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Those are great pics Darky I love the last one - yer get the athonomy of the body well done, great work


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T'anks, guys.
These newly-added creatures'll be in the next story, after this short one.
And the next update should be a freckle passed a hair...
(Sooner 'r later...)
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Ok, peeps.
Since I won't make my own official art thread, 'cause I'd have ter update every time I go to my friends' house, I've decided to make my own thread in here.
The Darky-Elite's un-official art thread, non-Oddworld, and Oddworld.
I shall present to you my new style in drawing dragons.


An Ice Drake. I like the expression on its face. ^.^


DarkFire Dragon. The first one I've done in new style.


Fire Dragon. Sorry, I tried to fix it in paint, but the damn thing wouldn't save right.


This is the Knifal. Yes, a bit scrawny, huh?


Here's an update of Umi. I actually have two 'o 'em!


Second update of Umi. I think this one is better.


I've been in an imaginary state over these lil' critters. I;ve made up a new ammo type, I think, is quite effective. Plus, they're a cousin of the Fuzzle.
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*GASP!*

Those, are absolutely fantastic!!! Man I love 'em all! But I'd try an' make 'em small if I were you Darky mate, their a bit hard to see when they're too big.
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I know...I dunno how'ta make 'em smaller...I used photobucket, so if ya know how'ta make 'em smaller, I'm all ears.
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When you go in your Photobucket Account, under each picture there's an edit option, there's a resize toggle if you click Edit.
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There we go!
Much better! It's in smaller size now, folks.
So, enjoy!
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There, now that's absolutely wonderful. *applauds*

PS. I fixed Microsoft Word, YAY!
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Told yer it can be a pain in the ass.
But eh, we all put up wit' it, don't we?
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:exaturated sigh:
Ok, people.
I am proud to announce my first ever photoshopped drawings!
Don't laugh too hard, 'cause it was my first try on this...



I worked 6 HOURS!! to make this look the best!
It's officially 3:00 over 'ere.
I've worked on it from 8-2 a.m, and I'm pooped.
So, only laugh to yerselves, while I go pass out on the front lawn.
G.night.
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Well I likes it. *folds arms and nods stubbornly* Infact, I likes it alot. Very good DE, love the colour scheme and the dragon rocks.
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Aie, thanks, Lobo.
Now, since I've made this a story/unofficial art thread, I shall continue my story, prolly tomorrow, 'cause I know I'll leave it at a cliffy, and I don't want Lobo :glances at her, holding a choke chain, spinning it around ominously:
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Too right...

Although...anymore story would be good.
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'ey now.
You need's to update as well!
I wanna see more when I'm done with the next day, 'r no more story 'til it's done!
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Ooooooo, tough break...okay, deal. I'll upload sumat now.
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Now that's what I'm talkin' 'bout, Lobo!
Ok, then. As a treat fer you postin', 'ere's back to the story!

DAY FIVE...



