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RPFic

...having scanned the RPG-fun! posts, it occured to me what was missing... I found that what was needed was rather simple. an ongoing rpg, in the grand tradition of the Oddworld fics...

what I propose is simple. an ongoing RPG. All Oddworldians... all new characters. no pulling in a fic character here... just let the creativity flow. lets keep it Oddworld... and as for femme chars? only if there's a darn good reason. sound good? allrighty then!
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05-01-2001, 04:49 PM
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A bone deep, weary ache was slowly setting in, impossible to avoid; the mudokon's arm, long since numb, had begun to infect the rest of the body with the sore tingling of overworked muscle. Tensing his jaw, the mudokon merely ducked a little, shifting his arm into a slightly more forgiving position, and continued scrubbing, pushing hopelessly at the dirty stains on the floor. Each movement was an agony, each scrubbing motion sending jags of pain up the overworked, abused flesh. His very bones ached with the effort of it. As he toiled, his brain worked feverishly, burning with a sullen, tired but hopeful light.
'keep going. keep working. look for an oppurtunity. always keep alert... they'll slip up. they'll have to... eventually. then it will be time...'
The mudokon paused in his work, one hand clinging fervently to the shaking muscles of his arm. the angry burns marring his upper arms still stung, even after a month of healing. he winced, his face a mask of sorrow at the spark of memory, memory of what they had done to him...
he had thought they would kill him. he had thought his life would end, right there... he was sure of it. he had fought back, killing a half dozen sligs before the others had clubbed him unconscious, dropping him into the grass...
he had awoken to darkness, and silence, and a deep, metallic stink that had clogged his throat. walls pressing all around him...
he had thought they would kill him. but they didn't. low on workers, they said...
he had lost his feathers, clipped off nearly at the base. to break him... his feathers... and his tattoos. it had hurt, hurt so much... thankfully he had fainted halfway through... he had tried to defy them... but the hot iron on his skin, burning the flesh and the marks below, it had been too much. he felt no shame. only a cautious patience, a waryness, keeping his eyes open, waiting for the proper time...
"HEY!! WHAT THA HECK DA YA THINK YER DOIN'??"
Jolted out of his reverie, his head snapped up. he had stopped working. oh no...
the slig stomped towards him, it's mechanical legs still a strange sound to his ears...
he waited, holding himself in a meek position, his eyes watchful... perhaps this might be the time...*
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if that one doesn't seem viable, then by all means we can discard it and begin another one, along another theme. I only just realized the revolutionary flavor of this one... on the other hand, it can be taken any potential way...
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[OOC: i'd join, but my creativity's kinda low at the moment, what with my fic and trying to make the RPG good and sinister. i'll join when i think of a char.

good idea, though. i have a couple more ideas for our fics, if you ever come online while i am...]
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ooc heh, a character popped up in my head yesterday, maybe ill use him. See Character Pics topic to see what i mean.
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ooc: ok if this is too extreme let me know and ill 'tame it down'

