My new story Oddworld Congquest of The Lost Continent -

Al the Vykker · #31 04-01-2002, 01:01 PM

Awesome seeing Glukkons from a new perspective!

paramiteabe · #32 04-01-2002, 09:55 PM

Chapter 12 The dreaded Morning!

The next mourning Kluna and Zin woke up from a long night. Silak was not in the room with them. Silak was out side talking with anouther glukken. There were other glukkens running past Silaks home and there were glukken officiers on Elums patroling the walkways. Then Silak ran into his home and told Kluna and Zin that there is something happening outside the cave.

"Kluna, Zin We have to get going!"

"What is it Silak?"

"I don't quite know but the officiers told us to go someplace safe." "They found us!" " Explained Silak.

Meanwhile back at the entrence to the glukken hideout, hundreds of glukken officiers were sitting on Elums holding there spears in their long arms ready to do battle. They were also carrying huge catapults and spooce connons. Beyond the cave were an army of the dark Mudokin spheres all lined up in a row. There were also massive catapults and Three Rorm beasts on big leashes. There were hundreds of dark Mudokin solders carrying their staff weapons and there were hundreds of large cages that were for the glukkens. There were other strange exotic races there with the dark Muds. Some were skinny worm like species and others were big strong creatures carrying large bolders. Lastly there was a flying race of beings swooping all around carrying spears. These were the forces of Clorns great Empire. Ready to strike the glukkens.

"My fellow dark muds victory is ours!" "Let us fight in the name of Clorn!" Yelled Trilas.

"Glukkens get ready!"

Back in Silaks home Kluna and Zin and Silak were running to the enterence when they herd the horns blow.

"What is that?" Said Zin.

"We are going to battle with Clorns forces!" Yelled Silak.
"We must hurry!"

The glukkens are ready for battle and the Dark Mudokin army out numbers the glukken army.

Suddenly the leader of the glukkin army raised his spear and called out to his fellow comrads.

"Glukkens, On my signal."

"Sir they out number us!" Yelled one of the glukken solders.

"There is no need for that glukken!"

As comander Trilas raised his arm he then ordered his muds to attack.

"Muds.....ATTACK!" Yelled Trilas.

Then without second the army of Clorn marched their way towords the glukken underground city. Horns blasting guns shooting.

"Glukkens fire!" Yelled the general.

And all of a sudden the whole area was now a battle feld. Glukkens running here and there. Throwing their spears and shooting themselves out of the catapults onto the Muds sholders and killing them. The same with the Dark Muds. Then the spheres broke into the cave enterance and they reliesed the three Rorm beasts to wreak havoc on the city. In a matter of minutes the city was engulped in flames and blood shed. Glukkens screaming and yelling and there was so much confusion. The Rorm Beasts were blasting fire on the buildings and there was a fierce ground battle between the Dark Mudokins and Glukkens. The other races contributed to the destruction. Silak suddenly ran into Trilas.

"Kluna Zin lets go!" "They are destroying the city!"

"Not so fast Silak!"

"You!"

"Ha your pitiful army is loseing!" "You will serve Clorn!"

But then Kluna and Zin came running around the corner followed by one of the Rorm Beasts.

"Ah!" "Silak we are being chased here!"

"What?" Yelled Trilas and the Rorm caused Trilas to run awey.

"I will be back for you Silak!" "You have my word!" Yelled Trilas.

"Guys lets go!"

And our three friends were running for their lives to escape the bloodiest battle Oddworld has ever known.

mitsur · #33 04-02-2002, 12:16 AM

Al the Vykker · #34 04-02-2002, 01:08 AM

The battle is designed perfectly. and described perfect!

paramiteabe · #35 04-02-2002, 01:50 PM

Chapter 13 Jungle Sprint!

As our friends were running for their lives through the city hundreds of Dark Muds were slaughtering the Glukkens. The Rorms were eating some Glukken solders and A lot of glukken solders were wounded. Some of the solders lost their limbs and others were being thrown into the cages and shipped off. But Kluna, Zin and Silak manage to get out of the cave city of the glukkens back into the jungle.

"Look at that!" Yelled Kluna. "We made it out of there!"

"Keep running the muds will see us!" Yelled Silak.

As they were entering the jungle there was a huge path there that was cleared by Clorns army. But as they were runing deeper into the bush they were stopped by a small group of those worm like creatures that were called Meenas.

"Halt nobody passes!" Said the meena. "Meenas, take these three awey!"

But something was ratteling in the bushes behind the Meenas.

"Kluna, Do see that?"

"Why yes I do!" Replied Kluna.

