stranger.
But as she cried, the noise seemed to get louder.
Her head jerked up slowly, turning back to the gorge's ridge.
A callous cough deeply groaned over.
Umi scrambled on her knees, her heart pounding of sheer excitement and suspense.
She clawed at the ridge, staring down at the slant wall.
Her eyes opened wide in shock.
"My odd," she scarcely said, her throat clogging with tears.
"I'm coming!" she screamed, and began to slide down the hill.
Stranger clawed weakly in to the crumbly hillside, panting tiredly down under his hat.
His extremities all out was bruised and spotted with heavy blood, and his skin was torn and shot under extreme tension.
His leather poncho had deep bullet punctures, almost piercing through to his vital areas.
His eyes shone a deep dark green, wearily rolling up to Umi sliding down to him in a rush.
Stranger's cut lips curled in a relieved smile.
"Umi..." he wheezed, almost losing his balance on his arms.
She slid down by his arm, and hefted it up over her shoulder heavily.
She placed her free arm around his back, and helped him up the slope with a little more ease.
But with Umi and her small body, he was a bit of a challenge to get up.
She slipped at the ridge, sliding Stranger all the way up on to his back.
Tears ran down her cheeks in a steady stream over him, feeling remorse of his deep wounds.
"I'm so sorry. This should've never happened to you...I shouldn't have left you..."
He harshly coughed, the taste of his blood sprinkled on his tongue, while looking over to Umi with weary eyes.
"I'm just...glad...to see you's...not hurt," his voice rashly spoke.
"I was thinkin'...those creeps...had come up 'ere...an', did somethin'...ter you,"
She hushed him urgently.
"Rest. I'll clean you up,"
She whipped off his hat, and forced him to take off his poncho.
His jade-green top was stained violet-red of blood, holes gashed in to his abdomen.
She ripped off his shirt as well over his head, and examined the bullet wounds deep, still seeping warm blood.
"My odd..." she gasped.
"What did those creeps do ter you?"
He held in his cries of pain through his clenched teeth, while she dug down as tenderly as she could be in his wounds, picking off the bullets stuck in his tender stomach.
She wiped off the blood around his wounds, starting back up to his chest, scanning up and down to see the peppered wounds among his body.
"Damn good thing you got up 'ere," she spoke.
"I think you'd be Sleg chow if you'd be climbin' up the gorge any longer,"
Stranger sighed roughly, relaxing his excruciating cries deep in his chest.
"So...what happened last night? Where's Al?" she asked, knowing that talking to him would know that he was still there with her.
Stranger's mouth opened, she hearing a rash choking sound.
She snapped to him, her eyes wide in fright.
"He...h-he..." Stranger spoke, stopping only there.
His eyes widened in fear, his mouth wide open, and his jaw quivering.
"Stranger?" Umi shook him, frightful thoughts speeding through her mind.
Her voice softened his eyes to her, closing his mouth.
He didn't reply, but the memory of Al kept replaying painfully in his mind, making him scarce to words about him...
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"Now go," he nearly barked, turning back to Ken and the gang around him.
He heard the scurry of Umi's footsteps scramble back behind him, and trample off behind the leaning towers.
His bow unlocked in many clicks, holding it down unloaded, but glaring deviously at the ring of Mudokon crooks.
The seller's anxious attitude leaned closer to Ken.
"Should I go's after the kid, boss?" it asked hurridly.
"Nah," Ken held an arm down to it.
"Let it be. We'll go for it when we finish with 'dese kooks,"
Al stepped up, stopping when Ken's devilish eye darted to him.
"Ken," Al spoke sincere.
"Let's not fight now. You know me, and I sure than hell know you,"
He chuckled mockingly.
"It's always your ways, Al," he nodded, then frowned and shook his head.
"Well, not this time...it's goin' my way,"
The half-circle of Mafia closed in with balled fists and baring weapons.
Al looked to Ken once more, his eyes locked on harder.
"Alright," Al said.
"But I'm warnin' you. I ain't no sissy push-over," he gravely finished.
Ken scoffed irritant to the elder Vykker.
"Ya think yer cautions're scarin' me? Ha! Don't make me laugh!" he spat hazily, then his face turned dark.
"and that's gettin' on my nerves...and I don't like, nerve-wreckers,"
He snapped his fingers authoratively, and two Mudokons stepped up near the stranger.
Stranger's body snapped to the approaching crooks, and shot off his round of Fuzzles near their feet.
They took one last step before the Fuzzles leaped on them, and clamped tough on their greenish skin.
They winced at the terrible pain, not helping but to wail out and scramble away from the ring of gang around them.
The heads turned back to the stranger with heinous scowls.
"I'll get 'de tough guy," one squawked.
"Me fer the egg-head," another griped.
They closed in on them, Stranger frantically picking out the next of his ammunition to use.
The circle stopped, chains rattling and knives flipping out.
A Mudokon with a knife between its teeth leaped over to the stranger, crying a warcry between its clamped teeth.
Stranger spun to it, and shot off a Bolamite spider.
The spider slammed in to the chest of the Mudokon, and immediately sprawled a white coat of thick web binding its arms and legs together.
The crook fell back on the ground, grunting from the harsh impact that slammed its back.
Its knife flung out of its teeth, and stuck in to the hard ground before Stranger's boot.
The ring snapped back to attention to the stranger, a flurry of angry growls growing loud.
"Git that over-grown shmuck!"
The ring suddenly snapped, and jumped upon Stranger and Al in one sudden roar.
Stranger bellowed up through the mass of Mafia grown on his back.
His arms separated the crooks off his shoulder, sending them flying backwards in to the crusty cracked wooden planks of the archaic buildings still on their foundation.
Al brawled his three fists off in to the Mudokons quickly approaching him, frontwards and back.
Bodies passed through Ken's devious glare to the Vykker.
His hand deep in his pocket wrapped tightly around an object, as he took forward through the fight round.
As he got closer, his hand slipped out of his pocket, revealing the instrument that would put an end to this brawl.
The shine of the pistol's barrel glimmered in to his eyes, his hand tightly wrapped around the butt of the handgun.
His eyes snapped to a cluster of waiting Mudokons, and nodded to them.
The crooks smirked craftily, and darted back to the back of the Vykker.
They leaped upon his boney back, weighing him down with their slender bodies.
The other Mafia saw their plan in action, and got in to it, hopping upon the Vykker's back.
"Kneel down!" they scowled, more and more of the crooks grabbing his arms, and pulling him down.
Al grunted, his flimsy body shaking from the great weight placed on his spine.
His knees shook, as he felt more of the weight bring him down on his stubby legs.
His knees gave out, he slamming upon his legs, and his head hung low.
The Mudokons went behind him, some still staying on his back, while others binded his arms together behind him.
Ken strode up in front of the down-trodden Vykker, showing off his pistol in front of his eyes.
He grinned devilishly.
"It's about time someone put you out'a yer misery, ol' timer," he spat silently.
Al slowly looked up to Ken's face, his eyes suddenly shaking in fear.
Ken's hand brushed out with the pistol, pressing it to the Vykker's hard head popping in veins.
"and I'll be the executioner to do it,"
Stranger stepped upon the seller's neck, giving the most hated frown at it deepening with every moment he stared in to it's brightly-shaking eyes.
"I should'a killed yeh when I should've," he whispered lowly near its face.
The seller jumbled with words, its eyes hesitating to look off the stranger, and to its boss.