He waited in the shadows patiently. He was hungry and he couldn't stand the food they served in the mess hall. What he wanted was raw meat; Mud, Glukk, Slig, it didn't matter. He stretched his Big Bro like frame, the quills on his back making slight clicking sounds. Apsentmindedly he stroked his 3 paramite like face tenticules, his tail twitching like a cat that was on a hunt. His dark green skin blended in well with the shadowy corridor he was in. He stared at the intersection with his yellow eyes, waiting for anything living to pass by. The Vykkers that had created him tried to control his tendicy to 'eat' his coworkers, but the best they do is implant a inhibitor at the base of his spine. Already he was starting to develop a resistence to the inhibitor's shocks. And he wasn't about to tell them about it. His stomach growled painfully and he knew he couldn't afford to wait much longer. He was about to give up and go to the mess hall when a slig passed by.
Good enough he thought as he charged. Unlike the standard BBS pants, his pants mimiced a spider, allowing him to achieve much greater speed then the lumbering gait the other BBS's were resticted to. He caught the slig completely off guard. The slig screeched in pain as he started to devower it alive. He could feel the inhibitor kicking. but he ignored it. When he was done all that was left of the slig was its pants and most of his skeleton. The sligs blood was all over him and he wouldn't have it anyother way. He gave a honk of trimupth.
Suddenly a new pain shot through him, one stronger then he had ever felt before. He wailed in pain and collapsed.
"They must have upgraded the voltage without me realizing it.." he muttered before he blacked out...
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He stared, caught completely off guard, his eyes wide in the gloom as he sat crouched on the floor, the tired, overworked nature of his muscles suddenly not quite as important as before...
The creature had appeared out of nowhere, a twisted monstrocity that took him a moment to realize was, or used to be, a slig. maybe...
It was only recently that he had been forced to interact with the vicious brutes, and sligs were still an unfamiliarity to him... this one's odd looks and cannabilistic act couldn't be too far off reality... for all he knew, sligs regularly ate each other, bigger ones preying on the smaller...
Mildly in shock, he shivered once, his eyes suddenly feeling very heavy as he rose unsteadily, and in a daze, moved off down the corridor a little bit, around a corner, and, easing down, placed his head in his hands and began to cry.
"Oh Odds I gotta get outta here..."
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(OOC: This is a part from my fic "Dark Hood's Oddysee", keep reading, though, I'm not gonna feture Dark Hood in this)

*As Dark Hood walks through the forest, he sees a group of Sligs in the distance. He approches closer to within ear shot, and sneaks into a bush. He listens carefully to thier conversation.*

Slig 1: "Well, he's out here somewhere."

Slig 2: "I've forgotten what he looks like. Who are we suppost to go find again?"

*The first Slig pulls out a peice of paper, and shows it to the second slig.*

Slig 2: "Oh yeah, I remember now. I wasn't really listening."

*As he gives the bit of paper back to the first slig, Dark Hood catches a glimpse of what is on it - A photo of him.*

DH (Quietly): "So thier after me as well, eh? We'll see about that!"

*He waits for the 20 or so sligs to march past him, and then jumps out of the bush.*

DH: "FREEZE!!!!"

*He activates his shield and starts charging his weapon up. The sligs all turn around.*

Slig 1: "That's him! Promotion time!"

*They all open fire on Dark Hood, and the bullets just bounce off his shield. Dark Hood who has charged his weapon, leans it against the side of the shield, and then he sits down a yawns. He gets out a book "Red Dwarf, Space Corpse survival manauel" and starts reading. Time passes. . .*

(Shot of Dark Hood still inside the shield, looking at his watch with the sligs still firing at him.)

*More time passes. . .*

(Shot of Dark Hood playing chess with himself with the sligs still firing at him)

*Even more time passes. . .*

(Dark Hood is now very bored indeed, and has gotten himself ready for the point the sligs run out of ammo.)

*Eventually, the sligs stop firing, and look at each other confused. Dark Hood sees the moment to deactivate his shield and start blasting the crap out of every slig he sees. He vaporises all of them, expect the second slig, who just stands there, waiting for the end. Dark Hood walks up, and the Slig shudders.*

DH: "You'd better run along, litte sliggy, or I'm gonna have to do to you what I did to your brothers."

*The Slig takes off as fast as he could. He keeps running, no way of defending himself against anything, thinking how lucky he is that he survived an encounter with the powerful human. He enters a big facility, and keeps on running. As he nears the mess room, he sees the powerful crossbreed, Spider, and a Slig carcass near by, and a strange mudokon.*

Slig 2 (OOC: Okay, I'll call him Roger from now): "Uh-oh!"

