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05-01-2001, 08:01 PM
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Dark Hood's Oddysee. . . (Well it is set on Oddworld, isn't it?)

OOC: Okay, That's copying Oddworld a bit, but hey, this IS on Oddworld, isn't it?

Dark Hood, Dragadon, Twisted and Teal are walking down a grassy path that goes through some undergrowth together on the way back to thier village from a battle with a few sligs.
Dark Hood is telling them about all the weird stuff he did when he was a litte kid, then Dragadon get shot in the back with a tranquiliser dart, and falls to sleep.
TF, Teal and Dark Hood all turn around, and TF gets a tranquiliser in the head. Dark Hood, not being able to see where the darts are coming from, makes a dash for it as Teal also gets hit by a dart.
As Dark Hood enters the nerby bush, he steps apon a trap and is hung upside down from a tree. After a while, he blacks out from all the blood rushing to his head.
After a while, the rope holding him from the tree snaps, as the trap was old, and as Dark Hood awakes, he sees the rest of his group being carried away in a large net by a few helicopters.
Dark Hood, not beliving what he just saw, starts rushing in the helicopters direction, with only a compass and his (rather crappy) sence of direction to guide him. It is up to him to rescue his buddies.
Meanwhile, Dragadon, Teal, and TF are locked inside a small, cramped prison cell, which is very, very, solidly built. They have all been stripped of everything (execpt thier underwear), and are beginning to wake up.
"Huh what happened?" Dragadon groans. She sees herself in a small cell with Teal and TF. She tries to move but her legs are chained to the ground. Where are we? She can smell the faint hint of medicaine in the air. A Vykker lab? "No!" she screeched, trying to break free, but the chains held you fast. She roared with fury. "YOU CAN'T KEEP ME LOCKED UP LIKE THIS! I WANT MY LAWYER!"

OOC: A note to TF and Teal, do not reply or add to this here. Please go to Sweet Refuge from Reality to read more on this.
- DH

[ May 01, 2001: Message edited by: Dark Hood ]
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05-26-2001, 07:52 AM
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pretty good dark hood. just remember to proof read over yer work n make sure that it makes sense wen u say it out loud. keep up the good work!
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