Its eyes broke off with Stranger, staring over to Ken, and gave a gasp of excitement, a scheming smile growing across its face.
Stranger looked as well, feeling his eyes almost ripping out of its sockets.
One of Al's bright purple eyes darted to Stranger, glimmering of a tear forming fearfully to him.
But before he could do anything, a gunshot cracked loudly, stopping his memory immediately.
Then his whole world crumbled down in to one black pool.
His teeth gripped together, then flung his head up in the air.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...."


"...OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!" Stranger roared, his body jerked up from under Umi's arms.
His hands rolled in to a crackling fist so hard, veins popped out from under his skin.
His teeth bared under the dark shadow of his hair falling before his tightly closed eyes.
"You dirty bastards!" he growled.
"I'll kill yeh!" his head flung up to the direction where Boontown was last located.
"I'LL KILL YOU ALL!"
Umi jumped up at first, then slammed down on her knees, and pushed against Stranger's chest.
"No, Stranger, no! Lie down!" she cried.
"You're too weak to do this!"
He ignored the human's plea, his nostrils flaring furiously, and his muscles popping up tensely.
Umi used her shoulder to attempt to bring him back down.
But his strength was too wild to bring him down with her flimsy body.
"Stranger!" she screamed.
"Stop!"
His nerves suddenly snapped, and his arms grew soft again.
He let out an exhausted sigh, and slammed back down on the grass.
Umi panted tearfully, standing up over him, and wiping away her hair from her face.
Stranger's eyes reopened to her tiredly.
"I'm sorry..." he whispered.
"I...didn't mean ter...scare yeh..."
Umi fell upon her knees by his arm, petting it smoothly down with the grain of his fur.
"It's ok..." she said.
"I just want you to rest,"
His arm wrapped around her waist comfortingly, as he closed his eyes gently.
She rested her head on his chest, the faint sound of his heart beating through his hollow chest coming to her ear;
It almost sounded like it had come to a stop, but he breathed deep, and started up again.
She might've not like the sound at all, but it was the only way to know that he was still alive.
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This...is...new...
She traveled through the dark fields, the sky painted a deep grey upon a dark red spurting from the highest ridge of the canyon field.
Heavily-black clouds of thick smoke spewed from high-built stacks created over the ridge, making the sky feel more ominous to its horizon.
Deathful cried pleaded behind her, along with faint gunshots and rattles of chain-guns ticking at the empty golden cartridges.
Umi ignored the screams, her attention focused of the structure upon the canyon high.
A quick dizzy feeling sprung over her, she suddenly warping in front of the structure; a large factory brand-new.
But blood drenched the welcom mat of the factory.
She gazed up to the tall cement stacks creating the heavy smog in to the sky, and shook her head in disgrace.
But, a loud roar bellowed deep inside the facility.
She took a step back holding an arm up to her stomach for light defense.
She watched the walls, as they slowly crumbled down from their bricks, and burst outward in to a large shadowed creature higher than the smoke stacks itself.
Behind the walls were six standing figures, tall and narrow, and their gleaming eyes glaring upon her, along with the shadowed creature.
One of the tall figures took itty-bitty steps up to her.
She stared up and down of the creature;
It was long at the legs, but had broad shoulders with no arms.
Its entire body was encased in a fitting navy-blue suit, and its shoes a shining black.
But its eyes were the only thing she could stare feafully in to; one was a bright yellow, but the other was a light blue.
It grimmaced to her puny body.
"Welcome, m'dear," its voice was lightly deep, but very hazy.
"Welcome?" she asked.
"To what?"
It smirked even wider, biting down on the thick cigar in its broad lips.
"To your hell," it growled.
The six figures laughed along, parting away from the enormous creature right behind them.
It roared, snapping its neck wildly up in the air.
Its head was long and flat, almost an oval-shape, but its face was snouty and long, baring its pearly-white glowing teeth down at her below its eyes.
Its body seemed long, almost snake-like, with two large arms attached to its shoulders, clicking wildly with its three long talons.
The creature stamped an arm out to her, giving the most heinous intimidating glare down to her.
Umi could'nt divert its eye contact; it almost seemed it was paralyzing her to not look away.
Almost to feed on her fear...
Its head spun wildly in the air once more, before it struck snake-like with its large mouth of pointy teeth at her that closed on her face...

Out of conscious, she shuffled uncomfortably under Stranger's curled arm.
She whimpered, tears streaming down her face through her tightly shut eyes.
Distress suddenly popped Stranger awake, feeling the friction of Umi's head rub on his arm.
His eye stuck on her for a moment, suddenly growing a brighter green.
He sat up on his legs, feeling a straining pain down near his back hold him down.
He placed an arm gently upon her shoulder.
"Umi?" he called softly.
She continued to stress in her dreams, her sobs becoming more throaty.
"Umi?" his voice grew louder, and his hand grew tigher on her shoulder.
She suddenly curled in to a tight ball, her head cringing deep near her legs.
Stranger sat up higher, now placing both his hands tightly on her arm.
"Umi!" he said loudly.
"Wake up! Yer just in a dream..."
A sharp, fearful gasp came out of her along with her eyes popping open immediately.
Umi woke with a piercing shriek across, leaving the canyon far aside in an eery echo.
She stopped, panting hardly, as she slowly sat up, her eyes wide in shock and fear, staring across the grey-stained plateau.
The sky was a dim shade of grey swiftly moving overhead with the created light smog swirling in with the clouds.
A cool breeze continued to flush against her back.
"Umi," Stranger gently asked over her shoulder.
She spun around to him, her lip quivering in suspense.
He seemed more perkier than when she found him; his eyes were a sharp green brightly shining again.
She bursted out in to tears again, putting her face in to her hands.
"I can't go on like this, Stranger..." she mumbled.
"It's too hard fer me...to put up with these visions..."
Stranger wrapped a comforting arm around her waist, placing his chin gently on her head.
"Don't say that..." he said.
"We've made it so far..."
"But how long is it until something terrible happens to us?" she said.
"You almost died last night. Any longer I left you, you'd be dead,"
Stranger choked on a cough, breathing in gently to regain a normal pattern.
"...and I don't think...I could do anything without you, Stranger,"
He moved off of her head, staring down at her with brilliant promising eyes.
"You listen to me, my lil' one," he said.
"Don't ever think, that somethin's gonna 'appen ter me. I'm-a be 'ere to protect you, Umi. I promise,"
Umi sniffled, her lip quivering again.
"You can't keep a promise so unrealistic, Stranger," she said.
Stranger smiled gently to her.
"Well," he began.
"I can intend to keep's it. And that's exac'ly what I'm gonna do,"
"Intend all you want," she grinned.
"but that still won't save yer hide from danger,"
"Well, it'll save yers,"
He grinned down at her, then snapped his head up, his lips curling down normally.
He stared up at the sky, the whispy clouds rolling by swiftly, and not even a beam of sunlight shedding out of the clouds.
He then glanced down back to the ridge beside them, calculating in his mind.
"Must've slept maybe three hours..." he said to himself.
"I think's it's best if we's...keep's movin', so's we can git down off'a this, canyon, 'fore night,"
He stood up shakily on his knees, suddenly falling back down.
Umi shot up, holding himself down by his arm.
"You're not strong enough to move, Stranger. Yer muscles are gonna be takin' most of the pain," she told.
Stranger grunted, dogging Umi's request.
