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Happy Slusk's Oddysee

Some of you may have known Slusk from several RPGs I briefly participated in, now you will find out his backstory.
The Brawl

Slusk, the low life slave of Sloghut 1359 on the outskirts of a small Clakker town, was in his dormitory stroking his Sloggie, Mochy. Slusk received Mochy when he was about to get “recycled” because he was the runt of the litter. Slusk managed to persuade the slig guard to hand the slog over to him. He then brought the young slog to his dormitory to nurture him with his scraps of lunch. Slusk’s shift wasn’t until 12:00 P.M and he already smelled the soaps and dirty rags.
“Only half hour left. You best go early Slusk.”
Slusk jumped up nearly smashing his forehead on his bunk. The voice was Redge, the slig. Redge wasn’t like other sligs and their room temperature IQ’s. He was touchy about slavery and frowns upon beating the workers on his shift.
“Redge! I thought you were asleep!” Slusk said as Mochy scampered to Redge.
‘’Ya I was gonna to, but I found out Victor is on shift.” Redge said, petting Mochy.
“I thought he was working in the barracks!’ Slusk exclaimed.
“Well he came back, and sentenced a mudokon for missing a spot on his Employee of the Month Photo.”
“Poor schmucks…”
“Well good luck, bud, you’re gonna need it.” Redge said as he walked away, shotgun slung over his shoulder.
Slusk thought about what he just heard and decided to leave, making sure Mochy was tucked in his bed made of rags and headed towards the Kennel Room. Victor was waiting with his arms slung over each other in an impatient posture.
“You’re late maggot.”
“I’m half an hour early” Slusk said as he dropped his bucket.
“Uh, never mind, get to work…”
Slusk had cleaned out all the slog kennels and waxed the entire floor under an hour and still had time for a really late dinner. Victor had drunk a brew too many and got pissed when he slipped on the bucket of water. Slusk offered help and in return got a baton to the face. Slusk grabbed the trowel he used to scoop slog poo and smashed Victor in the face. Victor shoved Slusk down and slammed his metal knee into Slusk’s face which created a bloody scar on his face that crossed his eye. Slusk, filled with battle fury, Rammed into Victor and pinned him down and started slamming his huge hands into the tentacles on Victor’s masked head and then he grabbed Victors baton and hit him repeatedly along his visor, making it shatter. The slig sputtered blood and his bloodied eye made a steady flow of blood. After Slusk had tired out, he realized that he had beat him to death. At that moment Redge stepped into the room and stared at the bloody mess Slusk had made. Slusk stared wide eyed at Victor and felt blood trickling down his face.
“Slusk, you better get outta here before Security finds you.” Redge said still gazing at Victor’s mangled corpse
“But the factory exit is across the facility, it’s impossible to get out.” Slusk said with a slight sob.
“Grab Mochy and some valuables and meet me back here.”
Slusk obeyed ran back to his dormitory and grabbed a knapsack he kept for a situation like the one he was in and grabbed Mochy, a box of matches, a photo of him and Redge, and a compass. He didn’t own anything more valuables than the one photo. He ran back with his knapsack and received a sleeping bag from Redge which had hidden Victor’s Body and cleaned all the blood.
“Ok you wait here until I go get my stuff.” Redge said as he ran off.

I want some honest opinions, this is one of my first fanfictions. (Besides Odd Wars.)
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Uh-oh...seems we have another hero on our hands, just one who seems to be much more brutal than Abe. (Except in my ongoing fanfic, "Abe's Expoddition," where he's a real kick-butt.) Nice beginning!
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Indeed, Abe is badass in your fanfic, but what ever happened to Munch?!
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Let's just say...Munch will make an appearance. But this is your thread, so these posts need to be related to "Slusk's Oddysee," sadly.
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I will release the next chapter today or tomorrow.
EDIT: I got the second chapter a little shorter, but now theress more action.
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How 'bout today? I wanna see Slusk kill some more Sligs, and escape the Sloghut.
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Got it done.
Chapter 2: Escape
Redge came back, several minutes later carrying what looks like his whole dormitory.
“Redge, didn’t you say valuables?” Slusk said with his mouth agape.
“Umm, ya… but this stuff is absolutely necessary.” Redge replied.