Wake up...wake up...
'Why?'
You promised...
'Promised what?'
You promised...
A young girl's voice called faintly through his mind.
Stranger's eyes fluttered open to a dark black environment, only a white pile of snow far ahead of him adding color. He began to move around cautiously through the unknown territory he'd suddenly landed in.
"Hello?" he called loudly, his neon-green eyes flashing nervously.
Wake up...
The voice said.
Stranger's head snapped to attention ahead.
A dissolving body began to shroud in front of the snow, holding its arms behind its back.
"Who are you?"
You promised...
Stranger stopped for a moment, blinking hardly at the figure ahead, only a faint outline showing.
It was familiar. The figure was familiar-looking. Even the voice, too. But it was so youthful...
The hell... his mind raced.
The figure spun around, a wave of golden-blonde hair whipping across its back. As it ran off in to the distant blackness, it began to disappear, slowly and gradually.
"Wait!" he stuck out an arm, moving forward faster.
But the body was gone. Gone from his sight.
He stopped from running, but his foot broke in to the packed snow pile.
He stood frozen, staring down at where he had landed now.
What is going on? he thought to himself.
Then, a sudden coloring of the snow turned to a blood-red, touching his boot wetly.
He stepped back in the snow, only to realize that the snow was bleeding.
"What in Odd's name?" he spoke aloud, stepping further back from the red color dying in the snow.
He stopped at the end of the first tentacle of the red streamers, staring down at the source of where the blood seeped.
It was one large body of blood, almost shaped in to a familiar body.
His eyes narrowed down at it, curiously stepping back up. But he stopped abruptly, when the body he had seen suddenly began to vanish back.
But this time, it was clearer.
He felt his heart skip a beat, as the body turned out clearly.
"Oh no..." he croaked.
Laying face-down in the snow could only be one he knew.
"What...what's going on..." he cried, kneeling down to the corpse.
Was he dreaming? Or was this reality?
I'm dreamin'...this is only a dream, Stranger... he told himself in his conscious.
"To whom may think this is a dream..." a deep voice spoke eerily slow though his mind.
"Believe it...for this is reality...only shown through yourself..."
Stranger ignored the echo of the voice, holding a shaking hand over the shoulder of the body.
His lip quivered sadly, eyes filling with tears.
He placed a hand on the shoulder of the body, and slowly turned it face-side up.
Horror struck his face blindly.
He shook his head in denial.
"No...no...this ain't real..."
He looked in to the eyes of the human. The human known as Umi.
"Steef..." the voice said droning in to an echo.
"You musy know the inevitable...you must look it straight in to the eyes..."
Tears flowed down his cheek, his hand stuck right on her shoulder.
Her face was pale, and her eyes wide open to two dialated pupils under a pool of white-blue eyes.
Her body was torn of hot bullets through her skin. She still bled weptfully.
"...and this... is no dream...The one you knew as the human..."
The dissolved body so faint stood in front of him.
It laughed lively, running away from him playfully.
"...will die..."
The body disappeared back in to the darkness.
Wake up...
The voice chanted again.
You promised...
Stranger cried, bringing the limp head of his close friend up to his face.
No. Not his close friend.
His child.
Stranger...wake up...
The voice said more firmly.
You promised.
"Stranger!" Umi shook his arm.
He groaned mournfully, his teeth clenched tightly.
"Wake up! You promised!" she put her hands on her hips.
"No...no..." he said distantly.
Umi's eyebrows furrowed angrily.
"Don't you say no ter me!"
She began to shake his arm more tensly.
"Stranger!" she yelled.
"C'mon! You promised, and it's passed the morning!"
Stranger's eyes popped open with a sharp gasp. He snapped up on his arms, his eyes wide with shock.
Umi stood away from the bed, also staring at him with a certain shock.
His head moved over to where she stood, a feeling of relief swept over him.
"Oh my odd..." he sighed.
"It was only a dream..."
"Huh?" she croaked.
Stranger looked over to her, suddenly scooting to the edge, and grabbing her in his arms.
"I'm just glad it was a dream..." he mumbled near her ear.
Umi's eyes widened, quite surprised at his actions.
'Dream?' she told herself, but gave a soft smile.
"I guess even the most bad-asses have bad dreams, huh?" she said perkier.
Stranger pulled away from her, brushing her hair back with a relieved smile.
Umi rubbed her cheek on his arm, cooler than yesterday.
"I love you, too..." she whispered.
Stranger nodded in agreement, keeping his hand on her cheek.
She cocked back from his arm, with a crafty grin.
"So..." she began.
"You promised we'd go outside today?"
Stranger kept himself silent, thinking back to the dream he had.
It was his innate instinct to protect Umi, from whatever was out there to harm her. But he knew he couldn't be so protective over her forever. She'd needed to go on her own. Yet, she was so young, and still needed to learn things that he needed to tell, confused of the wonders of Oddworld yet to behold...
"Alright..." he smiled softly.
"A promise's a promise. Go dress, warmly," he told firmly.
Umi's face brightened happily, jumping straight up from his arms, and running in to the wardrobe bedroom, shuffling around swiftly.
He chuckled playfully, awaiting for Umi's appearance back to him.
She returned, with her long denim jacket and her long jeans on, with an excited smile up to him.
"Ok! Let's go!" she said.
Stranger laughed at the child's giddiness. He led her outside, she running down the hill to the playing Grubbs.
He was too glad to become the human's legal guardian. And he couldn't wait for the final day to come.
But the dream kept him in shock. What was so ominous about it?
The invader? The voice that spoke to him.
But how?
It could've been something kept in the confines of his brain, but it felt too real to be a dream...
Something was connecting him, psycho telekenesis. And whatever it was, it was probably showing him the future, of something horrible...
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Wow, scary. Bet that shook up ol' Stranger din't it? Poor guy. Hope nuthin' happens to Umi...

Great chapter Darky mate, very thought-provokin'...and kinda worryin'...
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Oh, don't worry. You'll figure out what...
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If you read somat creature's bio, you'll know what I mean by :coughcoughspoilerhackcough:
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Aha...I see. *taps nose* Clever Darky, very clever...
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That part was kind of... freaky I liked it keep 'em chapters comin'

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I'm not yet accomplished with reading your whole story...
Just dont' think I don't read it, 'cause I don't write some comments.
But now I'm on page 2. (The comments for that: WOW!!! NICE!! COOL!!! LOVE THE CHARACTER OF STRANGER AND UMI!!! Very great Story!) Anyway, it will takes a long time till page 33, because my English isn't perfect. I'm ashamed.
Oh, well... I will write some comment again, if I'm accomplished with reading, okay?
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Oh, thank-yee y'all.
Next chapter comin' tomorrow.
Day six, the day of their bonding.
Get yerself ready. It's gonna be...somewhat, intense...fer Stranger, at least.
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Oo oo oo, I can't wait!

PS. 600th post, YEEHAW!
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The day was young, as Umi wrestled around with the children Grubbs.
Stranger stood high upon the hill, watching the children have their share of fun in the snow, making forts, and having snowball fights.
But as he watched, laughing along with the excited children, he couldn't stop thinking of the dream.
Would what he saw come true? As the voice said?
No, it wouldn't, he kept to himself.
Not as long as he was there.
But would he always be there? To watch Umi, and make sure she was out of trouble?
Without a doubt, he hoped, that he would keep a keen eye on her, until they were safe. From whatever antagonized him in his thoughts.