"Nah, I'm fine..." he attempted to stand again, but slumped back down on his knees.
Umi placed her fists on her hips, grinning skeptically down to him.
"Ya know...stubborness won't git you nowhere,"
"I told ya," he growled in effort to stand up straight.
"I can move on my own..."
He wobbly stood up, stumbling on his legs to stand straight.
Umi couldn't help to smile at this amusing sight.
"If I could," she began.
"I would carry you...but sadly," she held out her arms.
"Yer too heavy to carry with my pitiful strength,"
"Don't get smart on me, young lady," Stranger smirked to her, holding his arms on his legs hunched down from the weight of his pained muscles in his back and legs.
Umi giggled, becoming stern at the last second.
"Still," she told.
"You got'a rest fer a while,"
Stranger shook his head.
Umi frowned hard.
"I'm serious,"
"Yeah, well...I'm serious, too,"
His hand slipped off his knee, heavily weighing down on the grass.
Umi ran over, and wrapped his arm over her neck, and lifted up for support.
"Yer so odd-damn stubborn, ya know?" she scowled.
"I hate people as stiff as a board,"
"Well now..." he grunted.
"You would'nt possibly hate me then, huh?"
"Hell no!" she spat.
"Why'd you get an idea'r like that?"
Stranger chuckled.
"Never mind, kid...never mind..."
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I apologize for the long wait, my patient eyes, but I've been doin' some other stuff...
Following along at the end of this fan-fic, there will be another I'm planning right now, and it will attach to the story closely.
This is only an announcement.
This may be cancelled out if other things come in my way.
Anyways, an update will be soon, hopefully.
Until then, aue-vare! (or w/e you say it in French...)
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SOrry fer the long wait...
This chapter might not be in its prime 'cause inspiration has been a bummer for me...
Enjoy...


Hefting Stranger was hard work for Umi and her frail body that had to carry the extra weight.
The sky grew a dark slate-grey, and whisps of cloud began to flurry away from the sky, revealing a jeweled night.
She whipped an arm across her forehead, panting tiredly, while lugging Stranger's heavy arm on her back.
He grunted, limping his hurt legs behind them, trying to keep most of his weight off the human's back.
Stranger panted, falling to his knees.
Umi was dragged with him, falling on to one of her knees.
She glanced up to Stranger, her mouth open, and heaving breaths.
"What's...what's wrong?" she said hastily.
Stranger grinned down to the human, unwrapping his arm off from her back.
"You don't...need's to carry me, no more, kid," he nodded.
"You's gonna be too tired to go on the rest o' the way..."
Well...neither you..." Umi frowned.
He snorted gently, lifting an opened hand on to her head, and gently rubbed.
"I can manage meself..." he grunted.
"Yer too weak to walk, Stranger," she shook her head.
He wobbled straight on his legs, his muscles pinching tightly again, but gave a confident smile down to her.
"No..." he shook his head back.
"I'm fine..."
He popped his arms under her legs, and lifted her up in his arms, her head resting back on his bicep, staring in shock up to him.
"But...yer the one that needs to be carried,"
"But-but-b"
He placed a finger on her lips, silencing her from protesting.
"It's ok," he purred.
"I'll go on until I feel like we're done,"
Umi frowned skeptically up to him, but allowed him to walk.
He grunted from the muscles making him limp painfully, but stared hard up ahead to ignore the wincing pain biting in his four camouflaged legs.
The full moon hit the tops of the jagged peaks far out, Stranger still continuing forward forcefully, and dogged the urge in his mind to stop for the night.
I know we're close... he frowned.
Umi sat up in his arms, placing a squeezing hand on his bicep.
"Let's stop, Stranger," she nearly pleaded.
"Yer causing yerself more pain than anything,"
"No..." he grunted.
"I'm not done yet,"
She quivered at his stubborness, staring ahead of the narrowing plateau stretched out.
She squinted ahead, the light of the moonlight shining off the ends of the grass blades sticking up
But the light curved off a point flat of the plateau.
Umi grinned, pressing against Stranger's chest.
"Hold it," she said, then pointed ahead.
He slowed to a stop.
"Is that the edge?" she asked up to him.
He squinted ahead, his vision a bit of a blur from the pain.
"Prolly..." he grunted.
Umi slipped out of his arms, slowly approaching where the light bent.
"Careful, Umi," Stranger cautioned.
She took slow steps ahead, until she got on her knees, and crawled, pressing her hands examining the grass for the edge.
As she came up to the light, her hands curled around a dropping of the land, a rocky feel coming to touch.
She gasped, slipping her hand lower, and knowing what she felt.
"We found it," she said.
"We got to the end,"
Stranger limped up to her side, his nightvision sight staring down the steep fall.
"Yup," he grunted.
"We'd better get started,"
Umi winced back up to him in disbelief, her mouth dropped near her chest.
"You're...joking, right?" she told.
Stranger blinked to her.
"Did I...sound like it?"
"Don't say that," her face scrunched scoldingly.
"What did I say?" he turned innocent.
"We're not climbing down tonight,"
"Oh, yes we are," he said firmly.
"No we're not! You're not in any shape to rock-climb!" her arms extended out to him.
"Well, my decision is final. C'mon," he whipped a hand over his shoulder.
She grabbed his arm, forcing him back to her.
"No, Stranger," she pleaded.
"What if you fall?"
He turned back to her, slipping his arm gently from her.
"Don't worry about me," he carelessly said, kneeling down from the cliff, and digging the tip of his boot securely in to the soft rock of the cliffside.
"BUT I DO CARE ABOUT YOU!" she shouted.
"THAT'S WHY I'M BEGGING OF YOU TO NOT CLIMB DOWN!"
He coughed rashly.
"That's begging," he grinned up to her.
"Caring would be tryin' ter stop me,"
"But that's what I'm doing, ya numbskull!" she griped.
He continued to move slowly down the steep cliffwall, digging in his claws now, and chucking out his boots, and digging in again.
"Get on my back," he told over the edge, the top of his eyes showing over the edge.
"I got's a free hand 'ere to grab yeh,"
"Please reconsider, Stranger," she frowned.
"Not gonna 'appen, kid," he told.
Umi huffed irritated, turning over the cliff's edge, and placing her feet on his shoulders, and slowly slipping down on his back.
"Is this...such a good idea?" she quivered, looking down at the englufed darkness below her wrapped feet.
"I dunno," he grumbled.
"Let's figure out,"
He continued his spider-crawling motion; digging in his boots and claws, moving down an inch, and repeating.
Umi clung tightly around his back almost to the point his breathing was cut short.
The moonlight shone off the ridges of the rocks burrowing and sticking out, but didn't shine off to the eternal darkness far below.
She dug her face back in to Stranger's spine of his poncho, daring not to look back down.
Why does it have to be the nighttime rock climbing at its worst?
His leg wobbled again from the muscles pinching together, as he dug his toe in to the rocks.
His boot slipped from the ridge, sending inertia heavily down his body.
Umi slipped from his back down to the mid-section of his back.
She quivered fearfully, holding tighter around his stomach.
"It's ok..." he panted.
"I'll get yeh if you fall,"
That's what I fear... she blinked open.
He continued again, only to grunt from the pain from a torn bullet hole in his arm.
Umi glanced back up to him, his arm hanging loosely by his side.
"Maybe we should go back up," she suggested.
"No," he grunted.