*Seeing as the crossbreed is knocked out cold, he decides to make a break for it.*

(OOC: Crap, wasn't it?)
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[OOC: ah ah ah, DH. 'All New Characters', 'All Oddworldian Characters'. Dark Hood's been around for ages, and he isn't very oddworldian. The way i understand Mai's rules, that's NOT ALLOWED! j/k, but i think she said to come up with all new characters.

i'm stil thinking, Mai...]
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OOC: Dark Hood won't be appearing in it again. I am gonna use Roger (The slig) in this.
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Spider woke up after some time. He got up slowly, still feeling the pain somewhat. He leaned up against the wall a moment, catching his breath and gathering his strengh.
"Dam Vykkers," he grumbled, "why can't they just leave me ter my own business."
He wished he could get his claws on his creators and rip their throats out, so he could be free to do whatever he wanted.
After gaining some strength back, he started down the corridor, heading no where in particular. He paused and looked at a mud who was just around the corner.
"Yer lucky I just ate, otherwise yer would be in my stomach right now." he said to the mud with a sadistic grin, then he continued on his way...
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[ooc: Eef, I don't normally do RPG very well... Oh well, I'll have a go, anyway... ]

The three Dirgescreamers wailed incoherently and hauled on their leads; they were ugly beasts, yet another cross-bred product of Vykkers labs, a fast, powerful hybrid of scrab and slog, totally blind yet with phenomenal noses and hearing, produced specially to hunt down that… that… spider creature – nothing else was stupid enough to want to – and near on uncontrollable. If it weren’t for the neural stunners hardwired into their central nervous systems they’d already have eaten the slig they were currently dragging down the corridor and gone on to tear up a couple of muds for dessert…
Skar – real name Skerith, but corrupted to what it was now long ago because of the old wounds mottling his wiry frame – hated his job with an unbridled passion. He hated his job, hated his boss, hated the damned creatures dragging him down the corridor, hated the stupid thing he was hunting, hated the vykkers, hated these smelly, dank corridors, hated his whole Odd-damned life! He hated it and wanted out; he’d run if he thought he could get away, but his Bosses had promised in no uncertain terms they’d hunt him down with these accursed screamers, and, provided he survived, get Vykkers to implant a neural stunner in the back of his brain to ensure he didn’t try it again. Frack, they’d implied he’d get one as a punishment if he didn’t catch or kill that spider thing… He didn’t know how they worked, but he knew enough to fear them – he’d been a guard when they’d tested the devices on the more unruly sligs. To see even the hardest-nosed sligs broken down to a sobbing, pleading bundle on the cold stone floor of the labs had shaken him to the core, and their screams had given him nightmares for weeks. And once they were in, the stunners never came out again; not without killing or severely crippling their host, at any rate…
Why the Frack do Vykkers insist on creating all these Odd-damned cross-bred abominations, anyway?, he wondered, absently, jerking back on the lead as the front Screamer barged its neighbour and snarled at it. They were all dangerous, uncontrollable and cantankerous at best and downright psychotic killers at worst – and Screamers spent more time arguing amongst themselves than they ever spent tracking…
He snarled as the Screamers unexpectedly lunged at a noise, jerking his already-tired arms and nearly tearing the left one clean out of its socket. He jolted savagely on the leads and cursed quietly, teeth gritted.
Then Skar looked up, and saw – there was a mud up ahead; a shivering, pathetic little bundle by the wall. He gave it a speculative look – maybe it’d have seen his quarry? – and paced closer, straining to keep the Screamers from getting free and vanishing off down the scent path. As he got closer, he could see the mud’s nerves looked shot to pieces, so he’d have to treat it with a little caution at least – which was a pain, as he was in a bloody Oddawful mood already, didn’t want to have to mollycoddle muds for a bit of information…
The smallest Screamer – the runt of the litter – gave the mud a cursory sniff and decided it wasn’t interested. The other two were squabbling again; he scowled, lightly touched the pad on his wrist-guard and gave the bickering creatures a mild shock. They quietened down quickly after that.
Skar turned his attention to the mud. “Yer seen a slig come this way?” he asked, roughly. “Big fat one, all spines. Seen ‘im?”