"A'ight, kid," Stranger stared up at the sky, turning a corrosive blue against lavender and orange from whence the sun last stood.
The evening took over quickly. Like what people said before, "Time flies when you have fun".
"Time ter come in!"
Umi snapped up from the children gathered around her, burrying her under snow.
They all whined and groaned up to Stranger, Umi giving off an innocent face.
"Can't she stay out fer just a little longer?" the children pleaded.
Stranger, stubborn to his word, shook his head.
"Sorry, kids. She got'a go in," he thumbed behind him.
"Aww, please, Stranger? It felt like only 2 hours!" Umi whined.
Stranger just shook his head.
Umi sighed roughly, unburrying herself under the snow, and waving to the Grubbs good-bye.
She trotted up by Stranger, giving a harsh glare to him.
He only placed a hand on her shoulder.
"'Dun give me that look," he told.
"Just thinkin' you stayin' out 'ere might get yer cold back,"
Umi's face slowly softened back, her head then drooping back down.
"You sure know how'ta ruin the fun..." she mumbled, following him back up to the hut.
He gave a playful chuckle.
"I sure do," he laughed.
Umi snorted, lunging at his back, and wrapping her arms around his chest.
"What'cha say?" she growled.
He laughed.
"I said I sure do," he began to run up the hill to the door.
Umi skidded her heels in the slick snow, attempting to stop Stranger from running.
"Stop, Stranger. I'm gonna fall..." she mumbled.
He skidded to a stop, plucking her arms from around his chest, and turning to her.
"What'cha say?" he gave a crafty grin.
Umi's nose crinkled angrily.
"Yeh, yer funny," she swatted lightly at his face.
He chuckled at her anger, giving her a quick squeeze.
"I'm just playin'. 'Dun need's to get so aggrivated 'bout it," he told.
He held her hand in his giant palm, leading her to the door of their small home.
But the only reason why he needed to make sure that they were well-rested for tomorrow, was the special day.
The day of theirn bonding, was right around the corner...

DAY SIX...

Ok. Got's my armor, good 'n clean...
He was awake, not even near the break of dawn, gathering his needs and things to leave out of his home down to Last Legs.
But he had to do it, quietly.
For on the couch, sleeping in one large winding lump, was Umi, sleeping soundlessly under the covers.
He held everything he needed under his arm, then slowly tip-toed back in to the kitchen. He gazed upon in to the front room, a gentle smile rolling across his face.
Today was the day, that he would cherrish for the rest of his life.
But hopefully, it wouldn't be a shock to Umi.
He looked away, holding tightly under his arms, and heading for the door. He creaked it open quietly, stepping out in the snow, and giving a quick shiver of the frostiness touching his foot.
He shut the door without a large thump, then turned out through the village on the snowy hillside.
The sky was turning a lighter shade of blue, dissolving the stars that sparkled brightly in the sky.
He headed towards the docks, carefully treading on the dock, for water had splashed on it overnight, and frozen over.
He stepped lightly in to his boat, nearly invisible of sight with the deep darkness of the river.
The water broke off from its frozen state around the boat, floating aloft out towards the deeper middle of the Mongo River, half frozen over.
He rowed through the thicker ice, heading out again towards the river's path to Last Legs, with only excitement swelling in his chest.
Today was it.
He would be the legal father of one he loved so deeply.

Bang!
'The hell?'
Bang bang!
'Damn that's annoying...'
BANG!
"GO AWAY!"
The banging continued, irritating her deep to the core.
Whatever lurched at the door at this time of morning was crazy to even bother the creature of hate right now, snoozing lightly under the covers, and hiding from the evils of morning.
BANG BANG!
'UMI! WAKE UP, LET US IN!' a voice outside shouted.
She growled, whipping off the covers from her frazzled, statical-shocked hair sticking up in a swirl of messy hair.
"GO AWAY!" she shouted.
'Now you listen to me, young lady! You open this door without grouching to me in that tone!' the female voice spoke firmly, in a motherly tone.
"Why d'you have ter bother me so early?" Umi said whining.
''cause! We have to go! NOW!'
Umi flopped out of bed, stamping up to the door, unlatching it from its lock, and swung open the door.
The Rebel Leader stood, with arms on her hips, and a firm face up to the groggy human.
