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01-18-2010, 03:14 AM
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Wired Odd Mutation (Story)

Hello there :3 I am Uros Osium Tokker, call me simply Uros. Am the creator of the fictional company Head Hunter Entertainments (I like it and I will own it someday :3) that specializes in adult stories and not so typical adventures. So yea… You can say I am that kind of artist.

This first post is to get everyone to know what I am going to do around since I am sadly not a forum person… I prefer to use yahoo to talk around mostly ^^. If something catches my attention a lot however… expect me to be a fly around it >:3

Well, into business:

This first post is to tell what the story is going to be about and make sure it is by the rules even after reading the said rules cause I am not fully sure I am going to break them. Also to show where detailed descriptions of my creatures will be (Which is here: http://headhunterentertain.deviantart.com/ and is right now empty).

The story will take place about the other side of the sea, not in Mudos (At least the first part). This new land (at least the explored land) has been called Escoria and is home of many new creatures as well as the grave of some ancient DNA that would make the cloning process of every creature in Oddworld a success.

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If you are wondering my reason as to why the Vykkers aren’t able to clone creatures until now, my answer is simple: They are complicate. Too strange and perfected forms attuned to the maximum to their way of life unlike things are in our world. Their structure and DNA is unable to be copied in its original form and none of the creatures that are originally from Oddworld seems to be anything as simple as in our world, so no copy and paste for them and no Dolly either.
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What is that DNA? Well: Human DNA. Why? I used the theory of some of the DNA coming from space thanks to meteors and such… if that was possible here (And I mean POSSIBLE) why not in Oddworld?

So yes, this story will have humans (Well, human mostly) and creatures mixed with their DNA to simplify it and get easier to clone (Simply 'able' to clone would be better). Of course toying with DNA is like giving a Vykker some chocolate and toys to try and create a monster with them two together.

Things are going to get awry, as always, errors will be made and misfits will be created since the Vykkers can temper with their character and mood slightly as much as with appearance, collor and such... You guessed right: They break some merchandise during production. Guess mixing such a volatile creature as a human with something as a Mudokon or a Slig is not such a good idea. And that is just an example.

In resume: What is going to be in this story? A group of misfits brought together by the smallest (and cutest) misfit ever as they try to escape, live and, if needed, fight for their survival (if they can, that is).

The story will contain-
VIOLENCE: may vary from simply a few punches, a bit of blood to decapitations, dismemberment, etc… You have been warned beforehand. Think that this is Oddworld and while brutality was cut down a little over the Xbox games, I still loved the first two even if they were a bit gory if you may call them that.
ADULT SITUATIONS: Nudity is something common in Oddworld if we get to talk about Sligs and Mudokons that have something to show you know? They usually don’t fancy clothes as we all know. Something that is a bit more direct than that will be warned beforehand OR deleted to give that kind of scenes on my DA page only if asked to.
SWEARING: This is an adult story where you may find funny things as much as someone swearing to the clouds every possible dirty word in the world… It is most possible that FU** is the least of the things you will find in Oddworld and we don’t have a system to muzzle the guys when they are going to let their anger burst out.
FUNNY MATERIAL: After all, this is Oddworld… you may find some silly situations where you may forget the last naughty scene or that violent beating from before to snicker a bit.
ORIGINAL CREATURES: That can go from the Idiku and Adaio (giant centipedes that I will give descriptions latter) to the brutal and disgusting Dashagon (A giant ground creature that resembles a wingless horrid bat, has a giant eye as face and opens it to show a myriad of teeth inside to… Well you can get it or I will surprise you latter). Count that I have no drawing skills so you will see no drawings of these things at all (except if someone wants to do that).

IMPORTANT:
This story is NOT recommended for anyone NOT familiar with Oddworld and its ways and those who DON’T like any adult situations, blood or anything mentioned above… So yea, probably most people here will not have problem with anything except the adult situations.

After Business:

Now I want my cookie from reading the rules and to know if I got too close to bend some, because I am not yet fully sure if I did so. Also because I don’t know if someone will gut me alive if I modify some basic things such as Mudokons or Sligs while also putting humans here (However, the “mutants” will be few, most creatures are normal in appearance. This doesn’t include my own creations for the wildlife and some species). I don’t want to look suicidal but I also won’t change the content that is going to be on my story if someone doesn’t like it… I am faithful to my work and I rarely change it big time for anything, only want to know if people don’t like the idea so I will move it to my DA page only.

If there is nothing wrong then I will post the already finished introduction, short section for the small character sheets and the first chapter right away in a few hours… or tomorrow (Depends if I want to place here the second chapter too).

Also a last WARNING!!!!:
Really descriptive guy, dependant of comments to make things better and also am an Art Wh*** because I can’t frigging draw and I love pics of my things x3.
If you are searching for a simple story with short chapters let me tell you something: You are screwed. My minimum page number per chapter is usually 10 or so, commonly size 10 too except when something else is up like a side chapter or such. Expect BIG chapters.

So you know what does the simbols mean here and now:
“…” Means dialogue.
‘…’ Something hinted and such, you will figure it out.
*…* Sounds or thinking. Pretty obvious which is which when you read it.
[…] or (…) Author’s comments or various notes.

Last edited by Uros Osium Tokker; 01-24-2010 at 04:39 AM.. : Oficialy a story now :3... well, soon.
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01-18-2010, 03:45 AM
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Hello! Welcome to the forums; I hope you get on well and so on. This sounds like it might be rather interesting, plus, ya know, daring

Most of the content you've put in is ok. No one'll kill you for swearing and violence happens. Just post a warning at the start of the chapter if you're going to get particularly violent. My story has an interesting chapter with Skillya the slig queen, who is known for cooking and eating sligs sent to her for punishment, so...
I warned people before hand.

My only qualm is your 'adult situations'. I am not allowing outright pornography so please don't include any lemons or whatever. It's against forum rules as well as rules of the Fancorner and I will treat any as such. Stories can include sexuality without being erotica (though since most creatures on Oddworld are asexual... I assume this is amongst your humans).

Otherwise, sounds quite daring and might be interesting. Dunno how people will take humans on Oddworld but I wish you luck. My chapters tend to be around 5 pages long (MS Word, size 10, 'Comic Sans') and people have complained about that, so I wish you luck with that, too

But no, I'll try and follow this, see what I think.
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Well mixing Human DNA with an asexual creature I made the Sligs and Mudokons have outright a sex. However I can live censoring the adult situations and placing them in DA only since these scenes are NOT necessary for the story to develop. They are simply for the sake and fun of it and usually few.
Then since there seems to be no problem from the administration *gives bribe* I will post the first load of things in a while X3 (Say... around ten minutes).

Warning right here and now that it will have a bit lil ammount of blood and brutality outright as well as 17 pages of work since it counts, as I said before, as introduction, five SMALL character sheets and the first chapter :3 Stay tunned to this Odd thing x3.
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I'm actually interested to see what you have, but by my calculations...10 minutes is over gimme something to read.
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Here it is the first of (I hope) many posts with story! I will update and change it to get the B, I and U latter :3

Be warned right away, and I say it again, that there will be BRUTALITY in every sense here after Introduction and Sheets.

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Odd mutation

Introduction

“You are telling me you did what?!” An angry voice, full of hatred, said within grunts of despise.

A dark room with only light enough to see two Vykkers was all that could be described of the place. It was dark enough to know if anything was there any glimpse of light coming from the single light bulb in the ceiling and pointing down would make anything, from an eye to any mechanical piece, sparkle. To be sure that nothing did so but that asides the two Vykkers there was someone else there… well it was disturbing to say the least.

But these guys knew about it enough to find it more than disturbing alright. They knew it was dangerous.

“Boss! It was your own order!” Said one of the Vykkers as he retreated a few steps. Fear was more than expected “You commanded any left misfits should be quarantined!”

“But not to put all of them together in one same place you pathetic excuse of a fool!” Exclaimed the angry voice with a high pitched tone “Dr. Red may want our heads on a plate if we get a riot by a, let’s say, an incompetent EXPENDABLE worker…” The Vykkers gulped, trying to walk away “But the problem here is that YOU TWO aren’t the expendables ones I am afraid” The voice grumbled “Dr. Red would find my orders to be of such an incompetency it would be simply blasphemous to leave me breathing… Which means I would make sure that expendable or not” There was a loud growl that could hardly be explained as animal, human or any kind of natural sound “I don’t go alone to that one way pat”

With a gulp both Vykkers went from scared mounds of flesh to simply cowardly beings asking for their lives as they threw themselves into the ground.

“Please sir! We will send the executive order today I promise you!” Yelled the first one trying to care little but for his live. Pride of a great thinker was hard to overcome even now.

“It will take only a week to arrive! I can guarantee it!” The other was in no much better shape, mentally speaking that is.

The growls from the dark quieted and died but the chilly mood and cold feelings were still pretty much easy to feel on the air. Both Vykkers knew pretty well that it was only by chance that ONE was going to get out of this… To have the two of them getting away was positively out of the question as the light bulb moved back and forth to show a glimmering something from one dark corner.

“As a fellow thinker I am aware of the most logical ways to do things” Said the voice after clearing its throat and regaining a more or less ‘normal’ tone “I know the idea of getting the few misfits from my experiments together seemed ok to eradicate them soon whenever the order was given… But I think you forgot something”

Suddenly a mechanical spider leg busted through the darkness to land just between both Vykkers’s heads as a whole arachnid body came to lie over them with its three legs, full of spikes, joining a mobile oval body that was the base for a the one in control. The real body was resembling that of a Vykker like the ones under it, the problem is that it was mangled: Metal patches, crystal with semi organic body underneath and, in general, a cyborg’s body put to work. Even in the face the guy had half a metal skull and a targeting right eye for the right arm which was a whole arsenal with various weapons attached to it. For some reason that none of the Vykkers yet knew, and probably neither did the owner of that thing, the arm was cycling trough the weapons array every few seconds. The… ‘thing’ was a mess.