[ooc: gnar. That was... er.. fun...? Hm. I know continuity is severely lacking, and if it's crap I'll delete it - ditto for if it makes bugger all sense... ]

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05-04-2001, 06:04 PM
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[ooc: no teal... to be completely truthful that was great. love your character allready... my respect for you grows even more...]

the twisted sliglike being was back, looming over him in all it's grotesque glory, it's strangely unsliglike facial tentacles spread wide and menacing...
he stared, his eyes wide and damp as he shook, the deep, baritone voice shaking him almost as much as the actual, heavily threatening words did. "Yer lucky I just ate, otherwise yer'd be in my stomach now."
the creature grinned, a smile of malicious sadism, unbridled by any form of decency or restraint. he saw no more, merely hiding his face.
A warrior. He was Zuum. He was a warrior... he had been trained in the way of combat, he had practiced long and hard... just because he was young... just because he hadn't killed anyone or even anything before the fateful day the raiding party had caught him napping in the grass... he was still a warrior. he wished he could stop crying...
memories rise, stories told to him by his elders, by his teachers, old Monol and Kato, told around a campfire late at night. tales of captured warriors... of the fights... of the torture... and then afterwards, their butchered bones found in the grass the next day, eaten... they had ate them. just like the slig had eaten the other slig, and nearly eaten him...
the voice startles him, even more than the strange creature sniffing at him. the rough, deep voice washes over his consciousness, breaking him from the small, muddled world of misery and wrankled nerviness that had settled over his mind. roughly pulling himself from his feet, he rose in a rush, tottering slightly, his eyes several inches below the sligs as he wiped roughly at his eyes, his face burning with shame at having shown such pathetic weakness in front of another, even if that other is a slig...
sniffing defensively, he doesn't meet the slig's eyes as it asks him a question, the voice, deep and rough, remarkably lacking in the normal vile contempt of most sligs when talking to him.
"Yer seen a slig come this way? Big fat one, all spines. Seen 'im?"
Finally able to meet the sligs eyes, he stared boldly, his face still wet but no longer quite as haggard and miserable. he stared, curious and confused... the slig was holding a brace of creatures by thick, artificial leads... they looked like those accursed slogs, but different. sharper...

"Slig? Big, nasty guy, spikes here and there, long tail, tendency towards cannabalism?" Nodding slightly, he tilted his head, indicating a corridor. "he came through here. killed a slig. was going to kill me I guess..."
Turning back to the slig, he shifted a little, fidgeting. running one hand over his scruffy feather tassle, the ragged stump growing back all patchy and rough, he stared curiously at the rough, rugged slig. Moving up before him, he stares, his voice free of fear as he asks his question, figuring a beating would be worth the information on this most interesting person.
"I've heard of sligs eating our warriors out on the plains... but I never heard of sligs eating other sligs... is that a normal thing for you people?"
Careful to avoid getting too near the strange, vicious creatures, he steps up beside the slig, indicating the corridor again.
"He went just down here. here, I'll show you if you want..."

[btw... I realize that your character is in a dreadful mood, teal, and this could very well result in my character getting the living daylights beaten out of him... but hey, it's all in good rp fun. I'm just saying I don't mind... so if that's what's gonna happen go ahead. ^_^]

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[OOC: never heard the word Frack before...

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[ooc: Frack is just a word I use in place of the other one that has four letters and a click at the end... And I don't think Skar will be beating anyone while he's struggling to hang onto three unruly Screamers...]