"Not how far we've gotten to,"
He swung his arm back in to the cliffwall, and grappled down further.
Just as things seemed to get better, the rock beneath his boot gave out, sending his legs dangling loosely down with only one arm to support.
The inertia gave out to Umi again, sliding her all the way down to the tip of his boot.
She hung there with one hand wrapped around his boot, keeping her eyes shut tight.
It's a dream...I know I'm not hanging from Stranger's boot down from a very...very steep fall...
Her eyes slowly peeked open down below, knowing that her thoughts were feign.
"Stranger!" she screamed.
"I know! Hold on!" he shouted down.
He attempted to swing his hurt arm up in to the rock again, but it just dangled.
Moving it just a bit would cause him pain.
And causing him pain wouls loosen his grip around the stone he hung from.
Her fingers slowly slipped under the rugged leather of his boot.
Her lip quivered, and tears formed in her eyes.
I'm gonna die...I'm gonna die...
That was all her mind was racing with.
She glanced back down at the still darkness below, a tear that had rolled off her nose dropping down, and engulfed in to it.
"Hurry, Stranger..." she hastily quivered.
Knowing that he would have to, he couldn't.
He strained his arm up to the wall again, wincing from the torn muscles forcing it back down.
Her fingertips was all left holding on the leather, she now digging her claws through the crumbling hide.
"Oh no," her eyes widened.
The last slip of her fingers sent her tumbling down from the cliffwall.
The sudden change in weight shot in to Stranger's mind.
"No," he gasped, snapping his head down to where Umi last dangled.
"NO!"
The echo of Stranger's roar rolled down with her.
She extended her arms out to the face, feeling the brush of rocks slip passed her fingertips.
But the wall seemed to curve out more, bringing her closer to reach.
She felt a shine of hope fall on her.
The wall curved out further, until she felt the rock skid across her arms.
She brought her legs closer to the wall, and slammed in to the rock, her fall slowing down as she dragged her feet and hands across the wall.
Her hand caught against a stuck boulder, jerking her to a stop quite painfully.
She sighed in great relief, feeling her upper half body hugged to the cliff face.
But her legs dangled loosely.
She glanced down, now to see that she dangled from a concave crater in the wall.
And as her excess weight brought down her legs, she felt the boulder she held on to nudge from its hole, inch by inch.
Time was now of the essence to guarantee her survival.
"Stranger!" she screamed up.
"Hurry up! I'm down below!"
His ears suddenly shot up, hearing the echo of Umi's voice bounce to him.
Just hearing the voice of the human brought enough strength back for him to crawl down.
He lifted his hurt arm back up to the ridges again, and dug his claws deep, along with his boots.
But in his mind, he was going to try something different...
Something that would either save them, or kill them.
He swung around his body, so he would look face-down against the wall down to Umi.
His arms were arched above the rocks, but his legs were straight out.
He began to crawl spider-like down the cliff face, careful to not knock any loose rocks down below to the dangling human.
"Hurry!" Umi screamed, feeling her fingertips roll off the jagged edges of the boulder.
He grappled further down the cliff face, feeling the wall suddenly concurve out under his belly.
His nightvision scanned down to Umi, seeing the place she was at curving down steeply under her belly.
"I'm almost there..." he grumbled loud enough.
She dug her nails now in to the stone, only to feel her nails grind against the grainy feel of it.
The boulder nudged greatly from its place again, sending a shock down Umi's stomach.
Stranger stopped inches near her arm, and reached his hand down to her.
"Umi!" he shouted.
"Grab me!"
Umi's head shot straight up, seeing the glow of Stranger's outline shine off from the silver moonlight, along with the glow of his hand close to her wrist.
She flung her loose arm up, the boulder she held on to broke from its place even farther.
If the boulder is misplaced, that would be the only thing that would support her.
She writhed her fingers up to the glowing slivers of Stranger's fingers, grappling her fingers tighter around the boulder.
It nudged again from the weight she put down on it, her body jerking down further.
She gasped sharply, slamming her chest on the wall again.
"Keep tryin'!" Stranger told, continuously trying to extend his arm out passed its limit.
She slid her arm back up to his, prickling her fingers to reach for his.
Stranger slid a fraction on his belly to her, but refrained from sliding even more to lose his place with his hands and boots.
The tips of his claws almost poked her, when the boulder she held on suddenly gave away under her.
Her arm that held the boulder slipped away with it, feeling her body roughly slide down to the concave curve in the wall.
She felt her stomach fling up in to her throat, as she soared down the wall with her arm still reaching up for Stranger.
Her screaming felt eternal, feeling the darkness of the valley below swallow her up.
A cold touch shriveled up her legs, and tingled up throughout her body.
But...a shine above glimmered on the wall, approaching quickly.
Her eyes blinked in fascination of this sparkling thing, coming cloer to her arm...
A jolt shook her out of her trans, she slamming back on the wall, and a tight wrap around her wrist.
She glanced back up in shock, noticing Stranger's brilliant-green eyes locked on her determined.
His fingers were locked down in the rock again, rolling Umi back up to him.
She followed along with him, he taking her under his chest, and held out his arms over the wall, staring down with a glimmer in his eye.
She glanced up to his jaw, noticing now that he was grinning.
"Stranger?" she quivered.
"What crazy idea d'you have now?"
"Nothin' that I'll announce..." he grumbled.
"'cause you might hate me fer this,"
She stared back down, only to come back up to Stranger, then snap back down again.
"Stranger...don't you dare..." she cowled.
"I'll skin yeh if you do..."
He only chuckled, the rumble in his chest intimidating Umi.
He popped his boots out from the open ridges in the wall, and loped ahead on the wall.
He jumped off the concave lip of the cliff, soaring now in to an open free-fall down towards the valley of darkness, face-down.
Hugging the screaming Umi tightly to his chest, he stared down beside the steep wall, and seeing through the shroud of darkness the valley below beheld.
"Damn it, Stranger..." Umi griped to herself, her fingers rolled tightly on his poncho, while staring upside down to the darkness she saw through her human eye.
The fall seemed endless, Stranger watching and calculating carefully when to end their falling spree.
His eyes widened, suddenly turning back up to the wall, and gradually gaining closer to it, holding his arms open with his feet spread out.
Easy... he thought, as he jerked his body closer to the wall.
His claws gently glided over the rough rock, aloong with the soles of his torn boots.
Just as he felt the brush of the rocks his the fleshy top of his fingers, he latched his fingers and boots in to the wall, creating a friction that slowly calmed their fall.
But, even though helping them, it caused the most excruciating pain that rubbed harshly against his fingers, filing his claws and tearing away his boots.
He growled in remorse, but held his pose strong for longer.
His face cringed down upon Umi's scalp, pressing his nose on her head to keep the tears from falling.
They felt their fall come slower, but still coming down fast enough to kill them.
Stranger raised his head up, his eyes tightly closed, and his teeth clenched tightly together.
Umi clung to his stomach, feeling his pain run off to her, feeling fear singe through her.
He let out a sharp exhale, and popped his feet off the cliff, along with his arms.
They soared out above and away from the wall, Stranger flipping backwards down to the valley.
He spun back to his feet below him, his body suddenly jerking from the shock he took in to land on the ground.
Umi fell off his stomach, laying back down on the grass. panting fearfully up to the sparkling night sky.
She kept laid like that, taking in the feel of the gentle winds wafting over her face, and the cool bubbling rush of a water source swiftly moving beside them.