"Why, d'you have ter bother me, on a Saturday morning?" she griped.
The Rebel Leader frowned in surprise.
"Ok, a few things," she forced Umi back in the house, and slammed the door shut.
"One; Get dressed in your new clothes," she bent a finger out.
"Two; Your hair is a total mop!"
Umi patted her head, feeling the whipped-up head of hair in a messy do.
She groaned, rubbing her forehead.
"Right now?"
The Rebel Leader nodded her head sternly.
"Oh...fine. Ok, I'll go," she trotted stiffly in to the wardrobe, picking off her new clothes, and slowly dressing herself.
The Rebel Leader tapped her foot impatiently, holding her arms across her chest.
"Any time now, Umi!" she shouted.
"Oh, shut up. I'm moving..." Umi growled from inside the bedroom.
She trotted out, still half-asleep, in her new clothes.
The Rebel Leader tsked in pity.
"Ok. Sit yerself down. I'm-a get rid of those knots," she told.
"You'd better be gentle. I'm tender-headed," Umi warned grouchily.
But, as if everyone ignored her, the Rebel Leader didn't heed her warning.
She grunted in pain, as the Rebel Leader forcefully pulled down Umi's head, and brushing out the knots tied in her frizzy hair.
"What did-OW-I tell you!?" Umi nearly yelled.
"Put a sock in it! I'm almost done!' she spat.
But that 'I'm almost done' lasted nearly an extra 15 minutes. An extra fifteen minutes Umi had to endure tearing pain at her scalp.
The Rebel Leader dropped the brush, giving a relieved sigh.
Umi's hair was flat, but yet, a little unruly. But it would pass.
She stood Umi up, inspecting her from side to side, then nodded.
Umi raised a brow suspiciously to her.
"What's the rush?" she asked.
The Rebel Leader looked up to Umi.
"I'll tell you when we head down to Last Legs," she said.
"Now, c'mon. Out, out, out! Get to the boats!" she flicked her wrists at Umi out the door.
Umi frowned irritatingly down to her, as she pushed her out the door.
"Quit it, would ya!?" Umi told, the Rebel Leader slamming the door, and turning to her.
"No time! We're gonna be late!" she rushed, grabbing Umi's arm, and running down the hill straight to the docks.
Umi was first to step in, as the Rebel Leader plopped down, and nodded to two Grubbs operating the oars.
They heaved the oars in unison outwards, backing the ship up out to the river, and rowing swiftly with the current.
The Rebel Leader gave a rash sigh, leaning her head back on the edge of the boat, and staring high in the light-lavender sky.
Umi placed a palm on her chin, looking at the relaxed Grubb.
"So..." she began.
"What was all the ruckus? What's goin' on?"
The Rebel Leader looked up to the human, then a soft smile rolling across her lips. She scooted towards Umi on her knees, holding one of her hands in both of hers.
"Umi," shelooked up to her with gentle purple eyes.
"I know this may be a bit...shocking..."
Umi listened intently, keeping her face rock-hard with no expression.
"But...the Steef..."
I knew it had to do something with Stranger... Umi thought.
"...has agreed..." she stopped in mid-sentence, searching for her words.
Well? Agreed to what? she thought impatiently.
The Rebel Leader looked back up to Umi.
"...to bond with you,"
Umi's brows furrowed down confusingly.
"I-I don't get what you say," she told.
"Look, hun. The Steef wants to be your legal guardian. He's agreed to state a bonding ceremony, where you two can become, 'legal', father and daughter," she explained.
Umi's jaw began to hang down slightly.
What a shock she was in, as the Rebel Leader would think.
"Umi?" she asked gently.
"H-h-he wants...to be, my..." she swallowed.
"my dad?"
The Rebel Leader nodded.
She sat in shock and awe. She couldn't believe this. And after all this time, she thought Stranger was up to someting bad, or somewhat.
But it was pointing out the obvious;
Stranger leaving every morning, new clothes, the rush...
The Rebel Leader smiled down from Umi, stroking her hand gently.
"I know," she spoke softly.
"He loves you that much, Umi,"
The thought dampened her thoughts with awe. This had to be the sweetest thing Stranger had ever done to her.
Finally, she would have a thought of where she belonged, why she had a purpose when she landed on Oddworld.
She was meant to be with Stranger.
And he was meant to find her.
That was her destiny.
She broke out of her shock, looking down to the Rebel Leader, she smiling kindly up to Umi.
"This is gonna be one helluva day..." Umi whispered.
The Rebel Leader nodded in agreement.
"Yep. Sure will," she whispered back.