“Like what?” Slusk said placing his arms over each other in impatient posture.
“Sleeping bags, flashlights, a box of tinder, and-“ Redge said taking out each item as he said it.
“Ok! I get it, but how in the name of all that is Odd are we gonna get outta here!?” Slusk said throwing his arms into the air.
“Ok, we can bypass the security by getting to the Main Gate Control room and knocking out the guard so I can punch in the code and get us outta here.” Redge explained.
After Redge distributed the supplies to Slusk the team ran towards the north part of the sloghut, trying to avoid all security. When they reached the gate, Redge headed for a door labeled SECURITY ONLY. Redge arrived to see the slig guard on duty was tweaking with the radio chatter settings. Redge lifted his shotgun and hit the slig guard squarely in the back of the head rendering him unconscious. Redge shoved the guard over and punched the authorization code and bolted out the door to meet up with Slusk. Mochy yelped as Slusk and Redge ran out the gate.
*******
Meanwhile, a slig guard was checking the Slog Kennels and discovered the mangled corpse of Victor the Slig. He dropped his Blitz Packerz Carbine in horror and ran for the manger’s office.
“Boss! Boss!” Jasper the Slig shouted as he barged into Burgon the Glukkon’s office.
“Whaddya want?” Burgon replied.
“I found Victor! DEAD!” Jasper said with a sob in his voice.
Jasper and Victor were really close brothers, and finding him dead shaken him badly.
“Commander is dead? Wasn’t he supervising Worker 491? Slusk?”
“Y-yes sir he told me before he went on his shift.” Jasper stammered.
“Call the investigators, tell em we got a murder on our hands.” Burgon ordered Jasper.
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Oh boy. Bad luck for Slusk...but intrigue for the readers!
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3rd chapter.
Chapter 3: Bounty Hunter
Jasper was waiting impatiently for the results of a DNA test the Vykker scientist had received from Victor’s knee. As he waited Jasper remembered when Victor found him on the streets and brought his sniveling rear to the sloghut barracks. If it hadn’t been for Victor, he would still be on the streets living in a box, or worse, dead. His thoughts were interrupted by the vykker.
“The blood matches with Slusk’s.” He said with a nasty grin displaying his yellow teeth
“Thanks, I’ll take these results to Burgon now.” Jasper replied.
When Jasper arrived, he handed the results to Burgon with the help of a Intern assistant, looked through them.
“Ok, I’ll post a bounty on Slusk.” Burgon agreed with a regretful tone in his voice.
“There’s one more thing, Redge wasn’t on his shift.” Jasper stated.
“Which means….?” Burgon said growing impatient.
“He might have assisted Slusk in escaping.”
“Alright a bounty on BOTH their heads”
Meanwhile in the forest surrounding the Sloghut, Slusk, Redge, and Mochy were resting in a small clearing. They had unpacked their sleeping bags, gathered provisions, and set up a fire. Mochy was knawing on a slurg that had wandered too far into the camp.
“Well we’re out of the sloghut.” Redge said with a chuckle.
“I don’t think we’re out of this yet.” Slusk said looking into the trees ahead.
“What do you me-“ Redge said being interrupted by a gunshot.
Just at that moment, Slusk did an action roll to his side and jumped at an Outlaw that had fired a laser carbine. Redge reacted just as fast and dodged the shot, just managing to grab his shotgun in the process. Slusk and the Outlaw were now rolling on the ground. Redge tried to get a clean shot of Slusk’s assailant before his shotgun was blow out of his hands by another gunblast as another Outlaw entered the clearing. The outlaw Slusk had finally pinned down kicked him off and struggled to get on to his feet, Slusk managed to grab a frying pan from Redge’s knapsack and smack the outlaw just as he got up. The outlaw newcomer was advancing on Redge which had drawn a combat knife from a secret compartment in his right leg. The Outlaw attempted to ram Redge with the butt of his rifle, Redge with his fast reflexes, slashed the outlaw’s midsection and ended it with a stab to the back. Slusk managed to disarm his opponent and toss him into the fire. The outlaw jumped out of the fire and managed to extinguish the fires on his body and drew a knife from his pocket. Redge jumped on his back and attempted to cut his enemy’s throat. The outlaw managed to throw Redge off his back and charge at Slusk with his weapon drawn high. All of the sudden, Mochy leaped and bit the outlaw’s throat and cut its arteries. The outlaw’s scream of pain echoed through the night as he fell and died. Mochy ,panting heavily, scampered into a sleeping bag.