"You, what are you saying over there?" Asked the Meena.

"Oh nothing!" Replied Zin.

Suddenly an entire pack of meeches came jumping out of the bushes and started attacking the Meena solders.

"Ahahahahahaha!" Nooooooo!"

In a matter of minutes the Meena patrol was being taken off by the meeches. The meeches started wraping the dead Meenas in silk cacoons and taken awey to their nests. One by one a meech picked up a Meena and left. The last meech stood there and staired right at our friends and snarled and left.

"Do you think thats the same meech pack who ambushed us the other day?" Asked Zin.

"I don't know but we should get going!" Said Kluna.

Silak was a little head of Kluna and Zin. He was standing on the edge of a huge gorge with waterfalls going into it. He notice a safe place to go.

"Guys, We are home free!" Yelled Silak. "I see the temple road that belongs to the great Chun!" Explained Silak. "The temple is on the other side of the mountain which is a 2 mile hike from here!" "The great Chun is friendly to all visitors." "He will help us guys!" "Lets go!" Yelled Silak.

"Who is the Great Chun?" Asked Zin.

"Why he is the great slig No it all." "He is the wisest on the conntinnent!" Explained Silak. "We will go there and eat and discuss are delema." "Clorns people will not go near the sligs." "Lets go!"

"Sligs?" Asked Kluna.

"Hmm interesting lets go."

"Wait a minute Zin!" "You know sligs, they hate Mudokins."
Explained Kluna.

"Don't worry Kluna we are not on Mudos!" "You know that." "Look at the glukkens there nice to us." "It will be the same with the sligs." "This is getting better as we go."

"Yea but I want to be back on Mudos!" Replied Kluna.

"We will, don't worry!" "But we can't go back until we help these people." "It wouldent be right!" Explained Zin

"Yea I guess, but it's these inhabitants."

"Comeon, lets just go to Chuns temple." "Silak said the sligs are pieceful him."

"Alright!"
"Are you guys comeing?" Yelled Silak

"Yea were comeing." "Kluna just had something to say to me."

And they were off to the temple of the sligs to seek wisdom from the great Chun. Meanwhile back at the battle the entire glukken hide out was destroyed and deserted. Nothing remained only the dead solders and flaming buildings. Will our friends ever find their way home?

VykerSawBones · #36 04-02-2002, 08:24 PM

good job nice chapter want to hear more.

Al the Vykker · #37 04-03-2002, 07:27 PM

Another great chapter!

This is getting better and better!

paramiteabe · #38 04-04-2002, 02:31 AM

Thanks guys I really appreciete it.

Chapter 14 Rope Bridge!

The sun grew high and the heat was sweltering. The sounds of many creatures filled the jungle. As our friends were moving down the path into the gorge, they came to a massive narrow crevas with a flimsy rope bridge crossing it. Kluna glanced into the crevas and he saw no bottom to it. Only waterfalls going into it.

"Guys, what do we do now?" Asked Kluna.
"Well, I guess we are going to have to cross this." Said Silak.

"Cross this?" "Look how deep this is." "I see no bottom!" Explaned Kluna. "I aint crossing this!"

"Comeon Kluna, theres a bridge!" Replied Zin.

"Yea an old junky rope bridge!" Said Kluna.

"Well, I guess we should cross this, one at a time to be safe." Explained Silak. "Lets draw grass blades to see who goes first." "Who ever gets the longest blade will cross first." "Ok?" Said Silak.

"Sounds fair enough." Said Zin.

Then Silak and Zin stared right at Kluna.

"What?"

"Is it Alright?" Asked Zin.

"Yea, I guess." "But I never win these things!"

"Ok guys heres the blades pick one."

And so they did and of coarse Kluna picked the longest blade of grass. So he had to go first.

"Mann I knew it!" "Ok here I go!" Cried Kluna.

"After he gets across you go next Zin."

"Sure."

But as Kluna was in the center of the rope bridge a loud roar came from within the Jungle. Silak and Zin looked at each other with a frighten stare on each other face.

"Oh my odd!" "It's the Rorm, we got to move!" Yelled Silak.

"What is it guys?" Yelled Kluna.

"The Rorm Beast is comeing we have to move!" Cried Zin.

Then they suddenly ran right on the rope bridge. Kluna was still in the center and Silak and Zin were approaching. But the sounds of the massive Rorm Beast was getting closer. Another growel came from the beast and the trees began to sway. Then all of a sudden the Rorm Beast appeared and started to reach for our friends. Suddenly with a quick swipe of the rope bridge, the massive claws of the Rorm tore the bridge in half.