Scratching the back of his neck, Stranger continued to look out and back through the pavillion flaps, a nervous look on his face.
The Queen, however, couldn't help but supress a laugh, a childish smile creeping onher face.
"Steef!" she laughed.
"Why are you pacing so much? Please keep calm, or you'll lose youself at the ceremony,"
Stranger turned to her, a pleading look on his face.
"I'm sorry, ma'am. I'm just so...damn nervous," he scratched the back of his neck again.
She chuckled, walking up to him, and wrapping her arms around his hand.
"I know. So am I," she whispered.
"But that doesn't mean you should be,"
Stranger gave her a confusing look.
"Look on the bright side, Steef. Umi will be your lawfully bonded daughter. To forever love, keep, and cherrish, emotionally, spiritually, and physically," she said.
Stranger dropped his arm to his side, giving a more relxed grin down to her.
"Thanks, m'lady. That made me feel ton's better," he sighed, looking out the pavillion flaps again.
"But...how long will it take them ter get's 'ere?"
The Queen shrugged.
"Who knows. Maybe they're almost here," she said.
Good... he thought.
[/i]'cause these tights'r ridin' up me legs...[/i]
He moved uncomfotably from the tightness of his blue tights, along with his armor he shown off when he defeated Sekto. It was a symbol of pride, protection, and liberty. To the Grubbs, and to himself.
A heavy grudge set upon him taken out.
Or was it?
His heart jumped, as he saw the faint outline of a boat riding up to shore.
They're here
The Queen patted his arm.
"Just play cool, Steef," her voice became stern.
"Don't hide what you feel. Or it'll get back at you,"
He nodded reassuringly to the Queen, as she set off from the Pavillion, down to the docks.
She gave a greetful smile to the Rebel Leader and to the human sitting with her.
"Welcome!" she raised her arms.
The male Grubbs docked the boat to the stake in the riverbed.
The Rebel Leader stepped out, holding Umi's hand, as she followed.
The Queen ran up to the human, grabbing her hand.
"I hope our dear friend here has informed you," she glanced at the Rebel Leader.
She gave a reassuring nod to her.
"I hope you're excited, young Umi," the Queen looked back to Umi.
"Steef's quite the frazzled one today..." she glanced back to the Pavillion.
Umi gave a huff, a grin spreading across her face.
"Yeah," she spoke.
"So am I,"
All three of them trekked up to the Pavillion, entering the warm tent, and hiding from the frosty outside.
The Queen glanced out the Pavillion's entrance, a crowd of chilled Grubbs in snow jackets sitting outside patiently for the ceremony to commence.
"Good. We're all in order," the Queen slapped her hands together, glancing at Umi.
"Where's Stranger?" Umi asked.
"He's with the Best Lady," she said.
"Huh!?" she gave a bewildered look.
The Queen laughed.
"The Best Lady is the one that takes you to the Steef, arm in arm," she said.
Is this like a wedding!?
"Now I have to find the Seer...wherever that geezer has wandered off-Rebel!" she called.
"Can you find me Guru Daedlus?"
The Rebel Leader gave a thumbs-up to her, and ran off through the village.
She gave a relieved sigh.
"That's the only thing we're missing..."
She looked to Umi, she having her arms around her chest, and looking away a bit unnerved.
"Umi? What seems to be the matter?" she approached her.
"I'm...just a bit...nervous," Umi replied.
"Oh, don't be!" she smiled, walking up to her.
"What I told Steef, you shouldn't be! He'll be your father, to learn from and to love! And I know you're happy about that,"
Umi looked in to the Queen's lavender eyes.
She's been looking for a father-figure for a very long time. Almost despirately. And she has found one at last. After her years of searching.
"Yeah," Umi nodded.
A patter of crunching snow entered the Pavillion.
The Rebel Leader returned with the Guru of the city; Seer Daedlus, the wisest of the Western Mudos.
"'ere's the ol' coot, Queen-y," the Rebel Leader smiled.
"Ah, sir Daedlus. So glad of you to join us," she greeted.
"And to you, madam," he bowed his head, and returning with a wrinkly smile.
"Alright, alright. 'nuff with the fancy-doings. Let's get this ceremony started," the Rebel Leader snapped.
"Very well. Daudlus, to the pasture, please," the Queen led him out through the Pavillion, and through the line of Grubbs sitting beside the line.
Umi stood alone in the Pavillion, peeking through the flaps outside to the Grubbs.
A patter of small footsteps trotted to the opening.
Umi turned to the opening.
And came through the flaps was Jala, dressed in a long-skirted jade-green dress.
"Jala!" Umi smiled.
"Hey, Umi!" she greeted.
They both gave themselves a friendly hug.
"What're you doin' 'ere?" Umi asked.
"Oh, I'm the Best Lady," she said.
"Really!" Umi exclaimed.
"Yeah, and I'm real glad I could be a part of your ceremony,"
A hushed silence rolled among the crowd outside.
Umi and Jala scooted to the flaps of the Pavillion, peeking through to the crowd.
The pasture, Seer Daedlus, had his arms up to the crowd, his pope-like robe rolling down his wrinkled arms.
"May I have your attention, please!" he announced, his voice stronger than everyone thought.
The crowd grew silent, not even a whisper heard.
The Seer dropped his arms on the pasture, gazing upon the crowd with a grin of confidence.
"Today, I shall be legally bonding two loving souls together as father and daughter. A young human and the guardian of the Tribes. Although, I think it's awkward that such a creature is bonding to a loyal Steef," he said, then looking down on the slant pasture.
"And I shall announce them by the following. May the Steef please step out," his arm forwarded to a Pavillion beside the crowd.
All heads turned to the Pavillion, the flaps parting, and showing off Stranger, the Steef, in his blue armor.
He began to stride down the lane to the pasture alone, his chest out, and a smile on his face.
The Grubbs smiled to him, nodding their heads encouraging.
He stopped in front of the pasture, the Seer giving him a reassuring smile.
"And now," his arm moved to the Pavillion behnd the crowd.
"I'm pleased to announce, Umi, the human who shall be bonded to the Steef,"
Silence rolled over excited whispers, all heads turning to the Pavillion behind them. Even Stranger urged himself to turn.
"That's us. Hold my arm," Jala whispered, wrapping her arm around Umi's.
The flaps parted, revealing themselves to the crowd's stare.
