Oddworld Forums > Zulag Three > Fan Corner > Non-Oddworld Art & Literature


 
Thread Tools
 
  #1  
03-29-2008, 03:37 PM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
 
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜  (153)Vanilla ✜  (153)
Happy My site

http://stabbath.piczo.com/?g=1&vsrc=preview&cr=3
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Hi everyone i made this site about me. I made this thread so more poepel would go on it so please go on it and leave a message.

Note: the music can be a bit loud.
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.

Reply With Quote
  #2  
03-29-2008, 03:50 PM
Strike Witch's Avatar
Strike Witch
Laserguns!
 
: Jan 2003
: 気持ちপ
: 4,311
Blog Entries: 246
Rep Power: 27
Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)

That is horrific. You must delete it from the internet.
__________________
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.

Reply With Quote
  #3  
03-29-2008, 03:51 PM
Wings of Fire's Avatar
Wings of Fire
Beautiful Bastard
 
: Dec 2007
: Stafford
: 9,537
Blog Entries: 143
Rep Power: 32
Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)

The music alone made me die inside.
__________________
:
“I always believe the movies I've made are smarter than the way they are perceived by sort of mass culture and by the critics,” Snyder said, a statement he immediately followed by saying, “Also, ‘It looks like a video game.’

Reply With Quote
  #4  
03-29-2008, 04:00 PM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
 
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜  (153)Vanilla ✜  (153)

Hehe thanks. *giggels like mad*
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.

Reply With Quote
  #5  
03-29-2008, 04:01 PM
Strike Witch's Avatar
Strike Witch
Laserguns!
 
: Jan 2003
: 気持ちপ
: 4,311
Blog Entries: 246
Rep Power: 27
Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)

I'm serious, burn it from the website with a computerized blowtorch.
__________________
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.

Reply With Quote
  #6  
03-29-2008, 04:04 PM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
 
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜  (153)Vanilla ✜  (153)

1. I cant because i dont know how and dont wont to know how.
2. Dont wont too.
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.

Reply With Quote
  #7  
03-29-2008, 04:07 PM
Strike Witch's Avatar
Strike Witch
Laserguns!
 
: Jan 2003
: 気持ちপ
: 4,311
Blog Entries: 246
Rep Power: 27
Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)

But...but...it's offensive to Human Civilization!
__________________
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.

Reply With Quote
  #8  
03-29-2008, 04:35 PM
Leto's Avatar
Leto
Not Leto
 
: Dec 2002
: up
: 4,866
Blog Entries: 57
Rep Power: 27
Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)

You're gonna look back on this in a few years and be dreadfully embaressed, Cream.
__________________
~MY ART THREAD~ (NO DICKS)

Reply With Quote
  #9  
03-29-2008, 05:05 PM
DaveyUK's Avatar
DaveyUK
Chippunk
 
: Feb 2008
: United Kingdom [England]
: 22
Blog Entries: 1
Rep Power: 0
DaveyUK  (34)

Ghost , don't criticize something if you don't have any better so as in do you have a better website or do you even have a website? I only joined not long ago and your already giving me the impression you are a looser lol

Anyway yeah mate its pretty basic but i think if you do more work to it etc you will make it stand out to the rest ... i like the backround but not my type of music im afraid but still keep working on it and it wil be great.

....
__________________
The Person Below This Post Is A Retard

Reply With Quote
  #10  
03-29-2008, 05:07 PM
Strike Witch's Avatar
Strike Witch
Laserguns!
 
: Jan 2003
: 気持ちপ
: 4,311
Blog Entries: 246
Rep Power: 27
Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)

Shut up and swallow a pipe bomb, Davey.
__________________
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.

Reply With Quote
  #11  
03-29-2008, 05:10 PM
Leto's Avatar
Leto
Not Leto
 
: Dec 2002
: up
: 4,866
Blog Entries: 57
Rep Power: 27
Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)

just a question... is it supposed to be just a background with some heading and a friends list? if not I'm missing something.



