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02-02-2006, 03:17 PM
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Chronicles of the Burning Spirits: #1

This'll be a series I'm making callled 'Chronicles of the Burning Spirits'.
BOOK ONE: The Weultar Catacomb


-Introduction-
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The raging war is still going on. The unbearable hatred between the Natives and Industrals shall never seem to end. In the rage of battle, nothing ever seemed to be tranquil. It was like a house filled with angry children, along with parents inside of it in despair. What do we expect in the end of this? Only time will tell. That is, a whole bunch of dragging, neverending trail of time.

But lone spirits seem to be guiding the Natives through these rough times. Who had mastered these ghosts, phantoms, and legends from the past? None other than Cless Monteau.

Cless Monteau is a Mudokon whom seemed to be a professional with what he called 'Paranormal Discipline'. It is an art that takes years, even decades to master. It's all about mental strength, and complete concentration of your surroundings. You contact ghosts, spirits, and statues to aid you in battle. The more spirits trust you, the more powerful you become. Getting these spirits to trust you takes hard work, and wise remarks in order to get them on your side. But once you weld their power, your skills in battle can be greatly appriciated and rewarded.

How exactly do spirits help you? You would put them in an urn, and have it sit inside some blessed water. After a week, open the urn and put some water on your weapon. Now, it becomes blessed with the spirits and shall recieve a blue glow onto it. You may even put it on your fists for hand-to-hand combat. The more spirits that go in the urn, the more powerful this water becomes. The water you put on your weapon becomes very useful, and can be more effective in combat.

But these kinds of people don't just do that. They also must meditate with the spirits floating around them to keep the spirits happy. If the spirits are angry, they will leave you. To get new spirits, you speak with one through mind chat, and convince them to come into the urn. Water is also a 'Paranormal Discipline' person's favorite thing. They learn to make it move, and learn to walk onto it as well. It's hard to become this, but once you learn everything known, you can become very powerful.

This is Cless Monteau's story. This is his story of his dangerous encounters, and his teaching of his fellow students. Also, you'll learn about his possitions in war, and how his life had changed him forever.

End of Introduction
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02-03-2006, 01:44 AM
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That's a very intersting intro; Cless almsot sounds like a bit of a Necro-go-Psychic. Very cool; I hope you post some more soon, I'd like to see how this turns out.
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