Both the girls strode out, supressing a smile to the Grubb's eyes of awe.
Stranger grinned happily, as the human took down the lane.
So far, yet so close was she.
Jala and Umi stopped by Stranger, Jala releasing Umi's arm, and giving a respectable bow to both, and standing aside by the pasture.
Umi and Stranger looked to each other, both giving each other a joyful smile. They turned back to the Seer, looking down at his book open wide.
He glanced back up, looking directly to Stranger.
"Steef," he addressed.
"Such a long time we've spent together, you looking out for our village, and defeating the evil taking over our home, and our hearts. We are forever thankful of that, Steef. We shall always remember you as a loyal guardian of the Grubb tribes," he bowed his head.
The crowd gave off a few cheers, then dimmed down, looking to the human.
Daedlus looked down to Umi, a gentle smile appearing under his folds of skin over his mouth.
"And dear Umi, the most oddest-looking creature ever found," he said.
"You've proven yourself to be a legendary part of a Steef guardian's life. An important part in his life, you have shown. And to be a loyal savior of the Grubbs. I've heard of you saving the child's life for your own," he glanced out in the audience, seeing the child in the mother's arms blushing down from his gaze.
"That is the most daring feat I've ever seen," he went back to Umi.
"I'm glad that you've decided to become one with the Steef," he raised his arms.
The crowd roared of cheers, clapping and whistling.
His arms slowly went back down, and the crowd died down.
"Now. I shall begin this...very quick process..." he dipped down in to his book in front of him, turning the crisp, crackling paper pages over to the page he desired.
He went back to both, holding his folded hands on the page, and addressing to Stranger.
"Steef,"
Stranger's eyes locked on to the Seer's wise gaze.
"Do you take, this human...to be your lawfully bonded daughter? To love and to take care of, in sickness and in wealth. To teach, and to learn from, forever, in life?"
Stranger looked down to Umi, his throat clogging with words.
He wanted to express what he really felt, but causing a dramatic scene in front of a crowd wasn't what he had in mind.
"Yes. I do," he looked back to the Seer.
He then turned to Umi, his eyes gentle upon her nervous stare.
"And you, Umi,"
She snapped to attention to him, her gaze fixed easily upon him.
"To have Steef, be your lawfully bonded father. To be loved, and to learn from. To act upon and have in wellness, forever in your life?"
Umi looked down, her throat clogging as well. She couldn't get it out, her shyness growing stronger.
Get over it, Umi. Be strong she thought.
She snapped back up to him.
"I do," she nearly croaked.
The Seer gave her a confident smile, encouraging her from fear.
His hands laid softly upon his book, slowly closing it, but stopping at end.
"Very well," his voice grew grave, glancing at them under his eyes.
"I now can proudly announce you both..."
The crowd grew tense, holding in their urges to hoot and hollar.
"...lawfully bonded. You may hug each other, and all the lovey-dovey things fathers and daughters do," he waved his wrist around, and slapped his book together, sealing the process.
The audience bursted out in excited cheers, jumping up and raising arms.
Umi and Stranger looked at each other for a long moment, then Stranger knelt down to Umi.
The crowd dimmed to a near silence, watching in suspense.
His eyes looked down from Umi, she doing the same. He then looked back up, his eyes growing brighter.
"Umi," he said quietly.
She hesitated to look at him, but broke the fight to keep herself down, and looked up to him.
"Yes?" she said timidly.
The audience was silent.
Stranger's lip curled in to a smile, his mouth opening to the words he really wanted to say.
"All the time, I've been dying to say this..."
Umi listened only to him.
His eyes looked back up to her.
"I love you,"
Her heart sank, and her lip quivered. Tears sprung to her eyes. She lunged herself on to Stranger, wrapping her arms tightly around him, and sobbing, rubbing her face on his shoulder.
"I love you, too," she cried.
Stranger's arms crawled around her back, and lifted her up off the ground.
The audience bursted out in awe, hollering cheerfully at the Steef and human embracing each other.
Umi wanted to savor the moment forever, be stuck in the melacholny moment.
His embrace grew tighter, tears also streaking down his cheeks. How much he loved the human was more stronger than before. He truely loved her to death, to the point he'd die for her.
The crowd didn't die. The excitement was too much to supress themselves.
The Seer and the Queen stood by each other, smiling and almost feeling to cry with both.
Jala, however, was bawling, wiping hier eyes with her arms, in the happiest moment she witnessed. She was proud that Umi and Stranger were going to be happy together.
Daedlus leaned to the Queen, a smile growing.
"You know what this means now, ma'am," he whispered.
The Queen nodded.
"But let's give them a while, sir," she replied back.
"You know if we approach them quickly, they'll be heart-broken,"
The Seer nodded in understandment.
"I know. When winter almost passes to spring, we shall inform them," he said.
"Very good, sir," the Queen nodded.
She began to clap along with the jumping crowd, smiling kindly upon the Steef and Umi still embracing.
Stranger nuzzled his nose deep in to Umi's hair, then pulled away from her, looking deep in to her eyes. His eyes shone brightly of tears.
That only made Umi cry more.
"I love you so much..." he brushed her bangs from her forehead.
She nodded, wiping her eyes of tears rolling down her cheeks.
His hand cupped around her chin, and wiping her cheeks with his thumb gently. He moved forward, pressing a kiss on her forehead, and closing his eyes deeply.
He was more than happy, to show how much he cared for Umi, how much he loved her. For she would know, instead of keeping it to himself in shyness.
Their adventure was only beginning. Who knows what dangers and perils awaited them in the wonders of Oddworld.
But they knew, deep in their hearts, they had each other, to look after, and to make sure they were in check.
The Seer nodded, knowing what awaited for the newly-bonded couple. And all he hoped for was the best out of them, for it was the only thing he could do, for them to fulfill themselves.