“I-DON’T-MAKE-MISTAKES!” As the right arm changed to a spinning group of blades a bell was heard “Oh! The cookies are ready”

The Vykkers gulped as the lights went on to show a full technological house full of small automatic robots that helped Dr. Ham Hock (Dr. H.H) in his house. They knew that bad news should be around his lunch time… He was a crazed one (Even inside Vykker society) and only his favorite food made it possible to survive a meeting most times.

Well they should better know that! Dr. Aritups gave him the head master’s job for that exact reason. They knew it had been so hard for the old Dr to leave the position on this project…. Humans, they called themselves. A mixed DNA trace was found a few months after arriving to the coast of Escoria, a new land ready for plunder, which seemed to be able to get mixed with almost every species in the known world.

Oh… it had been so many years ago… Their flying laboratory still was intact! The Glukkons had so much more profit on their backs! Mudokons and other lowly species were easily subdued and life was fair for the industrial side. Now the rebel Abe had formed an army and the wild tribes were endangering the main land. Well, at least part of it.

But oh, back then? When the funding and time to develop those “humans” came it was so exciting to see most of them whiter and die for about two years… They were highly adaptable and easily corrupted or manipulated unlike any other creature in the world. So easily they were forced into labor, put to work as a refined businessman, fattened up for meat or trained as one of the best soldiers, raiders or… ANYTHING! The problem was the need of clean air (or semi clean) and the low defenses against almost anything unlike most other creatures.

The creatures usually ended up bald, but not sterile or with color pigmentations that were far away from a flesh like color or brown to black coloration. The few that had hair where, for some reason, wary of those different as the ones without were from them. Usually aggression was expected between different kind of workers for their ideas, appearances or anything. Was it either male or female it mattered little as far as they were different from each other.

For the Glukkons, well, they were perfect.

Then the mixing with other species started:
Mudokons were able to get stronger yet still hollow and light bones with also more meat and more delicate features that made them interesting for some species that found them… appealing. For most creatures that didn’t have a queen or could reproduce it was more so thanks to the fact that males or females were now easier to identify (or simply they now WERE, unlike before) and both had the full genitalia… though the females had no nipples unlike those of human females. It was sad that the Mudaman (Human mix with Mudokon) were forced to be only into Escoria until clearance that never came to be. The profit was going to be so big otherwise…
Other traits that were appealing was the increased loyalty towards machinery ideology instead of the shamanism that normal Mudokon had as well as the ability to at least have one child within couples formed between a pair of Mudaman or a reproduction capable human and Mudaman. This was something exploited for high class workers that were two times as loyal as their parents were originally thanks to some DNA changes from the second generation line. No one cared if it could destroy the Mudokon kin of course, it was more Moolah.
Asides those changes, they developed a bigger brain that for some was tasty, but for the Mudaman meant the impossibility to chant, which was good. Downside of that mutation was that they developed other ‘shamanistic’ features thanks to still being attuned by nature such as control over certain elements in a small degree (But still highly dangerous) or telekinesis to help them move huge weights with the mind as well as other features equally dangerous if left unattended.

Sligs (Sligant) were made taller, stronger and with two natural legs for the common grunt that now were only females after the experimentation. Those legs were a tad similar to human ones but had the same number of toes as the Sligs had fingers and in a more or less similar form to the hands without being unappealing for the common or male Sligs. They were a moral boost most the time.
Most of them still were grumpy and loathsome and only needed a bit of training to be so if they were cloned out as misfits with some weird trait uncommon in Slig society. Few were problematic and even less couldn’t be corrected in their ways.
While the grunts came out all the time with legs as said, the males that were cloned in the labs were born strong and big as a Big Bro with no need of drugs or anything making them cheap and more or less common. Only the need of normal two legs in a bigger and better shape or the most common four legged chassis made them hard to tell apart from the common Big Bro. Sadly they had some problems with usual muscular or mind illness that simply needed some workout or treatment… though it was common to not give treatment at all (Insanity and such problems the Glukkons liked).
Like Mudaman the females grew a bit more asides muscle and such with pretty much the same features as a Mudaman in that sense… Though unluckily the females (and most males) lost the slime that protected them making the previous slick creatures now dependant of clean water which was happily provided for their services. The males, well, better not talk about them. They are simply big and let’s leave it at that.
For the most part, normal Sligs were preferred for the grunt roles with these females as guards on secure places thanks to a greater intelligence and reaction time that was harder to find in the common grunt (and not as cheap to replace, matter of fact).
This kin also had better eyes but their lungs and internal organs were far weaker to any substance that was polluted while being even easier to hook on drugs and smokes that made them obedient so the need of mask was greater. This only forced the need of the cloned Sligant of being under the service of the only ones with power enough to supply them every time they needed.

Dr. H.H had made experimentations with them and some normal creatures of every species to get new data thanks to this kind of discover after he was promoted as the headmaster of investigation. He was the creator of the misfits and some unnatural behavior or rebel outburst in them. For that fact most experimentation objectives Dr. H.H had were cut to a minimum budget and in controlled spaces so he was slow to create new problems or advances right now.

Officially, thanks to that, any other species was a failure… But most Vykkers knew better.

“You are still here?!” Dr. H.H yelled at the lone Vykker “I am finishing my cookies so if you don’t want to become an Intern with one of my newest procedures I suggest you go help your friend… QUICKLY!”

Yea… He wondered how Mudos was the only place with actual technological life until around fifty years ago… but he wasn’t going to keep pondering on that if his arse was on the frying pan! 

Chapter 0 – Characters, ideas, etc…

*** Previous to REAL story ***

Note: Hello there, this is Uros here reporting for this new Oddworld story for you all to enjoy. I must clarify that the world of Oddworld is not mine as well as any of the copyrighted species and characters of the franchise as it is obvious (And sadly too). I am going to make no money from this (again, sadly) or will try to do so.
I own the characters I made myself however, they are listed here or noted in every chapter I make as well as the land and creatures I myself created. They cannot (Well, I ask you to not do) be used without permission or claim them as other’s of course (and the latter I don’t ask).

Also a reason to get humans over Oddworld:
I am a non believer, I usually put it bluntly in most my works ok? (I don’t mind anyone that is a believer, everyone does whatever they want I won’t judge) So I explain it as one of the theories of how the human DNA came over Earth (which would also explain some animals and such): It came from space. How? Meteorites probably… they are solid figging mater ok?
It is possible that the world of Oddworld had received also some genetics from outer space, but since the environment is different in the sense that the planet is BIGGER (Seven times or so as far as I know) the biology obviously evolved in a different way. It is also possible that if traces of what would be the human DNA were found, then, the actual technology of the Vykkers and power of the Glukkons (Monetary that is) would make it possible to create them.
I also assume that they have the ability and technology to mix anything that is remotely humanoid together to make different forms of the creature (Such as to give a Slig natural legs and a better body in some aspects) but not enough to make the creatures perfect, which is good for them or they would be fucked.
We all should think the same in one thing however: If they can do it, you can be sure they will do that only to the underlings to make sure they work better, are far more loyal AND taste better. Business is business.

Well asides that legal statement that will be generally posted before every chapter, let’s give you a review on the characters that you will find here:

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Name:
Model Lex (Cleaner) - Series T.UM – Chain of production E.X.R Vykker Labs (Lextum Exer, or simply Exer for tha buddies).

Species and age:
Human (male) 24

Appearance:
Slim as most humans slaves working for the Glukkons, Exer is a guy that appears fragile but has a nice muscle mass that can absorb a lot of damage thanks to years working as a slave and foraging for enough food to get a decent body (and survive). He is a bit short (1,55-1.60 m) and has gentle features that usually seem to make him look alert while he is really dozing off, a serious guy or anything that resembles that thanks to many scars over the head, chest and back.
He has deep green eyes that are the most remarkable feature in his body as most humans have the same brown or blue empty eyes they get after the clonnation procedure. A few times something like purple and bluish hair has tried to grow, but the Vykkers cut it down to make sure no other worker had differences with him so the precious labor hands weren’t distracted… It seems the hair died after a few times.
Exer seems to like leather of any color as clothes, anything but the dam rags he is used to. Also doesn’t seem to go around in the nude… He is rather carefree.

Character:
Naughty of mind but joyful creature, Exer is a bit of a dirty talker and swears a lot as well usually getting his mind spoken out. When you are a slave this usually gets you into problems… He can withstand a lot of punishment and words but he cannot help but hit anyone that dares touch his friends.
He is a bit of a protector with a hint of a devilish creature that likes to play and do the right thing for some reason. That doesn’t mean he can’t get angry or that he doesn’t desire to simply crush someone without thinking it twice. Everyone has a dark side.
He likes to look at the stars and to rest over any green area (usually on the nude) with peace and quiet as companions… until he gets bored and needs his friends around. Not fan of parties but lover of his group.

History:
Will be revealed.
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Name:
Liza Romia

Species and age:
Mudaman (Female) 25

Appearance:
A bit more defined and round that most Mudokons, Liza has a cute body with enough meat to make her attractive to most eyes while still having a bit of bone showing thanks to all the hard work that made her muscles easy to manipulate to give a bit of an ugly look to prevent anyone getting ideas… Though the size of 1.68 isn’t really much, for some still could handle her easily.
Her skin is yellowish green with pure green dots over her head and her back while the front is a nice warm yellow tone. Her hair is purple, though it seems the tip shows a hint of silver blue coloration somewhere deep inside. She has cute azure eyes that sparkle when she is worried for something.
She doesn’t mind her bits showing, but seems to have a liking to soft clothes such as silk or similar to cover her body if she can get her hands on it… For the moment she had no luck but hopes to get her cravings for something she could wear to get a more feminine look sometime.

Character:
Moody thanks to a big receptive brain that can read the mood of anyone nervy and absorb part of it. Liza has bad character thanks to the many evil thinks everyone thinks while at work… and even dreaming!
Originally she is a nice and open girl that only gets angry when someone tries to do anything to her without her consent (which is hard being a slave). She only despises Sligs thanks to the beatings they give everyone to get a fit of power now and then, though the hatred grows really deep after years of the same thing even if she despises hating anyone.
Not innocent, not naughty, Liza is a balance between jokes and direct truths when she is talking though it is hard to know what is what when near her.

