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Slig Wars-The Rebellion

I have decided to create a fan-fic based around my current game Slig Wars to further the story line and help with production.
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Slig Wars
The Rebellion


Prologue
This all started when the Glukkon queen , Lady Margaret, tricked Queen Skillya into selling her children, in much the same way she tricked Sam. This eventually led to her becoming insane. Which had a severe affect on her physiological state and led to her beating her children and tormenting them. Sligs would have a naturally loving and sociable nature but the regular beating led to them becoming sadistic. Now I must fight for what I believe in and for what has become of our world, for what has become of our Oddworld

Chapter 1
My name is Alrik, that’s the name I chose when I graduated from slaughter school. I was one of the top students there. I passed sniper training with ease and I was later chosen to guard Rupture Farms 1029 on an outpost near the stockyards. After the terrorist Abe shut down the factory I retreated into the forest as an attempt to save my own life. I managed to escape into the jungle of Necrum when I fell and cracked my skull on a rock. When I awoke my pants were gone, my Magnum and Baton were gone and I was tied to a tree. After shouting to be let free my captors emerged. They were Mudokons, but they weren’t like the enslaved industrialists he’d guarded back at Rupture Farms, They had large hairstyles and wore dyed loin cloths. They asked me were I came from and who sent me. So I told them that I had retreated from the factory. They took pity on me and treated my wounds. Over the coming days I gained their trust and they trusted me enough to give me my pants and baton. They welcomed me into their community and treat me as one of their own. They showed me what had become their race and how the Glukkons had damaged their natural lifestyle. I stayed with them and assisted them in guarding their Mudokon Fortress.
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08-08-2009, 12:29 PM
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Interesting is all I can say... I'll be waiting to see where this goes.
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Chapter 2

thanks i can't seem to stop writing
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Chapter 2
Whilst I was collecting wood for the village I came across an encampment, consisting of small shelters made of leaves and wood. It was populated with Sligs most of whom had injuries or burns and had no weapons. I had asked them what happened and they said that they had been ambushed by native Mudarchers on Elum. I advised that they follow me to the Mudokon village although I had to assist some of them due to the injuries they had endured from their ambush. The Mudokon tribe I had met were from Paramonia and their ancestors were Mudomonian so they had just returned from a pilgrimage to the Mudomo Vaults. There were around 60 of them in the village and the surrounding guard posts their numbers decreased after the Mudomo Trials after they met an unexpected Slig patrol. Being of Mudomonion ancestry they were naturally sympathetic and welcomed them with open arms. They told me their story of how they had escaped SoulStorm Brewery after Abe had once Again shut down the brewery. I found talking to them easier than talking to the natives sometimes, as they were used to the industrialist lifestyle and understood what I meant. Their names were Yorek, Kerno, Meeks and Karkun. Over the coming weeks we became great friends. Yorek had just graduated from Slig Barracks and had a darker skin shade to the rest. Kerno went to Slaughter School and trained in the Slig Barracks. Meeks was a member of the Slig Air Corps but his Wings had been damaged during the ambush. Karkun was Kerno’s younger brother and had just recently graduated Slig Barracks with Yorek. A Slig if graduating from Slig Barracks gains the right to carry firearms and have a permit to be employed by Glukkon superiors. Whilst graduating from the more advanced Slaughter School will allow a Slig to have and be called his own name.
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Do not keep that feeling locked up inside you. Let your creativity flow. So I can find out what these sligs plan to do.
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This is pretty good.
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Great idea. I'll give this one a read.
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Chapter 3

Hope you enjoy this chapter and thank you all for reading
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Chapter 3
As the weeks passed we became greater friends, I became close friends with Yorek. There was something familiar about him. It was the kind of feeling where you’ve known the person before but never met. We guarded the Mudokon fortress and assisted with the jobs that needed doing in the village. We soon grew bored so Me and Yorek asked if we could take a break, so we could go out and explore the natural wilderness. They allowed us to go, thanks to the work we had done for the village. They gave me my magnum back and told us to be careful not to wander into the Slig patrols. We were out for hours. We chased rats, teased Scrabs and jumped into Paramite webs. We wandered through the forests and found one of the Slig patrols. We ran behind the nearest tree but it was no use as the sounds from my pants had alerted them. I had my gun in hand ready encase they spotted us. I heard them moving, they were getting closer, they were right in front of the tree. Then I heard gun fire. I thought the patrol had spotted us. I thought I’d be dead, but Karkun had followed us. The Sligs were now on the floor writhing in pain. We examined there equipment. They camped in a tepee like tent. It was filled with technical equipment. Yorek was good with technology and read out why they were here:

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We have been sent by Queen Skillya to find the Slig(s) who had abandoned their post at SoulStorm Brewery. We have been promised a reward for their capture. They were seen assisting Abe the terrorist in destroying the brewery.

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We have set up camp in a forest near the remains of SoulStorm Brewery. If they ran then they would probably have taken shelter here in this area.
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