"Hold on!"

The Bridge was now hanging on the other side with our friends holding onto their lives. The Rorm began to shoot flames but was missing them every time. It started to get annoyed by that and just decided to leave and go back into the jungle. Kluna and Zin manage to pull them selves up but Silak was haveing a hard time because he is glukken useing his long hands to grab on.

"Comeon Silak!" "Reach for my hand!" Said Kluna.

"I got him!" Yelled Kluna.

Our friends manage to get themselves up.

"Wow, that was something!" Cried Silak.
"I notice something about that Rorm!" "It had a scar on it's face." "Oh my, Great it's the same one that attacked me the other day." "Swell now he has our sent!" Explained Silak
"Thanks for helping me out of there."

"No problem Silak!" "Thats what friends are for."

"Lets rest!"

Our friends luckily made their way over the rope bridge without getting themselves killed in the process. While they were resting from that ordeal, a little ways down they did not notice the meeches that were following them. they were jumping over the cravas and running into the bush. Our friends are safe for now but what dangers are still to come?

Al the Vykker · #39 04-04-2002, 11:25 PM

This is getting better each time and I love how you end the chapters.

VykerSawBones · #40 04-04-2002, 11:27 PM

Nice....Keep going

paramiteabe · #41 04-06-2002, 03:25 AM

Chapter 15 Running!

Our friends were running through the thick brush being chased by the meech pack. The screams of the meeches was all around. Then suddenly they ran into an open field of long grass.

"Comeon lets move!" "They are comeing!"

"Look it's the mountain!" Yelled Silak. "Comeon we are almost there!"

"Zin I need to slow down!" Yelled Kluna. "I can't keep up!"

"A little bit further Kluna."

As our friends made it into the middle of the field the meeches were no longer chaseing them. For they went back into the brush.

"They are no longer chaseing us!" Said Zin.

"Something spooked them" replied Silak.

"I wonder what?"

"No matter the mountain is now just across the field." "We will go there and climb the Stair way of the clouds." "There at the top, the sacred temple of the sligs awaits." Explained Silak.

But suddenly as our friends were getting closer to the mountain the Rorm beast came rampageing out of the jungle and started attacking a small herd of scrabs running across the field.

"LOOK OUT!"

The Rorm was chaseing the small herd of scrabs onto the other side of the field.

"Wow the Rorm moves very fast!" "Look how it is killing those scrabs!" Explained Kluna. "Just one huge swipe of it's claws and they are gone!" "Luckily he's way over there and we are here far awey from him."

"Stay low in the grass guys or he will see us." Explained Silak.

"Thats what must of spooked the meeches!" Explained Zin.

"Yea."

"Even though he's way over there he can still see us because a Rorms vision is very good." Explained Silak.

"So stay low and follow me!"

Are friends were sneaking across the field un notice by the feeding Rorm. For now they will soon make it to the stair way of the clouds and the Sacred Temple of the sligs awaits. What will they have to here from the Great Chun him self?

Al the Vykker · #42 04-07-2002, 08:18 PM

Check later for my first chapter of Failure to comply. Great chapter!

paramiteabe · #43 04-07-2002, 11:04 PM

Chapter 16 The Stair Case of the Clouds!

"We made to the Stair case guys!" "Lets move!"

"Um I don't know Silak thats a long way up!" Cried Kluna and Zin

"We will be fine just take slow steps!"

An hour past and they were in the middle of the vast Stair case. Kluna and Zin were starting to get annoyed by this.

"Silak you said we will be fine!" "You said no problems!" "I AM GETTING TIRED!"

"Relax this is easy!" Yelled Silak.

"Yea, maybe for you but are legs arent as long and as strong as yours!" Cried Kluna.

Suddenly a large winged creature came flying down to attack our friends.

"Ahaha!" "Watch out, It's a Slawk Bird!" Yelled Silak

"What in odds name is a Slawk Bird?" Asked Zin.

"It's a large Bird that lives high in the mountains!" "They are carniverous!" Yelled Silak. "Duck!"

The Slawk came swooping in and just missed our friends by an inch.
"Comeon lets move before he comes back!" Yelled Zin.

Then the Slawk made another attempt to catch our friends. It swooped in again and picked up Kluna by the pony tail.

"Ahaha! help Zin help!"

"We are comeing Kluna!" "Silak what do we do?"

"Get onto my sholders and jump!" Explained Silak.

"I am comeing Kluna!"

"Hurry, before he flies awey!" Yelled Kluna.

"Grab on to my staff!" Yelled Zin.