History:
Will be revealed.
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Name:
Dail (Dai) Bella

Species and age:
Sligant (Female) 27

Appearance:
A bit taller than most humans with 1.74 m in height, Dai is a sturdy girl with a lot of meat where it should be and a firm body that means a gorgeous thing as well as a dangerous one too… Her black skin with brown front and front tip of the tail to the tentacles is for most a warning of how dangerous the girl can be if angry.
She has a silver colored mask that has blue glittering eye protectors that are mixed with the silver colored leather jacket and pants she uses to cover herself. She has a nice body and no scar for now… but she simply likes to get covered whenever possible.
Dai has a cute face under the mask as most Slyman females but she is too shy to show it up… She usually shows the twin weapons (Smaller versions of the normal weapon a Slig carries, of course it is as deadly and fast shooting) to get anyone away and sparing herself the problem of talking or having others see her body.

Character:
A ‘know all’ person that is ALLWAYS right about anyone she fixates her gaze on thanks to the ability of reading people like an open book. She has only been proved wrong once and it makes her uneasy since she prefers to know the things right away.
Her character is usually marked as elusive and retracted even being so friendly to her slog and her friend (big brother figure) Mugus thanks to being one f the few Sligs with no addictions or real attachment to the machines. Usually spends her alone time in her private quarters on the barracks with the mask off and an air filter while taking care of Tiguer, his little Slog companion, if she is not in company of Mugus while having a walk or eating.


History:
Will be revealed.
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Name:
Mugus Brak (Mugsi for Dai)

Species and age:
Sligant Big Bro (Male) 31

Appearance:

Tall brute of 2,13 when with his legs and only 1.50 or so without them. His body mass is impressive to the point of being a bit more so than the others Big Bro’s. He has veins that seem like they would burst from his arms and chest whenever angry though most the time he simply looks like a full time bodybuilder.
His skin is a pale white that looks a bit sickening for most with a coal grey chest that looks like he wears armor under the skin. He has a crimson red brilliant mask with brown eye protectors and a red light fixed in the front thanks to heat seeker augmentation on the mask (the light can’t be seen from the inside if the aug is offline).
His arms are covered in tattoos that resemble rabid fuzzles that look and seem to act as mean and menacing as him. He has the words Pain and Break forced on his knuckles by fire at birth, something that seems to suit him if he ever removes the electric generator on his back and the upgraded metal gauntlets with spikes he uses as weapons. It is usually worst to anyone that he removes them, as he doesn’t control his strength with bare hands.
He has no vocal cords, they were removed accidentally while he was halfway done on his creation.


Character:
Originally brutish and stupid, Mugus changed his ways after meeting Dail and finding someone to call family and protect. He is an ever suspicious creature that protects anyone he likes from any kind of harm with his hard skin or strong arms, whatever needed. Now cultural and intelligent, he seems to not mind anyone looking bad at him since not even the managers do that thanks to the fear of being mauled to death.
A kind soul trapped inside a brute that has hard time showing his feelings, Mugus has a fine taste on books and peaceful songs that help him relax. When angry it is better to get away and wait to rebuild the things he tramples over. Mugus seem to dislike long range weapons and it is hard for anyone with a gun to gain his respect, even less if they shoot at him... well in that case it is hard to rebuild the guy in question.

History:
Will be revealed.
***

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Name:
Tiguer Wufz

Species and age:
‘Dwarf’ Slog (Male) 3

Appearance:
Dwarf cute slog that could be carried with a single hand for most creatures, Tiguer is a brown skinned (with phale underside) stripped (blue) slog that has nothing much different from his bigger companions. Tiguer seems to like to wear a small spike collar and chew onto any kind of metal, leather or bone to use it as a strap.
The small slog has been toyed with by the Vykkers and seems to have a second sheet of teeth that are smaller but can break easily and without pain while biting to grow back after while, giving deep wounds and internal bleeding to any prey.


Character:
Playful unlike any slog ever known in Escoria (or probably anywhere). While most Slogs grow up angry and dangerous right after birth, Tiguer seems to be a gentle little thing that only wants some petting and a bit of caring more than food or water.
Tiguer can perceive any friendly being (which usually refers as anyone with good intentions in general) thanks to using the keen sense of the Slogs for something else than kill and eat. He is a vicious creature that can take down creatures ten times his size if anyone with any dark intentions comes near his owner or the ones the little creature likes.
He usually is rolling around or circling anything interesting, the little critter usually digs useful things or industrial remains for his owner in the hopes she can use it for something.
If it was not clear: Tiguer loves his owner Dai.

History:
Will be revealed.
***

Other characters will be revealed as chapters go by…

Chapter 1 – Pained hands

Day or night, it was difficult to say after a while with so many smoke clouds up there, wasn’t it? It would be so nice to see the stars or dark blue sky at night that pondering on it was so absorbing and entertaining… For some reason it always came to that most the time, to look at the sky.

He really didn’t know why it called him so much to look at the sky and the stars whenever he had the chance… Well, only the sky, he never saw the stars thanks to the lights on his previous workplace and neither did here in Agravation Farms.

“Hey…” A female voice snapped him out of his awe.

He snapped out of it, Exer had that custom of dozing off when scrubbing on the outside. The human simply looked over his friend Liza with a smirk as he eyed her up and down more than once, getting a chuckle out of her.

“I think you should get to work AND stop staring at my breasts”

Both of them snickered as the Slig that was sleeping on the counter snorted in his dreams. The pair gave out a startled look only in reflex as they looked over the one that was to make them sit still and work if they slacked or talked. Luckily the normal Sligs were mostly slackers and bastards that preferred to sleep and smoke than to do anything… if there wasn’t anyone to beat the crap out off, of course.

It was not uncommon that Exer took the beatings every time instead of Liza even when she confessed it was her doing. She was a very innocent girl when she wanted and was very nice, even trying to take the punishment instead of Exer more than once. He always took every hit; there was no excuse for not doing so. Sickness? Excuse, he wouldn’t allow it. Broken bone? Excuse, no chance of him saying so. Starvation? Excuse, only more bone to hit and maybe less damage with some luck.

Exer’s body had a collection of wounds and scars that showed that he did it every time. A few minutes ago it had happened when he made a too loud noise while scrubbing. His head was bleeding slightly and the weapon in the hands of the Slig had some blood over the tip of its cannon. In Mudos they had it prohibited to put extra blunt or a sharp edge since Mudokons were becoming slightly fewer (thanks to Abe). Here it was no problem to administer maximum pain and breaking damage.

“I don’t want you hurt again or that Sligant to take care of you in her private quarters, ok?” Liza told him with a serious and unhappy look.

They had been moved here a few weeks ago from the main work zone at the main land. Agravation Farms was on the Northern edge of the continent and was at the top of a mass of land that went into the sea. Like most of the continent it had been explored only on its surface and established a perimeter where no one should cross since the danger was so high that even entire armies were decimated too soon and with little to no profit.

The small zone explored was called Agravation and only a pair of farms and a city was made since the place was too dangerous to live unlike in the main land a few kilometers away. Even the travel, if it was by water, was dangerous thanks to the great hunters that lurked underwater. However the place had many wild Mudokons and ruins that could give wild livestock and future slaves if the Glukkons played their cards right… The interest for easy money was all that held the place together.

However that was all he could get to read from the guards and the info pads when they were taken here before he meet Tiguer, the dwarf brown skinned and blue stripped slog. When the tiny thing jumped over him he thought he was going to be food! However the little creature simply licked him over and snarled at the guards that were guarding him, only letting Liza get close and even licking her too.

Dail Bella, the Sligant grunt that had the ownership of the little creature hadn’t approached to begin with because she thought the human was another one of those sick bastards that were so loyal to their masters even after turning them into food. He and Mugus, her bodyguard and friend, were surprised to see the slog playing happily with the human… as well as to see the already many scars that he had while his companion had none.

Dai, as she liked to be called, became fond of the interesting creature that was Exer: A gentleman amongst slaves. She found it funny that he was always more than eager to get into any girl’s pants while most humans only did so if they were able to procreate… Well, he was able to do so, but he was not assigned to that duty for some reason and that was another point for him in Dai’s eyes.

Mugus and Liza both didn’t really approve that Dai had so many time with the human though… Mugus had no love interest in Dai, it was like his little sister and he treated her like that, but to have a human meddling with her? He found that too dangerous… more when she took him the first time into her quarters to treat a few serious wounds a really sick guard had given to him. Liza had her best friend on Exer; he was her only friend and sole protector… It could be so easy that he was executed if seen with that grunt that Liza was always nervous and more than a little bitchy when Dai was around.

“Can’t help it, it is my nature and you know it” Exer replied with a gentle chuckle “Come on… relax… it is not like anything bad will happen”

They had been working here for a while now. The food was nicer than in the main land but it was also scarcer thanks to having less production. Guards were assigned to protect the property of the company even if they still could hit anyone, but killing was forbidden or they would be turned into meat too. The animals were well caged and there was almost no chance of an accident by having them escape. It was also something nice to have the machinery secured; no Mudokon or Human had suffered an accident since a few years back thanks to the maintenance.

Yea, this place was nice.

“Alert!” Of course, the speakers had something to say about that “Alert! Code Red over the Scrab containers in the zone 1.B! Three Scrabs have been accidentally released and they have already killed a Slig patrolling the corridor 12.B towards the surface”

You know why they liked the place so much? Four sections with four zones. The A zones for each section were the control rooms; they were located in the exact center of the facility looking at their corresponding area. The B zones were the upper works near the walls and the living zones for Sligs and Humans or “mutants”. The C and D were for the internal works over the food processing and the exterior protection and animal herd’s confinement.

So yea, it was nice to know when you were in the wrong place in the wrong time… like now.