She knew now that they were alive.
Alive and on the ground, at last.
"Stranger?" she shot up.
His back was hunched down, holding up his skinned hands up to his face, staring at the complexities his hand held.
His fingernails were roughly filed down to the ruby-red skin of his fingers that bled sorrowful.
Stinging tears were held back, but he couldn't help but to let his lip quiver, as he babied his hands gently.
Umi crawled up to his lap, tiredly panting, while looking up to his torn fingers.
She hissed with his pain, looking up at his pained neon-green eyes shaded under the brim of his hat.
"Maybe...you should go wash that off," she recommended to him.
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The moon setted above, their back lapsing with the glittery shine of the light.
Stranger slowly set down his arm near the bubbling water, and dipped his swollen hand in to the rush of the current.
He hissed of the sting that quickly setted off when his tender sensetive hands touched the cool crisp water.
Umi sat alone in the grass, staring up at the glowing cliffside that they had fallen from.
The plateau was high, higher than she had expected, but she wasn't staring at the majesty of the cliff.
The formation seemed familiar, like she's seen it somewhere before.
But her mind was still to be settled from the night's stunt, that she couldn't think of the reason.
Stranger resurfaced his hands, staring at the ripped flesh and broken nails down to the bone drenched in dried blood.
He sighed, splashing back his hands, and rubbing them together to wash the caked blood off.
Umi looked over to Stranger, her mind springing in guilt all of a sudden.
His pain always made her feel a sense of guilt; like she was the cause of his own pain.
She sat up, crossing her legs over, still looking over to Stranger with a depressed frown.
He stood up, waving his arms about to shake off the cold water, and turned back to Umi.
He frowned at her face that was frowning back, walking over, and sitting next to her.
"What's with the mopin', kid?" he asked gently.
She looked down from him, her eyes blinking sadly.
"I don't know, really..." she admitted.
"but...everytime...when you get hurt," she snapped up to him.
"I feel like it's my fault,"
Stranger blinked surprised at the top of her frizzly scalp.
"Why you say tha'?"
The sting of tears springing to her eyes made her cringe down.
"It's that...well...it's everytime you save me...it always ends up you hurt and I safe..."
Stranger smiled softly, carefully wrapping an arm around her shouders, and hugging her close to his side.
"Well..." he said.
"If that's what I'm ter do, to keep's yeh safe..."
She looked up to him, her eyes sparkling of the tears glossing her eyes.
"then hurt me 'til I'm red n' bloody,"
She wiped her eyes on her arm.
"But...that's not fair,"
"The world ain't fair, kid," he said.
She frowned, not helping but to agree with him.
Even the same on Earth, Oddworld was exactly the same; things would never be fair to anyone, even a lone human.
She averted his glimmering gaze under the broad shadow of his hat, covering his face completely with the night, resting her head gently on his ribs.
His fingers wrapped easily around her ribs, staring back up to the plateau far away.
Boontown was a terror on him, all left behind in a shroud of grey smog.
But all he hoped was that the thugs that had beat him down wouldn't figure out where he was.
He grinned ferally up to the cliff, a sickening churrning feeling brewing in his stomach.
I know yer still alive...
He gazed back down to the human that was his, smiling fondly on her resting eyes.
Don't you dare, come to me an' bother me...
He lifted Umi on to his lap, nuzzling gently in to her thick head of hair comfortably.
Their rest would be calm as they were.
But far away, a fiendish plot was to be setted upon not only them...


Boontown was only calm at night, lights flicking off in to the darkness, and creatures retreating in to taverns and homes.
All the sellers and junkies ran off the streets in a hurry, scurrying behind the evil darkness of the alleyways in between calm family homes.
Distantly out in the middle of the faintly-lit streets lie the bunglers slowly reviving from their brutal mob fight.
Only one stood, staring upon his members pitifully, as they groaned and slowly propped up on their bruised arms.
"That's it," Ken hazily spoke, his hands dug deep in his pockets.
"Git up, you worthless pieces of crap,"
The Mudokons wearily stared up to his livid face, knowing that they'll feel his wrath later on when he was ready.
"All of you!" he shouted out.
"GET UP!"
The Mafia members growled in pain, only standing on their knees where it was perfectly comfortable.
But yet, under the hateful eyes of their leader wasn't comforting at all.
They wobbled tiredly on their legs, gathering a distance away from Ken, his hands writhing irritantly in his pockets.
He gazed on the heads of the Mudokons, each of their eyes heavy on him.
"Good..." he growled, a cruel smile growing on his face.
"Very good,"
The members began to cringe, knowing an outburst was to come.
His teeth clenched together furiously.
"You guys...failed me," he grouched.
Some began to stutter, but the leader dogged himself to listen.
"I counted on yeh to bring that lummox down,"
"But-but boss!"
His eye snatched on to the stuttering coward, narrowing so low, they looked to be closed.
"You've got somethin' on yer mind?" he grinned.
The Mudokon shook uncontrollably, shaking his head along invisibly.
"Good," Ken said.
"'cause if I wasn't such a major sweetheart, I would blow ALL yer brains out!"
Hands raised up to their faces in fear of the furious leader.
Ken snorted, spitting on the dirt by his foot.
"Git back to the alleys," he thumbed behind him.
The Mafia didn't bother to hear him again, scrambling over one another to get away from him and his rush of anger to all of them.
"I don't wanna see any one of you outside the streets again tonight! Ya hear me!?" he spat over his shoulder.
A faint humming ratted far above the lonely dug-out town.
Ken's face turned around to the narrow streets of the finally-quiet road town, staring up at the jeweled sky sparkling brightly behind light whisps of navy-blue clouds.
A blackened object fluttering in the sky came about the town, its body flat, but its head large and round.
Fans behind its back spun almost holographically with the night, as it came lower to him, and the leaning towers.
Ken turned fully to the approaching flyer thing in the sky, his hands suddenly balling in his pockets.
A strong breeze brewed flat upon the dusty road, the dirt flying high up in to his face.
The aircraft slowly lowered down on to the narrow road, towers croaking threateningly near him away with the forceful breeze.
Ken just stood still, staring at the blimp-like aircraft come to a hover above the tips of the wooden buildings rotten so much.
Well well... he thought, intrigued by the sudden company.
To whom do I owe the unwelcome visit?
The blimp touch-down on the road, a metallic heavy thump rocked the earth.
The fans behind its back slowly came to a simmering spin.
Creased doors slid up over the sides of the blimp, and two narrow creatures hobbled out, waving its green tassle-like mouths irritant with the kicked-up dust buffeting their tentacles.
In their black-gloved hands held a long rifle, their fingers tightly on the triggers, as they turned back to the exits of the blimp.
"C'mon out, boss," it said in a grunty voice, sounding mechanized from Ken's distance.
Their narrow laser-red eyes darted quickly on to the standing figure in front of the blimp.
Arms reached in to the blimp's carrier, holding the shoulders of a very narrow figure, with broad flapping shoulders pointed outwards of their large egg-like heads.
Ken's eyes widened in astoundment, flicking out the toothpick in his pocket.
The wide eyes of the creature locked on to him directly, nodding to the security guards helping him.
Its closed-ankle feet scuttled up to him, Ken suddenly becoming flourished at the approacher.
"'ey!" it barked at him, veiling its broken dull teeth to him.
Ken's eyes locked on to the creature, cringing at its colors glowering to him.