“Bounty Hunters, how did you know?” Redge said studying the corpse of the outlaw Mochy slew.
“Outlaws aren’t really stealthy.” Slusk said looting the outlaw Redge killed.
It was a restless night, with the fear of another attack, no one slept.
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Bounty hunters rock...except when you have Mudokons with frying pans.
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Bounty hunters rock...except when you have Mudokons with frying pans.
So true. More ass-whacking action soon.
EDIT: Chapter 4 done. Enjoy.
Chapter 4: Arrival
After a restless night, the trio arrives at the Clakker town. They head for the General Store to buy provisions and equipment and to sell unnecessary items. After they had finished, the groups knap sacks were much lighter. They had bought clothing as well. Slusk had purchased open toed shoes, a brown leather vest, and a large machete with a holster. Redge felt the need to buy oil, a vest, and replaced his shotgun with a pistol and a laser carbine, and Mochy brandished a new spike collar.
“Let’s head for the nearest hotel, I’m pooped.” Slusk said with a sigh.
“Ya, me to.”
The trio reached the hotel and found themselves a room. The room was very small but it was suitable to accompany two inhabitants.
Meanwhile, Jasper was leading several sligs into the forest to track down and kill the two escapees who had murdered his brother. After several minutes of searching, the search team discovered the long extinguished fire the escapees used.
“They were here last night.” Jasper said inwardly grinning. He would be pleased to shoot Victor’s murderer in the face.
“This way, troops!” Jasper ordered pointing to a patch of trees ahead of them.
Later that night, Slusk had just finished his dinner and had just prepared for sleep, noticing Redge had already fallen asleep. Redge slept like a rock, it was impossible to wake him unless you sharply jab him with a sharp object. Mochy started to growl at the door.
“What’s wrong buddy?” Slusk asked.
Just then, a slig kicked down the door and fireed madly at the window behind Slusk. Slusk rolled and pulled out his machete, looking like he was about to cut the slig open. The slig noticing his machete, knew he could just do that. Redge twitched in his heavy slumber as Mochy barked madly at the newcomer. Slusk jumped off his bed and chopped into the sligs skull. The slig sputtered and fell noiselessly. Four more sligs were running up the stair case. Slusk jabbed at Redge, which shot right up and struggled into his pants.
“What was that for!?” Redge exclaimed.
“We’re under attack!” slsuk said ready to reduce the sligs to bloody mulch.
Redge quickly grabbed his weapons and followed Slusk into the hallway. Slusk, growing desperate with the sound of footsteps growing louder, grabbed a panicked clakker and threw him down the stair way. The sligs all fell down and were crushed by the overweight clakker. The trio bolted down the stairs and out into the night.
Jasper had just reached his comlink and gulped as he called Burgon of his failure.
“WHHHAAAT!? He escaped!? You better get that guy! Victor was the finest commander I ever hired!” Burgon shouted into the com.
“He killed one of our gunners and wounded three others by throwing a fat clakker on them.” Jasper said face palming his masked face.
“I don’t care about your troops! Just find Slusk and kill him!” Burgon growled.
“Yes sir!” Jasper obeyed.
The trio was back on the road with their considerably lighter inventory. Slusk held his newly obtained blitz packer rifle in both hands, surveying its ammo. He had managed to snatch the weapon from the slig he had killed in the hotel. The slig was nice enough to leave enough clips on his belt to last at least another several attacks. He grinned at the thought of blowing out a few industrial brains. After he had escaped, he didn’t bother cutting his head feathers and keeping them in a worker style. He was a free mud. No one will change that.
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Nice chapter. Lots of action. Awesome Mudokon warrior.
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Must say I was kinda excited about reading the little info pane that popped up....anyways nice story, Redge is quite the badass xD
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I think Slusk is much more feisty than Redge - after all, Mudokons don't snore.
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Sorry for the long delay but I got a really short chapter.