There is a road in the hearts of all of us.
Hidden and seldom traveled.
Which leads us to an unknown, secret place
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And that, my friends, is the ridiculously-short quick-story, of the aftermath of Umi and Stranger.
What comes next?
Ah, now that, you must find out yourselves.
Stay tuned in on this thread to figure what lies ahead of these two.
(Lobo, I ask of you to give me the spoiler bit I gave you, so I can begin)
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*bawls* T-t-that was so sweet! *hugs everyone and cries hysterically*
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Yes, yes...'twas, very deep-fried dipped in fluffiness.
But! The story must go on!
Sometime, maybe when I'm done with my homework, I shall post the next story! The real shabang! Eh...you get what I'm sayin'. It's comin' up sometime this week. So keep yer underpants on her bottoms. :bows:
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Hey, ya know what guys?
I LIED!
'ere's the next story, the beginning.
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ODDWORLD: STRANGER'S WRATH.
In search of the Last Tribe.

PROPHECY, DESTINY, AND TRUTHS
Stranger's and Umi's destinies are told

In the beginning, it was all a mistake how a young human girl named Umi, met the mysterious bounty hunter named only but Stranger.
But the mistake turned out to be one of their greatest moments in their life, starting out to be their own little dynamic duo.
And as times grew long, their bond of friendship grew stronger to the point they'll die for each other.
Now, almost a year passed the dilemma of the Grubbs, Sekto's Dam, and Sekto, their lives settler down with the Chieftain Bears tribe of the Grubbs. Stranger and Umi accepted their duties as the guardians of the Grubbs with no questions asked, but things about being a protector troubled Stranger's mind.
And no matter how many times he asked the Queen Grubb, she would not answer to his confusions, but only tell one of his destinies lie with Umi, and she has the same, near different, destiny as his.
Fate now bonded these two as a lawful family of father and daughter, which made their lives more cheerful. And for once in Umi's long life, she has a father figure once again.
Now since their destinies lie together, they must be told. Not only was it their destiny to be a protector among the Grubbs, but to search for the last existing tribe of Stranger's kind: The Steef tribe.
Ever since Sekto was around, he was hunting down these terrifying creatures to the point of near-extinction, along with the only human on Oddworld. But since Stranger's de-pantsation trial with the Outlaw, D. Caste Raider unveiling his deepest secret, he was destined to kill the one called Sekto, and free the waters of the Mongo River.
He'd completed it, and now it was time of unveiling his and Umi's last fates of their lives, and then they would be complete...
*--*
“C’mon, Umi! The Elder’s waitin’ fer us!” Stranger called down the hall to the wardrobe room.
The door was quarterly open, with Umi, grunting inside, struggling to get in her clothes.
“It’d be easier if my clothes di’n’t fight with me!” she cried through the neck hole of her blue-green shirt.
Stranger scoffed, then walked down the hall to the room, and opened the door.
Umi gasped.
“Don’t come in ‘ere! I’m in me underwear!” Umi shrieked.
“Pipe down, lemme ‘elp yer,” he told.
He grabbed her arms, and pulled the shirt down, tugging over her head.
She smoothed it out from the glittering snake dragon to the two tassel ties at the side of her hip.
She checked her dark blue denim jeans with dark cherry-red brown tassels hanging on the outside of her legs. She tied up her hair high with her 3-shadow dragon scarf, two ties dangling down below her thick head of hair.
She smoothed her hair down, then checked herself up and down, to see if she’s presentable.
Plus, Seer Daedlus was the one who bonded she and Stranger. So it was impervious to really look her best to respect him on his decision.
Seeing the Elder Grubb was more of an honor, so she had to look nice for him.
Stranger couldn’t help but smile a little. This was the first time he’s seen Umi work on her looks than her brawn.
She looked up to him, his smile fading slowly.
“Yer ready now?” he asked patiently.
She checked over herself once more, then nodded up to him. She loved to see him in his blue armor with no helmet.
The helmet was only for decoration.
He seemed lighter to her rather than him wearing his usually bounty hunter outfit, as if he had a light aura around him than a dark face.
They walked out of their little home, and trotted through the fresh powder snow.
It was always cold in the Grubb territory, especially down in Last Legs. Winter never seemed to end where the Grubbs lived.
They walked down to the docks, where the Steef boat floated gently with the Mongo River’s arctic waters.
Umi stepped in lightly, minding the ice caked on the dock, and sat on the bow.
Stranger sat where the two handles of four oars on each side hovered above the water. He gripped them tightly, and shoved off the coarse bottom of the riverbed.
They were taking the route from the Native’s Village, and towards Last Legs, right of the fork in the river.
Umi looked up to Stranger straining to row through the thin ice holding them back.
“Wonder why the ol’ Grubb Seer wants to see us,” she asked.
Stranger shrugged, continuing to break the ice sheeting the river.
Frosty winds bit upon their face, and causing more of a force against the boat, slowing them down.
But they weren’t cold. Not to the core.
Umi’s curiosity blocked her thoughts of being cold, even though goosebumps formed over her skin.
Stranger’s mane of tannish-brown fur warmed his face, and his tight blue tunic covering his arms and legs blocked the winds from biting him.
But both were curious mice. All they thought of while heading down the Mongo River was what did the Seer want them for.