The only thing I will ever think of when someone says pipe bomb.
__________________
~MY ART THREAD~ (NO DICKS)

Reply With Quote
  #12  
03-29-2008, 05:13 PM
DaveyUK's Avatar
DaveyUK
Chippunk
 
: Feb 2008
: United Kingdom [England]
: 22
Blog Entries: 1
Rep Power: 0
DaveyUK  (34)

:
Shut up and swallow a pipe bomb, Davey.
You know you love me

My sig says it all man

..

Yeah i think its just a thing where you get to meet new freinds over the intrernet when people add you .. well not MEET but talk lol

Correct me if im wrong but is it a bit like BEBO?
__________________
The Person Below This Post Is A Retard

Reply With Quote
  #13  
03-29-2008, 05:16 PM
Strike Witch's Avatar
Strike Witch
Laserguns!
 
: Jan 2003
: 気持ちপ
: 4,311
Blog Entries: 246
Rep Power: 27
Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)

Nyaaaaaaarg.

Your advice is about as welcome as this image:

Well, maybe to the poof mods, but still.
__________________
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.


Last edited by Strike Witch; 03-29-2008 at 05:20 PM..
Reply With Quote
  #14  
03-29-2008, 05:20 PM
Leto's Avatar
Leto
Not Leto
 
: Dec 2002
: up
: 4,866
Blog Entries: 57
Rep Power: 27
Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)Leto  (3745)

:
Yeah i think its just a thing where you get to meet new freinds over the intrernet when people add you .. well not MEET but talk lol

Correct me if im wrong but is it a bit like BEBO?
then technically, Cream didn't make the site so to speak... but put his/her name and made a new background?

seems a bit more like Vampirefreaks to me lol
__________________
~MY ART THREAD~ (NO DICKS)

Reply With Quote
  #15  
03-29-2008, 06:59 PM
Alcar's Avatar
Alcar
Oddworld Forums Owner
Magical Happy Dream Queen
 
: Nov 2001
: Sydney, AU
: 6,698
Blog Entries: 14
Rep Power: 29
Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)

:
Well, maybe to the poof mods, but still.
You're incredibly charming, but even I WTFBBQ to that picture.

Alcar...
__________________
General OWF Information
Forum Rules § Titles, Ranks & Reputation
Signature / Avatar Requests § Forum Suggestions & Help
Oddworld Forums Blog


Upcoming Forum Events
11th Anniversary of Abe's Exoddus (September) § 9th Anniversary of the Oddworld Forums (May 2009)
Release of Citizen Siege (2020) § Double Back Ceremony (Daily)


“Also, we don't need no Jacob to gay this place up. We have officially won the award for the forum with a highest proportion of gay members whilst not being themed about poojabbing, cowboys or Kylie.” - Nate

Reply With Quote
  #16  
03-30-2008, 02:54 AM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
 
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜  (153)Vanilla ✜  (153)

Well the site isn't done yet so some of the pages are a bit messy i will make it better im trying my best.
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.

Reply With Quote
  #17  
03-30-2008, 11:12 AM
OddjobAbe's Avatar
OddjobAbe
National Treasure
 
: Feb 2007
: England
: 3,121
Blog Entries: 100
Rep Power: 23
OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)OddjobAbe  (5874)

Helpful advice: Learn HTML and then the possibilities are limitless (to a certain degree). The websites that host web pages for you are usually overrun by advertisements and limit what you are able to do. In a nutshell, they're shit. It really doesn't take long to learn HTML.

Constructive criticism: when spelling the word 'sites' try to spell it as I just did there and not 'sitez'. When you spell it like you have, the first thought that'll enter a person's head is "Good God, what has become of the world's adolescents?".

I'm not quite sure how the website reflects your image, but the tiled background isn't very professional, nor is it attractive. Try to create an image that will stretch accross the whole page without scaling it badly.

And if you're going to add music, try not to add music as repetitive as that. If the music goes with the theme of the page, fine, but try to find something that's a little less repetitive. I realize that it is a short track on a loop, so what I'm getting at is get a longer song and put that on loop instead.


If you put effort into learning HTML and take on board my advice, you might be capable of producing an alright-ish website that might be appealing to some folk.
__________________
A man walks into a zoo. There's nothing there but one dog. It was a shih-tzu.