And Zin manage to grab Kluna with his hikeing stick. But then the Slawk started to attack Zin. Zin started whacking at the beast and the beast flew awey without a lunch.

"Are you ok Kluna?"

"Yea, I am fine!" "Hey look, it's the temple!" "We made it!" "Yay!"

And so they made it to the temple of the sligs to seek wisdom from the great slig know it all, Chun. What surprises awaits our friends?

paramiteabe · #44 04-09-2002, 01:43 PM

Chapter 17 The Sligs of the Alfa!

As our friends climbed the last bit of stairs of the mountain, they walked up to the door and knocked. But nobody answered until suddenly the door opened to a large chamber with sligs everywhere. These sligs were no ordinary sligs with mechanical pants. For these sligs had real legs and were not wareing masks and carrying guns like the ones on Mudos. The sligs were wareing robes and were piecefully greeting Kluna, Zin, and Silak.
There were even Big Bros with real legs carrying carts with passengers inside to someplace in the temple fortress. Also there were flying sligs with real wings that were watering gardens that were hanging high up on the ceiling. There were slig children playing in the walkway. They too had real legs and were wareing robes.

"Greetings fellow travelers." "We love vistitors as you can see." "We don't get many visitors here." "So we are pleased to have you here." "The sligs of the Alfa welcome you all." "My name is Kleek." "What do you wish to seek my friend."

"This is Kluna and Zin." Said Silak. "I am Silak." "We are here to seek out the great Chun." "As you know my people are being killed at the hands Clorn and his minions." "Kluna and Zin come from a far off place called Mudos." "They were sent here by a huge storm and they are trying to get home." "Please we need to speak to Chun about this." Explained Silak. "It is of great importance."

"What sort of importance my friend?" Asked Kleek.

"It is of life and death!" Said Zin.

"Yea!" Replied Kluna.

"Very well I will take you to him but us sligs of the Alfa have a tradition." "When ever visitors come we have a great feast and we have them stay a night here to rest up." "So do come and join us to celebrate life with us." "We wish to be your friend and get to know you." "The sligs of the Alfa don't believe in war." "For all walks of life are welcome here in Chuns kingdom." "So come and relax with us and then you will get your answers you seek my friends." Explained Kleek.

"Very well we will find a place to sleep."

"No need, we already prepaired a place for you." Said Kleek.

"Mann I am liking this!" Said Kluna. "Why can't the sligs on Mudos be like these sligs?"

"Yea me too, this is good for us after a long adventure through the jungle and being chased by meeches caught, up in a battle and almost get eaten by the Rorm beast and almost falling to are death on a bridge and getting attacked by a huge bird." "We can use the rest right about now!" Said Zin

"Come it is time for the dinner my friends." Explained Kleek.

And they were now safe inside the temple of the sligs for the time being of coarse.

Al the Vykker · #45 04-10-2002, 01:00 AM

Youve done great again! It is really cool how things are so much different on this continent then on Mudos.

Check out my latest chapter of Failure to Comply

paramiteabe · #46 04-12-2002, 11:41 AM

Chapter 18 The Dark Room!

Meanwhile on top of a dorment volcano a huge fortress stood tall. The sounds of screaming and whiping were comeing from within. Thousands of Dark Mud spheres were all parked all around the fortress. A bunch of Dark Muds were going inside of the fortress jokeing with one another. While Trilas, the leader of the army was standing in the gateway stareing out at the the sun set in the horizon. He was thinking of Kluna and Zin and his arch rival Silak.
He then was thinking to himself.

"Who are these mudokins that seem to be among the glukkens?" "Why are they here?" "And most importantly where do they come from?" "They said that they were from the north and there master wanted Silak for himself." "Who is this master in which the two mudokins speak of?" Thought Trilas. "Hmm!"

Then Trilas turned around and walked into the fortress and was headed for the Dark Room. He came upon a bunch of Dark Muds jokeing with one another.

"You guys stop joking you have work to do!" Yelled Trilas.

"Yes sir master Trilas!" "We are right on it!" Cried the group of Dark Muds.

"WELL THEN?" GET TO IT!" Yelled Trilas.

"Ahhhh!" "Yikes!" Cried the Dark Muds. and they ran off.

Then Trilas walked into the Dark Room and stood upon a platform. The Dark room was completely pitch black. The only light that existed in this room was the dim light over the platform. But all around was complete darkness. Trilas stood there stareing in the darkness. Then a low voice came from within the darkness.

"Why do you come here my friend?" Said the deep voice.