Exer and Liza looked at each other. The place was a corridor on the upper wall with a few doors that lead right inside the nearby tower and to the lower level where the barracks were located. Unfortunately only the lower level was open and the nearby tower simply gave out a cry when a shriek was heard and then some shoots before the Slig on duty near them finally awoke.

“Who the fuck did wake me up this time?” He grunted while taking his gun and cleaning the sharp edge.

As a loud *Crack* was heard both Liza and Exer pointed towards the big Scrab that had opened the reinforced door without even seeming to put force into it.

“Oh crud…” Was all the Slig could say being so close to the door as the creature saw him.

At least this one was going to get fat…

*** Over the barracks, a few minutes earlier ***

Dai was sitting with Mugus on her quarters. She was the only Sligant alongside Mugus here so she could have the privilege of a lone big room as much as Mugus but they preferred to share the same except when they had to talk with the management or had any work to do as well as when they had to sleep. The place was metallic with a bed for humanoids and weapons storage as well as a table, little else was needed.

Mugus usually took his pants and mask off to read. As he did so he usually left the harsh figure he had under the mask after so many fights with the innumerable small scars that made his face look mostly pink thanks to the meat surfacing where the skin could not grow. None of the two minded since they were used and Mugus had little to no shame of his past except the people he had harmed without reason, not his looks.

Dai, on her side, usually used the privacy to be in the nude and to take plants from the outside to water them and care for them before returning them to the wild strengthened and revitalized. It was a hobby and also a need to have the air purifier in good condition. Otherwise she was usually caring to Tiguer when he was playful; sadly he was snoring right now while turning the ground to a little pool.

“Today has been quiet, hasn’t it?” She asked, bored from the two hours of rest they had been given “I mean… We haven’t had any assignment after watching over the cattle”

Mugus simply looked at her with an expression that literally said *“So…?”*

“Come on… you can’t talk but I can assure that you don’t need to let me down… I am bored!” She said with a loud grunt while pointing at her clothes and her weapons “While being here I can’t make sure the others don’t mess with the few guys that are ok here and I hate to be left aside for so long. This place doesn’t have enough staff to let those lazy bums four hours in the same spot”

Waving a hand Mugus dismissed her. He loved to read his books when he had the chance and not to pay visits to the few Mudokons that were around. Mugus was always looked down or with fear by anyone and anything but Dai… or that pair formed by the human and that female Mudaman. The interest was in precisely not going with them.

“You won’t tell me you like peace and quiet now, do you?” Dai asked with a smirk while looking at him playfully.

Maybe Mugus had no vocal cords, but he could still grumble while covering his face with the book. He hated how well she knew him sometimes. It was true that he was hardly quiet for more than five minutes except at night when he had dinner and relaxed to read. It was ok to be intelligent and a nice guy and not that brutish fiend he once was… but it had its little downsides.

He simply gave her the finger before getting into his pants. If she was someone else he wouldn’t have moved.

“Come on” she said with a giggle before getting dressed as fast as she could “You may not like them but we could do many things if we all get along”

At that Mugus looked at her while lifting an eyebrow. She got the message almost as fast as the silence broke in.

“Yes… I mean her too…” She grumbled “I will be nice to her if she tolerates me”

They didn’t talk for a while as they got everything ready. Tiguer woke up after a call from his owner and barked happily as the leather spiked collar was placed over his little neck before getting out of the private quarters.

Outside it was a hellhole most the time, why? Because of the Sligs of course; they usually tried to sleep or sneak away most the time but with someone watching they were workaholics. A few groups were training in the north side of the B section with their weapons as other were sharpening their reflexes as a few groups marched up and down between the barrack’s blocks.

Organization was about zero, but you must admire the display.

While every zone had the same surface at the same height as a five floor building’s top, each zone was different. Section B was mostly empty since this place of the farms was for maintenance of the machinery and energy supply, so the population was less than twenty slaves and only sixty Sligs to maintain order. Slogs were optional and most the time they varied in number.

The surface had four living blocks for fifty Sligs each and a living block for slaves, both human and Mudokon as well as mutant. There was a cafeteria that had a small zone for the slaves and the rest were for the Sligs or any lowly Glukkon that was working on the area.

Besides all that there were the towers and the public showers with bathrooms… Most of these things were usually dirty in a bigger installation but in a smaller well maintained one like this it was mostly pristine. You have to love the small emporium even if it is as bad for the environment as the rest.

“Come on Mugus, I think they are in the 12º Tower today” Dai pointed towards one of the 16 towers that protected the farm like any other in Escoria. Mugus simply grumbled before fallowing the already walking Dai.

As always they got looks from any of the Sligs nearby; if it wasn’t because of Fai and her looks as well as her clothes it was because of Mugus and the fear his looks gave or the power that portable generator and weapons gave him, it was thanks to the dwarf and cute killing machine that originated the weird friendship between the misfit’s group.

It probably wasn’t heard on the upper leagues, but everyone knew Dai spent time with the Mudokons and, in special with the pair of human and Mudaman. No Slig remained near them when these two and their Slog went to spend time with the slaves. It was not right, it was probably nice information to exchange for favors and it was a DEATH sentence to do so.

Dai hadn’t ever thought of befriending normal Human thanks to them being so… She could hardly describe it but Mugus had the word, if he could talk the curses would reach the sky of course. Each of them had someone they liked and someone they couldn’t stand to be with. Everyone but Tiguer, who simply loved to be in the middle of them all so there was no angry feelings.

She snapped out of it for a bit as they were halfway to the tower’s base before a loud noise came to her. Then she found out how bad one could feel when a family member was in the brink of death.

“Alert! Alert! Code Red over the Scrab containers in the zone 1.B! Three Scrabs have been accidentally released and they have already killed a Slig patrolling the corridor 12.B towards the surface”

“FUCK!” Was all Dai could say, she was only halfway!

Suddenly a loud metallic crack filled the air above the sound of gunfire and grunting Sligs as well as the marching instructors. Moments after that another crack fallowed, but this time it was bones and flesh.

“Come on Mugus! Run for it!”

*** Over the wall. Section B Outside corridor 12-13 ***

“FUCK!”

The Slig yelled a second before the Scrab impaled him with two legs. It seemed as easy as opening a can with a shotgun. The flesh tearing and bones breaking echoed enough to make Exer and Liza’s ears burn in pain. For the Slig at least it had been painless… maybe.

“Move… slowly…” Exer said with as much of a low tone as he could get.

The creature took his price and begun to feed slowly with loud ripping noises as the pair slowly backed away. There were four doors to get to the base level and two to get to each side tower, the problem was the placement. That Scrab had killed the Slig in the middle of the two closest doors and as fast as he found someone close it was going to charge.

Getting close to make an exit? Bad idea.

The other two were far away in comparison since the entrances were each close to the towers, not the middle. Any noise and they were going to get to know how a happy meal was prepared in Escoria.

“I don’t know why…” He begun as he was as careful as possible “But I have the urge of not moving in the hopes it doesn’t see us…”

However, moving was the best idea possible as, step by step, during a whole minute, they approached the exit so much that he could almost smell his freedom. Well, at least the freedom in the sense of not being someone else’s lunch. Of course fate doesn’t like to play things fairly for everyone if it can get a saying on it.

“Pin it down!” Yelled a voice.

The pair looked behind them as a squad of five Sligs got into firing position. Barely in time did the pair move as a hail of bullets aimed at the Scrab went besides them, cutting Exer and Liza’s legs by the friction. That was close… but the Scrab had no such luck as his body took load after load of bullets that killed it as brutally as the Sligs could afford with their weapons.

As the creature was killed the Sligs laughed at the bloodshed caused, clapping their hands while some simply reloaded their weapons. One decided to go and get close to pose near the death Scrab.

Who better to die first?

A spike of chitin very similar to those legs of a Scrab was suddenly replacing the head of the Slig. A second latter a sound that was like *Skrunch* filled the air as the claw took a grip on the body and pulled it towards the broken door of the 12º tower so the owner of that body part could enjoy its prize.

There, after guttural sounds of feeding, a Scrab came out, normal and untouched with also no signs of feeding… What came after that tore open the small doorway to get a twice as big hole and show its form to the world.

The creature resembled a Scrab mostly. It had the tall and strong body and complexion, its eyeless head and sharp mouth with the teeth showing on the sides. However it was different in that the creature had six legs that were also detachable thanks to a long tendril like appendage that had enough strength to be thrown and take down even a Big Bro Slig. How was that possible to tell? One of the claws was dragging behind, attached to the chest of one of the Big Bros while other had the remains of the cranium from the previous meal.
Besides those fearsome weapons that detached themselves to get ready again, the creature had a brighter red color and plates of armor all around its chest, head, legs and back. It seemed that the only unprotected place by those thick chitin formations was the underside. Also, the thing was twice as big as any other Scrab. Why the last? Because the size does matter… but to see that you can’t do much about it except getting killed from afar or from being too close takes much of your attention.

The awe was probably shared amongst the Sligs, something that proved fatal as the creature moved and took another one down with ease to retract the claw before any of them could move. The dripping blood from its mouth and limbs came to an end after the Sligs regained their foot and moral to get into shooting position and hail the creature with a rain of lead.

As the smaller Scrab stood a way, ignoring the fire from the enemies, the big one simply looked amused as the bullets bounced from its body with ease. Another movement from its body and the Sligs were one less… then two less… It was obvious that the last one had lost all courage as he threw the weapon and tried to make a run for it before his brains were splattered across the metal floor.

Weapons were charming for the pair now that the Sligs were dead. Well, they would be charming if they could save them, but as they hold still they knew the creature would probably get them if they ever tried to do anything. If they didn’t move they would be simply easy food though…

As the pair looked to the side they found the creature simply feeding on the Big Bro while the other Scrab cleaned the meat from the bigger one’s legs. They had luckily landed near the wall and the dark spot mixed with the metal block every few meters gave them cover. However it was a cover that would blow out as far as one of the two Scrabs decided to go and eat the three stupid Sligs that had died a few moments ago.

