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Charicter gathering!

(If this is in the wrong place move it I don't know where it should go.This is a place where all the people from other stories come together to fight the ultimite evil!I dunno what it is yet though.One more thing,the people don't know each other yet.)

Ken started walking through the forest when he saw somthing black slowly spread across the ground."What the hell is that?"Ken said.
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03-03-2002, 07:27 PM
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I don't know said Jerome I'll check it out
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It appears to be some sort of new creature. Holy!!!!


" Run!"



Jerome and Ken ran as fast as they could but were stopped by a squad of sligs. Ken And Jerome klimbed a tree as bullets flew past the two of them. SOme times I don't how we get into these situations.



I' m not sure though tbut this might be in the wrong place
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Damn.....it's the slig squad!

"Is that you Ken?"said a slig in the group."Hey its Juar!!!!!"Ken said."The blackness is sweeping the ground!"Jerome said."I don't like the feel of it" Ken said."It does fell kinda bad"Juar admited."We gotta warn the chief of the village!!!!!!"Ken said in alarm
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I'll warn the neighboring villages before they too will be attacked and surely killed.
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Nice....

(nice toch with formal kind of words)

"You guys keep the shadow thing busy and we will alert the villages"Ken said.Before Juar could ask, they were gone.(Hey help me PM every person who makes a story Al)
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Jerome head ed into the primary village and leaped over the gate part of the tower was on fire. I must reach the captain!
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Just as the tower was burning it started to collapes on the Muds down below. But suddenly Blarg came flying out of west to put the flames out by useing his powers to create water. "What is happening around here?" "I can't tune into this new threat to Oddworld." "What is this new evil?" "I don't understand this." "My home in the canyon was destroyed by it." "I will try to help you get out of here!" "I know a place where we could be safe for a little while. So we can plan on how get rid of this new threat." Blarg Explaned.

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"Where can we stay safe?" Ken asked.
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There is an island off the coast of Mudos that I keep as a sort of safe haven for creatures who are nearly extinct. Said Blarg.
We could go there and come up with a plan. Explaned Blarg. The Island is very remote and I don't think this new threat will find us there.

I have telepathically called hundreds of other races to come to the Island. By now they should be teleported there by my lost profacy orb.

When we get there I could creat a surge of water to surround the island to by us some time. Explaned Blarg.
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"Okay"said Ken "but we need more help!"So when they teleported there they thought up plans.
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meanwhile Jerome lead part of a mud squadron up bunker hill where they were ambushed, not even knowing who had attacked them.
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Jerec had the charge in full swing as the mud army continued to battle the creatures of dark fighting into the depths of the darkness, as a bloody war had just begun............
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Soon,Ken saw the battle"I have to end this!"he said.Suddenly he charged up all his energy into one blast!Then he fired.Everything evil died."I can't do that again for awaile"he panted.(He had used all his energy)
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"How the heck did you do that??!!"A soldier said."I charged up my energy"Ken said
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We need to get past the second brigade Ken then we will truly be safe. Jerec said. THe group charged twards the brigade as Jerec protected both Ken and Blarg as they rested, this will be dangerous but is the only way!
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Suddenly Blarg started to glow like fire and started to hover off the ground. He then cried in fear and yelled at the top of his lungs. "STOP WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?" "I NEVER DID ANYTHING TO YOU!" Then Blarg fell back to the ground with a frighten ghostly look on his face. for this new evil just tuned into Blarg and gave him a frightening vision of the future.
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(Cool story so far! Can I joi in? Oh well I i Can' just tell me and I'll edit it Lol!)

Rt ran wildly from the wild sligs. "Get away Get away" He screamed! Raziel at th head of the pack. Scraming for blood..Blood! Rt ran harder and fster, pausing for a second could mean certain death. Suddenly Rt turned into a Dragon (Sorry Drag won't belike that forever!) and flew away leering at the sigs, who were presently dumbfounded. I must find somewhere safe..........

(Sorry its like an RPG i've never don one of these before Like! Buh-Bye)
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Raziel look out behind you! JErec through himself into Raziel to save him from a shadowed figure that was trying to kill Blarg, Ken, Raziel, and himself.
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As the shadow was clutching our friends throats, Blarg was thrown to a tree. Then Blarg stood up and said several words in some new form of language. "Slin oslma kis nia" Which ment (be gone). The shadow let loose of Jerec, Ken, Raziel. Then the shadow started to gang up on Blarg. But it couldent get to him brcause he formed a shield of energy around himself. He then yelled out to his friends. "Guys jump into my shield before it's to late!"

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good story you peeps are making i think this is a good place to be
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"NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!"Ken yelled but was pushed into the ship.Ken watched Blarg start being hurt badly."LET ME OUT YOU *BEEPS*!"Ken said."Sorry Ken but I have to do this"Jerec said and knoked out Ken.(BUM BU-BUM BUM BUN-BAH BAH )


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ITs up to me! LEt go of him creatures of the dark! Light surgerd out of JEREC and alll was silent...........
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A few hours later.....

Soon,Ken woke up."Where are we?"he said
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For now they were in a large chamber of some type. Blarg was chained to the wall. and the others were chained as well. Then Blarg tried to call his orb to teleport his friends and him out of there but it dident work. He then used his other powers to break the chains and that dident work. "Guys when that shadow tuned into me I saw something that was frightening." "We and thousands of other races were being tortured in that vision." "We have to do something." "But I have been weaken by the shadow." "Got any ideas?"
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"I think I have an idea!"Ken said."You have an idea??!!!The last time we did one of your ideas,we were almost killed( )!!"
Blarg said."Just listen."Ken said."We can gather other people to help us fight!"(I know it's like the Toa from Bionicle)
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"But how?" We don't even no where we are at." Explaned Blarg. "I don't reconize this place."
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( Funny my iddy Raziel has apeared in a Fanfic..... Raziel if you didn't know is a big bro thats been fiddled around with to make an ultimate security....er thing....... he escaped and then began a life as a leader of a troop of wild sligs.
He is usally calm but when hungry is unstopable but will calm down in a situation where something or a wild slig may be hurt..... okay Raziel isn't RT's Char therefore she can't control him without my Permission but In this case I'll keep him in the fic...)
Raziel looked down on the restraints on him and growled "I think I can reconize the area by the stench.... We won't get out of here just by talkin anyhow so we look traped so lets do somit or we are all mince-meat."
Raziel grumbled then put all his weight onto the restaints and gave them a hard yank... One split right in two so he used his free arm to smash the others.... he droped down to the floor and went over to each of the others and yanked them down, "you can never chain an angry lizard "
He helped them down... "now what?"
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(How did Raziel get here so easily?)
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Jerec looked for his slypth(spear) but could not feel it there must be another way for us to get free Blarg try once more!
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