Chapter 5: Lost…
Mochy sniffed at the brisk morning air that was tarnished with an incoming fog, Slusk had just waked up and checked his location on the map. However, it never occurred to him that he didn’t where he was headed. All he wanted to do is get as far as he can from that wretched slog hut. Redge had also realized this problem and never asked Slusk until this moment.
“Uhhh, Slusk? Where are we even going?” Redge asked tilting his head slightly.
“I dunno Redge. I just want to get away from those sligs hounding us day and night…” Slusk said staring at the ground.
Mochy yelped when he heard a distant screech, most likely a paramite. The trio headed for a long path through the mountains that were located just north of the town and the fog was setting in. Slusk squinted at one of the peaks and saw buggery movement. If he ran into any paramites, they will be sorry. The team then hurried into the mountains at a moderate pace.
Meanwhile, Jasper and his team had just picked up the escapee’s trail and ran into a fog. Jasper kicked a stone in frustration and stared into the fog. Slusk will rue the day he murdered his closest brother… And he will pay dearly…
The trio had just finished climbing the first set of mountains and saw it was much clearer higher in the mountains than in the valley. But it had its risks, Paramites crawled everywhere and the trio had narrowly missed a pack of them storming through the mountain path. Redge had to stop occasionally to oil his hinges, he had been traveling to the point his pants were straining to move. Slusk then noticed they were in the same spot where they saw the paramite swarm.
“We’re hopelessly lost…” Slsuk said with a tone of regret.
“Tell me about it” Redge said rolling his eyes mentally.
“How about we rest here until the fog disappears?” Slsuk suggested.
“Alright,” Redge replied.
The team then set camp and settled in for the night.


Chapter 6: Jasper’s Wrath
Next morning, Jasper awakened to a clear morning and grinned. Today he will start his hunt and kill Slusk for his crime… and that double crossing son of a clakker Redge. He awakened his men and started the trip immediately. The sligs jogged at a high speed across the mountain range and discovered remnants of a fire made last night… they weren’t far. He holstered his laser carbine to investigate the ashes; they were damp from the mist. He saw some slog scat and foot prints. They were here alright. Jasper and his men continued their run across the mountain range…
Meanwhile Slusk’s crew finally got to the opposite base of the mountain and saw desert as far as the eye could see. Several plateaus were set on the horizon and the desert was peppered with cacti and fern like shrubs. Slusk bit his lip and considered turning back but saw sligs running down the mountain slopes. Slsuk drew his newly acquired Blitz Packer shot one of the sligs in its midsection. The slig screamed and rolled down the rocky slope while being trampled by the other sligs. Redge rolled to his right and took cover behind a rock with Mochy and Slusk found another rock to the left. Redge shot several sligs, blood splattered on the mountain’s slope. A slig recognized as Jasper narrowly missed a volley of laser and Blitz Packer he countered with several shots the splintered the rocks below him. Slusk was pelted with the splintered rock and returned fire on a slig fairly close to his rock and its head blew inside out. Slusk was coated in blood when the slig’s brain exploded. Redge threw a knife into another slig’s neck and a scream of pure pain rewarded Redge’s minor sacrifice. Several sligs held refuge behind rocks on top of the mountain and started pouring lead and laser on the rocks Redge and Slusk were hiding behind. Redge was shot in the shoulder and grasped his wound and hissed in pain. Blood started to gush from his wound. Slusk saw this and an anger he never knew he possessed swelled up inside him like a bolamite bite and jumped out from hiding and ran towards to enemy group shooting madly and waving his machete like a lunatic. The sligs turned fire on Slusk but were startled when he was half way up the slopes and decapitated a slig’s head from his torso. Slusk blew out two other slig brains and bashed anothers head rendering him unconscious. Jasper tried ramming him with the butt of his carbine but Slusk smacked it out of his hands and slashed him in his midsection. Jasper staggered back and fell smashing his head on a rock causing him to fall unconscious. The other sligs were either dead or unconscious. Redge stared at Slusk and Mochy joined. Slusk dropped his weapons and stared at the bloody wreck he caused. Bodies lay in mangled positions and missing limbs. Slusk fell to his knees in exhaustion. He was now free from the hounding enemy that hunted him. A free mud.
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Action! The Hulaabeo is back with more Mudokon awesomeness!
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