My story of Oddworld.

[Dark Elite_H2]

Yes, I've made my own story of Oddworld, but within a Slog's view. His name is Slogann, a bio-engineered enhanced Slog, way differ'nt from a regular Slog. This is his first journal, but I'm workin' on his second journal. Read on up, and I hope yeh enjoy's it, people's. You's gonna have teh upload 'em. Sorry.
'Nother thing, I can't get the first page up guys. But, I'll give you a lil' summary of it. Hopefully, it'll give's yeh a little help when you move on to the second page.

The first page is just a little introductory at the top. The bottom begins when they're just walkin' 'round in a frosty field, when herds of Paramites and Scrabs stampede towards them. Slogann goes in to detail of what they are. Then, Munch goes out to look fer water, but doesn't show up for what seemed like an hour. Slogann, Abe, and Munch's daughter, Jearsey, goes out to find him. They wind up on findin' Munch trapped with Slogann's old owner, Sly the Slig, and a behemoth Slog. So, they plan up on saving Munch, by Slogann distracting the behemoth, and Abe and Jearsey takin' care of Sly. Abe releases Munch, Munch and Jearsey Zap! the behemoth, but Slogann calls off the attack. Sly's grateful, and helps them get in to Sloghut. That's the summary of page one. Enjoy the rest, guys.