“What do we do?” Liza whispered while trembling in fear “I am scared! If I could chant…”

“Relax” Exer hissed “They are far away enough for us to make a run towards the closer exit” He said, pointing nearby to the way down “We get a weapon in the process if we can, two would be too risky since only one of them threw it close after death” He commented, pointing at one of the guns the Sligs had dropped “I doubt we could be faster than the big… Scrab, if that is what it is… He only needs to turn and we are dead meat”

“I doubt a weapon would serve us any good” Liza replied to his words with a bit of a startled tone. It seemed too risky for nothing in particular… That thing didn’t even flinch at three guys shooting at it! “But I think I can get it. I am faster and I have only three fingers to worry about”

Exer nodded, a useless weapon could have other uses than its own name implied if needed. He signaled three… two… one… There was no time to be prepared.

“Now!”

The yell served to encourage the run and to surprise both creatures in hopes of them taking more time to react after the pair got up and running. A few steps and Liza had the weapon. The small Scrab took its cue to run. A few more and both Liza and Exer were almost to the exit. Both creatures now faced the runaways, lucky for them the small Scrab was in the way so the big one was unable to shoot. It grunted in frustration.

Exer made it inside and took the hand of Liza to force her inside and down the stairs. He feared he would make her fall down and die, but as she got inside the normal Scrab broke the metal door away, not stopping in time to get inside. It would be back in seconds so since both were ok his fears should have to wait until he was safe down there.

Turn after turn the pair traveled down, not stopping, not caring. If a Slig was in the way Exer took it down after getting in front and getting the weapon ready. They were expendable and his priority was his friend. The problem was the metallic sound of claws scrapping its surface closer and closer by the moment as the Scrab got closer by the moment.

The fear factor was going to kill him sooner than the creature.

It was dumb luck that he finally made it to the door at the base, opened it and forced Liza to exit as he looked back in time to see a claw going at his chest. He had reflexes fast enough to put the weapon in the way and block most of the impact’s strength. Getting out of the harm’s way was something different.

He bounced away from the entrance thanks to the sheer force of the impact. Exer could easily see a punctured wound and a nice sized hole on his chest as he flied backwards to meet the steel with his bones as he landed. The Scrab luckily got jammed on the doorway and had to retreat briefly, sparing Exer’s life by chance.

Sligs filled the place as the Scrab got away upstairs to make sure it didn’t flee. Soon the echoes of cries for help were heard as they were greeted by force in the upper level.

“Fuck…” Exer groaned as he touched both his wound and his mangled back full of burns thanks to the damn friction.

“Exer! Are you ok?!” Liza half yelled as she got over her friend “You look like crap!”

“Thanks… never had a better compliment” He coughed some blood to the side, grunting as he tried to move.

“I’d say you better not move” A feminine voice said. Both friends knew it was Dai without even looking “A slave’s body is accustomed to beatings but… I don’t know if you broke something”

It was then when both looked at her. Liza didn’t like to admit that the Slig was caring and Exer simply hopped she wasn’t right. It was for sure that there was going to be any kind of punishment from the managers. He knew they would come for him, if not for having weapons handed by a slave, it was going to be because he went down killing some of the Sligs, No one was going to be blind enough to not see if the wounds were done by claws or bullets.

He knew the luck wouldn’t be with him after the bunch of Sligs there informed he had a weapon; otherwise they wouldn’t even bother with the corpses.

“Moving or not… I doubt I will be left here for much longer” Exer grunted as he tried to move again.

“And how right you are, my friend” Came a sickening voice from not afar.

The remaining Sligs, which were around twenty some, circled Dai and the pair. Mugus had been too slow and Tiguer had been fallowing him, probably knowing he would give even more problems if nearby. The trio was without backup and even with it the things would go awry if the Sligant even thought of raising their weapons to this farm’s boss.

Garman was one of the few Glukkons in the farm, and one filthy rich at that. He was not really important to the big boss Dr. Red, but he was ruthless ruling over Agravation’s town and two farms which made his boss pleased and had him in slight consideration. His looks were rather common for a Glukkon, though he had sickening yellow skin and whore a brown suit that made clear he was a dirty individual, no matter how clean and nice he seemed to be in the exterior.

“I believe I saw that slave handing a weapon, am I correct?” He asked with that sickening sweet voice of his.

Just in time a spike came down, almost hitting the Glukkon but barely missing. Everybody look out, Garman with a demeanor as if nothing happened, only to see the big Scrab and the normal one looking down before they walked away to probably slid down the wall towards freedom.

“I wouldn’t be so… bothered if you had used it to put down that THING” The Glukkon seemed to be so calm in his demeanor, it was frightening now “Instead you protected that girl, not caring for the company’s benefits… Oh how I hopped none of your kind would fall so low as to put yourselves over your masters like you did”

The Sligs around, far from shocked or sad by the loss of more than half their buddies, simply laughed in a loud tone. One came closer while taking a butcher knife from the ground, Exer didn’t see it but someone had thrown it a moment ago.

“So, since you seem to like the Mudokon over your own life and over your master’s interest unlike every one of your kind… I think it is only fair I help you resemble what you so fondly protect at the cost of your life”

Dai and Liza were taken away from the circle as the Slig came closer to Exer, sporting a grin that could be seen even with the mask on.

“Name is Halr, scum” He hissed “Two of my buddies were gunned down by you. This is but a kind treatment in comparison of what I would do to you”

With that a pair of Sligs came over, holding Exer down as Harl lifted the knife.

“Axo, Ethzer, make sure he doesn’t move” He said to the Slig pair “The boss wants the property only ‘slightly’ damaged”

Then. Then the knife came down.

*** At night, few hours later ***

Liza had been left alone after the first scream from his friend. That damn Glukkon had asked for her to have a bit of punishment too when they finished with Exer only to get mauled by the human and saved from her punishment as he took it from her yet again.

The screams still filled her mind as she remembered how they butchered his hands to resemble those of a Mudokon with slow and cruel cuts that gave out so much pain with so little progress on the disfiguration of his hands… He actually was really simply spared as he blacked out after the fourth finger was cut down.

Right now she sould be in her quarters, but they could go to hell. Dai had taken Exer to her private ones to attend his wounds and treat him of any possible sickness. She was pretty direct saying that the knife could have anything if it was something Garman wanted done.

*Tock, tock…*

She called twice in hopes that none of the guards heard her. It was already something very nasty that she was willing to go over Dai’s place… but to do so without almost hiding and in such a bold way? It had to be her own concern mixed with the one she felt coming from Dai.

At least it was not the pain she felt from Exer. That had been madness in more than one way.

“Yes?” Came a loud and hissing voice as a blue eye and black skin popped out over to look at who was calling “Oh… it is you” Dai grunted before opening “Come in, fast”

Liza didn’t even hesitate as she fitted inside the slightly opened door to see the insides of Dai’s room. At least it was better than a place full of snoring slaves.

“How is he?” She asked bluntly after getting inside.

The only thing that had changed from the room was a white curtain that was covering around Dai’s bed. A doctor came to tend to the human’s wounds and confirm that there was a simple sickness much like the flu. It could be lethal if unattended over the slaves’ barracks since with all the contamination it did matter little if the place was clean, he would have died in a week or two tops thanks to the wounds and that bothersome virus.

“Small blood loss since they had him bleeding for fifteen minutes out there before they allowed someone to take care of him” Dai grunted as her tentacles flickered and rubbed together in anger “They made sure to hit where the blood would flow the most while amputating his fingers whole and not really harming the ‘merchandise’”

Mugus snapped his fingers to snap both girls out of it. He was petting Tiguer while reading a book and with a pair of earphones, listening at something that seemed important if he was willing to interrupt the pair.

“Look… I think he is going to be ok” Dai said while trying to be a bit friendlier “But he probably will take a time to get used to his… new hands” Her face turned sad, something Liza pretty much did at the same time “And I doubt he will be in the mood for anything for a while after he wakes up”

“Do you think he will change for real? I mean… He never took this kind of punishment, not even for me until now” Liza was worried… and it was no help at all being able to sense something was not right.

Dai simply sighed “I doubt he will act the same until he gets used to it… I must admit that he was reckless and he shouldn’t have taken anyone’s life if possible (even if they were bastards)” She sighed again and rubbed her eyes shut for a moment “But it was that or dying up there. I personally wouldn’t have allowed this if I could have done something”

“That I know” Liza grunted “That, I know”

Mugus snapped his fingers again so both paid attention when he pushed a button for the earphones to reproduce the message at maximum volume.

“Yes? Who is calling this late at night?”

The sickening voice of Garman was heard right away as some mumblings from his bodyguards were heard on the distance. As a fun fact: He is one of the few Glukkons to ever sleep in company and the only to do so with his three Slig bodyguards (originally five, but that number got reduced today).

“Your boss”

They did never really heard Dr. Red’s voice to begin with… But it had a hint of madness and rutleness that hinted if he was not really the one they thought it had to be REALLY close to that power position.

“Oh! Sir Red! What do you wish from this lowly worker?!” Hurried to reply that ass licker of Garman.

“A few weeks ago you got a human and a Mudaman in a batch that was supposedly composed only by Slig guards” Dr. Red said without feelings “As I have been informed, it was to have the few remaining misfits away from the mainland”

“Oh? You mean I have the last Mudaman and humans here, lord?” Garman seemed surprised, enough to leave his sickening accent behind in fact.

“No” Was the cutting and dark answer Red gave “You have the last Mudaman and Human with altered DNA from our labs” At that there was a hint of a feeling… something that could hint hatred “Dr. H.H sent me a note today saying it was supposedly notified at least two weeks ago but that he had no inform of that ever happening”

“Well sire” Garman said, clearing his throat “They were a strange pair, yes… But I never got any notification here”

“That is why I suppose the human, the Mudaman and the Sligant misfits that are mentioned in inform are still alive” Dr. Red said in a darker tone as both Liza and Dai backed away from Mugus, who was acting relaxed.