Last edited by OddjobAbe; 03-30-2008 at 11:15 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #18  
04-01-2008, 09:51 AM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
 
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜  (153)Vanilla ✜  (153)

Its called freedom of text and i tryed to find one but i cant.
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.


Last edited by Vanilla ✜; 04-07-2008 at 08:23 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #19  
04-01-2008, 10:22 AM
Wings of Fire's Avatar
Wings of Fire
Beautiful Bastard
 
: Dec 2007
: Stafford
: 9,537
Blog Entries: 143
Rep Power: 32
Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)Wings of Fire  (13656)

And as I said in another one of your threads; Freedom of Speech = Freedom of Criticism.

You are quite free to not take Oddjobabe's exceedingly helpful and friendly advice but in doing so you forfeit chance for improvement and people just flame you again and again...

On a more positive note, that is much better than the one I made when I was twelve... The one I made had pictures of Sephiroth on.
__________________
:
“I always believe the movies I've made are smarter than the way they are perceived by sort of mass culture and by the critics,” Snyder said, a statement he immediately followed by saying, “Also, ‘It looks like a video game.’

Reply With Quote
  #20  
04-01-2008, 10:35 AM
Alcar's Avatar
Alcar
Oddworld Forums Owner
Magical Happy Dream Queen
 
: Nov 2001
: Sydney, AU
: 6,698
Blog Entries: 14
Rep Power: 29
Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)Alcar  (1705)

Ooooooo, fangirl much?

Alcar...
__________________
General OWF Information
Forum Rules § Titles, Ranks & Reputation
Signature / Avatar Requests § Forum Suggestions & Help
Oddworld Forums Blog


Upcoming Forum Events
11th Anniversary of Abe's Exoddus (September) § 9th Anniversary of the Oddworld Forums (May 2009)
Release of Citizen Siege (2020) § Double Back Ceremony (Daily)


“Also, we don't need no Jacob to gay this place up. We have officially won the award for the forum with a highest proportion of gay members whilst not being themed about poojabbing, cowboys or Kylie.” - Nate

Reply With Quote
  #21  
04-05-2008, 07:31 PM
Strike Witch's Avatar
Strike Witch
Laserguns!
 
: Jan 2003
: 気持ちপ
: 4,311
Blog Entries: 246
Rep Power: 27
Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)Strike Witch  (4900)

BITCH, HE'S MINE!
__________________
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.
If we were girls, we could get popular by doing anything:
rock band, jazz band,
karate, kendo, mahjong, cyborg, synchronized swimming...
On the other hand, high school boys are
useless outside battle and sports anime.
But they're recklessly trying to make a slice-of-life anime about us.
Ah, we are high school boys,
the miserable high school boys.

Reply With Quote
  #22  
04-05-2008, 10:38 PM
Havoc's Avatar
Havoc
Cheesecake Apocalypse
 
: May 2003
: Netherlands
: 9,976
Blog Entries: 71
Rep Power: 30
Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)Havoc  (4126)

Step 1: Delete the music from your website.
Step 2: Delete horrible background from your website.
Step 3: Delete the website.
Step 4: Delete yourself.
__________________
The Oddworld Wiki

When one person suffers from a delusion it is called insanity. When many people suffer from a delusion it is called religion.

Reply With Quote
  #23  
04-06-2008, 01:04 AM
alf's brother's mate's Avatar
alf's brother's mate
Riot Slug
 
: Jul 2007
: Location Location
: 595
Blog Entries: 9
Rep Power: 18
alf's brother's mate  (132)alf's brother's mate  (132)
Happy VIRUS!

This sabbath box of turd gave me a virus.

ABM :P

(agrees with havoc)
Reply With Quote
  #24  
04-07-2008, 07:21 AM
Vanilla ✜'s Avatar
Vanilla ✜
Rabid Fuzzle
 
: Sep 2007
: England
: 507
Blog Entries: 2
Rep Power: 18
Vanilla ✜  (153)Vanilla ✜  (153)

WHAT!!!!!???? on what page?
__________________




There's also an OWF Discord,
join here.

Reply With Quote


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 








 
 
- Oddworld Forums - -