Skar narrowed his eyes, suspiciously, vaguely baffled at the question, but his Dirgescreamers had started lunging excitedly at their leads and dragged him along a short way, feet squealing like nails down a blackboard across the cold floor. He cursed at them, hauled back, not making the connection that their sudden excited state could mean their prey was nearby…
“I-… what was th’question?” He gave his head a shake, tried to kick his brain out of neutral and back into gear. “Do sligs eat each other?” A faint honk of dry laughter. “Frack, no! We may eat jus’ about everythin’ else, but naw, even we don’ go much in fer cannibalism. Only Spidey does that…” The biggest Screamer interrupted with a howling bark and lurched again, drawing a curse and a jerk on the lead. “Which is why I been sent out wi’ these li’l buggers. Try ter catch ‘im, Vykkers wanna be able ter control ‘im better…”
The mud gave him a puzzled look, so he jerked his head at the Screamers. “See the lump on th’back o’ th’neck? Neural stunner. They want ter give that twisted-pain-in-the-arse-of-a-cross-breed one of ‘em, stop ‘im eatin’ half the workforce. Hotwires the pain nerves; 'calms' somethin’ down no end if it starts getting’ unruly…” he sighed, faintly. “An’ they work too bloody well…” Though the mud gave him another of those curious looks, he refused to be drawn any further.
“Yer say yer saw which way he went?” Skar briefly scratched his muzzle with his free hand, a frown crimping his narrow muzzle. “Well, I don’ know as I oughtter get anyone else involved... there’ll be hell ter pay if these three get 'emselves eaten, I don’ want the bosses bangin’ on at me fer lettin’ Spidey eat any more workers…”
And while Skar’s guard was down that little thoughtful fraction, the biggest Dirgescreamer chose that moment to lunge at the lead… and it snapped, the end whipping back with the recoil and nearly taking Skar’s eye out. He staggered backward with the sudden lack of force on his arms, gave an inarticulate yell of fury and watched as the Screamer vanished down the corridor, screaming its triumph at being suddenly free.
They tol’ me these Odd-damned leads would hold ‘em!” he howled to no-one in particular, furious and frustrated at the same time, briefly toying with the idea of stunning the runaway and stopping it, but upon realising he had no way of re-leashing it he left it.
“That’s one of the li’l sods dead, then,” he raged, wanting to go break something but unable to because it would mean letting these two go as well… “Odd, I hate this! Hate it! HATE IT! Might as well go sign up fer the neural bloody implant right now, ‘cause I sure as Frack ain’t goin’ ter stop the big bastard wi’ jus’ two screamers…!”
The two remaining screamers had set up a howling cacophony of sound, screaming at their missing pack-mate and straining to get free, all the tendons sticking out of the waxy skin, lunging and making Skar totter precariously on his artificial limbs.
“Shaddap!” Skar howled, and gave the larger one a boot. “Dammit, I had enough o’ yer stupid howlin’ an’ whinin’ all bloody day, so shut the frack up!” He slammed a savage palm onto the pad on his glove, shocked the two Screamers quiet again, lost in something of a dream world, until the fitful whines of the two creatures brought him back to the present and he jerked his palm off the pad as though it was hot, annoyed with himself now. For a while he just stood, trying to unclench his muscles and ungrit his teeth, breathing hard, trying to calm his boiling temper and only succeeding in getting it back to a vague simmer… The mud was looking startled, had shied away again at this violent explosion of pent-up fury.
Damn it all to Hell, he thought, chest heaving, hoping against hope that his prey wouldn’t have heard all the ruckus…