The creature stopped in front of him, its sharp shoes almost touching his bare flesh.
"What's this run-down place called?" it asked.
Ken grinned unkindly to the creature he was familiar with.
"Sorry, bud," he said.
"but we ain't interested,"
"Oh really?" it frowned back, biting hard on its plump cigar between its puckered lips.
"Well, what d'you think I have in mind, chump?"
"Whatever it is," he shrugged.
"You's not doin' it to my town,"
The creature grimmaced down to the Mudokon crook.
"What did I ever say 'bout doin' somethin' to your precious town?"
Ken gave a thought to himself, staring uncofortably to it.
"I-I don't know sir," he said.
"but I don't like how's you's approached me,"
"Listen," it started.
"I'm 'ere strictly for business. Not to make-shift a junk heap place you's call a home,"
Ken's innate came in, feeling himself scowling defensively to it.
"Now tell me," it said again.
"Will you help me?"
Ken's craftiness came in, a plot for prosperity coming in to mind.
"What's in it fer me?" he asked suspiciously.
"I'm glad you asked," it spoke as hazy as him.
"You see, I wanted to build my factory un on that plateau of land over 'ere. All's I need's you to do, is to help me out with a bit of renovation,"
"Renovation? You mean...like...driving out something?" Ken leaned closer to it.
"Exactly..." it said, its golden eye narrowing to him.
Ken's teeth grinded together, quickly looking away from the urban creature, and down the alleyways where his members had flee to.
His blood-shot eyes darted back to it, a grin growing on his lips.
"Tell me the bounty fer this...and I may just accept,"
"I'll pay you great for 'dis," it spoke generously.
"but...you've got'a promise...that you'll only work fer me, and only me,"
Ken's lip curved skeptically at first, turning back to the alleyway, seeing the eyes of the Mafia come out to him fearfully.
He huffed a quick chuckle, his eyes drawing back to the creature.
"A'i'ight," he nodded.
"You's got yer hitman hired,"
It smiled greatly a cruel smile with the Mudokon, biting hard on its cigar.
"Good," it said.
Ken's foot stuck out in a more comfortable pose, he leaning on his straight leg.
"So...what's our first plot o' business...sir?"
Its eyes narrowed craftily.
"Nothin', yet, my humble friend," it said.
"I'll begin the plans on the factory. You's just gather yerself, 'cause yer settin' off with us in the mornin'," it said, turning away from Ken, and hobbling back to the aircraft still humming lively.
A security creature stared to its front, its rifle loosely at hand.
"Git the motor runnin'," it told.
The creature nodded, scrambling back in with its mechanical legs whirring in to the passenger compartment.
The second creature steadily walked to up to it.
"What of the Muds, sir?" it asked quietly.
"Hold 'em 'ere tonight," it said.
"As fer the town..."
It eyed over its broad shoulder to the Mudokon nodding to it, and retreating back in to the dark shoadows of the town.
"Pummel it..." it spun back to the security guard.
"We don't want 'dis heap in our way when we bring in the supplies..."
"Yes, sir," the creature spoke through its long tentacles moving with its speech, saluting its higher lord.
It watched the creature reach in to the ship, holding a shorter version of the rifle, and walk passed its boss, following the Mudokon in to the alley.
Its lips curled down furiously in a cruel way, its discolored blue eye staring around hatefully with its golden eye to the leaning giants around the shanty town.
"If only Sekto was 'ere...along with Mullock..." he frowned shamefully.
"They's be glad that I'm puttin' Rupture Farms and Sekto Springs water facility back together..."
It spun back to the ship, the doors sliding over its heinous eyes glowering upon the town once more.
The rudders spun faster to life, and the drop ship came off the ground, kicking dust up on the town pitifully before spinning around, and taking off in to the dark night, becoming camouflaged with the dark night sky.
Ken's eyes watched carefully to the ship taking off, his lips grinning cruelly.
The Slig that had stopped him watched him readily.
Ken nodded to the security guard, then spun back to his team, he smiling crookedly.
"Ok, boys," he said hazily.
The Mafia began to go with his smile, rubbing their paws together and nodding their heads ready.
Ken's eyes shot back up, his eyes shining brightly devilishly.
"We're back in business..."
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So long, so much lack of inspiration...
I apologize to all...who are left...in the audience...
To tell you the truth...I think I lost almost all faith in this story...
I dunno why..it's a weird feeling, but I ain't givin' up. Not just yet...



Wind blew heavenly upon her blood-pounding hot cheeks.
A heavy limb wrapped around her warmed her body up, as she regained conscious.
She laid flat on the grass, Stranger fast asleep beside her, with an arm gently wrapped around her body.
The clouds wearily fogged the sun, no light touching the grassy valley.
Umi's eyes blinked open, staring out at the grey-hazy horizon outside the flat land.
Clouds above moved swiftly above her head, producing off the high plateau they had perilously fallen off of.
Feeling the need to sit up, she flexed her muscles, but suddenly stopped.
Mutters from far away moved quickly up to them.
She relaxed her arms, immediately closing her eyes, as she heard soft footsteps trample in the grass.
Laughter ran across her, making her stiffen all down her body.
Her head slowly jerked to Stranger's face, not being able to see the approaching figures cackling to each other.
"Stranger..." she whispered softly.
He only sighed sleepily, his eyes closed and rolled back in to his dreams.
"Stranger..." she whispered urgently.
A soft grumble sounded from him, his head moving down near his chest.
She stopped whispering, knowing that he was as dead as a doorknob.
The trotting slowed down, and the voices became curious, softly whispering to each other.
Great... she snapped her eyes shut, the shuffles on the grass came up to their heads, and stopped.
"Whoa..." one spoke.
"What are they?"
Umi's lip trembled.
"I dunno..." another said.
"Are they alive?"
She could sense their movement, one of the things kneeling down to them.
A wild sniffling ran over her face, she twitching from its tickling hair brushing her face.
The creature snapped back, grumbling suspiciously.
"Yeah. They're alive...the thing next to it cringed,"
Umi held still again, the shadows of the things coming over to Stranger now.
"What'a 'bout that one?" one said.
"I dunno...it looks a bit...rough..."
Oh...I wish he would wake up now...
"Check it anyways..."
The other mumbled cautiously, leaning over Stranger, and carefully scruntizing him.
Stranger's eye twitched from its fur that lashed over.
He snorted, his eyes fluttering open, and feeling a body leaning over him.
His ears snapped up, along with his eyes wide open in alert.
His body suddenly snapped up on his flaring arms, growling at the body that had intruded his space.
Stranger sneered at the wanderers that came along, his teeth clenched tightly together.
The creatures cringed away from the thing that had snapped up over the smaller creature in a full-fledged defensive stance.
"What in Odd's name-"
Stranger flared his nostrils at the intruders, his ears flattened on the back of his head.
"You guys barged on to the wrong guy to check out..." he growled.
"Whoa...this guy's serious..." one whispered.
Stranger's eyes cooled down upon the creatures, turning up in to shock.
"You...you guys..." he stammered, staring up from their feet to their bodies.
Their stiffened arms relaxed slowly to their sides, staring to each other, then back to the unfamilar stranger.
Umi's tightly-sewn eyes slowly peeked open, staring at the chest of Stranger up lifted over her body.
She moved her head with Stranger, staring at the creatures ahead, their scrawny legs shivering in fear.
"Huh?" she blinked.