"I come to seek you my lord." Said Trilas

"STATE YOUR BUSINESS DARK MUD!" Yelled the voice.

"We have conqured Zilanoff the great underground city of the glukkens my lord." Replied Trilas.

"Ahh, the champion has come!" Said the voice. "You have spoken of the new Mudokins among the glukkens?" Explained the voice.

"Yes my lord, they are different."

"In what way?" Said the voice.

"They don't even look like us they sport a pony tail and they are green." Explained Trilas.

"Hmm, Mudokins of Mudos?" Said the voice.

"Whats that you say my lord?" Asked Trilas.

"Nothing of your concern, go now and finnish your duty!" Replied the voice."
"But my lord you said..?"

"Be gone now there is nothing left to discuss with me."

"Yes my lord!" Replied Trilas.

He then left the Dark room with the large door shutting behind him. Meanwhile in the Darkroom the voice thought of what Trilas said and questioned to him self it.

"Mudos?" Hmm.

paramiteabe · #47 04-14-2002, 05:24 PM

Chapter 19 The dinner!

Meanwhile in the temple of the sligs Kluna, Zin, and Silak were enjoying dinner with their new friends. When Kleek announced to everybody to bow down for Chun the great slig know it all was comeing to join them.

"Sligs of the Alpha, bow down for our king comes."

Then as everybody bowed down, trumpets sounded and the great Chun came in from behind a great curtain of silk. Chun was a very different looking slig. He was 20 ft tall and his long mouth tenticals were small and short. Chun was not the color of yellow like the other sligs were. For he had the colors blue and green to him.

"My fellow sligs of the alpha." "Let us eat for this food shall not be waisted!" "Tonight is a night of celebration for every night is a celebration of life." "But tonight is special because of our guests."
Explained Chun.

Then everybody at the banquet started to eat.

"Hey Kluna, we have to talk to him about our delema."

"Not now Zin, I am enjoying our treatment here."

Then Zin turned to Silak who was sitting next to him.

"Ive never seen Kluna so happy since we were stranded Silak." "I think he is starting to like it here." Explained Zin.

"He needs someone who would treat him better than I have!" Explained Zin. "Ive alweys been ordering him around back on Mudos and sometimes he hates me for that." Explained Zin. "But we have been alweys friends since we were Mudoklings liveing with our mother Sam." "Am I going crazy Silak?" Explained Zin.

"Sure your not!" "You two are in seperable friends." I see it in you two ever since I met you." "It is normal for you to have disagreements about things especially dangerous things." "I think he is just trying to fit in with you since you show signs of a great leader." "Thats all." "So treat him with more respect and he will thankyou for that Zin." Explained Silak.

"Oh thanks Silak you know a lot!" "He will wonder what has come over me when I start treating him better." Laughed Zin.

And they all were eating and enjoying the strange but exotic music of the Sligs not even thinking that the next day they will have to leave the temple and continue their great journey and brave the unknown of this Lost Conntinent. But they won't do so until they get the wisdom of which they are seeking from Chun.

Al the Vykker · #48 04-15-2002, 07:54 PM

Great descriptions of the settings. Well done!

paramiteabe · #49 04-18-2002, 01:44 PM

Chapter 20 A Long Journey Ahead

It was next mourning and there was a herd of scrabs that were feeding on some paramites down below the mountain on the field. A flock of birds flew out of the surrounding jungles into the bright, blue sky of Oddworld. Sounds of thousands of creatures filled the jungles. Meanwhile Kluna, Zin, and Silak were comeing down the Stair way of the Clouds, escorted by Chun and other sligs along with Kleek.

As they got to the bottom, Chun stoped and sat down on the field of grass. He then raised his hand and clapped to call his royal Bodyguards over.

"Get me my Alpha leaf tea." ordered Chun. "Now my friends, this is where I come to meditate." "Please join me and sit." explained Chun.

Then Kluna, Zin, and Silak sat down along with Kleek.

"Master Chun, we have been trying to seek you out for the longest time now." said Silak. "For we are in great distress." "The evil Clorn and his minons of Dark Muds have sloughtered thousands of my people and inslaved us." "Kluna and Zin were accidently sent here and are trying to get back home." "Please we need your guidance."

"I sense that you are from Mudos am I right?" Asked Chun.

"Why yes Chun we are!" Cried Zin.

"There is only one way you can go back home my friends." "And that is to find a relic of un speakable power!" Explained Chun.
"It is known as the relic of the omega." "It was created by a race of powerful beings who have long been extinct for a mileneum."

"Where is it?" asked Kluna.