“You are correct sir” Garman had his sickening accent back “They are weird and have some… unpractical work ways that don’t resemble any other, but they are profitable”

“Oh… in that case it pains me” Dr.Red cut down Garman’s chatter sounding genuinely hurt “But Dr. H.H said it should be better to put them down before the group has the chance of bonding since we could have a scene pretty much the same as that Abe from Mudos”

A gulp was heard, and it was not from the girls as they heard each word.

“Sir…” Garman muttered. The girls could feel his trembling attitude without the need of seeing him.

“What is it Garman? You won’t tell me you grew fond of them do you?” Dr. Red was becoming impatient; his tone was again growing dark.

“I got information that says the Human and the Mudaman were already friends when they came here” A growl was heard over Garman’s babbling “Also… recently the Sligant female and her Slog had been reported to act way too friendly with the slave subjects, not only the human”

A silence was brought for a few seconds. The girls felt pressure building as they heard Garman’s breathing becoming heavier; fear was probably taking his place over him too.

“Send every able man to retrieve their dead meat and report back to me”

With that the voices went dead.

The place went silent for about a minute where every sound seemed to resemble the mechanical walk of the guard Sligs, circling Dai’s quarters. Then a storm took over as every night when the farms stopped working and the sky could release all the contamination back over the place with its acidic nature.

“We have to get out of here…” Was all Dai and Liza could agree on.

Last edited by Uros Osium Tokker; 01-18-2010 at 11:16 AM.. : Added the B, I and U as well as bigger size for some things and other small changes that were needed.
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Idea It lives! Wait... does it?

NOT A NEW CHAPTER (Sadly).

I got back some info from my pc :3 (Seems the hard disk got a screwed a bit so the buddies doing maintenance at least can give me bit by bit...) and worked out the Dashagon creature which is now in my DA page for anyone to see (If you want to).
This is story related since the creature will appear soon enough (chapter speaking). With some luck I will recover the info I made for the other 4 creatures already made soon enough so everyone can see (also the chapter's info itself) and I can update again :3.

See ya soon and leave comments and constructive criticism pweese x3!
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ok, sorry can I have a question actually, please explain again why there are humans on Mudos. Just I didn't really catch it from your previous explanations.
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There are humans on Mudos? Well not in Mudos really :3 Mudos I left in cannon with the basic story of Abe, Munch and Stranger as I used the land across the sea which I named Escoria.
However as to why there are humans in Oddworld? Well, as explained before I used one of the theories about evolution which explains that DNA come from space (Probably in comets and meteors) but since the ecosystem in Oddworld is different (Planet size, probably temperatures, etc... not including wildlife and such) the DNA didn’t properly work it out to survive on its own.
So why we can find these guys in Escoria? When the Glukkons came to conquer the place with security and Vykkers they found the DNA to be so simple in comparison with most the creatures in Oddworld that they could manage to clone the human kin.
Explanation: Humans are highly adaptable beings but our bodies are a bit crappy you know? The only thing that has evolved to be semi supreme is the brain while bodies and anything related has regressed more than evolved since we need of the technology for everything (from weapons to immunity to our system and other things). Most creatures in Oddworld are so special and so attuned with their elements and environment that it is near impossible to reproduce it easily… Human simply leech of anything they can get their hands on it instead of trying to flow with it (This is in general for the species). Since our kin is not so well made, doesn’t have a queen (at least like they have in Oddworld) and simply are even more Industrial than the Glukkons… well the technology can easily reproduce them :3.
Lets face it: A Paramite is more evolved than us, probably. A Mudokon or a Glukkon is simply eons away from us.
In resume: There are humans cause of dumb luck (some DNA landed on the continent of Escoria and was found), the greed for easy profit the Glukkons have as well as the hopes for new toys the Vykkers can use for experimentation >:3
This is possible? Probably. Cannon? Nope :3 But I thought it was worth a shot and here it is ^^.
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Ok :3! Next chapter... though F*censored from this plane of existance* late as hell... I hope to do one chapter each month at least but right now I cant promise a thing so, for anyone that still wants to read this thing :3 here you have chapter two! Though this one I had to redo two times since the original file ended corrupted, so it is not as great as I had planned, hope you all still like it though.

Chapter 2 – Dark Path

Mugus grumbled in more than a simple bit of anger. He didn’t like his line of work as much after meeting Dai because he was tired of being a brute simply because of the desires of his bosses. But from hating his job to thinking of running away to the wild? Fucking-crazy-hell.

However everyone in the room was thinking about the same as they got ready. Mugus had his fists and pack generator, Dai was clothed and had as much ammo as her pockets could carry while Liza had taken some clothes Dai had made for Exe with some of the rags she found. Exer however still was out and in danger.

It was probably pure luck or the fact that Liza was focusing in him so much, scared as hell, that he woke up with a loud grunt while being covered in bandages.

“Morning?” He grunted out as if nothing had happened “W…where am I?”

The white cover around Dai’s bed was still there so it made him difficult to see anything besides the bed and a bit of wall that was the generic thing for any room in the farms.

“Exer?” Liza’s voice made him jump in place as she took the curtain down “GOD! You are awake!”

A bone crushing hug was ensued as Liza wrapped her arms over Exer… then it was Dai’s turn to get a nice triple hold over the poor guy.

“Girls… please… I want a threesome… but I don’t want my back broken” He said between grunts of pain and content for having the two girls over him.

“YOU ARE A DIRTY THING!” Liza giggled while still hugging him.

“But you love me for that” He chuckled while the hug lasted seconds before it had to be broken.

“However that will probably come to an end soon” Dai told him as Mugus took the rest of the curtain down to put it on a backpack “We are going to be put down if we don’t get out of here”

“Why?!” Exer asked with a startled look as he clenched his fists… However they were not his hands anymore what he clenched but a pair of broken things he could hardly feel or acknowledge as his.

Even Mugus felt bad when they saw how he looked at his now three fingered hands. Tiguer happily nuzzled his legs in hopes of getting him back to reality while Liza patted his shoulder.

“I mean” He grumbled to everyone’s surprise “I don’t think I did so much as to deserve you all killed…” As if nothing happened he wave to everyone “If someone has to die I don’t mind that punishment as far as you all are safe…”

“DON’T!” Liza grumbled, almost slapping him in the face “Stop that… please… Be your naughty and friendly self but DON’T take it anymore” Her sobbing became more than obvious as she hugged him again “You are my best buddy, my only buddy… And no amount of pleading would make you go down without me, is that clear?” She hissed angrily.

“Besides…” Dai interrupted before they got more affectionate, getting her mask on place “We heard the big boss asking to get our meat in a fine silver plate if there was a chance” Exer gulped down as she looked at him “No amount of pleading would make HIM get you as the only one”

He had to nod at that, he only heard stories of the big boss but a lot of ‘accidents’ with anyone that troubled him made every story a bit more realistic. The last thing he wanted was to get to know someone that ate anyone from any species and in any state… That included Glukkons that pissed him too much too.

After a few minutes he was also clothed with a few spare clothes Dai did for the reserve. They got out under the acidic rain, already used to it thanks to the meds they were feed daily with their food. The problem, however, was where to go right now…

“Look” Dai motioned everyone close “I know this may not be the most welcome plan EVER, but we may have a chance if we go down the sewers to get out if we are lucky” She told the group, pointing towards the tower still puffing out smoke.

“You are mad” Liza said with a loud hiss “If we get down there we are as much dead meat as here, you know…”

“I know enough!” She cut the Mudaman with a furious sound that only Mugus, asides Dai, could understand “We get out of here in one or multiple pieces! So instead of gambling in how many let’s make us a favor and get down to two chances. One or none”

Both Mudaman and Sligant looked at each other until they heard a sound of mechanical legs moving close. They simply nodded and probably acknowledged that they would continue their discussion after they got out of the damn farm.

Then they simply ran, getting under the protection of the shadows as the rain fell while they headed towards the still empty and damaged 12º tower. Garman, however, was the one to make his way to Dai’s private quarters with his personal helper Balbysi the Slig, one young Slig with an expensive suit and a pair of pants made out of gold that right now carried a great umbrella to protect his boss and himself from the rain.

*Knock, knock…*

“Dail Bella! This is Garman Ofhante, open right up!” Yelled the Glukkon without his sickening accent “Dail? Dail, are you there?” Garman gulped down “Oh fuck…”

“Sir?” Balbysi handed him a telephone “Your friend knew this was going to happen, he says”

“Damn it!...” The Glukkon turned so he could get close to the phone “You were right”

A chuckle came from the telephone that neither Garman nor Balbysi could stand at all.

“Then is the plan in motion?” Was all that the voice from the phone asked.

“Yes… You are actually accurate about your planning I must say, as much as I hate to admit it” Garman said “Lets continue this conversation at my private office…”

*** Underground level - Sewers. Agravation Farms ***

No one liked the last and unaccounted level of the farms for a reason… Sewers weren’t precisely popular thanks to the giant Idiku and other less common creatures that were as dangerous as any other thing in Oddworld. What was an Idiku?

Idiku were creatures that resembled a dark blue or black giant centipede with a mouth in each section of its body that could multiply by breaking into parts to form new Idiku. However that was only the surface as those creatures were cowardly and only attacked when they had at least five to six sections (Which equals a human body in height) and superiority in number of four to one, though they could grow up to twenty or so and transform into breeding queens for new eggs that would spawn great loads of small Idiku that usually would be seen as cockroaches for Glukkons or Sligs when they were ‘controlled’. The creatures weren’t really dangerous if left unattended the short time span of a week, they could overrun a place in a month worth time.

A wild version of them was the Adaiou, which had usually yellow or green coloration instead of purple or black like the Idiku. The Adaiou were usually larger, up to the size of a truck, and vegetarian, but they had a so hard body that they could use it as a mashing ball as they curled up around themselves to form a destroying force that could run rampant around any unprotected place to crush everything not bigger than their size as balls. Small breeds of those creatures could be found in the sewers and usually mimicked the form of an Idiku until it was too late to notice and a furious ball of death came out at you.