Was her vision impaired?
She got up on her arms as well, staring at the four legs that stood straight as sticks.
The creatures relaxed fully to them, their eyes settling upon the stranger that had startled them.
"W-we apologize," they spoke.
"We had no idea you we're...still...alive..."
Their eyes drew away in attention from the stranger to the smaller creature under its body.
Umi's mouth drooped open in surprise.
"You guys are Steef..." she spoke astounded.
Their eyes blinked upon the human confuddled.
"Yes...we are..." both nodded.
"but...what are you?"
Stranger rested on to his knees, holding a hand on Umi's shoulder in comfort.
"Where'd you guys come from?" Stranger asked, his brow raising intrigued by something they were supposed to find themselves.
The two Steef males blinked at the stranger, one slowly raising an arm behind it.
"Just over those hills...passed the river valley..."
Stranger's lips curled happily up.
"We were almost there, Umi," he glanced down to her.
"We were just close..."
The two Steef males scratched the back of their heads, the fleas and pests nipping in to their skin.
"Where did you guys come from?" one asked, his curious red eyes stuck upon the stranger slowly standing up.
"From a very far way," Stranger nodded, his expression dissolving in to seriousness.
"We traveled all across the Western Mudos to find you's guys, and the last Steef Tribe,"
Their eyes narrowed down, hairs prickling on their necks, and teeth fledging from under their lips.
"You guys didn't come 'ere to poach us..." they growled, their muscles flexing defensively.
Stranger snorted at the males, feeling the urge to stick an arm out in front of the human beside him.
"No we didn't," he sneered in return.
"We've come 'ere in search fer you,"
The males didn't let up of their protective stance, glaring deviously at the stranger.
Stranger's eyes grew hard and stern at the Steef, raising an arm up to them.
"Hold up," he said.
"If you's want proof..."
He placed a thumb down in to his tan tights.
"I'll show's it to yer..."
The males grew soft, but their hair still stood upon their skin.
A green eye was stuck on both of them, while Stranger, tore off his tights, kicking off his boots, and revealing his four scrawny legs off to the males.
"What in Odd's name..." their mouths dropped in astoundment.
"Yer a Steef? In disguise?"
Stranger nodded his head gently, but his eyes kept solid on the Steef.
"What's the reason?"
"It's a long story..." he scratched the back of his neck, feeling his flesh roll off under his nails.
"Really..." they sounded skeptical.
"Come with us. I'm sure the Elder would want to hear of this,"
Stranger gathered his boots and tights, balling his tights in to a boot, then held them under his arm.
He grinned down to Umi, she staring at the males in slight anxiety.
"Don't-cha worry, kid," he whispered.
"You's got's me 'ere wit' ya,"
Umi darted up to him, her face apathetic, but giving off a confident nod.
"Alright," Stranger told, facing back to the males.
"Lead the way,"
The males nodded in agreement, falling back beside Stranger, and not too closely to the human, slowly trotting beside the river.
This was it.
Their most greatly anticipated moment that would change their life forever.
The moment when they finally find the last Steef tribe on Oddworld.
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SQUEE! More Steef! *dances* Oh you so have to update soon Darky mate, I'm still a fan. You can count on me to carry on reading!
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SQUEE! More Steef! *dances* Oh you so have to update soon Darky mate, I'm still a fan. You can count on me to carry on reading!
Thanks, Lobo.
I'll try to update soon...In which, I dunno how long it's gonna be...
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A major apology for the longest wait...
You see...I'm on summer vacation, and I can't get a decent internet connection, 'cause whom I live with are all but dial-up...my grandparents connection are faster, but still it's dial-up.
Right now, I am in Spokane, WA, and I won't be coming home until July 6th, in which I'll be at Baltimore, MD at 700...at night...
If I have inspiration the next day, I'll update ASAP. I can't promise, but I'll try.
Once again, I'm sorry fer the wait...if I had a lot of time, which I do, and a decent connection, then I'd post up s'more...
Thank you, my (hopefully) patient audience...
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Hey, Dark Eilte, don'tcha dare think that you're gonna give up on this thing. I love it an' I'm sure more people do. plz, update soon. But do it when you're ready.
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Thanks, guys.
I'm finally home. Whoo-hoo!
Whenever, I'll do another, hopefully when I take a shower and wake up more.
But fer now, I'm glad to be home! I missed all my buddies on the OWF, and everywhere else!
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You thought I've given up on this...
Well guys...I have some news for yeh...I HAVEN'T!

I just lost the time for inspiration, until today where I've finished up another part! WAHOO! Enjoy, whoever still reads this.



Avoiding unfamiliar eyes is an easy thing to do. It tells in a person's mind that they are uncomfortable, scared...insecure.
A reflex so easy to use, you could just look away from someone in an instant you feel shy to approach. And as the glassy eyes stared at the newcomers, it was the only thing the human could do to keep the insecurity in herself.
The hardest thing Umi could do was to look in to the eyes of the staring villagers, unwelcoming, and curious. She only kept her eyes down on her feet moving with the four hooves walking beside her.
The village was more of a small wheel-shaped community, houses sprouting from the center outward as the spokes of a bicycle. In the middle was a large stone blackened hotly with small inscribes and pictures, surrounded with charcoal wood pieces black as the night sky.
The two Steef males calmy led Stranger through the narrow street, their heads up and shoulders back in pride.
Villagers, all sizes and genders, stopped from their daily activities, only to stare at them, as they passed unceasingly. But what they couldn't help to get their incontrovertible eyes off was the human.
The eyes were almost the feeling of pejorative words; discriminating, curious, even the skeptical feeling. Belittling as they were, she didn't want to give a belieing look to herself, so only now was to keep her eyes down and away.
The insecurity slightly rubbed off to Stranger, goosebumps popping up under his fur. He grunted in an unsure way, his eyes drawing attention down to Umi.
Making her feelings subtle, he could tell she was terribly uncomfortable around the newly-found Steef.
Don't look up...don't look up...or you'll break, Umi. she thought in winding thoughts. Don't look up... her eyes closed tightly. Don't look up...don't look up...don't look up...don't-
Warmth of a familiar hand rested gently on her shoulder, she suddenly snapping from her thoughts and up directly to him.
He smiled fondly down to her, one eye on her, but his head still held high. "Don't be scared, kid," he whispered, the tips of his fingers gently rolling in to her tender shoulder muscle.
Umi kept her frown on, but nodded to him, knowing he'd buy the bait, and continue without doubt.
"This is to be the last known village for our kind here," the youngest of males spoke up. "We've taken the greatest of liberties to step up our defenses, and make the Tribe's security task force. They enroll the strongest and fastest of all males here. Females may be included if they aren't engaged or married, and the type of skills we require,"
"Yeah. But we've been safe for generations. No one has found our land in centuries. We believe the Gods have been driving away any type of predator alike that would dare try to harm the Tribe. But I believe they allowed you in because of your destiny, correct?"
"Er...uh...I s'pose..." Stranger's lips wiggled down confusedly.
The males smiled to one another. "Nervous?" the eldest asked.
"Nah," Stranger shook his head.
"You shouldn't be. The people around here love one another. Not a single species-related death has been here. As long as we are one together, we're perfect,"
Nobody's perfect... Umi rolled her eyes.
"But..." both males eyed the human beside Stranger. "...we should give you precaution to the wind...alien..."
"Huh?" Umi blinked astoundedly.