"It is of ten, thousand, miles of here in the center of the conntinent." "This relic will allow you to transport out of here but."

"But what?"

"It is missing." "You must find it." "But it won't be easy my friend." "For it has been written in the sacred scroll of the slig that there shall come a day when two worriors from a distant land shall bring balence to this land." "And that day has come." "Clorn is growing strong with his power."

"Who is Clorn?" Asked Silak.

"For Clorn is an indety of un speakable evil that never was heard of on Oddworld." Nobody knows what he is and what his purpose is." "Clorn will stop at nothing to destroy your race." "You must hurry for Clorn will destroy us as well." "We call him the devour of Sauls."

"Has anybody ever seen him."

Then with a slight turn of Chuns head he desplayed a ghostly look in his eyes and said one word.

"NO!"

"My friends you shall not leave this place until you destroy Clorn." "For his power grows even more every day." "Find the Relic and destroy the evil that has choked this Lost Conntenint." "You are the only hope!" Cried Chun.

"My friends, Just as Clorn took this place he will take the rest of Oddworld with him." "So you must vanquish him once and for all before its too late!" Explained Chun. hurry find the relic and bring piece to the land."

"We don't know where to go Chun?"

"Follow the creatures they will lead you to the center." "For one day we will return to celebrate the victory over this Lost Conntenint." "Go now and be brave my friends."

And then our friends were off in surch of the lost relic of the omega. What dangers awaits them? Time will only tell.

Al the Vykker · #50 04-18-2002, 06:07 PM

Awesome Chapter! I'm wondoring who Clorn might be, very intersting..........

VykerSawBones · #51 04-20-2002, 07:40 PM

greatjob

paramiteabe · #52 04-21-2002, 02:14 AM

Chapter 21 A quick escape!

As our friends got up from the ground Chun thanked them for comeing and visiting them for the night. He supplied each of them with some alpha slig powder.

"Take this my friends it is my alpha slig powder." "It will bring you good luck."

"Thanks Chun." Said all of them.

Then Suddenly a loud horn blew from the other side of the field. It was a line of Dark spheres.

"LOOK, THERE THEY ARE!" said Trilas.

Then suddenly all the spheres started rolling towards our friends at top speed.

"Oh my odd here we go again!" yelled Kluna.

"Run get going!" "We will take care of these guys!" Explained Chun.

"But!"

"No buts, just go!" "There are some alpha sligs waiting for you down at the bottom of the small hill."

"Comeon lets move before we are mince meat with them!" Said Zin.

And then they were off. Luckily there were alpha sligs waiting for them.

As they left the area the spheres rolled right up to Chun. Out came Trilas with his weapon.

"You, Alpha Slig where did they go?" Asked Trilas.

"I do not know who you are talking about." said Chun.

"Very well, we will find them and when we do, I will have my revenge!" Explained Trilas.

As our friends got down at the bottom of the hill, alpha sligs were there waiting for them. The alpha sligs had three strange looking Elums with them. They were of different color and they also seemed bigger than the typical Elum. What is in store for our friends?

Al the Vykker · #53 04-21-2002, 05:11 PM

This is really getting better I would have to say, what are the new elums?

paramiteabe · #54 04-24-2002, 12:07 AM

chapter 22 The Riders of Conquest!

Kleek, the Alpha slig was at the bottom of the hill greeting our friends. When Kluna asked what kind of Elums were those.

"Great, you guys made it." "I think they lost you." said Kleek

"Kleek, what kind of Elums our these?" Asked Kluna.

"Ah yes, these are a gift from Chun Himself." "These Elums are very special." "They are known as Alpha Elums." "Alpha Elums are much more stronger and bigger and faster than their conterparts." "These Elums are for you guys." Explained Kleek. "You will need them for your journey." "They are as strong as a scrab and as fast as those Spheres." "Take care of them and they will take care of you."

"I want the black one with the feathery stripe on it's back." Said Zin.

"Ill take the green one!" Said Kluna.

"And I will take the blue one!" Said Silak.

Then they jumped up onto there Elums and they indeed looked like great worrors of bravery. For two mudokins and a glukken, they sure looked brave. It was this look of bravery in our friends which gave the Alpha sligs the confidence in them. Suddenly the platoon of Dark Muds lead by Trilas, approached the hill. A horn blew and Trilas came out of his sphere.

"Sir, they got Alpha Elums we won't be abel to catch them now!" Said one of the dark muds.

"We don't need to catch them right now." "for I know where they are headed!" "They are headed for the center hehe!"

"The center?" "Oh yes I forgot the center hahahahahahah!" laughed a dark mud.