There were more creatures of course, like the Admandeirux-Rex and Admandeirux-Ranus, variations from the Fleech that had been created by order of the Glukkons as these places’ guards inside the residual waters.

They were big creatures with the mouth resembling that of a Fleech, but with teeth growing out of their scaled head while the tongues had a hard bone end to crush anything and gulp it down thanks to their huge size (get a slog the size of a small whale and you can see what I mean). These things have two front legs that seem like those of a tortoise that feels in place thanks to the shell they grew up thanks to a unexpected mutation that gave them a second layer of skin. The lower part of their bodies is a long whale like tail that can give them the speed of a fast motorcycle while under the water. The Admandeirux-Ranus are smaller versions (piranha size) of the bigger ones, they don’t have killer tongues… but they can shred a Scrab to small bits of meat after a few seconds if in a big enough group.

If you add that the water here would do a nasty thing if you didn’t give out signs of life every few seconds (Like the dying skin in clothes, weapons, etc… if the thing was not really alive) the compounds in the water simply digested them and maintain the place clean except in those places that a great deal of things were piled up. The only clogs were those found when the cafeteria made their monthly special or when there was a pay cut for the employees…

Still, the odor was simply atrocious.

“Anyone wants to do the honors?” Dai snickered, she had modified her mask with a filter and she was wearing her short pants for something “No?” She laughed as she was the one to get in first with a loud *Splat* “Come on then… I have patrolled this place a few times and know where the exit is”

Mugus grumbled, not really interested in walking in as Tiguer lied on his hands. Liza had more or less the same zero interest in getting her bare feet inside the ‘soup’, as she heard most the people in the farm referred at the water with that interesting name. As Dai walked away, however, Exer jumped in to fallow her while the others decided if doing so was really all that wise.

Another reason as to why the sewers were not really the favorite place for security was that the lights would get brighter and better thanks to sensors that would determine how many industrials were in the area. With only two it mean emergency lights at crappy capacity… The place was dark and as good as the sight for everyone was the hisses that came around creep them out right away.

“Do you think this is secure?” Exer was worried, he could swear that the little corridors were hiding something. Of course in a farm where even the creatures of the sewers are used for profit you can expect that much since they were accustomed to be hunted and to hunt “I mean… I heard a few rumors that say some creatures live here. Vicious creatures, not those armored worms and those overgrown water experiments…”

“You think too much” Dai replied, cutting him out “Don’t do that hun. You will see what hides around here soon enough if some of my fears show to be right”

The others were still far away enough to not hear the short reply, he, however, didn’t have such luck. He simply gulped down and fallowed Dai. For good or bad they had little choice now.

*** Private Ofice – Garman. Agravation Farms ***

“… so we can’t back down anymore” Said the same voince that was heard when Garman took the phone.

Garman had gone to his private chambers where even his now halfway decimated team of bodyguards would never fallow. The place was big, mostly occupied by furniture done in wood and few things on metal to contrast with mostly every part of the farms. There were paints, medals and other things here and there, but since a few months Garman had been tempted to throw them away.

“Which I wouldn’t do… But I think I overdid it” You could think as why would Garman throw away things that for every Glukkon meant so much “We want to get them crushed, but these misfits must live until then and harming one of them so much may mean less chances of success” Maybe who gave them.

Anyone would have expected to see who was he talking to, but Garman knew better than to get someone to see who was talking to, even to get the walls hear or see the figure… He was no fool and he knew his time was cutting short even with so much preparation.

“Balbysi here is the only loyal Slig to me for me” Garman affirmed, giving Balbysi a proud look as a father would to a son, you could say “The group down in the sewers may find someone that will try to kill them and with one of them hurt as much as my bodyguards desired until I ordered them to stop… I do believe our plan may be flawed”

“Flawed or not, we don’t have time if we want to play our cards or fold and run” The voice said “A winning strike or a permanent retreat (and probably a horrible death) are the only choices we have… Are you ready to move yet?”

“Yes” Garman sighed and signaled to Balbysi “We will get moving soon, but still think this is going to get messy”

“THAT” The voice said with a chuckle “Is the main plan”

*** Sewers again. Section 12-Z… Collapsed ***

“…UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!”

Dai had been yelling for quite a while now… well, anyone would do if the only part of a place, perfect to escape slaughter, was now crumbling every few seconds with more scrap metal, processed rock and… whatever else it was. The only exit that seemed to be sure was now closed under a load of rubbish that the compounds in the water could not digest.

“Nice, fearsome leader” Liza chuckled “Any other great plan?”

Tiguer had jumped down from Mugus’s arms to run around and mark territory while both girls in the party tried to kill each other with a gaze. Mugus was simply resting against one of the metallic walls,, eyeing the bugs that wandered around the water or the ceiling but didn’t dare come close. Exer simply was sitting, not minding getting wet as it seemed this would take a while or that it would be their tomb. He really didn’t care shit. Things SOULD be running smoother any second.

“Yes, as a matter of fact” The Sligant said with a grin as she took the mask away to face Liza as close as she could with those tentacles “The plan is FOR YOU TO SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!”

It was obvious the situation was a bit tense as the girls almost went to the hands, though in Dai’s side it would’ve meant that, while she was peaceful and friendly in comparison with ANY other industrial, maybe a shoot or two would take place and things would go awry from there.

Pressure can do many things to people… and none of them good.

“Girls” Exer groaned “Let’s focus on something… Dai, you were babbling about the old sections that were flooded and now had the bridges to cross…”

“Forget it” She groaned, getting away from Liza “Those places are patrolled by groups of three to twelve Sligs, usually with a few groups in each round” She got a stone, smashing it against one of the small Idiku with anger so blue blood and chitin flew around. Dai was pissed “We would probably die from them or those damn fat mutants, the Admandeirux” She muttered something else but no one heard what she said “Sadly, it may be the only way”

“Why sadly?” Liza asked right away. Dai gave her a murderous look but she didn’t intend it to sound bad “I mean it! We have two routes to take and they are dangerous… But we have a better chance than that guy Abe I think. And look what he did!”

Dai grunted, gave Liza the finger, banged her head against a wall where the poor Idiku was trying to recover (Now you may say the water was worm flavored) and finally sighed.

“Ok, I killed enough brain cells to think it is wise” She said with a grunt as everyone else (Included Tiguer and Mugus somehow) chuckled at that “But you better not bet your balls on this… cause you may lose them anyway”

For the fallowing time (Really unknown) the group traveled, searching for a way out as only the section under the 12º tower was known to Dai. They found many patrols and some wild creatures with results that would vary from simply backing away to a full range scale of destruction and wounds for everyone.

At the end, when they were all wounded with superficial scars as much (luckily most figts had been only for a few seconds and with good enough luck) things didn’t seem to get any better. They had searched the whole place up and down and only one very old section remained uncharted… The problem wasn’t the load of tiredness and fear they had accumulated while traveling. It was something else.

First the group had seen a queen of the Idiku; big and fat enough to be as wide as two Big Bro together and as long as five Scrabs one upon the other while laying an army of eggs that could probably be considered a deadly pest if not controlled soon. The thing was so close to one of the most patrolled areas that Dai looked nervous; it did also made everyone else restless.

The second thing that tipped them on something amiss was a colony of Fleeches sleeping in relaxation even when they went around. Those things had their mutant cousins, the Admandeirux, swimming under their sleeping zone and seemed so relaxed and well feed that when they woke up because of the group they simply went to sleep again.

If seeing a so weak predator not displaying fear of fully armed Sligs is not a bad sign, you can tell me what is.

The next thing was a few patrols, or what was left of them, around a section that was one of the few unexplored and really older in this place. They found a map of that zone in one of the corpses, but even telling them that there was an exit couldn’t make it tempting for the group.

Problem was that the reason they weren’t really in a lighter mood was because that old section was the last one to check, or risk it turning back and head to the 10º tower… or past the 12º again which would mean double the risk.

“Putting it short” Exer panted, he had a few cut over his arms, and forehead and his legs seemed wounded “We are going to see what digested those guys?”

“Is that or risking another travel” Dai replied with a tired grunt, she had a few cuts under her throat because one Slig had some lucky shots… almost too lucky. She felt it itching so much… “I think it may be sleep and filled so we should have it easy”

“Don’t want to start another argument, but I must say this” Liza took everyone’s attention to get besides Mugus and ask for his hand so she could lift it up “But you and Mugus here have weapons” She pointed at the twin pistols from Dai and Mugus’s knuckles “We don’t have squat”

Dai was going to give a comeback, but this time she knew little was in her arsenal to fire at her. They had few weapons and… well… Mugus could keep it up for up to two days without almost energy, but she had only a few clips left.

They were quite against the wall and a very, very sharp pointy thing attached to something that wants them eaten.

So it is like being at the job everyday: You simply don’t like the situation.

*Ejem*

A mechanical voice made the group turn around fast, but they did see nothing. The place was like every corridor in the sewers, one of two tipes:

A: Metal wall at your left, metal wall at your right and you walk in the *soup* with your feet soaked in… an interesting colored *water* with usually a dead end in front of you and a corridor in other direction asides the usual bugs.

B: Metal floor similar to a bridge that usually leads like the previous one, but with a flooded zone under it which may mean death if you fall inside of it thanks to the living cleaners down there… These places usually had barriers for the patrols or even small outposts and were cleaned or at least patrolled.

In this case they were between one A and B, but asides the colorful water and the emergency lights there was nothing.

“I think I can help” The mechanical voice said, this time with actual words too…

The group looked around again, this time however… there was a yell. Liza screamed as she found herself face to face with a weird being no one could describe except…

“Loder the Snoozer at your service”

It was weird… The snoozer had a face painted (though it could hardly be seen with the emergency lights… It was good when other Sligs were close if only for the lights) and also seemed like it had other traits, like more weapons (that were everywhere), three extra legs and a huge load of plating. Definitely you could say it was a WEIRD Snoozer, if only for it seemed to be self aware.