They arrive to the Native's docks. There, it was a bit warmer and the snow was less apparent, which was quite a surprise.
Two Grubbs at the head of the docks to Last Legs welcomed their guardians, and led them to the Guru's home throughout the large village.
Grubbs watched the Steef and human travel passed them, knowing immediately why they had come.
And as they approached the Seer’s home, the Queen waited with patient eyes outside his home.
Her head darted to the Steef and Umi behind the Grubbs leading.
"Well! It's about time you got here! The Rebel leader couldn't make it because she had other serious business to attend to..." she rolled her eyes sideways.
"Shopping, 'n crap..." she mumbled.
"but, uh, the Seer's ready to see you,"
She turned to the door, and knocked on the door gently.
An elderly voice called through the home:
"Come in,"
Leader grasped the knob, looking to Stranger and Umi, and nodded confidently.
"Goold luck, guys," she whispered, and opened the door for them.
The inside was a jade green color with lit candles of the walls. Entering the Elder Grubb's home was a sumptuous smell of sweet vanilla and cinnamon spice, and other sweet-smelling spices.
Smoke rose in a squiggly line of a ghostly purple out of a carved wooden bowl, with a potpourri stick burning lightly at the tip.
A beaded veil covered half of the other room.
Stranger parted the veil, letting Umi go in first.
In the middle of the jade-green room sat a wrinkly figure sitting upon a squishy pillow.
Its skin was a dark, dampened forest green, with a waterfall of wrinkles under its bright amber eyes. It looked as if the Grubb had a small beard under its chin.
The Seer gave them a toothless smile, darting his eyes up to Umi first.
"Welcome, human and Steef," he said.
His voice was old, but gentle in Stranger's tone. His arm waved lightly to two pillows before him.
"Please. Sit down,"
They sat on the same type of pillow the Elder was sitting on, not to disrespect him. The room was filled with many different artifacts.
Staffs with different colored feathers tied on a glassy smooth surface of the staff with a strong stem of a vine.
Masks hung on the wall with many patterns over the face, mostly black and green colors.
Hand-made clay plates stood on its edge on a stable wood shelf, with small inscriptures and pictures carved in to it.
Truly to Umi's sight, it was the most magnificent thing she's seen in all her young years.
The Elder placed a steaming mug of tea on his arm table, and gazed upon the two arrivals, snow still stuck in their hair. He gave another smile.
"I hope, that your bonding session is going well?" he raised a brow to them.
They gave a slow nod to him.
His lips curled slowly to a smile.
"Good," he said in a great tone.
"I've summoned you here to tell you two, your most important task,"
He put his fingers together, looking straight to Stranger in seldom.
"But it's more important to Steef,"
Stranger's throat choked with a lump.
"This may be hard to believe, yes. Especially since the Sekto Demon," he nodded, and looked down, closing his eyes.
He was silent for an awkward moment, making Umi feel a bit uneasy.
"Sir?" Umi looked under his face.
"What is it?"
The Seer sighed heavily, then opened his eyes to them, keeping his head down.
"I believe there's a Steef tribe, out far away, in the snowy fields," he finally told.
Both their eyes opened in shock
"Hmm..." Umi slumped back down.
"I've seen them in my visions, my dreams. I've seen Steef, running together in the beautiful flowered fields. Younglings, playing on the grassy hills, a game of King of the Hill. Young women Steef, gathering Blue brush and Lylac flowers for their mates of the future. I've seen it, and they've migrated, far beyond the Sertale mountains, passed the end of the Mongo Valley," he nodded, looking only to Stranger now.
He looked down from the stare of the Elder.
Daedlus gave a concerned grin.
"Something troubles you, Steef?" he asked softly.
Stranger didn’t reply, keeping his neon green eyes off the Seer, hiding his disbelief. He sighed.
"No, sir. Nothing," he shook his head.
The Seer gave a doubtful grin, but let him go.
"I am sorry for giving you such a surprising announcement, Steef. But on this day, it was my duty, to tell you your last destiny. And that's to find the last tribe of the Steefs," he nodded.
"but it will not be easy. Far beyond our barrier lies the Sleg swamps and the most notorious town beyond that. Boontown. Outlaws, bandits, thieves, and, well, I won't get any deeper," he smiled in a grave tone.
"but, if I know you two well, I know that you'll come off unharmed. I have my greatest faith in you, and everyone else does, too,"
"Sir, I-I don't think I can do this. I've failed ter protect the Grubbs once," Stranger straightened himself.
"and I don't think I can let the Grubbs go again,"
The Elder shot a glare at him.
"Steef," he shook his head.
"I cannot believe you can say SUCH a thing! It makes me hateful to hear something like that from the great protector!" he began to yell. "You've been protecting the Grubb tribe for nearly a year, now! Your ancestors didn't give up protecting us either until death took them down! This is your destiny, Steef! And it will be fulfilled! For shame, Steef. Your ancestors are shameful among-"
He gave a harsh cough, not seeming to stop.
Stranger could feel the Seers words sink in to him deeply.
Ever since form birth, his fate was to be the protector of the Grubbs. But his fate was put aside when his parents he never knew were killed, along with the rest of the Steefs. Industrialism drew him in, and now he was destined to save his own life by having the operation on his own legs, and hiding himself from the world, hunting outlaws for moolah.
Discovering that he was the next protector and that Sekto was hunting Steef to the point of extinction, he would never be the same.
His head perked slowly back up to the Seer, a shameful look drowned his expression.
"I'm sorry, sir. I shouldn’t of…surprised you like that…”
He had regained himself. His face softened to a smile.
"It's ok, Steef. I can understand how your life was, and now knowing your new job," he nodded.
"and becoming bonded with this, beautiful young human," he smiled to Umi, she blushing a little.
"Times have been hard on you two. But fulfilling this destiny, you shall be complete, never again worrying about destinies and fates. I promise you,"
He raised his hand in vow.
It would be nice of having a vacation from saving the Grubb's hides for once. And Stranger, having to be with his kind would make him happier.
Umi looked to the Seer.
"I accept this mission," Umi grinned.
The Seer only shook his head.
"It's not only up to you, Umi. It is more up to Steef," the Seer pointed to Stranger. He didn't reply nor glance at Umi or the Guru.
This last mission was bound to be tough, but it would be worth it. Having to be around his kind would be kind of fun. Plus, Umi seemed confident enough to help him out throughout the path to the Steef tribe.
He looked up to the Seer, and stood up.
"I accept this. I shall do what you say, Seer," Stranger bowed his head.
The Elder smiled.
"I knew you’d come through, Steef. Finishing this and you shall be free," he said. "Now. Since you have accepted the fate, I shall see you two out. I thank you for coming to my humble home. Good tidings, and I shall see you off first thing th tomorrow!" he said, as they headed for the exit.
The Seer followed them from the behind, carrying his staff he used for support, standing next to the Queen.
"They came out well," Daedlus nodded.
Both watched, as the Steef and human walked away through the city.
"This is going to be great. Finally, Steef will be happy," Queen smiled.
He nodded in agreement, turning to the Queen with a smile.
"Now we await the next arrival of the next guardian,"
She nodded in agreement to the Guru, watching again, as the Steef and Umi walk to the docks.
Their destinies were only to begin. And they weren’t going to be easy than they thought.
Perils lie ahead of them, along with unknown friendships.
But all of the Grubbs had their deepest faith in the Steef. If he could defeat the Sekto demon, then he could defeat anything.
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