"They are screwed!" "For the wilderness they enter, is a hostle place indeed!" "They will be lucky if they even make it to the center of the Contenent!" "Ten thousand miles of night marish conditions!" "Lets go!" Said Trilas.

And the dark muds got back into their spheres and started rolling back to their fortress. But Trilas took his sphere and rolled right in front of the platoon blocking their way out. Then Trilas came out of his sphere.

"Where are you headed?" Yelled Trilas.

"We are going back like you said!" Said one of the dark muds.

"No, we follow them and keep a low profile." "I want to see why they are headed for the center." "We can learn so much!" Explained Trilas.

"But sir you said!"

"I know what I said, we will follow them!" "LETS MOVE!" Yelled Trilas.

Meanwhile our friends were riding off into the Oddworld sunset on there Alpha Elums. As they were headed on their great journey of conquest, Chun was looking out from a balcony in his temple at them and thought to himself.

"Go my friends find the relic, destroy the evil you will." Thought Chun. "Be the riders of Conquest!"

He then smiled and turned to Kleek and asked him to follow them into the unknown wilderness.

"Kleek, you will keep an eye out for them."

"But master they are long gone!" Said Kleek.

"Take my alpha Elum he is the fastest." "But keep low until there is trouble!" "We cannot afford loseing them Kleek." "You have my promise that they will return with Victory?" Asked Chun.

"Yes master I will not let you down!" Explained Kleek.

Then Kleek took his cape and spear and mounted onto his Alpha Elum and rode off aswell into the great unknown wilderness of this Lost Conteninet.

"Indeed for they are the riders of Conquest!" Thought Chun.

paramiteabe · #55 04-26-2002, 02:19 AM

Chapter 23 The North Wilderness!

It was getting dark, and our heros were rideing their alpha elums across the vast field. They decided to slow down and walk for they were out of harms way of Trilas and his platoon of dark muds. What they dident know was the fact that Trilas was also following them but hideing far behind them. As Zin looked up into the clear star lit sky, he notice a strange moon with several markings on it's surface. It was two Mudokin faces with a shape of a glukkens body surounding the faces. He was in wounderment in what that meant. In the distants they could hear the loud roar of a Rorm Beast howling at the moon. Also they could hear the sounds of other strange creatures comeing from far ahead of them into the wilderness they were about to enter. It was almost as if no inteligent life form existed within the wilderness they were to embark into. For the wilderness had an errie darkness that seemed to hunt Kluna and Zin, and Silak.

"I am scared Silak!" "We don't know what exists out there!" Said Zin.

It seemed as if something was hunting Zins mind But he was not aware of it at all. So they stoped and took a rest before they were to journey into the black pine forest. For this pine forest was an errie sight to see.

"It is known that the field in which we just crossed is the great divide of the south and the north." "That is probally why it is cooler here." "We are further North." explained Silak.

"Are you just saying that to keep us from being scared?" Asked Kluna.

"Why yes!" Laughed Silak. "Don't worry we will camp here tonight and tomarrow mourning we will start up again."

"But what about preditors?" Asked Zin.

"They won't come!" "Our Alpha Elums will warn us by waking us up if something was near like a Rorm or a meech." "Lets get some rest and we will start up tomarrow!" Explained Silak.

And so they did but mean while on top of a small rise in the field Trilas stood there looking down at them. Then one of the other dark muds came up to him and asked.

"Sir, what is it that makes you so cerous in them?"

"It is their difference between us." "They are not from here and I want to know why they are here." "Clorn knows something, and I need to find out." Explained Trilas.

"Sir, come, it is getting late, join us back at camp." "We will catch them but right now I am tired." Said the dark mud.

"You never ceased to amaze me." "Very well, let us sleep." Said Trilas.

Then as the dark mud went back to the camp Trilas stood there and thought to him self.

"Soon Silak, soon I will have my revenge!" "And as for your new found friends, may they feel the real nature of this land!" "For whare ever they come from, they will know what fear is and fear shall strike them ten fold"

Then Trilas went back to camp to rest. As for our friends, they sleep tonight, but unknown dangers await.

Al the Vykker · #56 04-26-2002, 12:42 PM

The story I have to say gets better, every time I read it. Spooky.

paramiteabe · #57 04-29-2002, 02:28 AM

Chapter 24 Zin's Dream!

It was the middle of the night. A gust of wind blew past our sleeping friends and the crickets were chirping. Zin was turning back and forth as he lie there a sleep. The small camp fire was almost completely out and the moon with the figures was full. The dim glow of the moon shown upon them, like a hunted sight indeed.