The robot probably got impatient seeing that no one said anything or did a thing asides being frozen in place, so it released a small group of flying robots to give the situation some light.

“Here, let me show you what you have to chose from” Loder said with a happy tone.

Right away the thing broke in two (or so it appeared to be) as the three legs that were out of place took things and a big iron table to get the merchandise over. The collection that the Snoozer had inside was pretty interesting after only a few seconds of taking things out… And it hadn’t finished!

The things the machine had ranged from weapons the industrials had made to the wild creations of Mudokon tribes and other things that none had seen ever…

“This is the Kathara” Loder said as Exer was taking a look at one of those weird things “It was made by some wild Mudaman and some of the few human rebels, nowadays scarce” The machine explained “This is one of the few models left, it has four chambers for spooze and can fire with extreme precision and fast speed… Actually the Mudaman don’t make these anymore because stealing weapons from the industrials is hard and because these things have a great range that usually had some teammates hurt or killed if someone missed a shot”

The weapon was a mix of four spooze bows with one of the blunderbuss, but changed to have four cannons perfectly fitted with the spooze bows and chambers for their ammo. The thing weighted a ton, but seemed strong enough to be used as a two handed weapon for close combat and also have a nice packing in long range combat… maybe too much of a punch it packed, the thing could be dangerous easily.

“This one here” Loder left the Kathara down and took what seemed to be an octagonal chakram that had the usual blades around “Is the Arküan, a chakram with a handler and these three interesting devices” One of Loder’s hands pressed a small wooden button in the center of the thing and three huge blades sprung out “It can be mounted into this form, a sword and a shield (which both can cut anything easily) a two handed sword and other combinations… It is something that usually only the best warriors can get as far as I am told”

In a moment Loder took the weapon apart to form a long blade that, now that was in part, resembled a falchion (huge, at that) but light enough to use with one hand as it was very thin. The other two formed a shield that could cover a normal sized humanoid in the right position while still being used as a weapon. Then he formed a trident looking weapon, two handed sword… Seemed the Arküan was a multipurpose weapon.

“I see also that two of you have weapons already, so to start easy (and fairly cheap)” The Snoozer chuckled at that “I would offer the human and the Mudaman these weapons I showed you” Said the machine “Someone gave me the information regarding you all, besides a nice commission to find you and arm you… So these are free and you still have some moolah left”

Everyone felt silent when they heard the Snoozer talk so freely, even the look it have was officially of innocence like it was everyday’s business… Well, seeing what it did…

“Oh!” The thing suddenly took one of his arms inside of his body again to take a… how to describe it? An egg I think “This is something the guy in charge gave me too… I think it is for the Sligants”

He handed the egg to Dai, then the weapons to Exer and Liza and simply waved adieu before getting everything inside of his body again and pushing a button in his chest. A blue light was all that was left of the Snoozer after a few seconds since not even the small robots with the lights were around anymore.

Were there something to say, however, probably the thing in Dai’s hands would have taken the attention and no one would’ve said a thing. Dai and Mugus were looking at it while Tiguer barked gently at the thing, meanwhile Exer and Liza didn’t really know what it was.

“Guys… it seems to be an egg no?” Exer asked looking closer “But what spec…”

Right away the covers of the eggs opened to expose a very small thing that resembled a worm the size of a human baby more or less. The worm had big cute red sinning eyes the first time it blinked while the skin seemed to be green and pretty vivid. The lil thing also had a few tentacles and a pair of arms, so it was pretty obvious the little guy was a baby Slig and the egg was its little home until now.

“Mumma?” Asked the small Slig while looking at Dai, then turned to Mugus and asked happily “Dadda?”

Almost right away Tiguer jumped over and growled at the little thing, which simply cuddled the dwarf slog until the poor thing could only whine and lick at the small baby Slig.

“Will call him Gumi” Dai said, to surprise of everyone around “We have to get out”

Questions? Probably more than questions they would have to talk when they escaped… But right now the only thing Dai did was to embrace the baby Slig as Tiguer went to the ground, splashing the *soup* around as the others in the group decided to turn towards the remains in the metallic ground nearby.

If there was something to say, or any worry, really it was past the time now that they were armed and that a little life was thrown at them. None of them had seen a kid, ever, asides the labs where they were trained and forced to grow into adults faster than their bodies should so they could work sooner… as well as to destroy their infancy.

Exer had overhead one discussion that had a Vykker and Dai as protagonists a while ago. Dai was complaining as why a Mudaman could reproduce but the Sligant couldn’t, she seemed angry for many reasons but for some reason the conversation diverged to THAT topic after some loud words that were the reason he was overhearing. Let’s say the discussion ended with two things, detention for Dai and the Vykker now could only eat soup.

The determination now, as he thought at least, was because Dai was feeling confident in getting out of here and as FAR as possible to get the youngster away from the bastards that ruled this place. You could probably include, maybe, a bit of a mother instinct…

So now they were walking down the metal pat, for once in complete silence except for the baby making bubbles or any cute sound it could muster while playing with Dai’s tentacles, not as conscious as the others about the gruesome remains in the floor scattered all around.

Was it good or bad luck it didn’t matter much, the exit was in front of them after only a minute or so of walking, they would only need to turn once more.

*SNORTH!*

If they could go without making any sound…

Right away Dai found herself cursing in her mind because she didn’t ask the damn Snoozer for ammo. Exer was feeling stupid because he really didn’t know if his weapon was loaded or how to really use it properly. Tiguer covered in fear behind his owner. Liza gulped down, taking a firm grip to her recently acquired weapon. Mugus simply didn’t say a word, but he thought it was good to be mute… for once.

The reason?

A tear shaped figure, huge and menacing in the dark where even the lights had been cut off so only a few sun rays from holes in the wall could enter the place. The thing was a Dashagon, a vicious predator found in Escoria’s caves and abandoned buildings that could adapt to any environment with no change needed, was it savage or industrial. These creatures had a giant eye in their front that would open up by the middle to show a digestive system that simply turned anything into a pulp (and *water*) thanks to the insides that rotated the mass of flesh and sharp venomous teeth that would kill almost anything with a simple touch. If that was not enough however, the thing’s brute strength could mean a trampling death, being cut in two by its claws or simply splattered against a wall when these things knocked anyone around.

Good thing they could hardly hear. Bad thing the eye could see in thermal when it was closed…

“Guys… I hate to ask” Dai sounded, for once, worried, not angry, tired or caring as Exer had heard her. She was worried “But… could I get away first?”

Everyone looked at her, then at the baby, then at the hand she had lifted to point at the exit that was so close… but the thing was probably close enough to catch anyone if they made a noise. Everyone knew a baby would hardly be quiet and that it would be seen as easy prey by any kind of creature.

When they all nodded Dai tried to give a smile for once since this mess got started, but simply walked away with Tiguer up close to her in case something made the creature wake up. However, nothing happened.

Dai arrived at the exit, one natural carved but with some metal additions to prevent small vermin (and, as it seemed, trying to prevent bigger vermin) to enter the place. The other could probably see only a fraction of the place (big enough to fit a tank), but Dai could easily see the whole thing and… the little extra it had.

Touch stones were never recorded to appear in this ‘new’ continent, in fact, no one ever saw one of these and a lot of moolah had been offered since thanks to them the Mudokon Abe did more damage than expected. But here it was! One touch stone with the hand of a Mudokon, but with marks placed in the stone that she knew were no Mudokon paints or marks…

You can say curiosity killed the cat here.

Dai touched the stone and a sudden deep voice called within her head. She didn’t even place her hand over the paw mark, she didn’t even really desired to get the information… she simply touched one of the marks and the voice called

“As light fights dark for supremacy so does a new life fight the hazards of death to achieve its full glory” Said the voice in her head “The guardians of the bastard child of the Vykkers and the corrupt essence of the visitors from the stars will face many dangers while only one of them will be safe as far as the child is in its hands. This child will be the first to rebel the way of life his kin had and to make a deep impact on it… or will be an overlord so feared that the dark souls of the Glukkons and wicked minds of the Vykkers will wither and die of fear before its presence. Which path will you, the guardian of this innocent soul, chose for him? Will you abandon him to protect your comrades or will you keep him even with the perils and sacrifice it will mean for you?”

The voice faded and then a palisade of black wood rose from the ground while the room the group was still in lighted up to get the monster up and angry towards those who disturbed its slumber.

As it went down to the ground, opening its massive eye and then opening it again to show its gruesome insides Dai could do little more than wait with the baby on her arms. For once she felt scared, but not only for her friends…
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Holy shoot, this looks too long for me to read. I'd recommend posting no more than 3 A4 pages at a time (10pt), and no more than twice a week. I may work may through all this some time, but too busy at the moment. I hope it goes well
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I agree with Ench, it does sound like a really interesting story, what with you going into such detail on making the humans on Oddworld believable (good job with that!).
I'll have to continue reading when I have more time.
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Told in the begining they would be large chapters :3 Also said it would be recomended to download them (So as to copy the whole post and get it on something like word or so).

Also I like that people enjoy this ^^ Or at least that some do :3 I will continue working on it as fast as posible but will probably be still until once a month as I said :3 happy reading everyone!
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I'll definately be copying/saving it so I can read it next week when I have no internet

Once a month sounds reasonable...although Splat won't be happy you've beaten his chapter lengths :'D

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*Snicker* Well am sowwy >:3! But I am used to write long chapters, highly detailed and such... It is really a hindrance as it usually scares away people because I am... hardcore writer? I do everything as difficult as possible when it gets my interest I give quality but that doesn’t mean it is something EVERYONE likes (Sadly it seems they usually don’t ) since usually they are accustomed to shorter lengths and maybe not as much detail... maybe it is so they can imagine things as they like :3?

In any case this is how I rock, and I rock hard >:3 And will try to be rocking as hard for a long while until I burn my fingers out ^^ *huggles up!* Enjoy the story ^^
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