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04-28-2005, 05:38 AM
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Happy some poems:D

here is a poem by me


Abe being a Schmuck
oh, our hero who has luck,
he saves Mudokons one by one,
and when the Glukks look at their screen
they're gone!

in the second part of the oddworld history
Abe's mission is a strange mistery,
´bout a poisoned drink
with bones as the recipety i think...

Munch is a Gabbit who's cool
and he has his own 'swimingpool',
one day he fell in to a trap
and the the Vykkers sang their rap,
but after a few tests
Munch escaped from thos pests,
with some of his fuzzle-friends
n' thats how the Vykkerstory ends.

Munch and Abe builds up a team
thats a good dream,
more gabbits in the lakes
and Mudokons who bake cakes,
yeah, piece in the Odd
it deserves every Gab and Mud.

A noble beast called Stranger
hunting outlaws with a bow,
he uses wild ammo like a bolamite or so
but sometimes when he miss, he might hit a crow!

Blitzers booty is an outlaw
from the City of thieves,
he thinks Stranger is an old fool
but Stranger himself is very Charmy n' cool.

I jus' wrote this poem now so you might wait untill I post some new ones, but post yer poems here if you want, it's up ta you!


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04-28-2005, 08:57 AM
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Kewl, Nice poems! Keep 'em up!
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04-28-2005, 03:56 PM
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That was a cool poem, I myself am not a good poem writer, but you are a great poem writer! I wanna hear more!
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04-28-2005, 04:08 PM
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Yeah, those poems were really good! I'd love to see more of them.
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04-28-2005, 04:14 PM
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"but Stranger himself is very Charmy n' cool." i liked that part, please post more of your rockin' poems!
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04-29-2005, 04:52 AM
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thanx!
I'll be writing some more soon, hope i can figure out something more new and fresh...
keep in touch
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04-29-2005, 04:38 PM
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Yay! We can't wait to see them!
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Ok everybody here comes a new poem! this one might not be well-made as the other one, but I wrote it anyway...

once in the Odd
there was speciall Mud,
his name was Abe
n' i think his still a famous hero

second in the Odd
there was a cool Gab,
his name was Munch
n' I guess his a nasty one

last in the Odd
there was mystic one,
his name was stranger
n' I know his alone.

as i said this poem is not well-made, but ejoy!

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05-02-2005, 07:58 PM
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It was a decent poem. It could've been better, but it was still a nice poem. Were you experimenting with this one, or was it just something that popped into your head at the time?
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05-02-2005, 11:58 PM
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yeah it were things that were poppin' in to my head at the same time when I was writing, and I was kinda stressed to, cuz i was going ta have a lesson bout five minutes...
I guess i'll work some more on my poems befor i write em on this thread.

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05-03-2005, 02:45 PM
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Ok. I'd love to see some more.
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