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08-04-2001, 04:13 PM
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Oddworld poem

Hi, this is my first Oddworld poem!

There's a fuzzle on my head
And the fuzzle is mad

And I asked him what?!
Have your brother been shot?

Was he shot by a slig
Or are you just sick?

Or have you cornered a paramite?
You know that's not bright

But the fuzzle on my head
Said nothing and is still mad!
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08-04-2001, 04:29 PM
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hehehe, yeah! A funny poem, do you have more of them? i can't wait to read the next (if you have more)

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If you think that's shit your an idiot. That poem rules!
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08-05-2001, 09:00 AM
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I don't have more now ( ), but I will think up another one.

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08-05-2001, 05:44 PM
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Yeah! I agree with General Drippik! Poems are the best!!! They should make more of them, it's cool, it's fun, it's simply the best!!!!

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ooooooooooooooooooooK...

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"Yes...yes...we have two for brain surgery. Yes..thats right. Transplants. Their namez..errr...a Mz Alector and a Mr Dripick. LoL...yes, thats what i thort..yes, yes ok thank you. Bye"
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08-05-2001, 06:47 PM
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That's not nice....what have i done that you hate me Oryon? Can you just leave the comments, please? Here are people who want to have fun in the Forums and not fights.

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I aint starting fights...i am showing my amazing sarcasm. If i wanted to start a fight i would of said things alot worse, believe me. And i dont hate u..its jus' u say things i can easily take the piss out of!, lol
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Thinking up another GOOD poem is hard... but, finaly, here is the second poem: "What is a slig without...?"
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What is a slig without his pants?
He must then crawl, by using his hands!

What is a slig without his wings?
He then can't fly, that sort of things!

What is a slig without his gun?
If he sees a scrab, he must then run!

What is a slig without his brew,
if he sees al of you?
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08-08-2001, 08:43 PM
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Yeah, that's cOol! i can't make poems in the english language. But i write very often poems (not about Oddworld). i can't wait for the next!

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Them poems are cool I like to write poems to not about oddworld though
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08-13-2001, 10:35 AM
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they're good poems CP, keep up the good work...

i've never written a poem by choice in my life...
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they are cool poems.

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09-08-2001, 05:48 PM
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Ok, i also tried to write a poem...it's a bit small but hey...a poem is a poem :

Come to the magical land in Oddworld

We're on an expedition,
this is the Oddworld nation,

1000 miles through desert sand,
follow me and take my hand!

Look at to the shining stars,
never let the love feel dark.

Spending nights with open fire,
the magic brings my spirit higher.

Ok, that was my little poem
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Those are pretty good, CP and Alector! I'm fond of making poems myself, but I don't have any Oddworld ones yet.
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Yeah....thx, Middlesbloogie. I also love to write poems, and this was the first poem about Oddworld. Maybe i'll write a second one *thinks*...
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That one was GOOD!
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With all the attention for Dark Xinos and Sligface's poems, why not bring up my old poem?

I wrote it ages ago.

*Clicks on the reply button to bring it back from page... 5 or something. )
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Re: Oddworld poem

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Originally posted by Cool Paramite
Hi, this is my first Oddworld poem!

There's a fuzzle on my head
And the fuzzle is mad

And I asked him what?!
Have your brother been shot?

Was he shot by a slig
Or are you just sick?

Or have you cornered a paramite?
You know that's not bright

But the fuzzle on my head
Said nothing and is still mad!
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02-26-2002, 12:58 PM
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I have some poems, but they'er not about the ODD. BUTTTTT I could write some of them and write back later.
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WOW CP and Alector! That are very good poems!
And in english... That's hard I think.
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good poems

hey they r really good i might atempt to make a poem
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Re: Re: Oddworld poem

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Originally posted by mitsur
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i dont like people who chat shit Gluck schmuck
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