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Spider paused in the corrider.
I could've swore I heard somethin' he thought.
He was about to continue on when he heard something running toward him as a fast pace. He turned around to see a slog-like creature bearing down on him. He could see the broken lead on it.
Frag its one of those slog type crossbreeds. Looks like their trying to catch me again. he made a snort of annoyence as he turned to face it. It leaped at him and with a paramite like hiss he backhanded it, sending it slamming into a wall. Before it could recover he pounced on it biting into its neck. It yiped and whined as and he bite down hard and pulled. With a loud snap, he tore its spine out and the creature fell still. He straightened and spat out the spine and looked down the corrider where the creature came from.
Might as well go and take care of any others..he thought as he charged back down the corridor.
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Zuum's eyes are wide as he stands, shaking faintly, off to the side of the irate, fuming slig, his hands curled together into a tendony lump as his gaze settles somewhere slightly off to the left of the sligs head. saying in a very soft, almost casual voice. "Yes. well. you seem in a bit of a bad mood sir... I guess I'll just stop pestering you now..." As the form of the Screamer dissapears down the corridor, he watches it, his eyes almost calm in a faint state of shock. commenting idly, he murmers in an almost pleasant voice.
"You know... he was here just a moment ago. I'm sure he isn't that far away currently, unfortunately. he's probably coming back to eat us both or something equally horrible. er, do you have a weapon on you?" Looking down, he blinks a little, his eyes moving to the two straining, shreiking forms now slightly calmed from their wild, feral screaming on the end of their leash. "Well, besides those things..."
Zuum shivers a little, cocking his head to the side as he listens intently, his large eyes wide in the relative gloom.
find your center. calmness. concentration. feel the quarry, feel the mind...
he thought back to all those times with the shaman, sitting in the grass outside the village, learning the ways of the mind... maybe he might be able to pull off some hopeless miracle. maybe... yeah, right.
Daunted, he turned slightly, a terrible sense of intuition suddenly making itself known in the back of his mind, and asks casually. "Hey. you wouldn't happen to have a knife would you?" smiling softly, he adds. "I promise I wouldn't use it on you..."
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Skar watched the mud with a curious detachment. Looked a bit funny in the head, this one, very nearly talking to itself at one point, staring off into space… And its mercurial moods were baffling him, first it looked terrified of him, and now it was casual.
And now it was asking for a knife? He quickly decided he didn’t like the way this conversation – if you could call it that – was turning, but frack, what was the worst that could happen? It killed him. Big deal. If he failed this, a fate far worse than simple death awaited him, as far as he was concerned… Mutely, he produced a short, keen knife, its wooden handle worn smooth with age, and offered it.
There was a hideous squeal from somewhere not far distant, making him wince. “Uh… maybe vacatin’ the premises would be a good idea ‘bout now…” he managed, through a suddenly constricted throat. Although its pack-mate still wailed and lunged at the lead, scenting blood, one of the screamers – the runt – was looking considerably less agitated than it had done before, content just to lean into the lead, whining faintly.
Oh damn, damn… this ain’t goin’ ter be fun… He could hear footsteps, by now, gaze glued to the corridor the Screamer had vanished down, waiting for that creature to appear, only half-aware of the mud by his side, if that…

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Spider could see 4 figures up ahead, one was the mud he passed earlier. Another was a scarred up slig, the last two were two more of those creatures like the one he just killed.
Time for some mauling he thought with a sadistic grin. He let loose an excited howl and surged forward...
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OK, just tell me if im posting in a bad time and i will edit.

Kolo sneaked down the corridor, hes big claws did make it harder. He stopped and looked around. No one was there. He sat down by a wall and looked at his so called legs. Kolo was the latest one of the vykkers creation, the oddest thing with him was that he liked what he is and where he is. But not the food. He was some kind of half mudokon, half elum. He stood up and continued sneaking. He rounded a corner and freezed. There he was, that spider guy that everyone talked about. He slowly backed away from them and tried to breath as quiet as he could. Oh, dear Odd.... he thought. May he not be hungry!! Im screwed.... Kolo waited for the sounds of Spiders victims being slain.

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[OOC:

DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!

i finally come up with a character, but i decide i'm gonna write a fic with him, so i can't post here for fear of giving too much away!!!

...stupid...stinking...oddammit...]
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ooc: well chances are i may end up writing a fic on Spider. i keep coming up with things that i may not use here.
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[OOC: hey, read it, please! reply! please! ]
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ookay. bit of a problem here. unfortunately, while I was away at work, the friend of my best friend was on my computer. normally I am quite cool with this. unfortunately not this time. as he broke it. and now I don't have internet access at home, hence my silence over the weekend. So I will be replying. I will be trying to write responses to the fics. I will also be trying to find time for this rpfic. but poor, poor tides of Odd is going on a temporary holiday. don't forget about poor mainard! pleeze?
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ooc: man that sucks, and we were all waiting to see what you were going to do. Well me and Teal anyway. I didn't really want Spider to attack until i knew what you were going to do..
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[OOC: no worries on ToO! UO has a similar problem, but i have no such excuses...

if you can, try and find time to read "Fragments..." please, i value your opinion.]
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Why do we all seem to be having problems with our fics...?

Oh well, I'm working on yet another new one now, anyway, loosely related to this one. I'll just have to see where it wanders...
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