this is kind of a pirates of odd world story anywase here it is
darthans are industrials whith shap slaws round head sharp teeth kiny brod shoulder and buldginging arms there a pirate like species whith 4 pointed legs they usualy were lond caped coats
daln is a quarkin a nother industrial species like peasants and royaltyike a blue human daln is a prince of the quarkins
daln was getting ready to set sail "were read boss"a slig said"good set sail for polaris"daln said"aye aye sir"the slig said and they left off not long after they saw a dark ship"what is that"daln asked a slig srugged"get closer "daln ordered"aye aye sir"the slig said and they turned towards the dark ship
end of chapter 1
Well, it is a start, but I would recopmend lengthening it and giving more to the characters, setting, and the general going ons of the sotry. Can you please use good grammar too?
dalns oddysee