"This is a community of Steef. Steef along with their kind. We want to warn you, before you think of wandering about, that they might not trust you, nor like you. It's a way of being scared. But with time, I'm sure they'll warm up to you,"
Umi frowned down from them, knowing exactly what they meant. The Steef's eyes were still upon the creature, vituperative and distrustful. She knew that she being in this village of one-of-a-kind would be like learning to ride a bike. It would be tough, but she would survive, like throughout the many years she has.
The lengthy road grew to an easy stop, the Steef males turning back to Stranger. His eyes were ready and still, he smiling confidentally to both. Both returned the stranger's kind smile, allowing him to pass on through in to the heart of the village.
There, he saw the firestone, a deep jet-black and scribbled languages and pictures indented on it. Right in front of the round boulder was the most intricate of all houses and huts alike.
This one was larger and actually had a chimney popping up from behind the hut, a thin stream of near-white smoke squiggling out. The smell wasn't noxious, but a sweet smell, making the villagers lively and happy, like a secret mojo.
Stranger and Umi stopped at the front of the door, he lifting an arm up to the sanded wooden door, about to knock. The door immedaitely opened to a young female Steef only to Stranger's waist, looking up at him with innocent hazel eyes. Her face was child-like, barely any fur on her face, but coated with a dark brown fun.
She turned back in to the dark room, cupping a hand over her mouth.
"Gwampa! Somewon's here to see yow," she shouted back in a shrilly but calm voice.
A chokey reply came back, "Let them in. I've been waiting for them all day,"
"Awight!" the young female smiled, and turned back, she opening the door wider for the two wanderers to enter.
Stranger nodded gratefully to the youngling, the first to move in before Umi. She stepped in, only to be stopped by the young female's curious eyes.
Umi knew the child's mind was racing with thoughts and questions, she only to stand still and stare back. The child's arms swung back and forth, as if a toddler would do.
"Hi. I'm Annita. What's your name?" the young Steef asked, a smug smile on her face grew.
Umi smiled sweetly at the Steef. "My name is Umi," she knelt down. "Nice to meet you,"
The young Steef held still, her face now normal, with her arms swinging back and forth. "What are you?" she asked.
Umi stayed silent, standing up from the female, and striding away. She didn't want the young girl ask questions on end, or to scare her. The only thing to do was to walk away, and not answer.
She entered a separate darker room from the front hallway, and stood next to Stranger, he staight and silent, staring ahead at the haystack bed with a head appearing over a furry skinned animal blanket.
She could live with Stranger on this; even the sight of its face made her shut up, even her mind, and stand straight.
Its head moved up from near the blanket's tickling warm fur, and two pairs of icy-cold eyes opened up to them tired and restless. Two pale-white arms laid out upon the body of its blanket, one shakily moving up to a small lit match beside its bed, plucked it up, and lit two candles beside it. The candles' wick lit with a bright yellow light, the room losing its darkness to the two candles.
The side of its face brightened up quickly, making both their stomachs tie in to knots. The Steef's face was droopy and pale, the shadows of its pooled wrinkles heavily colored in with its skin. The only color of its face was its icy-pale blue eyes, staring greatly at both of them.
Umi could only stand, almost feeling the nerve to scream, but held it in, and shook instead. Stranger, however, stayed calm, knowing that this Steef was probably hundreds of years old.
Its head lifted up, they now seeing the thin strands of silver-grey hair stand out behind its neck. "Welcome, weary travelers," it finally spoke, its voice so quiet, Stranger and Umi had to step closer to hear.
"Since I've...received the message...from the Grubb Sage...I've been anticipating...your arrival for quite some time..."
Its pruned lips curled in to a smile, making its face lighten up somewhat more. "We've lived up...for the arrivals of the Steef guardians, for centuries on end...and only little have made it. Things...outside our lands...have been testing the guardians...and only you have been recorded...to actually kill...the most feared of our people,"
Stranger nodded to the elder Steef, wrapping his arms behind his back.
The Elder took in a raspy breath, then make a throaty sound, clearing its throat to speak. "We've been sacred for many years...honored by the Grubbs...but feared by others. Our kind has been counting down greatly...almost to the point of our non-existance. Now we're the only ones left...to defend ourselves...from the greed of the outside world,"
Umi frowned down from the Elder, knowing that it was highly wrong about itself. The Elder breathed in again, looking to the human. "I know you doubt my saying, young human..." she snapped up to it. "I know...the outside world is not all bad...but to most of us..." it looked to Stranger.
"...it is more toxic to us...than our extinction,"
"I understand..." Umi nodded.
It chuckled. "Umi..." it said her name so quietly, but yet in an erratic way. "I know...this world is very different from where you came from...but...my belief, to why you came here...was by the Gods. They sent you here...to help us, and save our Promised Lands,"
The honor of having the Steef say by the Gods that sent her made her stomach fly happily, she kicking her legs uneasily behind, but stand still once more.
"Yes..." it nodded. "The only way we've been surviving...for so long...was by our Prophets, and the Gods. They helped keep watch over our chosen ones by the Grubbs, sent off to the perilous jorney ahead of them to make it alive to us...only the worthiest of our kind was watched over. Surprisingly...little of the Steef warriors...have made it through,"
The Elder smiled to both. "It is an honor...to have you be part...of our Tribe, Stranger and Umi,"
"Thank you," both bowed their heads.
"Annita!" it called, its voice breathless and raspy.
Small hoofbeats ratted quickly through them, little female prancing up to her grandfather's bedside. "Yes, gwandpaw?" she asked.
The Elder smiled fondly to his only grandchild, looking back to Stranger and Umi. "I hope you met my granddaughter, Annita..." it nuzzled up to her nose. "She's...the only one to keep me company here...in this...decrepped old house,"
Stranger couldn't help but to smile kindredly at the back of the young child, feeling her child-like energy rub off to him just like Umi's.
"Annita," he whispered to her, kissing the top of her head. "Show our guests to their home,"
"Yes, gwandad," she smiled, giving a returning family kiss on his soft tender cheek, and jumping off by Stranger's hand, and grabbing a hold. "C'mon!" she esstatically jumped.
Stranger chuckled at her, "Alright, don't make me fall," He followed the child out, leaving Umi behind with the Elder.
Umi smiled back at Stranger grinning helplessly back to her, she about to leave with him. "Umi," the Elder said once more. She stopped, and turned to him.
"You are a blessing, child..." it said with an encouraging smile. "One...sent from Shakura herself, from heaven above. Do not feel...cursed to yourself...you've come a long way to feel like that,"
Umi turned fully back to the Elder, her lips greatly smiling encouraged by its words. "Thank you, sir," she nodded.
The Elder raised a hand to her, silencing her further on. "No, child..." it said. "You should'nt be the one to thank me,"
Umi felt confused to the words of the Elder, but listened on, her body twisted to the exit, but her eyes stuck on it. "It should be I...that should be thanking you,"
"Huh?" Umi frowned. "What do you mean by that?"
"Later on, young one...you shall see why," it waved a dissmissing hand, grinning fondly to her.
Umi stayed still for a moment, staring in to the deep pools of his eyes to see the answer, but was clouded by his judgement. She nodded once more to the Steef, turning away to the door, her mind still twisted.
The door slammed shut, the Elder smiling down to his blanket. "You are the future of this Tribe..." he said quietly to himself. "You are the One...that shall be saving us...from this dire century..."
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