Then Zin awoke and found him self walking alone through the tall grasses of the great field they crossed. He looked up in the sky, and saw the moon turning red as blood. Then he looked, and before him, was a vast ocean. He then notice a small fishing boat drifting out there lifeless and still. Suddenly, the sky grew black and hid the bloody moon. Then Zin looked back at the boat and notice it was gone. But then the entire ocean became lifeless and red, as what the moon appeared.

He began to hear screams and yelling comeing from behind him. He turned, and what he saw was his home villiage ingulped in flames, and the sloghtering of innocent Mudokins.

Suddenly, everything grew deathly silent, and Zin couldent see anything but complete darkness all around him. He looked down at his hands, and they were covered with blood. As he looked he was deeply frighten for what he saw, was 3 staffs with the pierced heads upon them. The first staff had the head of his best friend Kluna and the second had the head of Silak. But he noticed the 3rd staff was hidden behind a shadow. He ran up to it and what appeared was his own head upon the staff. Zin began to panic in utter tourment and fear. As the face of evil appeared in front of him.

"Who are you!" Yelled Zin.

And face laughed even more.

"Fool, I am what I am!" Replied the face.

And then the face dissappeared into the darkness. Zin then suddenly woke up from this horrible dream yelling.

"Ahhhhhhhhhh!"

"what the?" "Whats going on here!" Yelled Kluna and Silak.

"Zin are you ok what happen?" "Your sweating all over and your breathing hard!" Explained Kluna.

"I don't know I just had horrible dream." "You were in it and you were in it as well." "But it wasant pretty!" "I am alright we should just go back to sleep since we have a big day tomarrow!" Explained Zin.

"Are you sure Zin?" Asked Silak.

"Yea I am fine it was just a dream, ill be alright."

"Alright what ever!" Said Kluna and Silak.

And the 3 went back to sleep. But what was the meaning behind the dream and most importantly, who was the laughing face?

Al the Vykker · #58 05-01-2002, 12:08 AM

All I can say is I'm freaked, that was one scary dream. An interesting Revelation. Great chapter!

VykerSawBones · #59 05-03-2002, 11:38 PM

cool chapter your right al it was a freaky dream

paramiteabe · #60 05-04-2002, 02:42 AM

Thanks guys.

Chapter 25 Come the Dawn of a the Giants!

It was mourning and a flock birds flew past our friends. The sun was just comming up over the horizon. Silak with his Alpha Elum was standing a little awey from Kluna and zin that were still sleeping. For he was looking into the forest but it seemed as if the forest was looking back. Then he noticed it, a figure moveing throughout the tree line a large figure. He got onto his Alpha Elum and ran back to the camp to wake up Kluna and Zin.

"Guy's wake up! We have company!"

"Wha what's going on Silak?" asked Kluna.

"I am trying to sleep Silak!" yelled Zin.

"We got company!"

"Who Silak who?" cried both of them.

"It's best we get going!" "I seen this thing before."

"What is it?" asked Zin.

"Ok get your spears and mount onto your Alpha Elum." "I will explain when we get out of here."

"Alright relax Silak we are moveing!"

And so they did but as they mounted onto there Alpha Elums and turned to enter into the forest, they were frozen in utter fear for what was standing in front of them, was a massive Scrab the size of an entire tree.

"What in odds name is that!" yelled Zin.

Then suddenly another giant creature came out of the forest. For this was a massive paramite. It made a loud screeching noise and elerted the giant scrab. Then suddenly the two Giants started fighting each other just before a Rorm beast came rampageing out of the forest persueing our friends for breakfest. But it notice the other giants fighting each other. Now the giant Paramite and the giant scrab were being slashed at by the Rorm.
Then suddenly an entire pack of meeches came running in and getting there fill off the entrails of the two giants. staying clear from the feeding Rorm. Kluna and Zin were in wounderment and fear of this primative sight of nature at it's best.

"WOW giant scrabs and paramites!" "I can't believe it!" Said Kluna and Zin.

"Well you better they are known as alpha scrabs and alpha paramites." "Like all alpha creatures they are more evolved then their counterparts." "In this case these alpha creatures are giants." "We are lucky because we would have been feed for those creatures just now." "Lets move before that Rorm sees us." explained Silak.

And quickly our friends snuck pass the two large carcasses and the Rorm un noticed. They sliped into the forest and were gone. Meanwhile Trilas and his platoon were slowly following them as well as sneaking pass the Rorm and into the forest. Our friends managed to escape un harmed as well as our enemy. What adventures do they face? And what ever happen to Kleek?